高考應用文寫作指導之建議信.ppt

高考英語應用文寫作指導之建議(recommendationletter),Objectives:,2.Masteranduseusefulexpressions,structureandformworkoftherecommendationletter.,3.Completeawritingofrecommendationletter.,Inthisclass,wewillbeableto,1.Knowhowtoanalyzethematerialoftherecommendationletter.,高考常見的應用文類型有：,二找,三列,一審,四寫,五潤,糾正錯誤和潤色文章,寫建議信,找結(jié)構(gòu),列要點,審題目,建議信的寫作步驟,Sample：假設你是某報社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的一封來信。信中李華提到自己在學習英語的過程中遇到了困難，這讓他很苦惱。請根據(jù)以上提示，寫一篇回給李華的建議信，幫他解決困難，促進學習。,第一人稱,建議信,對英語學習給出建議,說理的邏輯性,一般現(xiàn)在時,第一步：審題目,如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象,結(jié)構(gòu)三部分,Heading點題一兩個句子；概括性2.Body陳述事實，提出建議，給出理由；層次分明3.Ending總結(jié)全文，表明希望；呼應主題,第二步：找結(jié)構(gòu),readEnglishaloudeveryday/spendoneorhalfhourinreadingEnglishbooks,WatchEnglishmovies/films.,第三步：列要點,listentoEnglishsongs/learntosingEnglishsongs,第三步：列要點,practiceyourspokenEnglishwithanative-speaker.,Howtobeginanrecommendationletter?第一段：開頭是成功的一半,Dear.:(開門見山，點明意圖）IknowyouhavesometroublesinlearningEnglishafterreadingyourletters.Therearesometipsforyou.(2)IamgladtohearyouwanttolearnEnglishwell.Inmyopinion,.(3)IamwritingtosharemyadvicewithyouonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Itwillbewiseofyouifyoutakethefollowingactions.,讀了你的信后，我知道你在學習英語上有困難.,我很高興聽到你想要學好英語.在我看來,我寫信和你分享如何學好英語方面的建議。如果你能采取以下措施，將是明智的選擇。,第四步：寫作文,建議信重點,第二段：說明建議的內(nèi)容；（是什么）提出具體建議的原因；（為什么）指出采納建議的益處。（怎么樣）注意事項：語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對方感受。,Tolistyoursuggestions親們，別東拉西扯，鬧糊涂啊,First,Secondly,Finally,Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,Whatismore/besides/moreover/furthermoreTobeginwith,Inaddition,Lastbutnotleast(注意連貫和邏輯，合理使用連接詞或短語）,Aperfectending!第三段：完美的Ending，可不是說灰姑娘的故事哦。,Inaconclusion/inaword（結(jié)論簡潔，指明觀點）Practicemakesperfect！NothingisdifficultIfyouputyourmindintoit.(2)Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.(3)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeyourimprovements.,適當運用模板,DearLiHua,Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaid+你碰到的問題.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,_,because_.Secondly,youshould_,because_.Thirdly,youdbetter_.Onlyinthiswaycanyou_.Whatsmore,_.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,第五步：該錯誤、美文章,Summary,建議信的寫作步驟,第二篇建議信：對于我的朋友花大量時間上網(wǎng)，耽誤學習的建議信建議內(nèi)容：1）和他面對面地交流、溝通；2）給她發(fā)郵件或短信；3）告訴他學習的重要性。,Practice:,DearLiHua,Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyourfriendspendsmostofhistimechattingontheInternetandoftengoestotheInternetcafeinsteadofattendingclasses.Youreallywanttohelphimoutbutyoudontknowwhattodowithit/howtohelphim.Well.Iwouldliketogivemyadviceforyou.Myadviceareasfollows.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldhaveatalkwithhimsincerely.Becauseifyourfriendskipsclasses,heisnotgoingtodowellatschool.Secondly,youcane-mailhimorleaveamessage.Thirdly,youshouldtellhimtheimportanceofstudy.Becauseeveryoneofusjusthasonechancetogotohighschool,heshouldstudyhardandnotwastetimeinindulgingontheInternet.Inaword,Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,Editor,ThankYou!,假設你是某報社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的一封來信。信中李華提到自己是高一的學生，在學習英語的過程中遇到了困難，這讓他很苦惱。請根據(jù)以上提示，寫一篇回給李華的建議信，幫他解決困難，促進學習。建議：1.課堂上認真聽老師講課；2.多和同學和老師用英語交流：3.堅持每天記單詞，讀英語課文；多練、多問等。4.培養(yǎng)對英語學習的興趣愛好。,Homework:,DearLiHua,Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.Whatsmore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點寫回信。要點：參加中文學習班；看中文書刊、電視；學唱中文歌曲；交中國朋友。注意：可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭語已給出。DearPeter,ImgladtohearthatyoucanaskformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._Bestwishes,LiHua,Homework:,DearPeter,ImsorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsonhowtolearnChinesewell.IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,becauseyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourclassmates.Second,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersinChinese.Third,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingit,youlllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanmakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.LiHua,DearWangNan,Imsorrytohearthatyouarefeelingannoyedthesedaysbecauseyouarenotabletocommunicatewithotherseffectively.Iwillgiveyousomeusefuladvice.Myadviceareasfollows.First,asasayinggoes,everymanhashisfaults,Inoticesomepeoplearoundusarenotgoodatcommunication.Soyoudonthavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.Second,goodcommunicationisnotonlyhelpfultoourstudybutalsogoodforoursuccess.Third,behonestandfranktothosewhomyoutalkto,soyoucouldbeunderstoodbyotherseasily.Whatsmore,youdbettertrytounderstandotherswhentheytalkssothatyoucanexchangeideasw