2025浙江1月卷讀后續(xù)寫及滿分語(yǔ)料10類40句 (真假小偷) 解析版

2025浙江1月卷讀后續(xù)寫及滿分語(yǔ)料10類40句(真假小偷)解析版【讀后續(xù)寫真題深度解讀】【原題呈現(xiàn)】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Kevinwasprettybored.Hismotherwasatwork,andhisfatherhadbeenawayonbusiness.Therefore,hewasleftinthecareofMrs.Hill,anoldladywholivednextdoor.Hisparentshadraisedthe12-year-oldtobeagoodboy.Henevergotintotrouble,thoughsometimeshewantedtodoriskythings.Mrs.Hillwasasleep.Kevinsighed(嘆息)andhopedsomethingexcitingwouldhappen.Suddenly,amovementoutsidecaughthiseye.段落大意：介紹凱文所處情境，父母不在家，由鄰居照顧，他無聊時(shí)窗外出現(xiàn)動(dòng)靜。情節(jié)：凱文的母親上班，父親出差，他由Mrs.Hill照顧，Mrs.Hill睡著，凱文無聊嘆氣，突然窗外的一個(gè)動(dòng)靜吸引了他的目光。情感：初始狀態(tài)是無聊煩悶，看到窗外動(dòng)靜后轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)楹闷媾c期待，渴望有新奇事情發(fā)生。Mrs.Hill’sfrontwindowfacedMr.andMrs.Green’shouseacrossthestreet.Thecouplehadbothgonetowork,soitwasstrangethatsomeonewasoverthere.Kevinstaredatthemanattheirfrontdoor.Suddenly,themanjumpedthroughanopenwindowintothehouse.Withhisheartinhismouth,KevingrabbedMrs.Hill’shomephoneandcalledthepolice.段落大意：凱文發(fā)現(xiàn)街對(duì)面異常情況并報(bào)警。情節(jié)：凱文通過窗戶看到街對(duì)面格林夫婦家有人從窗戶進(jìn)入，而主人都去上班他覺得怪異，便報(bào)警。情感：由好奇轉(zhuǎn)為緊張與警惕，因察覺到潛在危險(xiǎn)而擔(dān)憂，意識(shí)到事情的嚴(yán)重性。情感：由好奇轉(zhuǎn)為緊張與警惕，意識(shí)到事情嚴(yán)重性。Thinkingthatthemanmightgetawaywithwhateverhewantedbeforethepolicearrived,Kevindecidedtodosomething.HerushedoutofMrs.Hill’shouseandcrossedthestreetquickly.Grabbingabranchfromacut-downtree,hejumpedinthroughthewindow.“Stoprightthere!Youmustleaverightnow!”hecalledout,holdingthebranchwithbothhands.段落大意：凱文為阻止男子逃脫，持樹枝沖進(jìn)屋內(nèi)。情節(jié)：凱文擔(dān)心男子在警察到來前帶著東西逃走，于是迅速?gòu)腗rs.Hill家跑出，撿起砍倒樹上的樹枝，從窗戶跳進(jìn)格林夫婦家，向男子發(fā)出制止。情感：在緊張氛圍下鼓起勇氣，表現(xiàn)出勇敢果斷，充滿正義感，想要維護(hù)正義，阻止可疑行為。Themanfrozeforasecond,butwhenhesawtheskinnyboyhebreathedasighofrelief.“Hey,kid,putthatdown.Itwasmyhome.Myparentsusedtolivehereandmyfather’swatchwashere,”heexplained,tryingtoliftafloorboard.段落大意：男子作出解釋，引發(fā)凱文的疑惑。情節(jié)：男子聽到凱文制止后先是愣住，解釋說房子曾是自己家，想找回父親手表，試圖撬起地板。情感：原本堅(jiān)定制止男子的態(tài)度，內(nèi)心產(chǎn)生疑惑。Atthatmoment,thesoundsofapolicecarechoed(回響)intheair.Themanstoodupinapanic,thenranthroughthehousetowardthewindowandjumpedout.Kevinfollowedoutandtoldthearrivingpoliceofficerswhathadhappened.Theypursuedandarrestedtheman.段落大意：警察到來男子被抓，凱文說明情況。情節(jié)：男子驚慌失措，從窗戶跳出逃走，凱文向警察講述事情經(jīng)過，警察追捕并成功逮捕男子。情感：完成協(xié)助警察的行為后情緒平穩(wěn)，但腦海中在思考之前與男子的沖突，對(duì)事件結(jié)果有所關(guān)注。KevinwentbacktoMrs.Hill’shouse.Somehowhewasn’tsurehehaddonetherightthing.“Whatifhehastoldthetruth?”hethoughttohimself.Theman’swordssoundedprettyconvincing.段落大意：凱文回家后對(duì)自己的行為產(chǎn)生懷疑。情節(jié)：凱文反復(fù)思索男子的話，不確定是否做對(duì)。情感：陷入糾結(jié)與自我懷疑之中，不確定自己行動(dòng)是否合理，對(duì)事情的真相和自己的判斷感到迷茫?！驹}呈現(xiàn)】Kevinwasprettybored.Hismotherwasatwork,andhisfatherhadbeenawayonbusiness.Therefore,hewasleftinthecareofMrs.Hill,anoldladywholivednextdoor.Hisparentshadraisedthe12-year-oldtobeagoodboy.Henevergotintotrouble,thoughsometimeshewantedtodoriskythings.Mrs.Hillwasasleep.Kevinsighed(嘆息)andhopedsomethingexcitingwouldhappen.Suddenly,amovementoutsidecaughthiseye.Mrs.Hill’sfrontwindowfacedMr.andMrs.Green’shouseacrossthestreet.Thecouplehadbothgonetowork,soitwasstrangethatsomeonewasoverthere.Kevinstaredatthemanattheirfrontdoor.Suddenly,themanjumpedthroughanopenwindowintothehouse.Withhisheartinhismouth,KevingrabbedMrs.Hill’shomephoneandcalledthepolice.Thinkingthatthemanmightgetawaywithwhateverhewantedbeforethepolicearrived,Kevindecidedtodosomething.HerushedoutofMrs.Hill’shouseandcrossedthestreetquickly.Grabbingabranchfromacut-downtree,hejumpedinthroughthewindow.“Stoprightthere!Youmustleaverightnow!”hecalledout,holdingthebranchwithbothhands.Themanfrozeforasecond,butwhenhesawtheskinnyboyhebreathedasighofrelief.“Hey,kid,putthatdown.Itwasmyhome.Myparentsusedtolivehereandmyfather’swatchwashere,”heexplained,tryingtoliftafloorboard.Atthatmoment,thesoundsofapolicecarechoed(回響)intheair.Themanstoodupinapanic,thenranthroughthehousetowardthewindowandjumpedout.Kevinfollowedoutandtoldthearrivingpoliceofficerswhathadhappened.Theypursuedandarrestedtheman.KevinwentbacktoMrs.Hill’shouse.Somehowhewasn’tsurehehaddonetherightthing.“Whatifhehastoldthetruth?”hethoughttohimself.Theman’swordssoundedprettyconvincing.注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.【步步為贏】一、文本解讀（一）故事梗概文章講述了12歲的Kevin在父母不在家，由鄰居Mrs.Hill照顧時(shí)的經(jīng)歷。Mrs.Hill睡著后，Kevin看到街對(duì)面Green夫婦家有個(gè)男人從窗戶進(jìn)入。由于Green夫婦都去上班了，Kevin覺得異常，便打電話報(bào)警。之后，他還拿著樹枝沖進(jìn)屋內(nèi)試圖阻止男子。男子稱房子曾是他家，想找回父親的手表。警察到來時(shí)，男子驚慌逃走，Kevin向警察說明了情況。但Kevin對(duì)自己的行為產(chǎn)生了懷疑，擔(dān)心男子說的是真話。（二）人物分析Kevin：12歲男孩，父母教導(dǎo)他成為一個(gè)好孩子，平時(shí)雖遵守規(guī)矩，但內(nèi)心有時(shí)渴望冒險(xiǎn)。在看到異常情況時(shí)，勇敢地采取行動(dòng)，先是報(bào)警，后又獨(dú)自闖入屋內(nèi)與男子對(duì)峙，然而事后對(duì)自己的行為產(chǎn)生了不確定性的思考，體現(xiàn)出他既有勇敢的一面，又有心思細(xì)膩、會(huì)反思的性格特點(diǎn)。闖入男子：行為可疑，從窗戶進(jìn)入無人的房子，但聲稱房子曾是自己家，父親的手表遺留在屋內(nèi)，他的解釋真假難辨，給故事增添了懸念。（三）文本線索明線：Kevin發(fā)現(xiàn)男子闖入Green夫婦家，報(bào)警并與之對(duì)峙，男子逃走后Kevin的內(nèi)心困惑。暗線：男子闖入房子的真實(shí)目的，這一懸念貫穿故事始終，推動(dòng)著情節(jié)的發(fā)展。二、寫作步驟（一）分析所給段落開頭“WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.”此開頭暗示接下來Kevin會(huì)向Green夫婦講述事情經(jīng)過，可能會(huì)提及男子的說法，同時(shí)引出Green夫婦對(duì)這件事的反應(yīng)，為后續(xù)情節(jié)發(fā)展奠定基礎(chǔ)。“KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.”表明Kevin和Mr.Green找到了手表，這意味著前面的情節(jié)中會(huì)有關(guān)于尋找手表的內(nèi)容，而帶著手表去警局又會(huì)引發(fā)與警方的進(jìn)一步互動(dòng)，推動(dòng)故事走向結(jié)局。（二）確定續(xù)寫情節(jié)方向基于第一段開頭，考慮Green夫婦聽到Kevin講述后的反應(yīng)，他們可能對(duì)男子的說法有不同看法，或許能提供一些關(guān)于男子的信息，比如男子是否真的曾是房子主人，這有助于解開Kevin心中的疑惑。從第二段開頭可知，要先描述找到手表的過程，這可能涉及到Kevin和Mr.Green在房子里的探索，找到手表后去警局，在警局可能會(huì)有新的發(fā)現(xiàn)，比如警察確認(rèn)男子的身份和其話語(yǔ)的真實(shí)性，從而得出最終的故事結(jié)局。（三）構(gòu)思關(guān)鍵情節(jié)和細(xì)節(jié)在Kevin與Green夫婦交流的情節(jié)中，可描述Green夫婦的表情、動(dòng)作和語(yǔ)言，如Mr.Green皺著眉頭思考，Mrs.Green驚訝地捂住嘴巴等細(xì)節(jié)，增強(qiáng)故事的生動(dòng)性。對(duì)于尋找手表的過程，可詳細(xì)描寫Kevin和Mr.Green在房子里的動(dòng)作，如翻找地板、查看角落等，以及他們的對(duì)話，如Kevin詢問Mr.Green是否確定這里曾是男子的家等。在警局部分，可描寫警察的反應(yīng)，如警察看到手表后嚴(yán)肅的神情，通過電腦查詢信息時(shí)的專注等細(xì)節(jié)。三、情節(jié)構(gòu)建（一）第一段續(xù)寫情節(jié)Kevin向Green夫婦詳細(xì)講述了事情的經(jīng)過，包括男子的一舉一動(dòng)以及他聲稱房子曾是自己家且要找父親手表的說法。Green夫婦聽后，Mr.Green皺著眉頭陷入沉思，過了一會(huì)兒，他緩緩說道，這房子之前確實(shí)賣給過一家人，那家有個(gè)兒子，和Kevin描述的男子年齡相仿。Mrs.Green則驚訝地捂住嘴巴，眼中滿是疑惑。Kevin聽了Green夫婦的話，心中更加糾結(jié)，他提議和Mr.Green一起去房子里找找看是否真有手表，Mr.Green同意了。（二）第二段續(xù)寫情節(jié)Kevin和Mr.Green來到房子里，開始仔細(xì)翻找。他們?cè)谀凶釉噲D撬起的地板下，終于發(fā)現(xiàn)了一塊老式手表。拿著手表，他們立刻前往警局。警察接過手表，仔細(xì)端詳后，通過系統(tǒng)查詢，確認(rèn)了男子正是房子原主人的兒子，他近期因經(jīng)濟(jì)困難，想找回這塊有紀(jì)念意義且能換些錢的手表。Kevin得知真相后，心中的石頭落了地，他雖然因誤會(huì)男子感到有些不好意思，但也為自己的勇敢和堅(jiān)持真相的行為感到自豪。警察表?yè)P(yáng)了Kevin的勇敢和細(xì)心，Green夫婦也對(duì)Kevin的行為贊不絕口。最終，Kevin帶著愉快的心情回到Mrs.Hill家，等待父母歸來，迫不及待地想和他們分享這段特別的經(jīng)歷。四、參考答案WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.Heexplainedeverything,fromthemanjumpingthroughthewindowtothepolicearrestinghim.TheGreenslistenedcarefully,withadoubtfulexpressionontheirfaces.Kevinthendescribedhowthemanhadbeentryingtomovethefloorboard.“Heclaimedhisfather’swatchwashiddenbeneathit,”headded.Mrs.Greenlookedsurprised.“Let’sgocheck,”shesaid.Ittookalittlewhile,butMr.Greenmanagedtolifttheboard.Toeveryone’sastonishment,thereitwas—anoldwatch,justasthemanhaddescribed.KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.Theofficerconfirmeditmatchedtheman’sdescription.“We’llneedtoinvestigatefurther,butitlookslikehisstorychecksout,”hesaid.Kevinfeltawaveofreliefwashoverhim.Theofficerthankedthemfortheirhelpandpromisedtokeepthemupdated.Astheyleftthestation,KevinlookedatMr.Greenandsaid,“IguessIdidtherightthingafterall.”Mr.Greenpattedhimontheshoulderwithasmile,saying,“Youdidmorethanjustright,Kevin.Youwerebrave.”【讀后續(xù)寫真題滿分語(yǔ)料】滿分語(yǔ)料一、無靈主語(yǔ)（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、情感、自然現(xiàn)象、動(dòng)作行為類名詞作主語(yǔ)）1.Theinstanttheysteppedinside,Kevinrushedovertothem.1.他們一進(jìn)門，凱文就沖了過去。2.AwaveofreliefwashedoverKevinasMr.Greennoddedinunderstanding.2.當(dāng)格林先生點(diǎn)頭表示理解時(shí)，凱文如釋重負(fù)。3.Kevin'seyeswidenedinsurprise,amixofreliefandembarrassmentfloodingoverhim.3.凱文驚訝地睜大了眼睛，一種解脫和尷尬交織的感覺涌上心頭。4.AcomplexsenseofguiltandrelieffloodedoverKevin,wonderingifhisswiftjudgmenthadbeentoohasty.4.一種復(fù)雜的內(nèi)疚感和解脫感涌上凱文的心頭，他懷疑自己的快速判斷是否過于草率。滿分語(yǔ)料二、動(dòng)作鏈（AandB型，A,BandC型）5.Kevinrushedtothedoor,openedit,andledMr.Greeninside.5.凱文沖到門口，打開門，領(lǐng)格林先生先生進(jìn)去。6.Mr.Greentookthewatch,examineditcarefully,andshookhishead.6.格林先生先生拿起手表，仔細(xì)地看了看，搖了搖頭。7.KevinapproachedtheGreencoupleandrecountedwhathehadwitnessed.7.凱文走近格林夫婦，講述了他所目睹的一切。8.ThepolicepraisedKevinforhisbraveryandwisdom,andacceptedthewatchasevidence.8.警察表?yè)P(yáng)了凱文的勇敢和智慧，并接受手表作為證據(jù)。滿分語(yǔ)料三、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)/with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)9.Withhisheartinhismouth,KevingrabbedMrs.Hill’shomephoneandcalledthepolice.9.凱文捂著嘴，抓起希爾太太家里的電話，報(bào)了警。10.Mr.Greenlistenedintently,hiseyesnarrowingasKevindescribedtheman'sclaim.10.格林先生聚精會(huì)神地聽著，當(dāng)凱文描述這名男子的說法時(shí)，他的眼睛瞇著。11.Kevingazedattheexpansivesky,aprofoundsenseoffulfillmentwashingoverhim.11.凱文凝視著廣闊的天空，一種深深的滿足感涌上心頭。12.“Wehavetogotothepolicestation,”Mr.Greensaid,hisvoicefilledwithdetermination.12.“我們必須去警察局，”格林先生說，他的聲音充滿了堅(jiān)定。13.Thewatchclutchedinhishand,Kevinsteppedintothepolicestation,hisdoubtslingeringlikemorningfog.13.手表握在手里，凱文走進(jìn)警察局，他的疑慮像晨霧一樣揮之不去。滿分語(yǔ)料四、非謂語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)（作主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)、定語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)等）14.Havingletoutaheavysigh,Mr.GreenpickeditupandaccompaniedKevintothepolice.14.格林先生嘆了一口氣，把它撿起來，陪凱文去警察局。15.Hesitatingforamoment,Kevinhandedthewatchtotheofficer,hisfingerstremblingslightly.15.猶豫了一會(huì)兒，凱文把手表遞給警官，手指微微顫抖。16.Itturnedoutthatthe"burglar"wastheownerofthewatch,sothemanwasreleasedbythepolice.16.原來“竊賊”是手表的主人，所以這名男子被警方釋放了。17.Theymanagedtoliftthefloorboard,onlytofindawatchwrappedinaredhandkerchieflyingthere.17.他們?cè)O(shè)法抬起地板，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)一塊用紅手帕包著的手表躺在那里。18.ThepolicepraisedKevinforhisbravery,sayingthathisquickthinkinghadhelpedthemcatchthecriminal.18.警察表?yè)P(yáng)了凱文的勇敢，說他的敏捷思維幫助他們抓住了罪犯。滿分語(yǔ)料五、形容詞/副詞開頭19.Nervousbutdetermined,herecountedtheentireincidentindetail.19.他緊張但堅(jiān)定地詳細(xì)敘述了整個(gè)事件。20.Grateful,MrGreenadded,"Youprotectedourhome—anduncoveredapieceofhistorytoo."

20.心懷感激之情，格林先生補(bǔ)充道：“你保護(hù)了我們的家園，也揭開了一段歷史。”21.GratefulforKevin'sbravery,Mr.Greensuggestedtheyseethepolicestationtoclearupthemisunderstanding.21.感謝凱文的勇敢，格林先生先生建議他們?nèi)ゾ炀殖吻逭`會(huì)。滿分語(yǔ)料六、特殊句式（倒裝+強(qiáng)調(diào)+省略）22.Underthefloorboardwasanoldboxwithadustywatchinit.22.地板下有一個(gè)舊盒子，里面有一塊積滿灰塵的手表。23.Onlythendidherealizethatbraverywasn’taboutcertainty,butthecouragetofaceambiguity.23.直到那時(shí)，他才意識(shí)到，勇敢不是確定性，而是面對(duì)模糊的勇氣。滿分語(yǔ)料七、介詞短語(yǔ)位于句首24.Withadeepsigh,Kevinfelttheweightofthepastfewhoursmeltingaway.24.凱文深深地嘆了口氣，感覺過去幾個(gè)小時(shí)的重負(fù)漸漸消失了。25.Withouthesitation,theyhurriedtocheckiftherewasawatchunderthefloorboard.25.他們毫不猶豫地急忙檢查地板下是否有手表。26.Uponhisrelease,themanpattedKevinontheback,chuckling,“Youdidtherightthing."26.獲釋后，那人拍了拍凱文的背，咯咯地笑著說：“你做得對(duì)?！?7.Onhiswayhome,Kevinfeltrelievedthathehadlearnedaboutcourage,responsibility,andreflection.27.在回家的路上，凱文松了一口氣，因?yàn)樗麑W(xué)會(huì)了勇氣、責(zé)任和反思。28.Totheirsurprise,therewasasmallhiddencompartmentundertheboard,andinsideitlayanold,goldwatch.28.令他們驚訝的是，木板下面有一個(gè)隱藏的小隔間，里面放著一塊舊金表。滿分語(yǔ)料八、簡(jiǎn)潔對(duì)話/直接引語(yǔ)29.“Butwhybreakinforawatch?”Kevinshrugged,feelingconfused.29.“但是為什么要闖進(jìn)來買塊手表呢？”凱文聳聳肩，感到很困惑。30.“Hesaidheusedtolivehereandwaslookingforhisfather’swatch,”Kevinadded.30.“他說他以前住在這里，正在找他父親的手表，”凱文補(bǔ)充道。31.Feelingmoreconfusedthanever,Kevinsuggested,“Couldwegoandlookforthewatchinthehouse?”31.凱文感到比以往任何時(shí)候都更加困惑，他建議道：“我們能去房子里找手表嗎？”滿分語(yǔ)料九、主從復(fù)合句32.BythetimeKevinreturned,thepolicehadalreadyarrestedtheman.32.凱文回來時(shí)，警察已經(jīng)逮捕了這名男子。33.Althoughhewasembarrassedformisjudgingtheman,hewasproudofhiscouragetoseekthetruth.33.雖然他為誤判那個(gè)人而感到尷尬，但他為自己有勇氣尋求真相而感到自豪。34.Itbecameevidentthattheman'sparentsoncelivedhereandthewatchwasunmistakablyhisfather's.34.很明顯，這名男子的父母曾經(jīng)住在這里，這塊手表顯然是他父親的。35.Theofficerswereabletoconfirmthatthewatchwasindeedvaluableandbelongedtotheman’slatefather.35.警官們證實(shí)這塊手表確實(shí)很值錢，屬于該男子已故的父親。滿分語(yǔ)料十、主題升華句36.Thetruthisn’tassimpleasitseems,butactingwithcouragecanleadtotherightanswers.36.真相并不像看上去那么簡(jiǎn)單，但勇敢地行動(dòng)可以帶來正確的答案。37.ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethatremindedKevinofthevalueofhisbehaviorandcourage.37.正是這種獨(dú)特的經(jīng)歷提醒了凱文他的行為和勇氣的價(jià)值。38.Mr.Greenexpressedhisgratitude,saying,“Thankyouforlookingoutforourneighborhood.”38.格林先生先生表達(dá)了他的感激之情，他說：“謝謝你照顧我們的鄰居?！?9.Sometimes,braveryisnotaboutbeingfearless,butaboutdoingtherightthingdespitethefear.39.有時(shí)候，勇敢不是無所畏懼，而是不顧恐懼做正確的事。40.Kevinleftthepolicestationwithasenseofprideandachievement,knowingthathehaddonetherightthing.40.凱文帶著自豪感和成就感離開了警察局，他知道自己做了正確的事?！咀x后續(xù)寫名校好題調(diào)研】1．（24-25高二上·河南商丘·期末）從受害者到守護(hù)者：王女士的反詐騙之路閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Mrs.Wang,whois72yearsold,livesinaquietneighborhood.Shehasbeensingleforthepastfiveyearsandisknownforherwarmsmileandthewayshetakescareofhergarden.Thedayendedaspeacefullyasithasformanyyears,butshedidn’tknowthatherpeacewasabouttobebrokenbyaphonecallthatwouldchangeherlifealot.Thephonerang,andMrs.Wangansweredwithhercustomarywarmth,“Hello,dear,howcanIassistyou?”O(jiān)ntheotherendofthelinewasaman,hisvoicefullofauthorityandurgency.Introducinghimselfas“OfficerLi”fromthePublicSecurityBureau(局),heclaimedthatMs.Wang’sbankaccounthadbeenstolenandthatherimmediatecooperationwasessentialtopreventmajorlosses.Mrs.Wang’sheartraceduncontrollablyasthecallerdetailedhowherpersonalinformationwasusedtotakehersavings.Hedirectedhertotransfer(轉(zhuǎn)移)50,000yuanfromheraccounttoa“secure”accountnumberheprovided.Hisvoicewasurgent,hardtoignore.Worriedabouthersavings,Mrs.Wangagreedafteramoment’shesitation.Shewenttothebank,herhandsshakingasshetookoutthemoney.Thebanktellersawshewasupsetandaskedifshewasokay.Nervousandembarrassed,Mrs.Wangmadeanexcuseaboutafamilyemergencyandleftinahurry.Thatday,shetransferredthemoneyasshewastold,feelinglostandscared.Itwasn’tuntilthefollowingmorning,overacupofteawithherneighbor,thatMrs.Wang’sexperiencebegantosoundveryfamiliar.Herneighbor,withaconcernedexpression,informedherabouttherecentscams(欺詐)targetingtheelderlyintheircommunity.WhenMrs.Wangrealizedthatthisunfortunateeventhadhappenedtoher,herfaceturnedpale.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Heartbroken,Mrs.Wangmadeherwaytothelocalpolicestationtoreportthescam.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mrs.Wangwasverysad,butshedecidedtodosomething.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Heartbroken,Mrs.Wangmadeherwaytothelocalpolicestationtoreportthescam.There,akindofficer,withatoneofdeepsympathy,explainedtoherthatduetotheadvancedmethodsofthescammers,thechancesofrecoveringhermoneywereslim.Hesaidthereweresomanyscamstargetingtheelderlythattheywereactivelycampaigningagainstthem.Hegentlyadvisedhertobemorecarefulinthefutureandalwayscheckwithherfamilyortheauthoritieswhensomethingseemedstrange.Mrs.Wangwasverysad,butshedecidedtodosomething.Shewantedtohelpothersinhercommunity.Shestartedgivingtalksatcommunitycentersandlibraries,tellingherownstorytowarnothersofscams.Eventhoughhervoicesometimesshook,shewasstrongandwantedtomakesurenooneelsewouldhavethesamebadexperience.Byteachingothers,Mrs.Wangfoundanewwaytoliveandawaytofightagainstscams.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是以王太太接到詐騙電話為線索，主要講述的是72歲的獨(dú)居老人王太太如何被冒充公安局官員的騙子誤導(dǎo)，擔(dān)心自己的銀行賬戶被盜用，在緊迫和焦慮的情緒下按照騙子指示轉(zhuǎn)賬50,000元，事件后，通過與鄰居交談才意識(shí)到自己遭遇了針對(duì)老年人的騙局的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“心碎的王太太前往當(dāng)?shù)鼐炀謭?bào)案?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫到警局后警局的人怎么做的，結(jié)合第二段的提示，警察應(yīng)該是沒有幫助她找回自己的錢。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“王太太感到非常難過，但她決定采取行動(dòng)。她希望能夠幫助社區(qū)里的其他人。”可知，第二段可描寫王太太在社區(qū)如何做宣傳的以及宣傳的價(jià)值和意義。2.續(xù)寫線索：報(bào)警——得到安慰——?jiǎng)窀妗谏鐓^(qū)做宣傳——找到生活的意義3.詞匯激活行為類①追回：recovering/getback/retrieve②核實(shí)：check/verify③顫抖：shook/tremble情緒類①深切同情的語(yǔ)氣：atoneofdeepsympathy/avoicefullofcompassion【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Hesaidthereweresomanyscamstargetingtheelderlythattheywereactivelycampaigningagainstthem.(運(yùn)用了“so…that…”引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Shestartedgivingtalksatcommunitycentersandlibraries,tellingherownstorytowarnothersofscams.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ))[高分句型3]Eventhoughhervoicesometimesshook,shewasstrongandwantedtomakesurenooneelsewouldhavethesamebadexperience.(運(yùn)用了eventhough引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)2．（24-25高二上·湖南邵陽(yáng)·階段練習(xí)）意外的守護(hù)者：警察如何改變我的一生閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的文章。Itwas1978.Iwaseight,anditwasmybirthday.Iwastoldtomakealistoftwoorthreefriendswho’denjoythewaterthemeparkinnearbyTampa,Florida.Sincewedidn’thaveanysparemoney,thetripwouldbeapackedlunchandnoextras.Ididn’tcare-Iwasgettingaspecialtreat!Thegreatdayarrived,andmymother,youngerbrother,threefriends,andIpiledintoouroldbeat-upcar.Weheadedoutoftownonthe90-minuteridetotheamusementparkforadayofsunandfun.Abouthalfwaytothewaterpark,thecarstartedrunningbadlyandthe“checkengine”lightcameon.Mymompulledthecarover.Wewerestuck.Anhourpassedaswewaitedforsomeonetostopandhelp.Apoliceofficerstoppedtoseeifwewereallrightandcalledatowtruck(拖車)topickupthecar.Onthewaytotheservicestation,Momtoldtheofficerthatwehadbeenheadedtothewaterparkformybirthdaytreat.Theofficerdroppedusoffandleftaftergivingmeashortrideinthepolicecarasabirthdaypresent.Attheservicestation,themechanicexplainedthewaterpump(水泵)neededtobereplaced.Thecost,plusthetow,wouldbe$135.Momstartedcryingandpulledmeaside.Sheexplainedwewouldn’thaveenoughmoneytogoanywherebuthome,andwe’dhavetosaveuptogosomewhereelseformybirthdaylater.Iwasdisappointedbuttriednottoshowit,knowingevenatthatagethatwedidn’thavemuchmoney.Wetriedtomakethebestoftheday,thesixofushavingapicnicattheservicestationwiththecakeMomhadbaked.Eventually,themechaniccalledMomintotheoffice,sayingtherepairswerecompletedbuthehadtomakeaphonecallbeforewecouldleave.HetoldMomtohaveaseatandwait.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Twentyminuteslater,thepoliceofficercamewithawrappedpresent.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________