十年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文

1、十年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文2011 年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題： Write at least 60 words about the topic " I ' m a member of 以“我是？的一員”為題寫(xiě)一？篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格子。提示：你可以作為任意興趣小組或者社團(tuán)的一員，或者作家庭，班級(jí)，社區(qū)的一員，寫(xiě)出你的經(jīng)歷，感受等。Use the following points as a reference.MoodPwGioupAre you glad to be a member of.?J AnimalLovefSWhat do you do in it?How

2、 do you feel as such a member?例文+點(diǎn)評(píng):It has been 2 years since I became a member of the group "AnimalIt has been +時(shí)間段+since +過(guò)去的時(shí)間點(diǎn)Lovers", in which I feel always glad and proud of myself. Not only 非限定性定語(yǔ)從句N(xiāo)ot only. but also倒裝句，用法請(qǐng)參見(jiàn)我其他的帖子do we collect information about the animals in dange

3、r but we alsopost the information on the internet. In addition, we often spend 邏輯詞our weekends or holidays taking photos of those beautiful animals.It is in this way that we attract more people to love and protect 強(qiáng)調(diào)句animals. I had never found my work so meaningful until I joined this group. Never w

4、HI I get out of it. (95w)Never的倒裝句2010年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:I'm proud of myself1、What kind of person are you?2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)3、Why are you proud of yourself?要求：至少60字 范文：I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running .But as we all know The students of Grade

5、 nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment I just wanted to give up .but my parents encouraged me /impossible is nothing, ” “ you could challenge yourself! ” so wit encouragement of them” I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line J felt proud of

6、 myself .though I didn,kneetthwonDddcreaiteda miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!滿(mǎn)分作文+點(diǎn)評(píng)：Like those many teenagers you can see in the street, I am just a 定語(yǔ)從句common student, nothing different. I am still proud of myself,however, for I am trying to get better every day. Early to bed and

7、活用諺語(yǔ)early to rise, I make myself full of energy all day long. I seldomwaste any minute during the classes, which helps me to be highly 非限定性定語(yǔ)從句efficient while studying. Besides, I also keep myself healthy by 省略句taking exercise every day. To sum up, I never give up improving do A by doing B ,通過(guò)做B事達(dá)到做

8、A事的目的，初中英語(yǔ)必會(huì)語(yǔ)法myself, and that is the reason why I am proud of myself. (98w) ""-2009 年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:I want to do something for my school以“T want to do something for my school （我想為學(xué)校做一件事）”為題寫(xiě)一篇不 少于 60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。學(xué)生習(xí)作:'But I have never done anythiiI want to

9、 make school clean. You may think it is very sim ple. But I don ' t think so. Ourteacher said ' ' School is your homeou should keep it clean/ to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on

10、the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course， I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?點(diǎn)評(píng)：此文分三層，先提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，然

11、后寫(xiě)出自己怎么做的，最后寫(xiě)了我可以讓我的學(xué)校變得干凈讓每個(gè)人寬恕我，結(jié)尾緊扣全文，寫(xiě)出我會(huì)怎么做。全文立意新穎，區(qū)別于傳統(tǒng)的作文，有自己的生活背景，寫(xiě)出了從我原來(lái)是怎么做到現(xiàn)在的轉(zhuǎn)變過(guò)程，沒(méi)有重大的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，是一篇值得參考的好文章。例文：My school is in the centre of the city and the air around is not fresh enough because of the heavy traffic. Our school hasn， sot Inwotaicnetdtoitplant more trees in my school totake

12、 in polluted gases. I will use my savings to buy some plants and seeds. In addition, I will call on my schoolmates to be responsible for them when I graduate from school. I hope that my school will be cleaner and prettier.2008年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題：網(wǎng)絡(luò)上有兩個(gè)版本：(1) Write at least 60 words on the topic “ A Story abo

13、ut My Pa，ren. t(s)以“爸爸 / 媽媽的故事”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于 60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。例文：My mum was born in a small village. In her family ， there were seven people: mum s parents, mum s two brothers and two sisters and mum. When mum wa， s yhoeurng father was a doctor in the small village and her

14、 mother was just a worker. At that time， for lack of TV and computer ， everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to helped their mother with the housework. For exampl，e they help to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very

15、hard, she felt happy.(2) Write at least 60 words about the topic“ Love around me ”.以“我身邊的愛(ài)”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于 60 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。( 總 分 16分)Use the following points as a guide.( 短文須包含下列要點(diǎn))Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.)How do you feel when you get love

16、from him/ her/ them?What are you going to do to show your love?范文：My life is full of love. My parents always give their love to me generously. When I was in trouble， they encouraged me and stayed by my side all the time. They asked me never to give up. I feel warm and thankful when I get love from t

17、hem. In return ， I m determined to win still greater progress in my studies and to be a good person. I know this is just what they want most.2007 年 J?.海中考英語(yǔ)作文題：Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate toDo”.以“我不喜歡 ”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得山現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。段文開(kāi)頭己給，所給部分不計(jì)入

18、字?jǐn)?shù)。Use the following points as a guide.（短文須包含 卜歹U要點(diǎn)）What are the things that you hate to do?What do you hate doing most? Why? （ Give at least two reasons）. Things I Hate to DoMost of the time I do things which I enjoy. However ） there are still things that I hate to dc?范文 （ 1 ） :Most of the time I d

19、o things which I enjoy. However, there are still things that I hate to do. For example， I hate to go swimming. I am able to swim but I think it is dangerous. I hate to read ghost stories， too, because they are not only frightening but also boring. Besides, they teach me nothing. In fact， I hate tell

20、ing lies most. A person who tells lies is dishonest. If you tell lies ， nobody will believe you any more when they find out the truth. So I hate to tell lies most I want to be an honest person.范文 （ 2） :I hate to keep pets and tell lies. The thing that I hate doing most is smoking. As we all know， sm

21、oking is not only bad for ourselves but also harmful to others. Whenever my father smokes， I feel rather sick. Besides， it is a waste of money to smoke， I think. What's more， smoking pollutes the air. So I hate smoking most.2006 年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題: Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topicI Have

22、 aDream”.以“我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于 60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Sentencepatterns for reference （以 卜句型僅供參考）? My dream is to be." / to do.? ? / to go. # I enjoy / like / prefer.> To make my dream come true, I.If my dream comes true，例文：I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dre

23、am: Is a doctor.Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain.May let the human change the health. At the same time, I believed tha， t will help others， own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore， I hoped future I might be

24、a doctor.2005 年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題: Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“ Grpains and gains ” . The pictures below areufrorreyfeorence only.以 " 成長(zhǎng)的煩惱與歡樂(lè)”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于 60 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。以下圖片僅供參考。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。學(xué)生習(xí)作：I think I have a happy life ， though I cannot do the things I like. For example， I like reading different books in my spare time， especially some detective stories. But my mum always asks me to practise playing the piano one hour every day. That s borinI like having parties with my friends during the holidays. But I have to do lots of homeworks. Teachers