writing人物描寫

1、 Basic Writing-Character introduction (人物介紹）人物介紹）- 常用句子結(jié)構(gòu)常用句子結(jié)構(gòu) 1). 屬于記敘文體裁屬于記敘文體裁2). 基本類型：記人，敘事，寫景基本類型：記人，敘事，寫景3). 常見(jiàn)高考書面表達(dá)題：介紹同學(xué)，朋友，常見(jiàn)高考書面表達(dá)題：介紹同學(xué)，朋友，老師，父母，名人等等老師，父母，名人等等4). 記敘方法：順敘，倒敘，插敘記敘方法：順敘，倒敘，插敘5). 注意事項(xiàng)：選材代表性；精煉，感人，注意事項(xiàng)：選材代表性；精煉，感人，不拖泥帶水；注意不拖泥帶水；注意5W1H；人稱時(shí)態(tài)。；人稱時(shí)態(tài)。6). 常見(jiàn)段落結(jié)構(gòu)：主題句發(fā)展句結(jié)論句常見(jiàn)段落結(jié)構(gòu)：主

2、題句發(fā)展句結(jié)論句 Lets do a fast reading: Just guess the person who is described by the following sentences.u 1.Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. u 2. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the a

3、ge of 3. u 3. When his first album(唱片唱片 lbm ） was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention.u 4. He becomes very popular with the young, and has received many awards for his songs. u 5. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled （無(wú)法匹敵的無(wú)法匹敵的） by others and he continues to make breakthro

4、ughs as he takes a chance on trying new things. Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)分詞結(jié)構(gòu) 同位語(yǔ)同位語(yǔ)身份與身份與概況概況盡量用分詞短語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順盡量用分詞短語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順 Showing interest in music, he began l

5、earning to play the piano at the age of 3. When Jays first album(唱片） was released（發(fā)行） in 2000, he got the worlds attention. He becomes very popular with the young, which allowed him to received many awards for his songs. 經(jīng)歷經(jīng)歷分詞結(jié)構(gòu)分詞結(jié)構(gòu)狀語(yǔ)從句狀語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句注意盡量用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞注意盡量用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞, 使文章精煉使文章精煉盡量用復(fù)合句盡量用復(fù)合句,如定語(yǔ)從句等

6、，潤(rùn)色文章如定語(yǔ)從句等，潤(rùn)色文章 His own unique（獨(dú)特的） Chinese R&B style is unparalleled（無(wú)法匹敵的） by others and he continues to make breakthroughs （突破）as he takes a chance（冒險(xiǎn)）on tryinging new things.評(píng)價(jià)評(píng)價(jià)evaluation注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組(1)概概況況age, sex, birth date/place, family background(2)外外貌貌性格性格appe

7、arance ,character(3)教教育育education (4)生生平平big events in his or her life ( in the order of time )(5)評(píng)評(píng)價(jià)價(jià)evaluation (what other people think of her)( (概概, ,貌貌, ,育育, ,平平, ,估估) ) 解題步驟解題步驟 審題審題:1.1.文體文體- 記敘文記敘文2.2.時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)- 一般過(guò)去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主一般過(guò)去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主3. 3. 人稱人稱-第一、三人稱第一、三人稱 如何描寫人物一、描寫人物要注意的問(wèn)題1正確使用時(shí)態(tài)。一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)-描寫人物的外貌、

8、性格、興趣、世人的評(píng)價(jià)以及他的地位一般過(guò)去時(shí)-描寫人物的出生、教育背景、經(jīng)歷、事跡等常用2對(duì)題目所給的信息要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)重組，安排好寫作順序，突出重點(diǎn)信息。重點(diǎn)信息通常是寫作的目的所在，比如求職要重點(diǎn)突出學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷，新聞報(bào)道要重點(diǎn)突出事跡，介紹自己的老師、朋友要重點(diǎn)突出他們的特點(diǎn)等等。3正確運(yùn)用描寫人物的詞匯和句型。 4. 介紹人物的基礎(chǔ)寫作一般都是以人物的出生家庭時(shí)間地點(diǎn)開(kāi)頭，以人物的 最大成就或世人對(duì)他的評(píng)價(jià)結(jié)束 Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was brought up by h

9、is mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)分詞結(jié)構(gòu) 同位語(yǔ)同位語(yǔ)身份與身份與概況概況盡量用分詞短語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順盡量用分詞短語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順 Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When Jays first album(唱片） was released（發(fā)行） in 2000, he got the worlds attention. He becomes very

10、 popular with the young, which allowed him to received many awards for his songs. 經(jīng)歷經(jīng)歷分詞結(jié)構(gòu)分詞結(jié)構(gòu)狀語(yǔ)從句狀語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句注意盡量用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞注意盡量用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞, 使文章精煉使文章精煉盡量用復(fù)合句盡量用復(fù)合句,如定語(yǔ)從句等，潤(rùn)色文章如定語(yǔ)從句等，潤(rùn)色文章 His own unique（獨(dú)特的） Chinese R&B style is unparalleled（無(wú)法匹敵的） by others and he continues to make breakthroughs （突破）as h

11、e takes a chance（冒險(xiǎn)）on tryinging new things.評(píng)價(jià)評(píng)價(jià)evaluation注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組 二、人物簡(jiǎn)介寫作常用的詞組及句子：二、人物簡(jiǎn)介寫作常用的詞組及句子：1. Birthday and birth place:was/ were born in on她于她于1867年年12月月7日出生于波蘭。日出生于波蘭。eg. She was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.鐘南山年生于廣州，是中國(guó)最偉大的醫(yī)生之一。鐘南山年生于廣州，是中國(guó)最偉大的醫(yī)生之一。 Zhong Nans

12、han, born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China. Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.啟示：盡量用分詞短語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順啟示：盡量用分詞短語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順1. 概況：概況：age, sex, birth, family backgroundwas/ were born in/into (a poor family) onAs a child

13、 of years old, heHe spent his childhood in live a happy/hard life 林肯，一個(gè)貧苦家庭的兒子，于林肯，一個(gè)貧苦家庭的兒子，于18091809年年2 2月月1212日出生于肯德基州。日出生于肯德基州。Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809. 我的歷史老師是個(gè)漂亮女人，她長(zhǎng)著兩只大眼我的歷史老師是個(gè)漂亮女人，她長(zhǎng)著兩只大眼睛，留著長(zhǎng)發(fā)睛，留著長(zhǎng)發(fā).My history teacher is a beautiful woman

14、 with two big eyes and long hair.啟示：巧用啟示：巧用with做定語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ) 2、外貌、外貌 / 性格性格常用表達(dá)式：常用表達(dá)式：beautiful/pretty/handsome/good-looking，ordinary lookingdiligent/ hardworking漂亮漂亮_1.80米高米高_(dá)勤奮的勤奮的_ 1.80 meters tall/ in height 3、教育經(jīng)歷、教育經(jīng)歷啟示：可用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞啟示：可用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞, 使文章精煉使文章精煉Having graduated from middle school, she went on fu

15、rther education at Paris University. She received a doctors degree in physics two years after arriving in Paris. 翻譯：中學(xué)畢業(yè)后翻譯：中學(xué)畢業(yè)后, ,她決定去巴黎大學(xué)深造，并在到達(dá)巴黎兩年后她決定去巴黎大學(xué)深造，并在到達(dá)巴黎兩年后順利地取得了物理博士學(xué)位。順利地取得了物理博士學(xué)位。常用表達(dá)式：常用表達(dá)式：He was admitted to New York university 考取考取大學(xué)大學(xué)went abroad to further ones study 出國(guó)深造出國(guó)深造m

16、ajor in 主修主修graduate from university從某大學(xué)某系畢業(yè)從某大學(xué)某系畢業(yè)receive/get a bachelors (masters, doctors) degree in(學(xué)學(xué)科科). 獲取獲取.學(xué)士學(xué)士/碩士碩士/博士學(xué)位博士學(xué)位啟示：用復(fù)合句、倒裝句等，潤(rùn)色文章啟示：用復(fù)合句、倒裝句等，潤(rùn)色文章 4、生平、生平常用表達(dá)式：常用表達(dá)式：serve as 做某種工作做某種工作devote oneself /ones effort to/ be devoted to 一生致力一生致力于于concentrate /apply oneself to 專注于專注于

17、make up ones mind to do/be determined to do 決心決心做做have a gift for / be gifted in 有有的天賦的天賦showed a great interest in 對(duì)有極大興趣對(duì)有極大興趣.set the world record of Olympics Games 打破奧林匹克世打破奧林匹克世界紀(jì)錄界紀(jì)錄do research about/ into 作作. .研究研究receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for literature/ Economics 獲得諾貝爾獲得諾貝爾文學(xué)文學(xué)/經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)

18、經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)獎(jiǎng)獎(jiǎng)fight for 為為.而奮斗而奮斗啟示：運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組啟示：運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語(yǔ)、詞組 5、評(píng)價(jià)、評(píng)價(jià)常用表達(dá)式：常用表達(dá)式：1. 最好的最好的/重要的重要的之一之一 one of the best/most important2.為為.樹(shù)立一個(gè)良好的榜樣樹(shù)立一個(gè)良好的榜樣 .set a good example to 3. 被授予被授予 be honoured as 4. 比賽中贏得第一名比賽中贏得第一名 win the first prize in the competition 5.為為作出巨大貢獻(xiàn)作出巨大貢獻(xiàn) make great contribu

19、tion to 6. 被看作，被視為被看作，被視為 be regarded/considered as . 7.是是.的驕傲的驕傲 . is the pride of . 8.對(duì)對(duì)的評(píng)價(jià)很高的評(píng)價(jià)很高 speak/think highly of 模擬試題4 （見(jiàn)卷子）（見(jiàn)卷子） 劉平從廣告上得知上海某公司需要工程師。寫信應(yīng)聘。要求劉平從廣告上得知上海某公司需要工程師。寫信應(yīng)聘。要求內(nèi)容包含如下要點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容包含如下要點(diǎn)。 (1) 姓名：劉平，年齡姓名：劉平，年齡27歲。歲。 (2) 2001年畢業(yè)于中山大學(xué)，后來(lái)留學(xué)日本東京大學(xué)。年畢業(yè)于中山大學(xué)，后來(lái)留學(xué)日本東京大學(xué)。 (3) 2005年科研成果

20、顯著，獲博士學(xué)位。年科研成果顯著，獲博士學(xué)位。 (4) 日本一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但他拒絕了。日本一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但他拒絕了。 (5) 為了報(bào)效祖國(guó)，于為了報(bào)效祖國(guó)，于2006年毅然回國(guó)。年毅然回國(guó)。 注意：介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條譯成英語(yǔ)。注意：介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條譯成英語(yǔ)。 寫作要求：寫作要求： 只能使用只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性。句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性。Dear Sir, How do you do? Through the ad .I know you

21、r company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. _. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours,Liu Ping 答案模擬試題模擬試題4答案答案 Dear Sir, How d

22、o you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Liu Ping, aged 27. Having graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001, I was sent to Tokyo University .Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinar

23、y result in scientific research and received a doctors degree. A Japanese company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. To devote myself to our China, I came back this year without any hesitation. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. T

24、hank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Liu Ping 返回 假如你叫白云，從廣告上得知廣州某公司需要工程師。假如你叫白云，從廣告上得知廣州某公司需要工程師。寫信應(yīng)聘。要求內(nèi)容包含如下要點(diǎn)。寫信應(yīng)聘。要求內(nèi)容包含如下要點(diǎn)。 (1) 姓名：白云，出生于廣州市越秀區(qū)，年齡姓名：白云，出生于廣州市越秀區(qū)，年齡27歲。歲。 (2) 2001年畢業(yè)于中山大學(xué)，后來(lái)留學(xué)英國(guó)倫敦大學(xué)。年畢業(yè)于中山大學(xué)，后來(lái)留學(xué)英國(guó)倫敦大學(xué)。 (3) 2005年數(shù)學(xué)方面成果顯著，獲

25、博士學(xué)位。年數(shù)學(xué)方面成果顯著，獲博士學(xué)位。 (4) 英國(guó)一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒絕了。英國(guó)一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒絕了。 (5) 為了報(bào)效祖國(guó)，于為了報(bào)效祖國(guó)，于2006年毅然回國(guó)。年毅然回國(guó)。 （6）有數(shù)學(xué)天賦。）有數(shù)學(xué)天賦。注意：注意：1）介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條譯成英語(yǔ)。文章）介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條譯成英語(yǔ)。文章首位已經(jīng)給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)。首位已經(jīng)給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)。寫作要求寫作要求只能使用只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性。句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性。Finish the comp

26、osition after class.Dear Sir,How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to your early reply.