【讀后續(xù)寫微技能】高考英語新題型--讀后續(xù)寫微技能

1、高考新題型-讀后續(xù)寫微技能浙江英語高考新題型 -讀后續(xù)寫不但給學(xué)生帶來了新的挑 戰(zhàn)，而且給教師的教學(xué)帶來了不少的困惑。2017年雖然已有一屆的經(jīng)歷，但教師如何教，學(xué)生如何學(xué)，仍是當前師生面臨的一大課 題。根據(jù)考試說明，該題主要有以下幾個方面的能力要求：1.理解前文，銜接合理；2.情節(jié)連貫，符合邏輯；3.正確表達，語 言優(yōu)美。但筆者認為，這幾點要求只是給師生提供了該題的能力要 求，或者說是提供了總體的教學(xué)目標，但對于平時教學(xué)的具體指導(dǎo)與訓(xùn)練，沒有多少實質(zhì)的意義，且所給的范例又少之又少，今年高 考甚至都不給范文了。近來，看到王玉艷編著的新高考英語讀后 續(xù)寫實踐指南一書( A Practical G

2、uide To English Continuation Writing For The New College Entrance Examination ), 最有價值的 是作者提出了在日常的寫作教學(xué)中進行微技能”訓(xùn)練的這一想法，對平時的教學(xué)有一定的借鑒作用?？上У氖?，有些實例對于大多數(shù)高中生來說實在太難，讓人望而生畏。不過，還是讓人看到了努力 的方向。因為讀后續(xù)寫是記敘文為主，所以根據(jù)記敘文的特點，可以在以下方面加以積累與訓(xùn)練：1.時間表達；2.情感表達；3.心理活動； 4.動作描寫；5.事件及經(jīng)過；6.感悟；7.可套用的句式。如2016 年浙江新高考考試說明英語寫作樣題，可以讓學(xué)生在這幾

3、個方 面去欣賞并模仿。Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting （動作）behind, Stop, stop! And at that moment （時間）, Arthur suddenly （ 時間）realized （心理）that maybe （心理）the young man was the bank robber. Arthur was a bit frightened （ 情感）,and he continued to rush （動作）until he saw a taxi. He s

4、topped it, jumped in with the suitcase and told （ 動作）the driver, Go to the police station, please. The man shouting （動作）behind is the bank thief ! The taxi raced away like the wind.Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told （動作）the police what had happened. On heari

5、ng （時間） his story, the police was determined to（ 心、理）find out the truth about the robbery. They opened the suitcase and to their surprise （情感）, they spotted （動作）a large sum of money inside it. Then （時間）the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase. Later （時間）,with the info

6、rmation, the police arrested （動作）the robber. The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.那么，如果學(xué)生在平時的英語學(xué)習(xí)過程中，能從以上幾個方面加以積累并在寫作訓(xùn)練中不斷模仿，相信一定會有起到事半功倍的效果。以下是本人這幾天的積累，至于在什么情境中使用，我就不一一說明了，希望同學(xué)們能在平時的學(xué)習(xí)中用同樣的方法積累好詞好 句。01時間順序One day,有一天Early in the morning,一大早One Sunday afternoon一個星期天下午the other day = a f

7、ew days ago幾天前The next/following day, 第二天（一般過去時）Just then, =Just at that moment正在那時，After that, =Later on,Then 然后，After a while,一會兒以后about half an hour later, .大約半小時以后In the end/ at last/ finally,最后from then on,從月B以后, from now on 從今以后02情感表達Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently:His wif

8、e s disease took away his appetite.Ben seemed surprised to hear this.When he heard this, he was turning with anger/ was wild with joy.Her face brightened up/lit up (with pleasure).Seeing their task finished gives them a sense of satisfaction.Nervous and worried, I called my mom and told her what had

9、 happened.To our delight and relief, there was nothing seriously wrong with him.Though cleaning up the rubbish was a tough task, our hearts were filled with joy.My birthday always makes me feel cheerful.I was pleased beyond description/words that I got this job.He was wearing a happy expression even

10、 though he was really worried.All the frustration and stress that had been building inside of me came to a complete stop.When he was asked, he was shocked that he could not say what had occurred when the attack took place.It is beyond my understanding that many adults should be so crazy about The sm

11、ile on her face shone like a diamond.A smile of understanding flashed across his face.I was pleased beyond description.She wore a shining smile on her face.Her smile lit up the whole room.She shed tears of joy.Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.His eyes twinkled with pleasure.His voice trembled w

12、ith anger.He gave me a look of burning anger.He glared at me with burning eyes.He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.With tears stre

13、aming down her face, she.These days he was in low spirits.Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly out of breathOn learning the truth, I was totally shocked.03心理活動All of a sudden, I remembered that I had left my bag on the bagMon paused and thought for a moment about what she would say.Heari

14、ng this, Tom started to fear that she knew about his afternoon.He remembered the promised he had made to his son: No matter what,Ill always be there for you. And tears began to fill his eyes.Without hesitation, we rushed into the rain and started working together.Countless things flashed through my

15、mind04動作描寫I jumped off the bus before it stopped and began walking down the street.He rushed to the school where his son was supposed to be, only to discovered that the building was as flat as a pancake.I took the suitcase to the car, and then returned to assist the woman.She took my arm and we walk

16、ed slowly toward the car. She kept thanking me for my kindness.When David turned back around and saw what had happened, he began to lose control.Its nothing, I told her. just try to treat my passengers the way Iwould want my mother treated.As he began to raise his voice to his son, Jan walked quickl

17、y over tohim, put her hand on his shoulder and said,“ David, please remember.were raising children, not flowers!We all stood watching, smiling and laughing as they darted past the cars.Tom thought for a moment and then said, Sorry Ben. This fence hasto be painted perfectly. It takes a special person

18、 to do it well.Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly.Everyone looked at her in astonishment.05事件與情節(jié)At 9:00 I called my dad to see if could come over after work. When he answered the phone, I just said, Dad, can I come over after work tonight? I have something to tell you. My dad responded .06可套用的句式Sobbing, the boy asked me, Would you please help me . How much do I owe you? she asked, reaching into her purs