高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)話題寫作四---感謝信

1、精選文檔高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)話題寫作四感謝信出題人袁兵艷審題人 鄧翠煥寫作五步走:1 .審題忌跑題2 .列提綱/要點(diǎn)忌漏點(diǎn)3 .造句-句型結(jié)構(gòu)成分要完整，忌表達(dá)單一，忌冗言或逐句硬譯，字詞堆砌4 .連句成文添加過(guò)渡詞，忌句子松散5 .檢查一查主謂、查搭配、查拼寫感謝信：是用于致謝他人的饋贈(zèng)、款待、幫助、以及對(duì)慰問(wèn)信和祝賀信的回復(fù)?！靖兄x信三要素】1.提出感謝，感謝原因（別人做了什么事讓你感謝）；2 .細(xì)述并贊賞對(duì)方給予的幫助；3 .再次感謝，如何回報(bào)（好好學(xué)習(xí)，繼續(xù)努力等）【感謝信注意事項(xiàng)】靈活把握時(shí)態(tài)：通常，在提到對(duì)方曾給予幫助時(shí)，用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài);在提到對(duì)方的幫助所產(chǎn)生的實(shí)際效果時(shí)，可用 現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)；涉

2、及到現(xiàn)狀，可用 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在表達(dá)祝愿或希望時(shí)，可用將來(lái)時(shí)。常用詞匯和寫作模式動(dòng)詞 thank, appreciate; owe（ 欠債，感激）名詞 thanks, gratitude, appreciation;形容詞 thankful, grateful, appreciative第一段：表達(dá)感謝之情并說(shuō)明原因1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks （to you） for 2. I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude （to you） for3. I would like to convey

3、 in this letter my heartfelt（ 衷心的 ）thanks to you for4. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.第二段：細(xì)述并贊賞對(duì)方給予的幫助1. It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to2. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality（好客）and the honor you showed me

4、 during myvisit 3. It was your kind help that.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）4. But for/Without your help, I wouldn/couldn '' 11 have done （含蓄虛擬）5. If it had not been for your help/assistance, I wouldn't/couldn' t have （虛擬語(yǔ)氣）第三段：再次感謝，如何回報(bào)。1. Thanks again for your generous help.2. I appreciate it more than I c

5、an say.3. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.句式操練1 .我寫這封信是為了表達(dá)我對(duì)你幫我提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)的謝意，你的幫助對(duì)我而言意義重大。2 .你太好了，假期照顧我弟弟。3 .正是你的善良和熱心幫助我克服了我的思鄉(xiāng)之情。（強(qiáng)調(diào)句/虛擬語(yǔ)氣）可編輯精選文檔感謝信模板 dear? I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for（感謝的原因）. if it had not been for/had it not been for/ wi

6、thout your assistance in 對(duì)方給你的具體幫助），I would （not） have been（沒(méi)有對(duì)方幫助的后果）. everyone agrees that it was you who（給出2田節(jié)）. Again, I would like toexpress my warm thanks to you! please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely, Li Hua dear, I am now writing to express my sincere thanks for. I would like you toknow

7、 how much your meant to me. you have a positive genius for. Inot only enjoyed, but also. I shall ever remember as one of the mostin my life.I . I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating. would you kindly let me know. I will feel very honored and pleased if you havetime to. how nice it would be

8、 to see you again and I am looking forwards to seeing you next time!I repeat my thanks again for your. please give my kind regards to your. yours truly, Li Hua 小小建議：基礎(chǔ)薄弱或者表達(dá)能力有限的同學(xué)，不妨每一類作文背誦一個(gè)模板和幾個(gè)常用短 語(yǔ)與句型，然后靈活套用。 欣賞范文技巧1 .列出優(yōu)美的可用于自己寫作中的詞和短語(yǔ)，加深記憶；2 .列出優(yōu)美的可用于自己寫作中的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，從中挑選三個(gè)就某一寫作話題模仿寫作，爭(zhēng)取 寫出和例句一樣正確且

9、優(yōu)美的句子；3 .列出范文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，掌握篇章布局技巧。根據(jù)范文欣賞技巧完成任務(wù)。I am a senior student that has experienced a great earthquake. I wrote to you to express my thanks to those who helped us when we suffered the disaster. During that time, I witnessed many strangers devoted their efforts to saving lives, providing food and clo

10、thes regardless of their優(yōu)美的詞和短語(yǔ)：own safety. Without their help, I couldn ' t have found my parents in such a short time, which makes me excited. Besides, only few days passed before the students returned to classrooms to have classes.As a result, we all treasure the opportunity of studying in th

11、e classroom. The help from others taught us how to respect others and take others優(yōu)美的句型：into consideration. It was also the help from strangers that made us realize the importance of helping and caring for each other when facing disaster.Now, I think what we should do is to study harder and help more

12、 people in return.請(qǐng)?zhí)暨x三個(gè)優(yōu)美句型以感謝信為話題造句1. 2. 3. 假如你是一名失學(xué)兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到在中國(guó)工作的 Mr. Brown的資助，可以 重返校園。你給Mr. Brown寫了一封信，內(nèi)容如下： 收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激； 在老師的幫助下，學(xué)習(xí)有了很大的進(jìn)步，受到老師的表?yè)P(yáng)和鼓勵(lì)； 決心更加努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得更大的進(jìn)步；盼望見到Mr. Brown ,希望他寄來(lái)一張照片。 注意：1.書信應(yīng)包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)：100左右Dear Mr. Brown ,I am writing to 表達(dá)我最深的謝意 ）the mone

13、y andbooks you sent me. I （我不可能重返校園 ） without your help. Thank you so much.I（T直努力學(xué)習(xí)）since I went back to school. I 已經(jīng)取得彳艮大的進(jìn)步 ）my studies with the help of my teachers.They often praise me and encourage me. Imight have left school and 仆可能獲得這樣好的教育 ）.I have made up my mind to更大進(jìn)步）.How are you getting o

14、n with your life and work? I would like to meet you 1 自）,but I次有機(jī)會(huì)）do so. Would you please sendme a photo of yourself?再次感謝你慷慨的幫助 ）and best wishes! Yours sincerely,Li Hua 鞏固與提高假如你是李華，暑假你參加了澳大利亞游學(xué)活動(dòng)，回國(guó)后給host family寫一封信表示感謝。要點(diǎn)如下：1 .感謝他們一家的照顧；2 .分享游學(xué)體會(huì)；3 .詢問(wèn)你寄的禮物（漢語(yǔ)詞典）是否收到；可編輯 精選文檔4 .邀請(qǐng)他們一家來(lái)中國(guó)游覽。注意：1.次數(shù)

15、100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Helen,Yours,Li Hua1 .內(nèi)容：題材（跑題與否）與體裁（文體）；要點(diǎn)（齊全與否）2 .語(yǔ)言：地道、標(biāo)準(zhǔn)；高級(jí)詞匯和豐富句式；拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤3 .段落層次（清晰與否）；內(nèi)在邏而鳴過(guò)渡總分精選文檔句式操練1. 我寫這封信是為了表達(dá)我對(duì)你幫我提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)的謝意，你的幫助對(duì)我而言意義重大。meI am writing to extend my sincere gratitude/appreciation for your helping improve my spoken English, which means a lot t

16、o me.2. 你太好了，假期照顧我弟弟。It was really kind of you to take care of my brother in the holiday.3. 正是你的善良和熱心幫助我克服了我的思鄉(xiāng)之情。（強(qiáng)調(diào)句/虛擬語(yǔ)氣 ）It was your kindness and warm heart that helped me overcome my homesickness.But for/Without your kindness and warm heart, I couldn homesickness.If it had not been for your kin

17、dness and warm heart, I couldnthave overcomemyt have over可編輯homesickness.ess and warm heart, I couldnt have overcome myHad it not been for your kindn homesickness.在空格內(nèi)填入適當(dāng)?shù)脑~句。假如你是一名失學(xué)兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到在中國(guó)工作的Mr. Brown 的資助，可以重返校園。你給Mr. Brown 寫了一封信，內(nèi)容如下： 收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激； 在老師的幫助下，學(xué)習(xí)有了很大的進(jìn)步，受到老師的表?yè)P(yáng)和鼓勵(lì)； 決心更加努

18、力學(xué)習(xí)，取得更大的進(jìn)步； 盼望見到Mr. Brown ，希望他寄來(lái)一張照片。注意： 1. 書信應(yīng)包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2. 詞數(shù)： 100 左右Dear Mr. Brown ，I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help. Thank you so much.I have been working hard since I went back t

19、o school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. But for your help, I might have left school and couldn such a good education. I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.How are you getting on with your life

20、 and work? I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a photo of yourself?Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!Yours sincerely, Li Hua鞏固與提高假如你是李華，暑假你參加了澳大利亞游學(xué)活動(dòng)，回國(guó)后給host family 寫一封信表示感謝。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 感謝他們一家的照顧；2. 分享游學(xué)體會(huì)；3. 詢問(wèn)你寄的禮物（漢語(yǔ)詞

21、典）是否收到；4. 邀請(qǐng)他們一家來(lái)中國(guó)游覽。注意： 1. 次數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Helen,I have arrived home safe and sound. I miss you so much and now I want to say “ thank you ” to your whole family. It was your help and kindness that made my stay in your country so enjoyable.The beautiful scenery and rich traditiona

22、l Australian culture impressed me a lot.And by communicating with you as well as other locals, I practiced my oral English so often that I can speak as fluently as a native speaker now. What a meaningful and unforgettable experience I have got!Have you received the Chinese dictionary? It s a gift fo

23、r you. I hope it will be ofhelp to you in Chinese learning. I am keeping expecting you to come to China soon.Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua其它相關(guān)寫作（ 1）假如你是李華，在英國(guó)朋友Toby 家里度過(guò)了愉快的兩周?；貒?guó)后，你打算給他寫一封感謝信，要點(diǎn)如下：1. 感謝他的熱情款待；2. 總結(jié)兩周的收獲（如了解了英國(guó)文化，提高了英語(yǔ)聽說(shuō)能力等）；3. 邀請(qǐng)他明年來(lái)中國(guó)。注意： 1. 次數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文

24、連貫。Dear Toby,I am writing to express my gratitude for your hospitality while I stayed at your home in England, which was an unforgettable experience for me and I benefited a lot from it.During the two weeks, I learned a lot about English culture and history by visiting many museums in England. In an

25、 environment exposed to English, my English listening and speaking abilities got improved greatly. Furthermore,I madesome new friends, who helped me a lot.Welcome to my home next summer. I will be your guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture and taste Chinese food. I am looking forw

26、ard to your coming.Yours,Hi Hua（ 2） Dear editor,I am a senior student that has experienced a great earthquake. I wrote to you to express my thanks to those who helped us when we suffered the disaster. During that time, I witnessed many strangers devoted their efforts to saving lives, providing food

27、and clothes regardless of their own safety. Without their help, I couldn t havefound my parents in such a short time, which makes me excited. Besides, only few days passed before the students returned to classrooms to have classes.As a result, we all treasure the opportunity of studying in the class

28、room. The help from others taught us how to respect others and take others into consideration.It was also the help from strangers that made us realize the importance of helping and caring for each other when facing disaster.Now, I think what we should do is to study harder and help more people in re

29、turn.（ 3）假設(shè)你是李華，交換生Tracy 剛剛結(jié)束在你們學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)生活，已經(jīng)返回英國(guó)。作為班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一分感謝信，感謝她一學(xué)期以來(lái)帶給大家的美好回憶：? 1. 懷念與她相處的快樂(lè)時(shí)光；? 2. 感謝她對(duì)大家英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；? 3. 感謝她為班級(jí)捐贈(zèng)的英文書籍；? 4. 歡迎她有機(jī)會(huì)再來(lái)中國(guó)。注意： 1.書信應(yīng)包括以上所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù) :100 左右Dear Tracy,How about your life back in Britain? I m writing this letter to express our thanks to you on behalf of the class.We enjoyed the great time when you stayed here. During last term, you helped us a lot in our English so we made great progress with English study.What s more,all our classmates are very thankfu