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CollegeEnglishTestBand-6杭州新東方：陳曲HangzhouNewOriental:Frank教授課程：寫作部分Courses:WritingPart對于題目的解讀Direction:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled….Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.題目解讀：1.六級寫作給出題目2.三句話寫三段，不要“別出心裁”。3.字?jǐn)?shù)絕對不得少于150個字最新六級題目2009年12月現(xiàn)在有不少家長送孩子參加各種藝術(shù)班；1.對這種做法有人表示支持，2.有人并不贊成；3.我認(rèn)為…Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses?寫作五條黃金法則印象給分（2581114）1.提綱要點(diǎn)→翻譯成英文→各段中心句2.驚艷→學(xué)會制造亮點(diǎn)（尤其第一段）3.清晰→學(xué)會使用標(biāo)志詞（尤其是主體段）4.六級詞匯≤六級高端詞匯≤GRE詞匯5.卷面保持清楚→切忌藏寶圖再次強(qiáng)調(diào)：文章分成三段六級詞匯SampleBut,honestyisnotonlyveryimportanttopeople,butalsoverygoodtoorganizationsandnations.Nevertheless,honestyisnotonlyofessentialsignificancetoindividuals,butcontributestoorganizationsandnationsaswell.替代詞的使用新六級寫作歷年真題考試時(shí)間題目提綱2009.06OntheImportanceofaname名字重不重要2008.12HowtoImproveStudent’sMentalHealth大學(xué)生心理健康問題2008.06WillE-booksReplaceTraditionalBooks電子圖書是否會取代傳統(tǒng)圖書新六級寫作歷年真題考試時(shí)間題目提綱2007.12DigitalAge數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品對于人們生活的影響2007.06ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed做了好事要不要回報(bào)2006.12TheImportanceofReadingClassics閱讀經(jīng)典書籍對人的成長很重要?dú)v年題目的第一段2009.061.有人認(rèn)為名字很重要2008.121.大學(xué)生的心理健康十分重要2008.061.隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展，電子圖書越來越多2007.121.如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來越多廣泛的使用，例如…2007.061.有人做好事期望得到回報(bào)；2006.121.閱讀經(jīng)典書籍對人的成長至關(guān)重要。寫作核心：句型總起：閱讀經(jīng)典書籍非常重要。初中Readingclassicsisveryimportant.高中beimportant=beof…importancegreatvitalcrucial寫作核心：句型Itisofvitalimportancetoreadclassics.大學(xué)預(yù)科Nothingismoreimportantthan…Nothingismoreimportantthantoreadclassics.大學(xué)四級playa/an…role/part寫作核心：句型Readingclassicsplaysaveryimportantrolenowadays.六級高分important=significant=essentialpivot=indispensibleNothingplaysamoreindispensiblerolethantoreadclassics.天龍八部–第一部2006.12TheImportanceofReadingClassicsItisgenerallyacceptedthatnothingcanplayamoreindispensablerolethanreadingbooks.描述類經(jīng)典句真理類經(jīng)典句Itisgenerallyacceptedthatoneshouldneverexpectarewardwhendoingagooddeed.Seeminglyjustifiable,however,itisnotalwaysthecase.第一部發(fā)散存在類經(jīng)典句升級：Thereislittledoubtthat…Thereisgeneralacceptancethat…Itcannotbedeniedthat…Thereisagrowingrecognitionthat…Ithasbeenwidelynotedthat…Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…Aprevailingnotion/trendisthat…天龍八部–第二部2007.12DigitalAgeIT技術(shù)數(shù)字時(shí)代Probablywithoutourconsciousness/realization,theITtechnologyseemstogivebirthtoadigitalageintoday’sworld.A--⊙emergeintopeople’ssight/visionA--BAgivebirthtoBOwningtothedevelopmentofITindustry,e-booksingrowingnumberbegintoemergeintopeople’svision.英漢差異1英語多被動，漢語多主動。我們應(yīng)該重視閱讀電子書Weshouldpayattentiontoe-books.Youshouldpayattentiontoe-books.文章中不得出現(xiàn)you！?。ttentionshouldbepaidtoreadinge-books.英漢差異1加比較級：MuchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehavebeenpaidtoE-books.laidconcentration/focuson/upon…Muchmoreconcentrationsthaneverbeforehavebeenlaidon/uponreadingclassics.attachimportanceto天龍八部–第三部2008.06WillE-booksReplaceTraditionalBooks?Inrecentyears,muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenpaidtothefast-developingITindustrywhichhasbroughtunprecedentedtransformationstohumanbeings’life.Inrecentyears,muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenlaidon/focusedon/paidto…A–-(B)-CAbringBtoC天龍八部–第四部2009.06OntheImportanceofaName長期以來，人們一直都對名字的重要性很感興趣。Overthepastcenturies,peoplehavelongbeeninterestedinidentifyingthesignificanceofaname.Peoplehavelongbeeninterestedinidentifying…（影響）effectinfluenceimpact（作用）force（意義）importancesignificance天龍八部–第五部2009.12Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses孩子的教育已經(jīng)成為最重要的社會問題之一。Children’seducationhasrecentlyarisenasoneoftheessentialproblems.之一…h(huán)asarisenasoneof…可以取代become…新生事物天龍八部–第六部2008.12TheImportanceofStudent’smentalhealth孩子心理健康的重要性眾說紛紜。Nowadaystheimportanceofstudents’mentalhealthhasbeenamatterofdebate/beenopentodebate.Ahavebeenamatterofdebate/beenopentoB升級：…h(huán)aveledto/resultedin/triggered/giverisetoaheateddiscussion.Asregards…,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongthegeneralpublicinoursociety.天龍八部–第七部2009.06Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses越來越多的父母開始考慮把孩子送到藝術(shù)學(xué)校去。Anincreasingnumberofparentsbegintoconsidersendingtheirkidstoartclasses,suchasdrawinganddancingonweekendsorduringtheholidays.Anincreasing/growingnumberofpeoplebeginto…可以取代moreandmore…Peopleingrowingnumber英漢差異2漢語多短句，英語多長句windflowersnowmoon小橋流水人家Murmuringstreamflowsunderneaththebridge,leadingtoelegantdwelling.某人做好事要求回報(bào)發(fā)散英漢差異2Oneshouldexpectarewardafterdoingagooddeed.Thoughthequestionisseeminglysimple,itposesaconsiderablechallengetothesociety.Andittendstoshowcasepeople’smoralbelief.10---710---9甚至10？天龍八部–第八部2007.06ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?Seeminglysimple,thequestionofwhetheroneshouldexpectarewardafterdoingagooddeedposesaconsiderablechallengewhichtendstoshowcasepeople’smoralbelief.…poseaconsiderablechallengeto……tendto…當(dāng)中文出現(xiàn)容易時(shí)Itendtobelieve/claimthat…第八部發(fā)散使動類經(jīng)典句升級(對…造成了…)pose…to…或者place/put…on…1.Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence.2.Rapidpopulationgrowthwillput/placeastrainoneconomiesaroundtheworld.3.Smokingplaceagreatinfluenceonourhealth.第八部發(fā)散趨勢類經(jīng)典句升級：tendto…belikelyto…beinclinedto…beliableto…beaptto…beproneto…第八部發(fā)散1.Onetendstoshoutwhenhegetsexcited.2.Inwinter,peopleareapttocatchcold.3.Heislikelytomakemistakeswhentired.4.Sheispronetolosetemperindifficultsituation.5.Leoisliabletoactaggressively.6.Thiskindofshoesisinclinedtosliponwetground.天龍八部步法現(xiàn)象類新事物舊事物新興趣舊事物多人群ariseasbeinterestedinpayattentiontoincreasing描述類新舊事物描述playarole討論類討論熱議debatediscussion動作類出現(xiàn)結(jié)果舉例emergeposechallengeforinstance為什么要用天龍八部天龍八部核心→句型如2007年12月DigitalAge數(shù)字時(shí)代可以使人們受益，也可能帶來危害。Digitalagebothhasadvantagesanddisadvantages.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatDigitalagebothhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Exercise開頭句經(jīng)典練習(xí)：學(xué)習(xí)英語到底有多難？思路設(shè)計(jì):1a.現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在學(xué)習(xí)英語1b.英語扮演著非常重要的角色2a.然而如何學(xué)好英語卻成為重中之重2b.舉例說明學(xué)習(xí)英語的情況KeytotheExercise第一句話：天龍八部出鞘句型1：…ariseasoneof…1.Englishlearninghasrecentlyarisenasoneoftheessentialproblemsforanystudents,regardlessoftheiragegenderorbackground.增加描述regardlessof…=irrespectiveof…KeytotheExercise句型2：muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenpaidto/laidon/focusedon/concentratedon…2.Atpresent,muchmoreconcentrationthaneverbeforehasbeenlaiduponEnglishlearningbymajorityofthestudentsrangingfromkindergartenkidstocollegeundergraduates.增加對象KeytotheExercise句型3：peoplehavelongbeeninterestedin…3.Overthepastdecades,peoplehavebeenlonginterestedinlearningaforeignlanguagesoastoimprovetheirabilitytocommunicatewithothersandEnglishinparticularhasbeentheirfocus.增加目的KeytotheExercise句型4：Anincreasingnumberof…beginto…4.AnincreasingnumberofstudentsnowadaysstarttolearnEnglishataveryearlyage,evenwhentheyareinpre-school.增加時(shí)間（地點(diǎn)）KeytotheExercise句型5.Thereisgenerallyacceptedthat…nothingplaya…rolethan…5.ThereisagrowingrecognitionthatEnglishhasplayedadominantroleincurrentworldincommunication.5’.Itisanirrefutablefactthat,incurrentworld,nothingcanplayamoreindispensablepartincommunicationthanEnglish.KeytotheExercise第二句話：六脈神劍承接句型6.…h(huán)asemergedintopeople’svision6.Nevertheless,theissueofhowtolearnEnglishwellhasemergedintopeople’svision,sincemostcollegestudentsstillfindthesubjectdifficultandthelanguageunintelligible,despitetheirlearningEnglishforovertenyears.增加因果轉(zhuǎn)折KeytotheExercise句型7.thequestionof…pose/put/place…7.TheissueofhowtolearnEnglishwellhasplacedconsiderablestrainonmostofthecollegestudents,whoregarditasagreatnecessityfortheirfuturecareer.KeytotheExercise句型8.thequestionof…h(huán)asbeenopentodebate/triggeredaheateddiscussion8.Consequently,theissueofhowtomasterthislanguagehasbeenopentodebate/triggeredaheateddiscussion.Thus,asregardshowtoimprovetheEnglishlanguageskill,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongthegeneralpublicinoursociety.KeytotheExercise句型9.舉例類回憶發(fā)生類句型witness9.TakeChinaforexample,thepastdecadeshaswitnessedadramaticincreaseinthenumberofpeoplewhoiseager/hasshowntheirgreatanxietytomasterthislanguage.KeytotheExercise開頭句組合1---英文重要現(xiàn)狀Thereisagrowingrecognitionthat,incurrentworld,nothingcanplayamore