大學(xué)英語四級作文部分分析解析公開課一等獎省優(yōu)質(zhì)課大賽獲獎?wù)n件

大學(xué)英語四級寫作四級考試作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)基本評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：１.作文滿分為15分2.閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)為5等：2---5---8---11---153.各分數(shù)段可依據(jù)考生寫作質(zhì)量上下浮動1分，無半分之說。四級考試作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)詳細評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：2分---條理不清，思想不清，語言破碎，多有嚴重語法錯誤；5分---基本切題。思想不清，連貫性差，較多嚴重語言錯誤；8分---基本切題。個別地方思想不清，文字勉強連貫，有一定語法錯誤；11分—切題。思想清楚，表示連貫，少許語法錯誤；14分—思想清楚，文字通暢，連貫很好，語法有個別錯誤。四級作文寫作方法---議論文綜觀歷年四級作文,寫作類型可分為四種1.現(xiàn)象分析型2.問題處理型3.對比選擇型4.觀點論證型1.現(xiàn)象分析型四級作文寫作方法---議論文現(xiàn)象分析型第一段:提出問題,描述現(xiàn)象第二段:分析問題,闡述原因第三段:處理問題,表明觀點例:12月—議論文:關(guān)于新年晚會1.許多人在除夕觀看春節(jié)晚會2.但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會3.我看法四級作文寫作方法---議論文現(xiàn)象分析型作文格式:第一段:Accordingto…,wefindclearlythatnowadays…whichshouldbeengivenconcern,…h(huán)asalreadyarousedourattention,whatmakesusamazed/impressesus/inspiresusisthat….四級作文寫作方法---議論文現(xiàn)象分析型舉例(模擬題作文1)第一段寫作方法:StudyAbroad當(dāng)前很多中國學(xué)生出國留學(xué)留學(xué)熱原因我觀點四級作文寫作方法---議論文StudyAbroad第一段:當(dāng)前很多中國學(xué)生出國留學(xué)

1.Accordingtonewly-madesurvey,moreandmorestudentsinuniversitiesandcollegesareplanningtogoabroadforstudy.2.Wefindclearthatnowadaysstudentsinuniversitiesandcollegeswhoaimatgoingabroadforstudyareincreasinggreatly.3.Tooursurprise,studentsinuniversitiesandcollegeswhoplantogoabroadforstudyareincreasinggreatly.4.Whatmakesusamazedisthatmany…四級作文寫作方法---議論文現(xiàn)象分析型第二段寫法你能夠?qū)戇@么句子開頭:原因1:Firstofall/firstly/tobeginwith/inthefirstplace.原因2:what’smore/secondly/moreover/原因3:Inadditionto/besides原因4:therefore/asaresult/Consequently.總結(jié)最終造成結(jié)果.四級作文寫作方法---議論文StudyAbroad第二段:留學(xué)熱原因Thetrendisattributedtoadvantagesofstudyingoverseas.Inthefirstplace,studentscanhaveaccesstoadvancedscienceandtechnologyaswellasdesirableworkingconditionswhichmightnotbeavailableathome.Inthesecondplace,theyareexposedtoentirelynewideasandtrends.What’smore,overseasexperienceisthebestopportunityforthereal-lifeuseofforeignlanguages四級作文寫作方法---議論文現(xiàn)象分析型第三段寫法你能夠?qū)戇@么句子開頭:Inmyopinion,/asfarasIamconcerned/astome/inmypointofview,來概括自己觀點.Firstly/foronething/Ononehand,理由1besides/inadditionto/foranother/ontheotherhand,理由2Toconclude/tosumup/inaword/inconcusion,總結(jié)句四級作文寫作方法---議論文StudyAbroad第三段:我觀點Yet,weshouldavoidgoingabroadblindly.Ononehand,itisexpensive.Ontheotherhand,itisprobablypainfulbecauseacompletelynewenvironmentwithdifferentcustomsandhabitsmayalsobeabarriertooverseasstudents,andyoumayfindyourselfinastrangeworldandmayfeelhelpless.Sowemustbesurethatwecangetbettereducationandexperienceoverseasbeforemakingthefinaldecision.2.問題處理型四級作文——問題處理型這類作文普通為提要式作文，多為說明文。通常首先提出一個有待處理問題，然后要求考生就該問題提出處理方法、路徑，有時還要求考生最終談?wù)撨m合自己方法。這類題型基本模式是：第一段：提出問題或闡述某件事情主要性或意義；第二段：列舉說明處理某事方式或處理某個問題路徑；第三段：針對第二段所闡述方法給予簡明評論，也可提出個人提議或選擇，并闡述理由。此題型寫作重點在How，即處理問題方法。問題處理型作文

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1.Withtheof，.①問題出現(xiàn)背景

2.Soitisofgreatimportanceforusto.②提出問題

3.Ontheonehand,.③問題后果一

4.Ontheotherhand,.④問題后果二

5.However,wehavefiguredoutmanywaysto.⑤提出處理這一問題方法四級作文——問題處理型作文模板

6.Firstly,.⑥處理方法一

7.Solongas.⑦深入說明方法一

8.Secondly,.⑧方法二

9.Thirdly,.⑨方法三

10.Infact,.⑩提出處理問題根本路徑11.

Thatisbecause.11支持⑩句理由12.

Inaword,.12總結(jié)全文3.對比選擇型對比選擇型這類作文多為提要式作文，議論文體裁。通常首先敘述相反兩個觀點，或分析評論某一社會現(xiàn)象優(yōu)缺點，然后給出自己看法和看法，是四級考試中最常見一個作文形式。這類作文基本模式是：分三個自然段來敘述。第一段：敘述一些人對某一事物或現(xiàn)象看法，或某一事物優(yōu)點；第二段：敘述另一些人對此事物或現(xiàn)象看法，或某一事物缺點；第三段：表明自己觀點。

在寫這類作文時，尤其要注意在對比段落之間使用一些表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系詞匯或句子，如：however，ontheotherhand，incontrastwith/to等，使文章看起來流暢自然。慣用句式第一段:1.therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyabout…2.Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernon…3.Withthedevelopmentofsociety…4.Itiswellknownthat…5.Itiscertain/obvious/true/commonthat…6.Inaddition/additionally…7.Thereforehowtosolvethisproblemisworthourattention8.it’sgreatimportanceforustosolvethisproblem…9.Soit’shightimeforustosolvethisproblem…

四級作文寫作方法---議論文第二段:Firstly/tobeginwith/Ontheonehand/firstofall…Secondly/Ontheotherhand/further/lastbutnotleast/moreover…四級作文寫作方法---議論文第三段:1.Infact,therearestillmanysolutionstothisproblem…2.Asforme3.Inaword/allinall/therefore/onlyinthisway…4.觀點論證型四級作文——觀點論證型這一類作文多為提要式作文，議論文體裁，通常是圍繞某一事物或觀點進行論證，有時以格言或諺語為議論對象，要求考生提供論據(jù)加以說明。(近十年四級考試中觀點論證型作文共出現(xiàn)一次

)第一段：提出論點第二段：例證論點第三段：得出結(jié)論或表明個人看法或做法注意表明自己觀點時候要清楚明白，不能含含糊糊。例：、1Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicItPaystoBeHonest.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.當(dāng)前社會上存在許多不老實現(xiàn)象2.老實利人利已，做人應(yīng)該老實四級作文——觀點論證型寫作模板觀點論證型模板一：Itiswellknownthat…(2)Thetruthofitisself-evident.(3)Noonecandeny.(4)Therefore.(5)Manyexamplescanbefoundtoprove.(6)Takeasatypicalexample.(7)People__________________.(8)Furthermore.(9)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat.(10)Then.(11)Thereisnodoubtthat.(12)Inconclusion.四級作文——觀點論證型寫作模板

觀點論證型模板二：(1)Itisbelievedthat.(2)Thetruthisdeepandprofound.(3)Asweknow.(4)Conse-quently.(5)Acaseinpointis.(6)Thisisclosetosuggest.(7)Itistruethat____.(8)Inaddition.(9)Allmentionedabovetellsus.(10)Asamatteroffact.(11)Thereisnodenyingthat英語四級作文八種慣用句型一.原因1.Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto(leadto)(accountfor)thephenomenon(problem).2.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.3.Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude...4.Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefactthat...5.Oneofthemostcommonfactors(causes)isthat...6.Anothercontributingfactor(cause)is...7.Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat…8.Butthefundamentalcauseisthat二.比較1.Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages.2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.3.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.4.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.5.AandBhaveseveralpointsincommon.6.AandBdifferinseveralways.7.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.8.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.三.批駁1)Itistruethat...,butonevitalpointisbeingleftout.2)Somepeoplesay...,butitdoesnotholdwater.3)Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat...4)Acloseexaminationwouldrevealhowridiculousthestatementis.5)Itmakesnosensetoarguefor...6)Toomuchstressplacedon...mayleadto...7)Suchastatementmainlyrestsontheassumptionthat...8)Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat...四.后果1.Itmaygiverisetoahostofproblems.2.Theimmediateresultitproducesis...3.Itwillexerciseaprofoundinfluenceupon...4.Itsconsequencecanbesogreatthat...五.舉例1)Agoodcaseinpointis...2)Asanillustration,wemaytake...3)Suchexamplesmightbegiveneasily.4)...isoftencitedasanexample.

六.證實1)Noonecandenythefactthat...2)Theideaishardlysupportedbyfacts.3)Unfortunately,noneoftheavailabledatashows...4)Recentstudiesindicatethat...5)Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthat...6)Accordingtostatisticsprovidedby...,itcanbeseenthat...七.開篇1)Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...2)Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.3)Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedtopic.4)Recen