高考英語書面表達(dá)六步法.ppt

Writing skills,How to improve your writing,劉瑞春 2009-12-23,主要特點(diǎn),記敘為主 稍加議論 旁帶說明,空間順序,時(shí)間順序,邏輯順序,能力要求,書面表達(dá),六 步 法,書面表達(dá)六步法,幻燈片 23,書面表達(dá)六步法,一、審題,認(rèn)真讀題然后找出基本要素:5W1H,何 時(shí) 何 地 何 人 為 何 如 何 做 了 何 事,書面表達(dá)六步法,二、抓要點(diǎn),確定主要行為，配動(dòng)詞，注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)及搭配的副詞、介詞等,What happened?,書面表達(dá)六步法,三、擴(kuò)展成句,形成基本語義單位，把要點(diǎn)變成完整的句子，注意連詞,Who did what?,書面表達(dá)六步法,四、連句成文,時(shí)間 空間 細(xì)節(jié) 連貫 呼應(yīng),詞與詞搭配 句與句相連,書面表達(dá)六步法,五、查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò),要盡量剔除錯(cuò)誤,主謂一致嗎？時(shí)態(tài)正確嗎？時(shí)態(tài)正確嗎？有“半截話”嗎？,書面表達(dá)六步法,六、謄寫,卷面整潔不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！,如何使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl treated me coldly. She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my request. I quarreled with her. The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批評(píng)) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. _The salesgirl treated me coldly. _She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. _She said that I made it dirty. _She gave various excuses to refuse my request. _I quarreled with her. _The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. _He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批評(píng)) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,However,At the beginning,Later,In a word,I got so angry that,After that/ As soon as/ The moment,Just at that moment,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school !, This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor. However,it has changed a lot since 1978 ,and has been developing very fast.,People here live a much better life than before .,書面表達(dá)：例 1,Now it is taking on a new look.,In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. ,But now it has been rebuilt and, which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.,All the school-age children can study here., Whats more,they enjoy free education., May you enjoy your stay here,the newly built teaching building,/ May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,返回,How to enrich your writing,1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句） 2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句) 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Have a try,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞) 6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 7.I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語從句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,看圖作文舉例,Picture 1,go over,go to bed,nine oclock,stay up,wake up,get up,Picture 2,get dressed,wash oneself,rush into,get my schoolbag,prepare,go to school,breakfast,brush teeth,wash face,Picture 3,ran out,get on my bike,ride to school,as fast as,Picture 4,get to,to my surprise,close,realize,Sunday,find,the school gate,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,I often stay up late.,I often stay up late to go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.,I go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.,to,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,Last night I went to bed at 12 oclock.,Last night I didnt go to bed until 12 oclock.,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,I woke up at 9 oclock this morning.,When I woke up this morning, it was already 9 oclock.,When,already,it,When,it,already,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,I rushed into the living room.,I rushed into the living room, where Mother was preparing breakfast.,where,Mother was preparing breakfast in the living room.,the living room,the living room,the living room,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,Mother couldnt say anything.,Before she could say anything, I got my schoolbag, ran out and got on my bike.,I got my schoolbag.,I ran out.,I got on my bike.,1,4,2,3,Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples.,I realized it was Sunday today .,It was then that I realized it was Sunday today.,Possible version:,June 17, Sunday I often stay up late to go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations. Last night I didnt go to bed until 12 oclock. When I woke up this morning, it was already 9 oclock. I got dressed and washed myself quickly. Then I rushed into the living room, where Mother was preparing breakfast. Before she could say anything, I got my schoolbag, ran out and got on my bike. I rode as fast as I could. It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school