（整理版高中英語）高三英語名校試題匯編（第4期）專題16書面表達（教

1、【二?！繛榱藴p少舌尖上的浪費，許多城市發(fā)起了“光盤行動，倡導在日常生活中要注意節(jié)約糧食，就餐時，要吃光盤中的飯菜。你的筆友lily想了解一些關于“光盤行動的情況，請閱讀下面信件，根據(jù)要求寫一封回信。dear david，five years have passed since we last met in nanjing. a campaign called clearing your plate is reported to be very popular throughout many big cities in china. it sounds very interesting. cou

2、ld you please tell me what clearing your plate exactly mean? why do people launch the campaign? and how is it going in your city? besides, id like to know your opinion about it.looking forward to your reply.best wishes,yours truly.lilydear lily，very glad to hear from you. as for the campaign called

3、clearing your plate. _ best regards,yours faithfully,david 【解題指導】成文時應注意：1. 四段成文：1引出話題光盤行動；2發(fā)起光盤行動的原因；3結(jié)合實際進一步說明；4提出自己的意見。2. 人稱：以第一、三人稱為主；3. 時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。【參考范文】dear lily,very glad to hear from you. as for the campaign called clearing your plate，its proposed by some citizens with the purpose of building

4、a resource-saving and environment-friendly society.several reasons contribute to the launch of the campaign. firstly, while dining out, we tend to order more food than we can consume，which inevitably causes waste and has aroused public concern. secondly, people in poverty-stricken areas suffer starv

5、ation, some of whom even die of hunger. if we save food，their sufferings can be relieved to some extent. thirdly, people have realized saving food is a good virtue and can be beneficial to sustainable development of society as well.during the spring festival, people in nanjing took effective action.

6、 almost all restaurants put up signs saying you can order half portion as you wish and encourage people to take away the leftovers. personally, im in favor of the campaign because its by doing so that we will develop the good habit of saving food and respecting others7 labor. thus，an all-round and w

7、ell-off society can be established.best regards,yours faithfully, david【省一?！考僭O你是李華，david是你的美國筆友。他對目前中國出現(xiàn)的霧霾天氣很關注，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫回信。主要內(nèi)容如下：1.感謝他的關注。2.簡介霧霾天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害。3.談談你的感想。注意：可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢；開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；詞數(shù)：100左右dear david,im glad to receive your letter._yours li hu【省第一次模擬】書面表達假設你是某高三學生李華

8、，剛剛收到美國筆友sarah發(fā)來的一封電子郵件，請你用英語給她回復一封郵件，具體內(nèi)容包括：1. 學習科目、作息時間；2. 課余活動運動、閱讀、上網(wǎng);3. 理想大學及選擇的原因。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右；頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。 2. 可以適當添加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語以為你寫好。dear sarah,im very glad to receive your last e-mail. at your request, id like to tell you something about my school life._best regards, li hua【

9、參考范文】dear sarah,im very glad to receive your last e-mail. at your request, id like to tell you something about my school life.this year i am senior 3, and i have six subjects to learn every day. school hours usually begin at 7 am and end at 8:30 pm. we are making the most of every minute, preparing

10、for the coming college entrance examination. though time is precious, i try to do some sports or do some reading after class. sometimes, too, i surf the internet to update and amuse myself.its been my dream to go to peking university ever since i went to senior high school because of its strong cult

11、ural atmosphere as well as its high academic status.id appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life as well. im looking forward to it.best regards, li hua【第一次模擬】假設你是育才的學生會主席李華，準備邀請本市某高校的外籍教授brown來校做報告，請根據(jù)以下要點用英語寫一封電子郵件： 1自我介紹，表達邀請意愿； 2說明報告的時間，地點，內(nèi)容等； 3告知自己的聯(lián)系方式等。 注意：1詞數(shù)120150； 2

12、可適當增加細節(jié)。dear mr. brown， yours， li hua【參考范文】im li hua, chairman of the students union of yucai high school. there are 2,000 students in our school, most of whom are interested in learning english. but now most of us are puzzled in learning it better and how to grasp so many english words and idioms.

13、in addition, we are willing to know more about the family life in america. now on behalf of the students union, i am to invite you to give us a lecture. i wonder whether you can give us some guidance about the ways of grasping the vocabulary and americans family life at 15:00 this friday on the thir

14、d floor of the stadium.once you make up a decision, please send an email to lihua163 or call me at 055555555. looking forward to your reply.【亮點說明】本文是一封邀請信，格式已經(jīng)給出。文章首先向收信人介紹了自己，然后說明自己寫信的目的。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言簡潔。文章中使用了多個句子結(jié)構(gòu)，如：定語從句., most of whom are., 賓語從句“ i wonder .; 還運用了許多固定結(jié)構(gòu)，如 be interested in, be puzzled i

15、n, in addition 等等?！臼械谝淮文M】如今，社會上仍有某些不文明現(xiàn)象。請你仔細觀察右面四幅圖畫，就此寫一篇英語短文向某英文報社投稿。 要求： 1描述圖畫內(nèi)容； 2就圖畫中的不文明現(xiàn)象談談自己的看法； 3詞數(shù)：100左右開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 4可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考詞匯：闖紅燈run the red light at present we are living in the best agehowever，there are still a small number of people who dont act responsibly_【答案】at pres

16、ent we are living in the best age. however, there are still a small number of people who dont act responsibly. their bad behaviors ar out of place in our civilized society. for example, some people often ignore traffic rules and risk their lives to run the red light. littering is still a serious pro

17、blem. in addition, its not unusual to hear someone speaking loudly on their cellphones in public places. worse still, you can even find silly things written by some tourists in scenic spots.as far as i am concerned, everyone should learn to become a responsible citizen. we must be aware the way we b

18、ehave in public places will affect others. as long as we kick some of our bad habits and care about others, we will make a great difference to our society.【市第一次月考】書面表達明天是期中考試的最后一天, 上午考完英語后, 學生會將組織同學們?nèi)ヅ雷辖鹕健Ｕ埬銓⒋耸掠帽銞l的方式通知你校的外籍學生。要求全文包括以下內(nèi)容：1爭取考好英語；2十點整排隊, 步行到紫金山the purple mountain山腳；3穿運動

19、鞋, 帶好食物和水；4要互相幫助, 特別注意平安, 不能擅自離隊；5在山頂, 班級合影留念；6下山后, 可步行或乘車回家。注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；  2開頭已為你寫好。  3學生會    the students unionboys and girls, it will be the last day of mid-term examination tomorrow,and i hope all of you will try your best to d

20、o well in your last exam _english.after that ,the students union is going to organize a mountainclimbing activity.the team will start at 10 oclock and then walk to the foot of the purple mountain.please wear sports shoes and take some food and water with you.in the course of the mountainclimbing,ple

21、ase donnot leave your class without permission.on the top of the mountain,each class is going to have a picture taken.after going downhill,you cannot either walk home or take a bus.【省唐山市上學期期末】書面表達總分值25分假定你是李華，是佛羅里達冬令營的組織者，請你給joe回一封電子郵件，介紹冬令營的相關情況。內(nèi)容主要包括：1時間：2013年1月27日至2月13日2活動內(nèi)容英語課程、與接待家庭度周末、參觀迪士尼樂園

22、等3預期收獲語言、文化等注意：1詞數(shù)100。左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：佛羅里達冬令營florida winter camp迪士尼樂園disneytan,4dear joe,thanks for your mail. im glad to know you are interested in the florida winter camp. it will be held from january 27 to february 13, during which time you will get wonderful experienc

23、es. you will have chances to improve your spoken english in the courses provided. also, activities are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn american english in authentic situations. besides, a trip to the local disneyland will certainly add to the fun o

24、f the camp. join the camp and you will have a better knowledge of american culture and life. you are sure to benefit from it. yours truly li hua【解析】試題分析：書面表達是英語寫作的重要組成局部, 是語言學習的根本技能，是綜合性很強的語言運用形式。在高考中所占重要較大,它是衡量學生英語綜合水平和應用能力的一個重要標志。英語寫作是一個人英語綜合水平的表達。英語寫作水平的上下包含的要素很多,而句子構(gòu)造方式是非常重要的要素。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清

25、晰的表達作者的意思。考生應明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確地表達意思的能力。因此，要求考生在寫作過程中牢牢記住以下口訣：“先讀提示，要點與格式要弄清；時態(tài)語態(tài)要留神，前后照應要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫好細檢查，點滴小錯別無視。學生在明確目的和掌握要領后，要嚴格按照規(guī)定的時間去完成作文?？键c：這是一封電子郵件。點評：考生不能遺漏要點要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞或句式，盡可能的使用較復雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分數(shù)。考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比擬流暢?！臼幸恢械谒拇卧驴肌?/p>

26、請寫一篇文章，介紹你校校報為高三學生創(chuàng)立的 “sharing feelings專欄column，并談談你的看法。內(nèi)容要點包括：開設目的：緩解學生壓力，促進健康專欄優(yōu)勢：提供及時的指導和幫助你對專欄的看法不少于80字開頭已寫好，不計入字數(shù)our school has set up a column called “sharing feelingsfor senior 3 students.【參考范文】our school has set up a column called “sharing feelingsfor senior 3 students.this column, aimed at

27、reliving pressure and improving the health of students, has a unique advantage that the experts can give us some guidance and help in time. besides, it covers the thoughts and feelings of students and provides professional suggestions.from my point of view, not only does our school attach importance

28、 to our study but also puts our mental health at the top of the list. besides, the column also provides a platform for us to communicate with our teachers and parents. moreover, we can get help and guidance from experts to solve our problems. with their help, we can achieve our goals with more confi

29、dence and in a more effective way.【省南武第二次模擬】寫作(共兩節(jié)，總分值40分)第一節(jié) 根底寫作 (共1小題，總分值15分) 寫作內(nèi)容請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給校報寫一篇英語短文，介紹我市“天然氣車輛natural gas vehicles的情況。 現(xiàn)狀  我市最近投入使用70輛天然氣公交車，興建兩座天然氣站。優(yōu)勢  和傳統(tǒng)燃料相比，天然氣節(jié)省能源，降低本錢；廢氣排放少，噪音小，有益人們健康 及城市環(huán)境。更多舉措  除政府投入外，還鼓勵公司和個人使用天然氣車，共建低碳城市。 寫作要求只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容

30、。評分標準句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縤t is reported that recently 70 natural gas buses have been put into use and two gas stations have been set up in our city. compared with traditional fuels, natural gas is not only energy-saving but also environmentally friendly. for one thing, natural gas vehicles cons

31、ume much less fuels, thus greatly reducing cost. for another, unlike traditional vehicles, natural gas vehicles release very small amounts of harmful gases and they dont make loud noises, which is beneficial to the health of people as well as the environment of the city.apart from the effort of the

32、government, companies and individuals are also encouraged to use natural gas vehicles because only by joint efforts can we build up a low-carbon city.【解析】之后，連句成篇，加以潤色。最后檢查修改，定稿。【考點定位】考查學生清楚、連貫地傳遞信息和表達意思的能力。【亮點說明】所給范文層次清晰，要點齊全。文中穿插運用了主語從句、過去分詞短語作狀語，which引導非限制性定語從句，only引起倒裝句等多種表達方式，為文章增色不少。此外，文中not on

33、ly.but also.;for one thing,for another;as well as;apart from等高級短語和過渡銜接詞的使用，使文章表達優(yōu)美，層次清晰，行文連貫。第二節(jié) 讀寫任務 共1小題，總分值25分    閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。when i was in college twenty-five years ago, i spent four summers working as a maid in housekeeping at a grand hotel in downtown chicago. i

34、 did not enter the world of housekeeping enthusiastically. i had been hoping to get a job as an office assistant. when that failed, i had no choice but to work as a maid.it was tiring work, cleaning up to eighteen rooms a day. my poor attitude reflected my disdain(蔑視) for cleaning toilets, changing

35、bed sheets, dusting, and vacuuming eight hours a day for the comfort of total strangers who rarely left a tip. my maid work was just so-so until the day i was assigned to the eighteenth floor.that was lorenas regular floor. the only time another maid set foot on it was on lorenas day off. if you lef

36、t a little rubbish on the floor, a small tissue under the bed, or a pillow uncleaned, lorena would hunt you down when she returned. shed ended her lecture to me with, “take some pride in your work.she did. and so did rosalie, helen, annette, pearlie, earline, and all the other career maids with more

37、 than one hundred years of experience among them. their commitment to doing a good job and their belief that their work was a reflection of their character stuck with me throughout my professional career. i learned a lot from them those four summers. 寫作內(nèi)容    1以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。 

38、0;  2以約120詞談談暑假生活，內(nèi)容包括：    (1) 你是否做過暑期工；(2) 你打算如何度過高考后的暑假；(3) 你認為怎樣過暑假才有意義。寫作要求    1作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事也可以參照閱讀材料 【參考范文】when she was a college student, the author spent 4 summers in a hotel doing house keeping job, which had great influence on her later professio

39、nal career.when it comes to my summer vacation, i never did any part-time job. instead, i had to attend a series of training classes to improve my studies.as a matter of fact, i dont like it when i have to bury myself in books in summer vacations. therefore, i am determined to do some part-time work

40、 after the college entrance examinations. with the money i earn, ill go traveling, which will enrich my life and broaden my horizon.in my opinion, summer vacation should not be spent on books only. as a chinese saying goes, "walk ten thousand miles, read ten thousand books". apart from gai

41、ning knowledge from books, we should also learn from social activities such as doing part-time jobs, going traveling and participating in voluntary work. only in this way can we develop healthily and adapt ourselves to the society quickly.【亮點說明】本范文圍繞要點進行寫作，每段的第一句為本段主題句，后面的內(nèi)容是圍繞它而展開。本文段落清楚，要點齊全，詳略得當，

42、行文連貫，過渡自然，在語言運用上也表達了非凡的語言功底?！臼《叩谒拇螠y試】寫作 共兩節(jié)，總分值40分第一節(jié) 根底寫作共1小題；總分值15分 寫作內(nèi)容 學習方法 學習效果背誦范文運用英語思維，進行模仿性寫作多閱讀英文文章吸取語言材料多聽英文播送提高聽力水平學習語法正確表達多練習口語提高口頭技能多寫日記在做參考他人的習作取長補短寫作要求 1. 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；2. 3. 開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。評分標準 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。ladies and gentlemen,now i would like to tell you how i learn english w

43、riting._ thats all. thank you!【參考范文】ladies and gentlemen,now i would like to tell you how i learn english writing.firstly, i often recite good / beautiful english articles, which helps me think in english when i imitate english writing. secondly, i also read english articles widely so that i can tak

44、e in as many language materials as possible. thirdly, in order to express myself correctly / make myself understood, i think that they are important to for us to learn about some grammar, listen to the radio and practice speaking english a lot. fourthly, i keep a diary every day so that i can learn

45、by writing. besides / in addition, i often refer to others articles to know what i need and what i can learn from others. thats all. thank you. 【考點定位】考查學生清楚、連貫地傳遞信息、表達意思的能力?！玖咙c說明】所給范文層次清晰，要點齊全。文中穿插運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句、so that引導的目的狀語從句、in order to 引導不定式短語作目的狀語、what引導的賓語從句等多種表達方式，為文章增色不少。此外，firstly，sec

46、ondly，thirdly，fourthly， besides / in addition等過渡銜接詞的使用，使文章層次清晰，行文連貫。第二節(jié) 讀寫任務共1小題；總分值25分閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。everyone has different goals at different stages. if one is aimless, there is little possibility that one would ever achieve great success. in order to achieve these goals, we have to ma

47、ke plans and some decisions at different stages. my first concern is my study. in this new term, i'll devote almost all my time and energy to my study. i don't feel like thinking about such things like love and entertainment. although i'll relax myself, i'll focus my concentration on

48、ly on my study. i firmly believe that studying well is my primary mission. my second attention is my lifestyle. it is a pity that i had a terrible lifestyle last term. so i intended to form a new lifestyle to make me healthier and stronger. i have a strong feeling that i must keep a balanced and hea

49、lthy diet, since i suffered a lot from last term's irregular and unhealthy diet.the third thing that i'd like to refer to is my dear father and mother. now i feel very guilty that i seldom called them last term. receiving my call is always what they long for, but i haven't satisfied thei

50、r wish, which i can't forgive myself. so i swear to call them often this term no matter how tired i am. 【寫作內(nèi)容】1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2. 以約120個詞就“新學期打算的話題談談你的想法，內(nèi)容包括：1在新的學期你有哪些愿望；2你方案如何實現(xiàn)這些愿望；寫作要求】1. 作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 【評分標準】概括準確，語言標準，內(nèi)容適宜，語篇連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹空擖cthe writer emphasiz

51、ed the importance of setting a goal in ones achieving success. 論據(jù)he/she also mentioned that his/her three concerns in this new term were his/her study, lifestyle and parents. 主題句as for me, i wish i could improve my study in this term, especially my english. 展開english has always been my weakness and it is undoubtedly important to overcome it a