讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo) 講義-高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo)

讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo)講義閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Mychildhoodwasfilledwithhunting,camping,andfishingtrips.Myparents

didn’thavemuchmoney.Buttheygaveusafarbettercurrency—theirtime.

Oneholiday,Iwatchedmymomanddadcooktogether.Asmydadworkedbesidemymom,myheartwasfilledwith

love

andadmiration.Ijustwantedtosay,“Ilove...”

ButIfailed.

Theholidaydinnercameandwent.Ilayonmybed,thinkingaboutthefoodthatsatonthetableashorttimeago.Whatagreattimewehadhad—family

timeandwonderfulfood.IonlyregrettedIhadn’tspokenthosethreedifficultwords—Iloveyou.

Iwokeupearlythenextday.Afreshblanketofsnowlaygentlyonthemountains.My

dad

haddecidedtogorabbithuntingwithmybrothers.Iwentskiing.Aftera

happy

dayonthehillsides,Ireturnedhome.Thehousewascoldandstill.Icalledout,butnooneanswered.Usually,

Mom

wasbusyinthekitchenpreparingthe

meal.Thequietnesswasbrokenbythesuddenringofthetelephone.

“Yourdadwasbadlyhurtinatraffic

accident

onhiswayhome,”

saidaneighborfromthefarmhousenearby.“He’shavinganoperation.”

Atthatmoment,myfailuretosay“Iloveyou”

pusheddownonmeliketheweightofthefallensky.Theneighborcameoverandquicklydrovemetothe

hospital.

Trembling,Ihurriedintotheintensivecareunit.Mydadlaymotionlessonahospitalbed.Hehadtodependonmachinestobreathe.Mymomandbrotherswerearound.Afraidofleavingmydad,Itookholdofhisbedside.“It’stimetogo,”

saidthecriticalcarenurse.“Thenexttwenty-fourhourswillbeveryimportant.Ifhecan

wake

up,therewillbeaverybigchancethathewill

recover

andsurvive.Youallgohomeandwaitforourtelephonecalltellinghiscondition’schanges.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:

Wereturnedhomewithheavyhearts.

?

Paragraph2:

“Amazingly,yourdadisawakenow.Come!”

thenurseadded.

試題分析1.人物：①M(fèi)yparents:●didn’thavemuchmoney.Buttheygaveusafarbettercurrency—theirtime.●Oneholiday,Iwatchedmymomanddadcooktogether.→父母給我?guī)矸浅剀暗纳?，雖然家境不一定富裕。②I:●Asmydadworkedbesidemymom,myheartwasfilledwithloveandadmiration.●Whatagreattimewehadhad—familytimeandwonderfulfood.IonlyregrettedIhadn’tspokenthosethreedifficultwords—Iloveyou.③mybrothers:

沒有太多的描述，但從“我”的描述當(dāng)中，也可以感受到這是一個溫馨的家庭2.事件：

童年時代，我生活的是一個并不富裕但極其溫馨的家庭。父母親經(jīng)常跟我們有很多的“親子時光”——打獵，露營，釣魚等。這讓我的內(nèi)心充滿了愛與崇敬。假期來來去去，除了溫馨的家人相聚的時光和美食，我總感覺有點(diǎn)點(diǎn)遺憾，想對父母說“我愛你們”，但一直沒能說出口。

又一個假期來臨，有一天，我起了個大早，發(fā)現(xiàn)父親已經(jīng)決定帶著兄弟們?nèi)ゲ东C野兔，而我更想去滑雪。當(dāng)高高興興玩了一天后，我發(fā)現(xiàn)家里空無一人，按以前的慣例，這個時候，媽媽應(yīng)該忙著做完飯，但今天卻感覺異樣。家里的安靜被電話鈴聲打破。電話是一位鄰居打來的，說父親出了車禍，傷的有點(diǎn)重，需要馬上動手術(shù)。鄰居把我送到父親在急救的醫(yī)院。進(jìn)入ICU，父親一動不動躺在病床上，靠著呼吸機(jī)維持著呼吸，媽媽和兄弟們站在病床邊上。一會兒，護(hù)士就催促我們離開急救室，說接下去的24個小時非常關(guān)鍵，如果父親能醒過來，那就有希望。她讓我們回家等電話通知。......3.主題點(diǎn)：

作者怎樣把深藏內(nèi)心的“Iloveyou”說出口4.情節(jié)安排：?第一段：①回到家，家里的氣氛如何？家人是怎樣的表現(xiàn)？（與前一句的heavyhearts銜接）②媽媽還是一如既往忍住傷痛，為我們準(zhǔn)備了晚飯。飯后，我們在焦急地等待結(jié)果。③凌晨時分，醫(yī)院的護(hù)士終于打來電話，說了什么內(nèi)容？（與下一段開頭銜接）

注意：下一段開頭句中有added一詞！?第二段：①我們對“好消息”的反應(yīng)（與開頭句銜接）②到醫(yī)院后，我迫不及待地把“Iloveyou”送給了父親③經(jīng)過一段時間的治療和休養(yǎng)，父親康復(fù)出院。我對“Iloveyou”有了更深的理解。下水作文Paragraph1:

Wereturnedhomewithheavyhearts.

Agrayday!Ifeltthedarknesssweptoverour

family

withthe

accident

happeningtoour“backbone”,

Dad!Tearsoncheeks,weprayedsincerelythatgoodluckwouldcometoDad.Thoughinalowspirit,

Mom

managedtoholdbackhersadness,sayingtherewouldsurelybegoodchancesfordad.Aquick

meal,wegatheredaround,silent,waiting.Earlythenextmorning,thetelephonerang.“Thisisthenursefromthehospital!”

anexcitedgentlevoicecamefromtheotherend.(84words)

Paragraph2:

“Amazingly,yourdadisawakenow.Come!”

thenurseadded.

Thisgreatnewsdistractedusfromsleeping.Wejumpedfromthebedsexcitedlyandthecarwassoonstarted,headingtowardsthehospital.Dadlyinginthebedwaking

witheyeshalfopen,IwentuptoDad’sbedside,saying“Ilove

you”

withoutanyhesitation.Dad’ssmilewasthebestreward.Amonthlater,Dad

recovered

wellandwasdischargedfromthehospitalafterathoroughexamination.

Happy

dayscamebacktous.Onceagain,Iunderstoodthosethreewordsbetter!(82words)參考范文

Wereturnedhomewithheavyhearts.MybrothersandItriedtocomfortMom.

We

allgatheredasafamilyandwishedDadcouldwakeup.Then,wewenttoourbedrooms,butnoneofuscouldfallasleepthatnight.AllIcouldthinkofwasthatIjustwantedachancetoexpressmylovetoDad.Earlyinthemorning,thetelephonerang.MyheartalmoststoppedbeatingwhenIansweredthetelephone.“Thisisthehospital,”

saidanurse.(77

words)

“Amazingly,yourdadisawakenow.Come!”

thenurseadded.Thenweexcitedlyhurriedtothehospital.Soon,wegatheredaroundDad’sbedside.Hisfirstwordswere“Iloveyou”.Smiling,ItoldhimthatIlovedhim,too.Duringthefollowingdays,wetried