2025年高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作與讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精講精練應(yīng)用文類(lèi)型4：咨詢(xún)信

咨詢(xún)信【試題探究】假定你是李華,打算今年暑假去美國(guó)旅游。請(qǐng)你給TravelAmerica國(guó)際旅行社寫(xiě)一封電子郵件進(jìn)行咨詢(xún),內(nèi)容如下:1.請(qǐng)其推薦合適的旅游路線(xiàn);2.請(qǐng)其告知相關(guān)的旅游費(fèi)用。注意:1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Step1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱(chēng)第一人稱(chēng)(I),第二人稱(chēng)(you)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)要點(diǎn)1.寫(xiě)信目的2.咨詢(xún)的內(nèi)容:旅游路線(xiàn),旅游費(fèi)用Step2:字斟句酌巧飾亮點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1:我打算在美國(guó)住10天左右,希望能看一看那些獨(dú)特的自然風(fēng)景,品味一下當(dāng)?shù)氐娘L(fēng)俗。一般表達(dá):IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,andIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.句式升級(jí)(定語(yǔ)從句)IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.要點(diǎn)2:除此之外,我想了解路線(xiàn)的價(jià)格,包括所有旅游費(fèi)用。一般表達(dá):Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,andallthetravelingexpenses.句式升級(jí)(分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ))Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Step3:銜接過(guò)渡斐然成篇DearSir/Madam,I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAinthecomingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaserecommendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua【句式儲(chǔ)備】1.篇頭——開(kāi)篇表明寫(xiě)信目的IamLiHua,aChinesestudent,studyinginNewZealand.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutsomeinformationregarding/concerningtravel.我是李華,一名在新西蘭學(xué)習(xí)的中國(guó)學(xué)生。我寫(xiě)信是想詢(xún)問(wèn)一些關(guān)于旅行的信息。2.篇中——陳述要咨詢(xún)的內(nèi)容①Firstofall,I’mtemptedtoknowthedeparturetimeandtravelingroute.首先,我很想知道出發(fā)時(shí)間和旅行路線(xiàn)。②Secondly,howmuchdoIhavetopayforthetravel?其次,我需要支付多少旅費(fèi)?③Thirdly,isthereanythingIshouldpayspecialattentionto?第三,有什么我應(yīng)該特別注意的嗎?3.結(jié)尾——表感謝,盼回復(fù)①I(mǎi)wouldbemuchappreciatedifyoucouldfurnishmewiththeaboveinformationandyoucancontactmevia1234456@df.erf.如果您能提供我上述信息,我將不勝感激,您可以通過(guò)1234456@df.erf與我聯(lián)系。②Thankyouandyourpromptreplywillbehighlyappreciated.謝謝你,如能及時(shí)回復(fù)我將不勝感激?！就卣箖?chǔ)備】假定你是李華,高考過(guò)后計(jì)劃暑假期間到美國(guó)去參加中美學(xué)生交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封咨詢(xún)信,詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)事宜。內(nèi)容包括:1.對(duì)申請(qǐng)者的相關(guān)要求;2.課程的相關(guān)事宜;3.住宿和吃飯的條件;4.需要做的相關(guān)準(zhǔn)備。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearSirorMadam,Iamveryinterestedintheexchangeprogramyouoffered.Iamwritingtoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.Firstly,IjustgraduatedfromanordinaryhighschoolandIwonderwhatqualificationsarerequiredforapplicants.Secondly,ifadmitted,whatcoursesamIgoingtotake,anddoIneedtobuyanybooksaheadoftime?Inaddition,wouldyoubesokindtointroducetometheconditionsofboardandaccommodations?Bytheway,ifIneedtomakeanyotherpreparations,letmeknow,willyou?ThanksagainforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【要點(diǎn)精練】1．假如你是李華，一名高三學(xué)生，準(zhǔn)備在畢業(yè)后參加英國(guó)牛津大學(xué)的暑期夏令營(yíng)（OxfordSummerCamp2018）。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.William，說(shuō)明自己的情況并咨詢(xún)相關(guān)事宜。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。DearMr.William,I’mLiHua,aChinesestudent.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua2．假設(shè)你是蘇華，上周創(chuàng)建了學(xué)校志愿者服務(wù)俱樂(lè)部，但成員不多。你決定寫(xiě)個(gè)email給外教，咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾芜M(jìn)行一項(xiàng)系列廣告活動(dòng)來(lái)招募俱樂(lè)部成員。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.信中不要出現(xiàn)自己真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。Dearsir，___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．假如你是大學(xué)生李華，想利用假期時(shí)間打工掙錢(qián)。你對(duì)報(bào)紙上的廣告很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的廣告內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一封信應(yīng)聘工作并詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。TemporaryJobOfferMajorcateringCompanyhastemporaryjobsaschefs,waiters,kitchenstaffandEnglishsecretary.FormoreinformationwritetoMs.KateRees,17ParkEndSt._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是李華，你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將舉辦英語(yǔ)作文大賽。你有意參加，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.White寫(xiě)一封郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。要點(diǎn)如下：1.報(bào)名時(shí)間及方式；2.需要提供的信息；3.費(fèi)用及其他。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：報(bào)名：signup_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友David是中國(guó)功夫的愛(ài)好者，你得知今年七月你所在的城市將舉辦一次國(guó)際功夫比賽。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)他是否有興趣參加，要點(diǎn)包括:1.比賽的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)2.比賽的目的3.參加比賽的益處注意:1.

詞數(shù)100左右；2.

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開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearDavid,Howiseverythinggoing?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwillaccompanyyouduringthecompetition.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua6．假如你是學(xué)生李華。圣誕節(jié)即將到來(lái)，你們班決定本周五晚上慶祝一番，由你負(fù)責(zé)為此選定一個(gè)場(chǎng)所。MiracleInn的一則廣告引起了你的注意，但有一些具體信息不明確（如箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所做的Notes，給MiracleInn發(fā)一封電子郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam，Iamwritingformoreinformationabouttheserviceatyourinn._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua參考答案1．DearMr.William，I’mLiHua,aChinesestudent．HavinglongedforOxfordforalongtime,IreallywanttobepartoftheOxfordSummerCamp2018.Therefore,I’mwritingtointroducemyselfandaskseveralquestionsconcerned.I’malwaysanEnglish-loverandhavetakensomeoptionalcoursesrelatedtoEnglishliteratureandculture.SoI’mwonderingwhetherthereareanycoursesinthiscamp?Ifthereare,howmanycourseswillyouofferandwhatsubjectswilltheycover?Besides,canyougivemethescheduleofthesecoursestoseewhetherI’llhavetimetovisitotherplaces?Finally,doyouprovideaccommodationsduringtheSummerCamp?Areallthestudentslivingoncampusorwillyouarrangehome-stay?Thankyouinadvance!Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫(xiě)作分析】本文是一封電子郵件。假如你是李華，一名高三學(xué)生，準(zhǔn)備在畢業(yè)后參加英國(guó)牛津大學(xué)的暑期夏令營(yíng)（OxfordSummerCamp2018）。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.William，說(shuō)明自己的情況并咨詢(xún)相關(guān)事宜。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)提示充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文是一封電子郵件。格式正確，內(nèi)容符合要求，重點(diǎn)突出，文中使用高級(jí)詞匯和句子。現(xiàn)在分詞完成式做原因狀語(yǔ)；I’mwritingtointroducemyselfandaskseveralquestionsconcerned.過(guò)去分詞做后置定語(yǔ)；SoI’mwonderingwhetherthereareanycoursesinthiscamp?句中whether引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句；Ifthereare,howmanycourseswillyouofferandwhatsubjectswilltheycover?條件句和問(wèn)句完美結(jié)合；句中一般疑問(wèn)句使用巧妙，恰到好處；另外，Therefore,Besides,Finally,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。2．Dearsir，I’mdelightedtotellyouanexcitingnewsthattheVoluntaryServiceClubofourschoolwassetuplastweek.Itsmainpurposeistoprovideanopportunityforstudentstoservethesocietybetterandknowmoreaboutthesociety．Itcanalsohelptodevelopourcooperativeability．Inordertohavemoremembers,Iplantoorganizesomeadvertisingactivitiestoattractmorestudents.Studentswhoarehealthy,open-mindedandwillingtohelpothersarewelcometojoinourVoluntaryServiceClub.Theywillberequiredtodovoluntaryworkatweekendsorduringholidays.However,Ihavelittleexperienceinsuchadvertisingactivities,couldyouhelpmeandgivemesomeadviceaboutit?Iwillbeappreciativeitifyoucouldgivemeahand.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫(xiě)作解析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件，咨詢(xún)外教如何進(jìn)行一項(xiàng)系列廣告活動(dòng)來(lái)招募學(xué)校志愿者服務(wù)俱樂(lè)部成員。【要點(diǎn)分析】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，也有部分一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容。要求：1.上周學(xué)校創(chuàng)建了志愿者服務(wù)俱樂(lè)部2.

咨詢(xún)外教如何進(jìn)行一項(xiàng)系列廣告活動(dòng)來(lái)招募俱樂(lè)部成員。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）bedelightedto;setup;

mainpurpose;cooperativeability;open-minded;bewillingto;voluntarywork;havelittleexperiencein;givesb.ahand;lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.I’mpleasedtotellyouanexcitingnewsthattheVoluntaryServiceClubofourschoolwassetuplastweek.2.Itsmainpurposeistoprovideanopportunityforstudentstoservethesocietybetterandknowmoreaboutthesociety．3.Studentswhoarehealthy,open-mindedandwillingtohelpothersarewelcometojoinourVoluntaryServiceClub.4.Theywillberequiredtodovoluntaryworkatweekendsorduringholidays.5.Ihavelittleexperienceinsuchadvertisingactivities.6.Iwillbeappreciativeitifyoucouldgivemeahand.7.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤(rùn)色修改范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：Studentswhoarehealthy,open-mindedandwillingtohelpothersarewelcometojoinourVoluntaryServiceClub.這句話(huà)運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；使用了一些固定詞組，如bedelightedto;setup;bewillingto等。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。3．DearMs.Kate,I’mwritinginresponsetoyouradvertisementforatemporarypositionasawaiter.I’ma20-year-oldcollegestudent.IwouldbeabletoworkduringJuneandJuly.IdonothaveanyexperiencebutIenjoyworkingwithpeopleandaminterestedinacareerinthecateringindustrywhenIleaveuniversity.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldsendmemoreinformationaboutthepostavailable.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一封信應(yīng)聘工作并詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。【寫(xiě)作分析】1.詞匯積累喜歡：like→enjoy感激的：thankful→grateful期待：expect→lookforwardto收到某人的來(lái)信：receivealetterfromsb.→hearfromsb.2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：I’ma20-year-oldcollegestudent.IwouldbeabletoworkduringJuneandJuly.拓展句：I’ma20-year-oldcollegestudent,who

wouldbeabletoworkduringJuneandJuly.[高分句型1]IdonothaveanyexperiencebutIenjoyworkingwithpeopleandaminterestedinacareerinthecateringindustrywhenIleaveuniversity.(我沒(méi)有任何經(jīng)驗(yàn)，但我喜歡與人打交道，并且對(duì)大學(xué)畢業(yè)后在餐飲行業(yè)發(fā)展很感興趣。)該句中“but”作為并列連詞連接前后分句；“when”引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。[高分句型2]Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldsendmemoreinformationaboutthepostavailable.(如果您能寄給我更多關(guān)于這個(gè)職位的信息，我將非常感激。)該句中“if”引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句。4．DearMr.White，MynameisLiHua.I'velearnedthatacompetitionfortheEnglishWritingwillbeheldbytheEnglishClub.I'mwritingtoapplyfortheinformationaboutit.Wouldyoubekindenoughtotellmewhenandhowtosignup?Whatkindsofpersonalinformationshouldbeprovidedtoenterthecontest?What’smore,tobefrank，howmuchshouldIpayforit?Iamexpectingyourreply.Thanksalot!SincerelyLiHua【分析】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信，同時(shí)也是一篇開(kāi)放性書(shū)面表達(dá)，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成李華，給朋友Mr.White寫(xiě)信，咨詢(xún)英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部舉辦的作文大賽的具體信息。要求考生自行組織要點(diǎn)，總體難度較大?！緦?xiě)作分析】第1步：審題。根據(jù)文字提示可知本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)信咨詢(xún)英語(yǔ)作文大賽的具體信息。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱(chēng)為主。第2步：組織要點(diǎn)。1.報(bào)名時(shí)間及方式；2.需要提供的信息；3.費(fèi)用及其他。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句，關(guān)鍵詞為signup、applyfor等。同時(shí)注意書(shū)信的慣用語(yǔ)和習(xí)慣表達(dá)。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)完美，條理清晰。范文時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋了文字提示要求的所有要點(diǎn)，且有適當(dāng)?shù)膫€(gè)人發(fā)揮?？忌\(yùn)用了多樣式的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，整篇文章富有變化并不死板。使用了較多的高級(jí)詞匯，如signup、applyfor等；同時(shí)文章還運(yùn)用了一些串聯(lián)成分，如what’smore，這些串聯(lián)詞讓各個(gè)要點(diǎn)更為緊密地結(jié)合在一起。以上寫(xiě)作技巧的運(yùn)用提升了文章的層次，顯示了考生具有很強(qiáng)的駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力。5．DearDavid，Howiseverythinggoing?

I'mwritingtotellyouthatthe12thInternationalKungFuCompetitionwillbeheldinDaqingfromJuly20thto24thatDaqingGymnasium.Asweknow,kungfuisanimportantpartofChinesecultureandhasbecomeincreasinglypopularathomeandabroad.Thiseventaimstofurtherexpandtheinfluenceofkungfuworldwide.Theorganizershopepeoplewillfeelthecharmofkungfuinthiscompetition.Iknowyouarekungfuamateur.Areyouinterestedintakingpartintheevent?Youwillbeabletoappreciatehigh-levelkungfuperformancesandcommunicatewithpeoplesharingthesameinterestfromallovertheworld.Youcanalsoimproveyourtechniques.Iwillaccompanyyouduringthecompetition.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作?！緦?xiě)作分析】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，要求寫(xiě)一封郵件；假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友David是中國(guó)功夫的愛(ài)好者，你得知今年七月你所在的城市將舉辦一次國(guó)際功夫比賽。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)他是否有興趣參加，要點(diǎn)包括:1.比賽的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.比賽的目的；3.參加比賽的益處第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：InternationalKungFuCompetition（國(guó)際功夫比賽），Gymnasium（體育館），athomeandabroad（國(guó)內(nèi)外），furtherexpand（進(jìn)一步擴(kuò)大）；amateur（業(yè)余愛(ài)好者）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。范文內(nèi)容