讀后續(xù)寫+營(yíng)地徒步故事+講義 高三月考試卷七英語(yǔ)試卷

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Oneweek,weparticipatedinaprogramthataimedtobringstudentsfunandalsostrengthentheircourage.Onthethirdmorning,weleftourcampforahike.Wepicked

ourwayalongastreaminapark.Thereweresixofus.Tallandstrong,Samledtheway.Afterawhile,wefoundasmallwaterfallandsomesmallerkidsplayinginthepoolbelowtogetherwiththeircampleaders.Forkedribbonsofwater(分叉的帶狀水流)leaptaboutthreemetersintothepool.Wesettledourselvesonalargestoneabovethewaterfall.Weunpackedourbagsandspreadoutfood,eatingandlaughing.Minuteslater,theotherscarriedallthefoodand

attemptedtojumpacrossthestreamabovethewaterfall.Soon,theycrossedthefirstnarrow

ribbonofwaterandwerenowstandingontherocksthatborderedthesecondchannel.Tome,thesecondchannellookedsowide!Scared,IdecidedtostayrightwhereIwas.Buttheyyelledback,“Comeonoverhere!Ifyouwantanyjuice,thatis!”Iwasthirsty.Slowly,IpickedmywayacrossagroupofrockstillIreachedaflatstoneoppositewheretheyweregrouped.Allhadtheirbackstome;theywerenowbusyaimingsmallstonesat

afallentreeonthebank.Iglanceddown.Theverycoldwaterwasrunningpastthestone,inchesawayfrommyfeet.Ilookedacrossthebeltofwatertowardsthetemptingfruitjuice!Thissightinspiredmetotakeaction.Ibentdown,tensedmyselftoleap,andthenglancedtowardstheleftside.Barelytwometersawaywasthewaterfall.Althoughitwassmallandtherewereadultsbelow,Istillfeared.Mykneestrembled;Idrewbackacoupleofpaces,staringatthe

runningwater.“Comealong,Jimmy!”Samsaidinagentlevoice.Ilookedup.Samstoodontheotherside,barelyfourfeetawayfromme.Hemusthaveseenmehesitatingontheedgeof

thestoneandsensedmyterroratjumpingacrossthislittlestream!Embarrassed,Itookoff

myglasses.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iwipedthem,searchingforareasontoavoidcrossingthewater.ThenIgatheredmycourage,tookastepforward,andjumpedlightlyacrossthechannel.營(yíng)地徒步故事寫作寫作提綱?第一段：內(nèi)心掙扎?描述“我”擦拭眼鏡時(shí)的內(nèi)心狀態(tài)，如思緒混亂，拼命找借口逃避跨越水流，“Iwipedthem,mymindracingasIsearchedforareasontoavoidcrossingthewater.”。?刻畫Sam鼓勵(lì)“我”的場(chǎng)景，包括他的表情、話語(yǔ)，“ButSam,withhispatientsmile,didn'tgiveup.‘Youcandoit,Jimmy.Justasmalljump,andyou'llbeherewithus,’heencouraged.”。?展現(xiàn)“我”環(huán)顧四周，試圖尋找?guī)椭蚪杩诘呐e動(dòng)，以及對(duì)水流聲音的感受，“Ilookedaround,hopingforamiracle.Thesoundoftherushingwaterseemedtomockmyfear.”。?第二段：勇敢跨越?詳細(xì)描述“我”鼓起勇氣準(zhǔn)備跳躍的動(dòng)作，如深呼吸、邁出腳步，“ThenIgatheredmycourage,tookadeepbreath,andtookastepforward.”。?刻畫跳躍過(guò)程中的身體感受和心理狀態(tài)，如失重感、心跳加速，“Forasplitsecond,Ifeltweightless,suspendedinmid-air.Myheartpoundedwildly.”。?描寫成功跨越后的情景，包括看到Sam和同伴的反應(yīng)，“Andthen,withathud,Ilandedontheotherside.IopenedmyeyestoseeSam'sbeamingfaceandtherestofthegroupcheering.”。?第三段：感悟升華?表達(dá)“我”對(duì)自己成功跨越的難以置信，“Icouldn'tbelieveIhadmadeit.”。?闡述內(nèi)心恐懼被成就感取代的感受，“Thefearthatoncegrippedmewasreplacedbyasenseofaccomplishment.”。?總結(jié)從這次經(jīng)歷中獲得的感悟，如勇氣的重要性，“Irealizedthatsometimes,allittakesisalittlecouragetoovercomeourfearsandembracenewexperiences.”。?語(yǔ)言積累?短語(yǔ)?searchfor尋找?avoiddoingsth.避免做某事?raceone'smind思緒混亂?giveup放棄?encouragesb.todosth.鼓勵(lì)某人做某事?lookaround環(huán)顧四周?hopefor希望得到?gatherone'scourage鼓起勇氣?takeastepforward向前邁出一步?bereplacedby被……取代?佳句?AsIwipedmyglasses,athousandthoughtsswirledinmymind,eachoneafeebleattempttofindanexcusetoshyawayfromthedauntingtaskofcrossingthewater.?當(dāng)我擦拭眼鏡時(shí)，無(wú)數(shù)想法在我腦海中盤旋，每一個(gè)都是試圖找到一個(gè)借口，逃避跨越水流這一艱巨任務(wù)的無(wú)力嘗試。?Sam,withhisever-presentpatienceandwarmsmile,refusedtoletmyfearwin.Hiswords,likeagentlebreezeinthestormofmyanxiety,offeredaglimmerofhope.?山姆，帶著他一貫的耐心和溫暖的笑容，拒絕讓我的恐懼獲勝。他的話，就像我焦慮風(fēng)暴中的一縷微風(fēng)，帶來(lái)了一絲希望。?Thesoundoftherushingwater,likeamenacingroar,seemedtotauntmytimidity,makingmyheartpoundevenfasterinmychest.?湍急水流的聲音，如同威脅的咆哮，似乎在嘲笑我的膽怯，讓我的心在胸腔里跳得更快了。?Summoningeveryounceofcouragewithinme,Itookadeep,steadyingbreathandtookthatdecisivestepforward,readytofacemyfearhead-on.?我鼓起內(nèi)心的每一絲勇氣，深吸一口氣讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來(lái)，邁出了那決定性的一步，準(zhǔn)備直面我的恐懼。?ThemomentIlandedsafelyontheotherside,awaveofelationwashedoverme,replacingtheparalyzingfearthathadheldmehostageforsolong.?當(dāng)我安全地落在另一邊的那一刻，一股喜悅之情涌上心頭，取代了長(zhǎng)久以來(lái)束縛著我的那種令人癱瘓的恐懼。?寫作示范?示范一?Iwipedthem,mymindinacompleteturmoilasIdesperatelysearchedforanout.EveryexcuseIcouldthinkofseemedvalid,yetSam'sencouragingvoicekeptbreakingthrough.“Jimmy,you'vegotthis.It'sjustashortleap,”hesaid,hiseyesfilledwithconfidence.Iscannedthearea,prayingforawayout,buttherushingwateronlyseemedtolaughatmyfear.However,IknewIcouldn'tkeepcowering.Takingadeepbreath,Isteeledmyself.?ThenIgatheredmycourage,mylegsshakingslightlyasItookastepforward.Withaquickjump,Ifeltthegrounddisappearbeneathme.Forthatbriefmomentinmid-air,myheartwasinmythroat.Andthen,Ilandedontheothersidewithathud.Sam'sfacelitupwithahugesmile,andthegrouperuptedincheers.“Welldone,Jimmy!”theyexclaimed.Iwasindisbelief.Thefearwasgone,replacedbyastrongsenseofachievement.Ilearnedthatwithabitofcourage,wecanovercomeevenourgreatestfears.?示范二?Iwipedthem,mythoughtsjumbledasIhuntedforareasonnottocross.Sam,undeterred,kepttryingtocoaxme.“Comeon,Jimmy.It'snotasbadasitlooks,”heurged.Ilookedaround,buttherewasnoeasywayout.Thesoundofthewaterwasdeafening,fuelingmyanxiety.ButSam'swordsechoedinmyears.IknewIhadtofacethis.Iinhaleddeeply,tryingtocalmmynerves.?ThenIgatheredmycourageandtookahesitantstepforward.Ipushedofftheground,andforasplitsecond,Iwasflying.Myheartraced,andIfeltarushofadrenaline.Amomentlater,Itoucheddownontheotherside.Samandthegroupwereclappingandcheering.“Youdidit!”theyshouted.Icouldn'tbelieveIhadactuallymadeit.Thefearthathadplaguedmewasreplacedbyafeelingofpride.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatsometimes,allittakesisalittlepushtoovercomeourfears.?示范三?Iwipedthem,mymindracingasIdesperatelysoughtanexcusetoavoidtheleap.Sam,withhispatientdemeanor,continuedtoencourageme.“You'recapableofthis,Jimmy.Justasmalljump,”hesaid.Ilookedaround,butthewaterseemedtobeclosingin.Itssoundwasintimidating,butSam'swordsgavemeaglimmerofhope.Itookadeepbreath,tryingtosteadymyself.?ThenIgatheredmycourageandtookaresolutestepforward.Ijumped,andinthatfleetingmoment,Ifeltweightless.Myheartpounded,andthenIlanded.Sam'sfacewasbeaming,andthegroupwascheering.“Greatjob,Jimmy!”theycried.IwasastoundedthatIhadmadeit.Thefearthatonceheldmebackwasnowreplacedbyasenseofvictory.Irealizedthatwithcourage,wecanconquertheobstaclesthatstandinourway.?參考答案Iwipedthem,searchingforareasontoavoidcrossingthewater.Afterputtingthemonagain,Samwasstillthere.“Idon'twantanyjuice!”Isaid.Samnoddedunderstandingly.“Fine!”hespokep