Aletterofgivingadvice

1 An advice letter or a persuasive letter Speaking 2 Help improve the students writing Important Points and difficult points Help the students learn how to express their own opinions and write an advice letter or a persuasive letter clearly Teaching methods Cooperative learning Task based method Teaching procedures Step I Present the task how to write an advice letter or a persuasive letter 1 Let Ss enjoy a video and talk about their feelings after watching it Question If it happened to you how would you feel about it 2 Show some of test papers to Ss and ask Ss to think about What would you do if it happened to you carefully Eg I feel very sad sorry I must work harder than before I would ask my friends or my teacher to give me some advice about how to learn English well Step II Speaking Task 1 Discuss the advice about how to learn English well Show some pictures to Ss and make sure Ss can see them clearly Get Ss to have a free talk about how to learn English well The more the better Examples T Could you please give me some advice about how to learn English well S1 I think reading the textbook is useful S2 I learn English by studying with my classmates Ss Different students have different ideas Time permitting write down some advice Ss mentioned on the Bb Then have Ss read them aloud Advice Ask the teacher for help Study with friends Listen to the tapes Look up the words in the dictionary Surf the InternetJoin an English club Read English magazines and newspaper Watch English language movies Take notes Communicate with foreigners 2 Task 2 Practice and discuss the sentence structures about how to give advice List the advice and the sentences and ask Ss to complete the sentences using the suitable words and pay attention to the forms Advice about how to learn English well 1 We learn English by the teacher for help English magazines and newspapers 2 What How about the teacher in class carefully 3 We can should had better the Internet the words and phrases 4 Why not the textbook the tapes 5 I think the best way to learn English is with friends English programs on TV 6 I think it would be a good idea if you could English songs 7 If I were you I would the English class carefully my homework seriously notes carefully 8 part in English classes after school with foreigners the words in the dictionary Step III Writing Task 3 Discuss how to write an article well Tell Ss to know about the writing steps Explain the main idea about an advice letter and a persuasive letter and ask Ss to pay attention to the details when writing Give Ss a basic structure Clear structure Connecting Words and Phrases Illustration or example I think I suggest in other words for example in fact that is Addition Besides moreover in addition again also and finally first further furthermore last next second Comparison also in the same way similarly Contrast but however otherwise although but at the same time even though in contrast in spite of instead nevertheless on the contrary on the other hand though 1 type of writing 2 tenses 3 person 4 key points of information 5 Don t make a draft but have an outline 1 開頭 開頭 beginning 開門見山 向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn) state your idea 點(diǎn)題 一兩個(gè)句子 概括性 暗示性 2 主體主體 body 對(duì)所提出的問題進(jìn)行分析并說明理由 接著提出自己的建議 reasons and evidence 中心記述部分 層次分明 3 結(jié)尾結(jié)尾 ending 呼應(yīng)開頭 重申觀點(diǎn) restate your opinion 小結(jié) 呼應(yīng)主題 can help a lot is helpful to you is of some help to you 3 Summary in short in a word in all in brief therefore as has been said in conclusion in summary on the whole to summarize Sentence structure A Beginning 開頭常用句式 照應(yīng)材料 表明寫作意圖 1 I m writing to persuade you to 2 I am very glad to hear that you want to 3 I know you have trouble in after reading your letter 4 I am writing to you for the purpose of 5 I am writing to share some advice with you 6 In my personal opinion it would be wise of you to take the following action 在下認(rèn)為 如果你能采 取以下措施 將是一種明智的選擇 B Body 第二段常用句式 給出建議 井然有序 1 at first firstly first of all secondly then after that next meanwhile besides what s more in addition in the end finally 2 Here I d like to give my advice on I would like to suggest that 3 First of all I think it would be better if 4 If I were you I would 5 I strongly hope that you can 6 I think it would be a good idea if you could 我想如果你能 可能會(huì)更好 C Ending 結(jié)尾常用句式 1 I believe you will take my advice into account 我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的 2 I hope you will find these proposals suggestions recommendations practical useful helpful 我希望這些 建議 意見 看法對(duì)你來說實(shí)用 有用 有幫助 3 I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard 如果這方面有所改善我會(huì)非常開心的 4 Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision 我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的 并作最后的決定 Give Ss a model and make sure Ss can understand it clearly If necessary give Ss more explanations 黃金模板一 勸說信 Dear 對(duì)象 I m writing to persuade you to 問題 First of all I think it would be better if 建議一 Secondly 建議二 Last but not least 建議三 I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision Looking forward to your reply Yours 4 Task 4 Write an advice letter or a persuasive letter Ask Ss to finish the composition with the help of the writing tips above 小試牛刀小試牛刀 An advice letter or a persuasive letter 高考真題鏈接 2008 年高考全國卷 假定你是李華 你的英國朋友 Peter 來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫回信 要點(diǎn) 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班 看中文書刊 電視 學(xué)唱中文歌曲 交中國朋友 注意 詞數(shù) 100 左右 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié) 以使行文連貫 開頭語已為你寫好 Dear Peter I m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well Best wishes Li Hua 假如你是李華 為了迎接即將到來的高中畢業(yè)生基礎(chǔ)會(huì)考考試 學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和教師因?yàn)閾?dān)心同 學(xué)們?yōu)g覽不健康的網(wǎng)站 關(guān)閉了教室內(nèi)電腦的網(wǎng)絡(luò)瀏覽功能 你們感到很難過 請(qǐng)你給校長 寫一封信 勸說校長同意開通教室內(nèi)的網(wǎng)絡(luò) 注意 1 信中要包括下表中的所有內(nèi)容 2 詞數(shù) 100 左右 3 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出 但不 計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 事由 教室內(nèi)的電腦不能上網(wǎng) 建議學(xué)校開通網(wǎng)絡(luò) 原因 1 有利于查找資料 2 瀏覽新聞 了解信息 3 作為高中生 我們正在形成自己的判斷 力 Dear Headmaster I m writing to 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