初中英語人教版九年級(jí)全冊(cè)《作文清》課件

1、作文清【寫作案例】“中學(xué)生是否可以在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)？”你們班就此話題進(jìn)行了討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下記錄表寫一篇80詞左右的短文，陳述討論結(jié)果，并發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。OpinionsReasonMobile phones should be usedsurf the Internet for information；play games for enjoyment Mobile phones shouldnt be usedsend messages in class；use public phones at schoolRecently we had a discussion ab

2、out whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not._【思路點(diǎn)撥】1體裁：議論文。2時(shí)態(tài)：各種時(shí)態(tài)綜合運(yùn)用。3人稱：以第一人稱為主。4寫作思路：開頭已經(jīng)給出，故接著按提示分層來寫，第一層寫學(xué)生有手機(jī)的好處及原因，第二層寫學(xué)生有手機(jī)的壞處及原因，第三層寫自己的觀點(diǎn)。5注意事項(xiàng)：本文應(yīng)分層來寫，要注意運(yùn)用本單元含情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。要做到層次分明?！靖叻帜０濉块_篇點(diǎn)題已經(jīng)給出分層說明Some of us (First, Second, Finally); other students(On one hand, on

3、the other hand)我的觀點(diǎn)In my opinion.【美文欣賞】 Recently_we_had_a_discussion_about_whether_the_students_should_use_mobile_phones_at_school_or_not. Some of us think mobile phones should be used at school.First, we can surf the Internet for information we need.Second, with mobile phones we can play games for

4、enjoyment in our free time.Finally, we can call our parents easily.However, some other students dont think so.On one hand, some students send messages on mobile phones in class.On the other hand, some students spend too much time playing games on mobile phones.In my opinion, its not a good idea to use mobile phones at school because it isnt helpful to improve our study.And w