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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)Asadwasa13yearoldboywhowasveryhonestandhardworking.Recently,hehadenteredanewschool,sohehadnofriendsyet.OnMondaymorning,hewasnearlylateforschool.Thenightbefore,hisfamilyattendedhiscousin’sweddingandreachedhomelate,whichwaswhyhecouldn’tgetupontimeasusual.Atschool,Asadcouldnotpayattentiontoanythingandwantedthebelltoringsothathecouldbuysomethingtoeat.Afterafewhours,whenthebellrang,Asadquicklyopenedhisschoolbagtofindhismoney,butjustthenherememberedthathehadleftforschoolinahurryinthemorningandforgottentotakemoney.Helookedunderhisbooks,hopingtofindsomemoneybuttherewasnothing.Notknowingwhattodo,hewalkedoutoftheclassroomandsatonabenchinfrontofthecanteen.Hesawafewofhisclassmatesthere,amongthemwasFahad.Hewasoneoftherichestkidsinhisclass,buthewasaveryarrogant(傲慢的)boywhothoughteveryoneelsewasaloser.ButasAsadwasnew,hedidn’tknowmuchaboutFahad.WhenhewenttowardsFahadandaskedifhecouldborrowsomemoneyforhislunch,Fahadlaughedalotandsaid,“Iknewyouwerealoser,maybeabeggar?”Fahadlaughedoutsoloudthatotherkidsalsoheardandmadefunofthesituation.Hedidn’tanswerFahad,andslowlywalkedbacktowardsanemptybench.Whenhereachedthebench,henoticedsomethinglyingnearit.Itwasawallet.HepickeditupandrecognizeditasFahad’s,asherememberedFahadshowingittohisfriendsandtellingthathisuncleboughtitforhimfromtheUK.Therewasquitealotofmoneyinsideforakid.Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenFahadsaid,“Whyareyougivingback?”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________阿薩德與法哈德錢(qián)包的故事續(xù)寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)分析(兩段)?第一段:此段著重刻畫(huà)Asad的內(nèi)心掙扎與最終抉擇。開(kāi)篇表明Asad最初想通過(guò)私藏錢(qián)包懲罰Fahad的想法,“Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.”但緊接著,“However,hishonestnaturesoongotthebetterofhim.”轉(zhuǎn)折體現(xiàn)出他內(nèi)心善良與正義戰(zhàn)勝了報(bào)復(fù)心理?!癏ethoughttohimself,‘AlthoughFahadwasmeantome,Ishoulddotherightthing.’”通過(guò)內(nèi)心獨(dú)白,清晰展現(xiàn)他的思想斗爭(zhēng)過(guò)程。隨后的動(dòng)作描寫(xiě),“So,hetookadeepbreathandwalkedtowardsFahad...”“tookadeepbreath”表現(xiàn)出他克服心理障礙的艱難,而走向Fahad則是他踐行正確行為的開(kāi)始。“WhenFahadsawAsadapproachingwithhiswallet,hiseyeswidenedinsurprise.”從Fahad的驚訝反應(yīng)側(cè)面烘托出Asad行為的出乎意料,為下文兩人的對(duì)話與關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)變做鋪墊。?第二段:以Fahad的疑問(wèn)開(kāi)啟,“ThenFahadsaid,‘Whyareyougivingback?’”自然引出Asad的回應(yīng),“Becauseit'stherightthingtodo.Iknowwegotoffonthewrongfoot,butIbelieveinhonesty.”Asad的回答簡(jiǎn)潔有力,直接點(diǎn)明自己堅(jiān)守誠(chéng)實(shí)的信念,這不僅是對(duì)Fahad的回應(yīng),更是故事主題的一次直接呈現(xiàn)?!癋ahadwastakenabackbyAsad'swords.Hefeltashamedofhisearlierbehavior.”描述Fahad被Asad話語(yǔ)觸動(dòng)后的內(nèi)心變化,為他的道歉做心理鋪墊。“Hestammeredanapology,‘I'msorryforbeingsomean.You'reactuallyreallynice.’”Fahad的道歉以及后續(xù)兩人關(guān)系的轉(zhuǎn)變,“Fromthatdayon,Fahadchangedhisways.HebecamefriendswithAsad,andtheyoftenhungouttogether.”展現(xiàn)出Asad的誠(chéng)實(shí)與善良所產(chǎn)生的積極影響,將故事從沖突引向和解與友誼,升華了故事主旨,強(qiáng)調(diào)了誠(chéng)實(shí)和善良在人際交往中的重要作用。?故事線?Asad是一個(gè)誠(chéng)實(shí)努力的13歲男孩,剛進(jìn)入新學(xué)校還沒(méi)有朋友。周一早上因前一晚參加婚禮回家晚,差點(diǎn)上學(xué)遲到,到學(xué)校后發(fā)現(xiàn)忘帶錢(qián)買(mǎi)午餐。?Asad向班里家境富裕但傲慢的Fahad借錢(qián),遭到Fahad嘲笑,同學(xué)們也跟著取笑他,他只能無(wú)奈離開(kāi)。?Asad在長(zhǎng)椅旁撿到Fahad的錢(qián)包,里面有不少錢(qián),他一開(kāi)始想私藏錢(qián)包懲罰Fahad,但最終憑借誠(chéng)實(shí)本性決定歸還。?Fahad看到Asad歸還錢(qián)包很驚訝,詢問(wèn)原因,Asad表明自己堅(jiān)守誠(chéng)實(shí),F(xiàn)ahad被觸動(dòng),為自己之前的惡劣行為道歉,從此兩人成為朋友,F(xiàn)ahad也改變了傲慢的性格。?短語(yǔ)?keepitasecret保守秘密?getthebetterof戰(zhàn)勝、克服?thinktooneself心里想?takeadeepbreath深呼吸?walktowards走向?betakenaback感到驚訝?getoffonthewrongfoot一開(kāi)始就關(guān)系不好?believein相信、堅(jiān)守?feelashamedof為……感到羞愧?stammeranapology結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地道歉?changeone'sways改變某人的行為方式?hangouttogether一起出去玩?主旨升華句?ThisheartwarmingnarrativeofAsadandFahadnotonlyshowcasesthepowerofhonestyandkindnessintransformingrelationshipsbutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatinthefaceofmeanness,choosingthemoralhighgroundcanleadtounexpectedfriendshipsandpersonalgrowthforallinvolved.?這個(gè)關(guān)于Asad和Fahad的溫馨故事,不僅展示了誠(chéng)實(shí)和善良在改變?nèi)穗H關(guān)系方面的力量,還深刻地提醒我們,在面對(duì)惡意時(shí),堅(jiān)守道德高地能為所有相關(guān)人員帶來(lái)意想不到的友誼和個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)。?ThroughAsad'sjourneyfrombeingthevictimofmockerytobeingthecatalystforFahad'schange,wearevividlyshownthetransformativenatureofintegrityandpassion.Theirstoryimpartsthevaluablelessonthateveninthemostchallengingsocialsituations,ourcorevaluescanbethebridgethatconnectsheartsandmendsdivides.?通過(guò)Asad從被嘲笑的受害者到成為Fahad改變的催化劑的歷程,我們生動(dòng)地看到了正直和同情心的變革力量。他們的故事傳達(dá)了一個(gè)寶貴的教訓(xùn),即即使在最具挑戰(zhàn)性的社交情境中,我們的核心價(jià)值觀也能成為連接心靈、彌合分歧的橋梁。?ThestoryofAsadandFahadisnotmerelyataleofalostwalletandaborrowedlunch;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytoriseabovepettiness,torecognizetheerrorofone'sways,andtobuildmeaningfulconnectionsbasedonmutualrespectandunderstanding.?Asad和Fahad的故事不僅僅是一個(gè)關(guān)于丟失錢(qián)包和借午餐的故事,它是對(duì)人類(lèi)精神超越狹隘、認(rèn)識(shí)自身錯(cuò)誤以及在相互尊重和理解基礎(chǔ)上建立有意義聯(lián)系的能力的深刻探索。?Inaworldwhereconflictsandmisunderstandingsarealltoomon,Asad'sdecisiontoreturnthewalletdespitethetemptationtoretaliatestandsasabeaconofhope,illuminatingthepathtowardsmoreharmoniousandempatheticsocialinteractions.Itremindsusthattruestrengthliesinourabilitytochoosekindnessoverrevenge.?在一個(gè)沖突和誤解屢見(jiàn)不鮮的世界里,Asad盡管有報(bào)復(fù)的誘惑但仍決定歸還錢(qián)包的舉動(dòng)如同一盞希望之燈,照亮了通往更和諧、更具同理心的社會(huì)互動(dòng)的道路。它提醒我們,真正的力量在于我們選擇善良而非報(bào)復(fù)的能力。?FromtheinitialhumiliationAsadenduredtothefinalfriendshipthatblossomedbetweenhimandFahad,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofgrowth,thepowerofpositiveinfluence,andtheunwaveringbeliefthateveryactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,hasthepotentialtocreatearippleeffectthatcantransformlivesandmunities.?從Asad最初所忍受的羞辱到他與Fahad之間最終綻放的友誼,這個(gè)故事體現(xiàn)了成長(zhǎng)的本質(zhì)、積極影響的力量,以及堅(jiān)定的信念,即每一個(gè)善良的行為,無(wú)論多么微小,都有可能產(chǎn)生連鎖反應(yīng),改變生活和社區(qū)。?寫(xiě)作示范?示范一?Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.ThethoughtofFahad'smockingwordsstillstung.Butasheheldthewallet,hisconsciencetuggedathim.“Ican'tstooptohislevel,”hemurmured.Gatheringhiscourage,hewalkedovertoFahad,whowaschattingidlywithhisclique.Fahad'seyesbulgedwhenhesawAsadapproachingwithhiswallet.?ThenFahadsaid,“Whyareyougivingback?”Asadsquaredhisshouldersandreplied,“BecauseIbelieveindoingwhat'sright.Iknowyoumightnotthinkmuchofme,butIwon'tletthatchangewhoIam.”Fahadwasrenderedspeechlessforamoment.Then,hisfacereddenedwithshame.“I'mreallysorry,”hestammered.“Iwaswayoutofline.”Fromthatdayon,Fahadmadeaconsciousefforttobemorehumble.HeandAsadbecameinseparable,andFahadoftenrecountedthisstorytoothersasareminderofthepowerofhonesty.?示范二?Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.Thewalletseemedlikeasweetopportunityforpayback.However,hishonestupbringingquicklyquelledsuchthoughts.“Revengewon'tsolveanything,”hetoldhimself.Withadeterminedlook,hemarchedtowardsFahad.FahadwasinthemiddleofbraggingwhenhecaughtsightofAsadwithhiswallet.Hisjawdroppedindisbelief.?ThenFahadsaid,“Whyareyougivingback?”Asadlookedhimstraightintheeyeandsaid,“Honestyismoreimportantthananygrudge.Ihopeyoucanseethat.”FahadwasdeeplymovedbyAsad'swords.Heapologizedprofusely,“Iwassowrong.You'reactuallyreallycool.”Fromthenon,Fahad'sarrogancemeltedaway.HeandAsadbecamegoodfriends,andtheirfriendshipwasaninspirationtothewholeclass,showingthatkindnessandintegritycouldovereeventhetoughestofsocialbarriers.?【答案】范文Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.Atleasthecouldaffordthelunchnow.However,anothervoicepoppedup,urginghimtogiveitbacktoFahad,whichmadehimfeeltorn.“Ishouldneverkeepthewalletatthecostofmyhonesty,a
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