2020高中英語新高考-英語作文：讀后續(xù)寫細節(jié)描寫第一講：描寫forest,woods

1、2020 高中英語新高考讀后續(xù)寫細節(jié)描寫第一講：描寫forest, woods英語文學的描寫在于細節(jié)，如此可以細分為物和人兩大類別。就物而言,又分山川和建筑。山川又可以纟田分為：forest, mountains, caves, isla nds and volca no es, paths,rivers, sea。第一個章節(jié)我說forest，這也是鑒于浙江這幾年的讀后續(xù)寫都是關(guān)于森林有關(guān)的多。但高中的詞匯量也就是3500，而文學中的景色描寫很容易超過這個數(shù)字。我為了減輕高中生的記憶壓力，力圖從200 多本經(jīng)典英文原著中挑選最常見的表達（我發(fā)現(xiàn)很多表達反復出現(xiàn)在很多人作品中，因此以下呈現(xiàn)都可

2、以供高中學生大膽選用），個別超綱詞匯也無礙。如何練習：當寫到樹林的時候，查看本節(jié)，根據(jù)文章需要挑選句子。我的學生跟我說，記不住。其實，沒有誰能一下子記住，多練習幾篇就會記住的?？忌枰涀?，景色描寫，一定要腦子里存在幾幅圖，例如下面的，這樣 你才能更好去應用。 實際上，讀后續(xù)寫的圖像定格是非常重要和實用的技 能，我后面會說到。Chapter 1 Forest這一節(jié)說樹林，無非圍繞：草、花、樹（包括樹干、樹莖、樹葉、 藤蔓）、顏色。其中讀者最好多記憶一些文學作品中常見的花名, 好比漢語小說中常用牽?；?、紅豆等。 （雖然有點累，但是你會 發(fā)現(xiàn)很值得）以高考真題作文為例：妻子和丈夫分手后迷路了，兩段

3、的開頭：1. But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.2. It was daybreak whe n Jane woke up.這兩段描寫都會涉及到森林景色的描寫，第一段的森林景色應該是和黑夜有關(guān)，表達出妻子的恐懼；第二段景色描寫應該是和晨曦有關(guān)，暗示希望這樣的描寫不用多，每段一兩句即可。讀者都可以在本節(jié)中找到答案。高頻詞NounsForest, jun gle, woodla nd, trees, treetops, trun ks, bran ches, roots, loc森林、叢林、林地、樹木、樹梢、樹干、

4、樹枝、根、原木Sky, ceili ng, umbrella, bla nket天空，頂部，傘，毯子Floor, carpet, paths地板、地毯、小徑Leaves, buds, berries, blossoms, flowers, petals, stems, vin es,creepers, ivy, thor ns葉，芽，漿果，花，花，花瓣，莖，藤蔓，藤蔓植物，荊棘Bluebells, daffodils, poppies風信子，水仙花，罌粟太陽、風、露、霧、霧、影AdjectivesTall, huge, vast, toweri ng高大，巨大，巨大，高聳Beautiful,

5、stunning, magn ifice nt美麗，驚艷，壯麗Brow n, yellow,gree n, emerald, pin k, red, scarlet, crims on, fiery,oran ge, bron ze, purple, blue, white, silver棕色、黃色、綠色、祖母綠、粉色、紅色、猩紅、深紅色、火紅、 橙色、青銅色、紫色、藍色、白色、銀色Bright, vivid明亮，生動Dark, black, gloomy, shadowy, misty黑暗，黑，陰暗，陰暗，迷霧Thick, den se, spidery濃密的，蜘蛛樣的Rough, shar

6、p, thor ny, spiky, twisted, bent粗糙的、尖銳的、多刺的、尖刺的、扭曲的、彎曲的Dead, rott ing死了的，腐爛了的VerbsStood, rose, spread, stretched, arched站著，站起來，伸展，伸展，弓起來Kno tted, twisted打結(jié)、扭曲Blocked, trapped, grasped, scratched堵塞、困住、抓住、刮傷Burst, erupted, crept爆發(fā)，爆發(fā)，匍匐Hung, swayed, tossed, dan ced, floated, fluttered懸掛，搖晃，搖晃，跳動，飄浮，飄動

7、Lit, pain ted,covered, cloaked, shrouded照明、涂漆、遮蓋、遮蓋、遮蓋高頻短語-名詞和形容詞Mag nificent forest of tall trees高大的森林Like a crowd of vivid green umbrellas像一群鮮艷的綠色雨傘Emerald /?em(? )r?ld/ green leaves 翠綠的葉子Vivid green stems 鮮艷的綠色莖Like flutteri ng, emerald ribb ons像飄動的翡翠絲帶Blazi ng carpet of bluebells 耀眼的風信子Red and o

8、range berries 紅色和橙色漿果* Dew-soaked grass like a field of liquid diam on ds露水浸透的草像一塊液態(tài)鉆石* Thick jun gle of dense forest 密林* Spidery kn ot of trees and bushes 蜘蛛結(jié)樣的樹叢* Huge, thick limbs 又大又粗的樹肢* Bleached skeletons of dead trees 漂白的枯樹干* Rotting leaves and dead branches 枯葉枯枝* crawli ng in sects 爬行昆蟲* Bla

9、 nket of fog 濃霧高頻短語-動詞* Spread out above him 在他上方展開* Stretched as far as the eye could see 一直延伸到眼睛能看到的地方* Framed the deep blue sky 勾勒出深藍的天空* Impossible to find a way through 找不到出路* Could nt tell one part of the forest from the rest無法區(qū)分森林的一部分和其余部分* Swayed to the rhythm of the wi nd隨風搖擺* Flu ng their

10、leaves up to the sky 把樹葉拋向天空* Arched in the wi nd 在風中彎腰* Hu ng like swayi ng feathers 像搖擺的羽毛一樣懸掛* Waved like hun dreds of tiny han ds像幾百只小手一樣揮舞* Stretched like a carpet of jewels 像珠寶一樣伸展* Lay like a carpet of con fetti像鋪著五彩紙屑的地毯* Dotted with red poppies 點綴著紅色罌粟花* Sun danced on the leaves 在樹葉上搖曳的陽光*

11、Bathed in light 沐浴在陽光中* Sho ne with patches of misty light閃爍著一片片薄霧* Pa in ted the ground with flickeri ng shadows 在地上閃爍的陰影* Blocked the path 阻塞了路* Littered the ground 散落在地上* Cloaked in a bla nket of dark ness 被隱藏在黑暗中高頻句子和段落以下段落涉及到樹、草、花、葉子：They were welcomed by wave after wave of the gently nodding h

12、eads of daffodils and the bowed headsof a blaz ing carpet of bluebells. The ground was pain ted with red poppies and yellow gorse. The petalshad bee n shake n off the bush and lay like a carpet of pink confetti on the floor. It was impossible tomove quickly through the spidery tan gle of trees and b

13、ushes. Some trees stood tall and proud, flingingtheir bran ches up to the sun to frame the deep blue sky. Some trees were joined together like a crowdof vivid green umbrellas. The branches swayed to the rhythm of the wind and their leaves fluttered likegraceful butterflies. Patches of misty light sh

14、one through the gaps in the trees. The leaves glowed in theearly morning light like hun dreds of tiny han ds.迎接他們的是在輕輕點頭的水仙花和垂著頭的耀眼的風鈴草。地面被涂上 了紅色的罌粟花和黃色的金雀花，花瓣已經(jīng)從灌木叢中搖落，像鋪在地板 上的粉色五彩地毯。在樹叢和灌木叢的蜘蛛?yún)仓胁豢赡苎杆僖苿?。一些?高高在上，傲然挺立，把樹枝向太陽拋來，襯托出深藍色的天空。一些樹 木像一群鮮艷的綠色雨傘一樣連在一起。樹枝隨著風的節(jié)奏搖擺，葉子像 優(yōu)美的蝴蝶一樣飄動。一片片朦朧的光從樹縫里照進來。樹

15、葉在清晨的陽 光下閃閃發(fā)光，像幾百只小手。其它的和黑夜的一些句子：The forest was a dark, tangled maze and it was impossible to find a way through.森林是一個黑暗的迷宮，很難找到一條路穿過。The branches of the thick, tangled trees had spread and twisted to form dark, overhead tunn els andcreated secret paths.濃密、纏繞的樹枝伸展、扭曲，形成黑暗的高架隧道，形成秘密通道。The ceili ng of thick bran ches shut