高二英語書面表達(dá)寫作指導(dǎo).doc

高二英語書面表達(dá)Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich. 一 改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z置于句首.The boy is very hungry and he hurried home. Hungry, the boy hurried home The boy, hungry, hurried home.二. Transformation of sentences in writing(寫作中的句型轉(zhuǎn)換)A. 合并為簡單句1把其中一句改為分詞短語He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then. Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk.2. 把其中一句改為介詞短語He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his back.-He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back.B. 合并為復(fù)合句1. The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.-The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.2. In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful.-In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, which makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant C. 把復(fù)合句改為簡單句1. 把從句改為分詞短語She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies.-Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.2.把從句改為介詞短語I insisted that he should go.-I insisted on him going.三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運(yùn)用以下結(jié)構(gòu)：1.Though he is wealthy, he works hard.Wealthy as he is, he works hard.In spite of /Despite his wealth, he works hard.2. He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.四.use “ complicated / advanced words”注意使用詞組、習(xí)語諺語、表強(qiáng)調(diào)的詞來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。1. I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.I came up with a good idea.A. Second, twenty years ago, teenagers listened to music with tape recorders. Differently, today we use mp3, mp4 and even mp5 which are easy to take.B. Another change is in communication. Instead of writing letters, teenagers nowadays prefer writing e-mails or calling to keep in touch with friends.C. First, teenagers of twenty years ago learn from Lei Feng and Zhang Haidi, while now we consider Bill Gates and as our role models. D. What great changes they are!E. Great changes have taken place in teenagers life during the past twenty years. Correct Order : _ECABD_寫作技巧一. 改變句子的開頭方式三避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語、with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等.四.注意使用高級詞匯代替一些單詞，以增加文采。五.有效使用連接詞，過渡自然，連貫通順，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。Common mistakes（常見錯誤）1漢式英語2句式單一 平鋪直敘 3基礎(chǔ)詞匯掌握不牢4書寫不規(guī)范Writing steps：Attention1. 格式 2. 人稱 3.時態(tài) 4. 要點(diǎn) 5.語法 6. 字?jǐn)?shù) 7. 書寫Example. 書面表達(dá)（滿分30分） 你校學(xué)生會準(zhǔn)備辦一期英語墻報， 主題為： 保護(hù)環(huán)境從我做起。 請你根據(jù)下圖所示寫一篇英語短文。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。What can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment.節(jié)約用電：save electricity，turn off the lights保護(hù)森林：protect our forests，use paper wisely，use both sides of paper，not use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks（一次性筷子）check Is your handwriting clear enough to read?our show time What can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment. To love the environment is to love ourselves. As to me, I will try to save electricity in my daily life by remembering to turn off the lights when I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. It is both sides of paper that should be used whenever it is possible. Whats more, never will I use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks be