高考英語總復(fù)習-建議信的寫作指導(dǎo)課件

高考英語總復(fù)習---------建議信的寫作指導(dǎo)高考英語總復(fù)習---------【學習目標】

學習建議信的寫法，掌握建議信的常用短語和句型，正確撰寫建議信。【學習重點】

掌握建議信的常用短語和句型?！緦W習難點】

組織恰當?shù)恼Z言，正確撰寫建議信。

【學習目標】

建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法、主張，解決有關(guān)問題。建議信不是投訴信，觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌當先。同時，建議信要簡潔明確、理由充足，具有合理性和說服力。通常包括：1.說明寫信目的。2.提出建議與改進措施并給予忠告。3.表達希望采納建議并期盼回復(fù)。文體概述【學習內(nèi)容】建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法

假如你收到一封叫Flower的網(wǎng)友寫來的一封信，她向你詢問如何交友，請給她回一封信，并提出建議。

提示：1.交朋友首先要對別人友善；

2.要使陌生人感到親切，不管他在何處，關(guān)心別人勝過自己；

3.與別人有分歧時不吵架，要商量；

4.不要相信危急時刻背棄朋友的人，因為“患難見真情”。要求：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；

2.表達要清楚，語言簡潔、流暢；

3.針對問題給出建議，層次清晰。一、美文欣賞假如你收到一封叫Flower的網(wǎng)友寫來的一封

I'mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Youaskmesomethingabouthowtomakefriends.Everyoneneedsfriends,sohowtomakefriendsisveryimportant.Iwouldliketoputforwardthefollowingsuggestions.

Firstofall,youmustbefriendlytoothersifyouwanttomakefriendswithothers.Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwouldlookafterothersmorethanmyself.Inmyopinion,itwillbebettertomakethestrangerfeeleasy.Ifyouhavedifferentopinions,youcandiscusswithothers.Idon'tthinkitnecessarytoquarrelwiththem.Finally,don'ttrustthosepeoplewholeaveyouwhenyouareintrouble,becauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed.

Itrustyouwilltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.Ihopeeverythinggoesonwellwithyou,andyou'llmakealotofgoodfriends.

Yourstruly,

SimonDearFlower,

I'mgladtoreceiveyou1.給某人提建議________________________2.如下________________________3.在做某事時遇到困難

__________________________4.利用________________________5.向某人征求意見________________________asksb.foradvicegivesb.someadvice(on)asfollowshavedifficulty/troubleindoingsth.makeuseof二、常用語塊1.給某人提建議_________________6.制訂計劃_______________________7.認為……有用

_______________________8.參加_______________________9.聽從某人的建議_______________________10.把……考慮在內(nèi)

_______________________oaccount/considerationmakeaplanfind…h(huán)elpful/useful/beneficialtakepartin/participateinfollowone’sadvice6.制訂計劃__________11.得到改善________________________12.有所好轉(zhuǎn)________________________13.依我看來________________________14.我已收到你的來信，得知你……________________________15.我建議……________________________Iwouldliketosuggestthat…/Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…/Iamwritingtoadviseyouof…/IfIwereyou,Iwould…/MayIsuggestthat…/Iwouldliketoputforwardthesuggestionthat…getimprovedchangeforthebetterinmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofviewIhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou…11.得到改善_____________________1.你就……向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設(shè)性的建議。

2.我覺得如果能夠……將會很有幫助的。1.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.2.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…三、常用句式1.你就……向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設(shè)性的建議。1.3.我希望這些建議會對你有所幫助。4.我相信你會考慮我的建議的。5.如能看到……我會非常開心的。3.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytosee…4.Itrustyou‘lltakemysuggestionintoaccount./Itrustyou’lltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.3.我希望這些建議會對你有所幫助。3.Ihopeyo

Dear______,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto___________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.Tobeginwith,you’dbetter________Besides,IfIwereyou,Iwould________Moreover,Iwouldliketosuggestthat________Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyandwishyouagoodwork.Yourssincerely,LiHua

四、寫作模板Dear______,四、寫作模板DearRoy,IamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskformyadvicetohowtolearnChinesewell.Herearefewsuggestions.First,thisisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspaperandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.askingon∧aitnewspapers五、習作修改(做短文改錯，背經(jīng)典范文)DearRoy,askingon∧aitnewspBeside,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasier.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.HewilltellyoualotaboutChinaorhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritetomeinChinesethenexttime.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHuaBesideseasilyTheyandBeside,itshouldbeago1.ask→asking現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，表示主動關(guān)系。2.to→onadvice后常搭配介詞on。3.在few前加a根據(jù)句意，此處為提一些建議，表示肯定意義，用afew。4.this→it考查句型itis+adj.+todosth.意為“做……是……的”。5.newspaper→newspapers因為newspaper為可數(shù)名詞，而且與前后的books,magazines屬于并列關(guān)系，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。1.ask→asking現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，表示主動關(guān)系6.Beside→Besides此處表示補充說明關(guān)系“此外/而且”，beside意為“在……旁邊”。7.easier→easily修飾謂語動詞用副詞形式。8.He→They根據(jù)前一句話中的moreChinesefriends可知用They。9.or→and此處兩個動作為“順承”關(guān)系，而非“選擇”關(guān)系。10.去掉nexttime前的the相對于現(xiàn)在的“下一……”，next前不用the。6.Beside→Besides此處表示補充說明關(guān)系“此假定你是李華，最近你們班從英國轉(zhuǎn)來了一名新生Jenny。這是她第一次遠離家鄉(xiāng)，她很想念父母及家人，有時候思念至深，常常獨自一個人深夜哭泣。對此，請你給Jenny寫一封建議信，要點如下：1.鼓勵Jenny堅定求學信念，志存高遠。2.就Jenny的目前狀況，提兩到三個建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。六、實戰(zhàn)演練假定你是李華，最近你們班從英國轉(zhuǎn)來了一名新生JennDearJenny,Iamsogladtohaveatalkwithyou.IunderstandyourpresentsituationforIhavehadasimilarexperiencebefore.Peopleoftenmisstheirparentsthefirsttimetheyleavehome.Mostpeopledohavetoleavehomeforhighereducationoremployment.Ithinkyoushouldrealizethatpresentseparationwillhelpwithyouracademicdevelopmentandyourimprovementofpersonalability.DearJenny,Trytomakefriendsonyourschoolcampus,andshareideaswithyourclassmateswhoarephysicallyclosesttoyounow.Maybeyouwillstillmissyourparents,butyournewfriendswillbringhappinessandjoytoyournewlife.AlsoIsuggestyoutakeanactivepartindifferentkindsofactivitiesinschool.Youwillgetmuchpleasurefromit.

Wishyouhappyeveryday.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaTrytomakefriendsonyoursc高考英語總復(fù)習---------建議信的寫作指導(dǎo)高考英語總復(fù)習---------【學習目標】

學習建議信的寫法，掌握建議信的常用短語和句型，正確撰寫建議信?！緦W習重點】

掌握建議信的常用短語和句型。【學習難點】

組織恰當?shù)恼Z言，正確撰寫建議信。

【學習目標】

建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法、主張，解決有關(guān)問題。建議信不是投訴信，觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌當先。同時，建議信要簡潔明確、理由充足，具有合理性和說服力。通常包括：1.說明寫信目的。2.提出建議與改進措施并給予忠告。3.表達希望采納建議并期盼回復(fù)。文體概述【學習內(nèi)容】建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法

假如你收到一封叫Flower的網(wǎng)友寫來的一封信，她向你詢問如何交友，請給她回一封信，并提出建議。

提示：1.交朋友首先要對別人友善；

2.要使陌生人感到親切，不管他在何處，關(guān)心別人勝過自己；

3.與別人有分歧時不吵架，要商量；

4.不要相信危急時刻背棄朋友的人，因為“患難見真情”。要求：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；

2.表達要清楚，語言簡潔、流暢；

3.針對問題給出建議，層次清晰。一、美文欣賞假如你收到一封叫Flower的網(wǎng)友寫來的一封

I'mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Youaskmesomethingabouthowtomakefriends.Everyoneneedsfriends,sohowtomakefriendsisveryimportant.Iwouldliketoputforwardthefollowingsuggestions.

Firstofall,youmustbefriendlytoothersifyouwanttomakefriendswithothers.Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwouldlookafterothersmorethanmyself.Inmyopinion,itwillbebettertomakethestrangerfeeleasy.Ifyouhavedifferentopinions,youcandiscusswithothers.Idon'tthinkitnecessarytoquarrelwiththem.Finally,don'ttrustthosepeoplewholeaveyouwhenyouareintrouble,becauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed.

Itrustyouwilltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.Ihopeeverythinggoesonwellwithyou,andyou'llmakealotofgoodfriends.

Yourstruly,

SimonDearFlower,

I'mgladtoreceiveyou1.給某人提建議________________________2.如下________________________3.在做某事時遇到困難

__________________________4.利用________________________5.向某人征求意見________________________asksb.foradvicegivesb.someadvice(on)asfollowshavedifficulty/troubleindoingsth.makeuseof二、常用語塊1.給某人提建議_________________6.制訂計劃_______________________7.認為……有用

_______________________8.參加_______________________9.聽從某人的建議_______________________10.把……考慮在內(nèi)

_______________________oaccount/considerationmakeaplanfind…h(huán)elpful/useful/beneficialtakepartin/participateinfollowone’sadvice6.制訂計劃__________11.得到改善________________________12.有所好轉(zhuǎn)________________________13.依我看來________________________14.我已收到你的來信，得知你……________________________15.我建議……________________________Iwouldliketosuggestthat…/Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…/Iamwritingtoadviseyouof…/IfIwereyou,Iwould…/MayIsuggestthat…/Iwouldliketoputforwardthesuggestionthat…getimprovedchangeforthebetterinmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofviewIhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou…11.得到改善_____________________1.你就……向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設(shè)性的建議。

2.我覺得如果能夠……將會很有幫助的。1.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.2.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…三、常用句式1.你就……向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設(shè)性的建議。1.3.我希望這些建議會對你有所幫助。4.我相信你會考慮我的建議的。5.如能看到……我會非常開心的。3.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytosee…4.Itrustyou‘lltakemysuggestionintoaccount./Itrustyou’lltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.3.我希望這些建議會對你有所幫助。3.Ihopeyo

Dear______,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto___________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.Tobeginwith,you’dbetter________Besides,IfIwereyou,Iwould________Moreover,Iwouldliketosuggestthat________Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyandwishyouagoodwork.Yourssincerely,LiHua

四、寫作模板Dear______,四、寫作模板DearRoy,IamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskformyadvicetohowtolearnChinesewell.Herearefewsuggestions.First,thisisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspaperandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.askingon∧aitnewspapers五、習作修改(做短文改錯，背經(jīng)典范文)DearRoy,askingon∧aitnewspBeside,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasier.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.HewilltellyoualotaboutChinaorhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritetomeinChinesethenexttime.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHuaBesideseasilyTheyandBeside,itshouldbeago1.ask→asking現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，表示主動關(guān)系。2.to→onadvice后常搭配介詞on。3.在few前加a根據(jù)句意，此處為提一些建議，表示肯定意義，用afew。4.this→it考查句型itis+adj.+todosth.意為“做……是……的”。5.newspaper→newspapers因為newspaper為可數(shù)名詞，而且與前后的books,magazines屬于并列關(guān)系，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。1.ask→asking現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，表示主動關(guān)系6.B