考點4短文改錯.doc

圓學子夢想 鑄金字品牌溫馨提示： 此題庫為Word版，請按住Ctrl, 滑動鼠標滾軸，調節(jié)合適的觀看比例，點擊右上角的關閉按鈕可返回目錄?？键c4 短文改錯Passage 1 （2010全國卷I）It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76_prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 77_was to write a story or present it. My teachers 78_have been telling me how great my writing was. 79_So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 80_of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful 81_help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living 82_near my house, who was a very much famous writer.83_He agreed to reading my story and give me some 84_advices on how to write like a real writer. 85_76. 【解析】 77. 【解析】 onin?？疾榻樵~，表示在什么比賽中應用介詞in。78. 【解析】 orand。此處write a story與present it并列關系。 79. 【解析】havehad?？疾闀r態(tài)。上下文都是用一般過去時，因為講的是過去發(fā)生的事情，所以把have改為had。80. 【解析】 they前加what。what they had said是what引導的主語從句。81. 【解析】 werewas。考查主謂一致。句子的主語是What，所以應把were改為was。 82. 【解析】 gentleman 前面加a ?？疾楣谠~。因為gentleman是可數(shù)名詞，且在此指一位紳士，所以加a。 83. 【解析】 去掉much。在此只因為很著名的作家。并沒有比較之意，所以去掉much。84. 【解析】readingread。agree 用于agree to do sth.，所以把reading改為read。 85. 【解析】advicesadvice。advice是不可數(shù)名詞，所以把advices改為advice。 Passage 2 （2010全國卷II）Christie was one of my best friend at high school. 76._At that time, we often spend time together. 77._Thank toher help, I made great progress in my 78._study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79. _other words, we would be separated for long time. 80. _Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81. _my best wishes to him. She said it was the best 82._ gift she has ever had. From then on, we ve 83._ kept touch with each other through e-mails. I 84._ look forward to see her again in the near future 85._76. 【解析】friendfriends。考查名詞的單復數(shù)。friend是可數(shù)名詞，根據one of可知不只是一位朋友，故把friend改為friends。77. 【解析】spendspent?？疾闀r態(tài)。根據時間狀語At that time可知此處講的是過去某個時候發(fā)生的事情，所以把spend改為spent。78. 【解析】ThankThanks。此處考查thanks to 這個固定短語，其意是“由于，多虧”。79.80. 【解析】 在 long前面加上a。 因為a long time是固定表達，表示“很長時間”。81. 【解析】去掉off。leaving就表示“離開”，不需要再加off。82. 【解析】.himher。根據上下文可知Christie是女性。83. 【解析】hashad?？疾闀r態(tài)。根據句中的said與was可知此處應指過去，且要用過去完成時。故把has改為had。84. 【解析】 在kept后面加上 in 。keep in touch with sb.是固定短語，表示“與某人保持聯(lián)系”。85. 【解析】seeseeing。因為look forward to中的to是介詞，所以后面要用-ing形式。 look forward to表示“盼望”。 Passage 3 （2010重慶卷）Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, 76. a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you 77. tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody78. else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you79. need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some80. words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes81. him happily too. Whats more, a good friend is willing to82. offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you83. some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and84. trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with85. 【解析】76howwhat。由what引導賓語從句，從句中l(wèi)ike缺賓語。how在名詞性從句中不能做主語、賓語、和表語。77在secrets之后加with。a friend is someone you can share your secrets這是一個定語從句，先行詞是someone ，根據share sth. with sb.的用法，someone做介詞with的賓語，由that和who代替，that和who做賓語可以省略。所以加介詞with。78talkstalk。這是一個倒裝句，正常語序應該是he will talk。will后須加動詞原形。79在always之后加a，listener是可數(shù)名詞，在這里以單數(shù)形式出現(xiàn) ，且是泛指。80hearhearing。after是介詞，后接名詞或動詞-ing形式。81is are，that代指先行詞words，所以謂語動詞要用復數(shù)。82happily happy，形容詞作賓語補足語。make sb +形容詞。83去掉to。which you need是定語從句，修飾名詞help，need是及物動詞，可直接接賓語。意為：提供你所需的幫助。84advicesadvice。advice是不可數(shù)名詞。85spent spend。前后時態(tài)須一致。 Passage 4 （2010四川卷） An English lady was finally decided that she really should 66_learn to drive. And after many attempts, she past her 67_driving test and told her husband that, to celebrate, he 68_was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But 69_then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that 70_they wouldnt take the holiday. “How did you change your 71_mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well, it is all because 72_of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have 73_been practicing for three weeks now, but I still couldnt 74_get used to it-in fact, Ive nearly killed three peoples.” 75_66.【解析】去掉was 考查語態(tài)。根據句意可知本句主語與謂語之間是主動關系。67.【解析】pastpassed 考查詞性。pass her driving test意思是“通過她的駕照考試”；past是介詞，不能充當句子的謂語。68.【解析】heshe 考查人稱代詞的一致。根據下文可知，應是妻子開車帶著丈夫去法國慶祝。69.【解析】70.【解析】afterbefore 考查介詞。根據下文可知，應是在旅行前妻子因為不適應右側駕駛而改變了主意。71.【解析】HowWhy 考查特殊疑問詞。此處表示丈夫不明白妻子改變了主意而詢問原因。72.【解析】byin 考查短語中的介詞。in surprise意思是“吃驚地”，與語境相符。73.【解析】right前加the 考查冠詞。on the right意思是：“在右邊”。74.【解析】couldntcant 考查時態(tài)。此處表示妻子目前還沒有適應在右側駕駛，應用一般現(xiàn)在時。75.【解析】peoplespeople 考查名詞單復數(shù)。people意為“人們”時，是集合名詞，單復數(shù)同形。 Passage 5 (2010 海南/寧夏卷)My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US which was very interested. One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. On the box was a card say: “25 cents each.” “You will never sell these for that much.” he told Nick. Convinced , Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moments delay, my neighbor pricked up the box but announced: “I ll take them.” 【答案】 My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US which was very interested. a interesting One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. As the old man came looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. in 或者ground ballsOn the box was a card say: “25 cents each.” “You will never sell these for that much.” he told Nick.saying Convinced , Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moments delay, my neighbordown hispricked up the box but announced: “I ll take them.” and【解析】第一處：story是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)形式，必須要加不定冠詞，表示“一個故事”。第二處：interested常用來修飾人，此處應該是修飾story,所以要用interesting。第三處：事情發(fā)生在過去，所以要用過去時。把come改為came。第四處：要么改為in the yard在院子里，要么改為on the ground在地上。都屬于固定搭配。第五處：有一箱子的金色小球，當然要用復數(shù)形式了。第六處：應該用非謂語的形式來解釋card 上寫著什么。第七處：根據文章的時態(tài)，可知此處為一般過去時，故刪掉has。第八處：Nick采納了鄰居的建議，把價錢由5美分降到了10美分。bright down降低價格，bright up 上漲。第九處：應該是Nick的鄰居。第十處：此處應該是順承連接。 Passage 6 (2010陜西卷)My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that shed left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!【答案】My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and werepicked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to it the her hardlaugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant tocame over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that shed left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant whichwas clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny! embarrassed but/yet/while/and 【解析】1. 第一句中，主句用的是一般過去時，而從句用的卻是現(xiàn)在進行時，應把 are改為were.2. 第三句中，picked up缺少賓語，應在picked和 up之間加上it代指那個茶杯，所以應該在picked后面加上，然后在下面寫上it。3. 第三句中price前面的不定冠詞a應改為定冠詞the，特指茶杯上標的價格，所以應在a 下面劃一橫線，下面寫上the。4. 第四句中，T-shirt前面的物主代詞有誤，“我妹妹的”應該把his改為her，所以應在his下面劃一橫線，下面寫上her。5. 第五句中，hardly是一個否定副詞，意思是“幾乎不”，因為后面還有一個否定副詞not，所以無論從意義上還是用法上都講不通，應改為hard“努力地”，所以應在hardly下面劃一橫線，下面寫上hard?！局R拓展】1.hard adj. 堅硬的；困難的；嚴厲 的；艱苦的；猛烈的，激烈的； adv. 堅固地；堅硬地；嚴厲地；猛烈地；努力地，辛勤地 The ground is too hard to dig. 這塊土地硬得挖不動。The policeman has a hard look on his face. 這個警察看起來很兇。She lives a hard life. 她過著艱苦的生活。It was raining so hard that the street flooded. 雨下得太大了，街上滿是水。If we all work hard, well earn a lot of money.如果我們都努力工作，就可以賺到很多錢。2.hardly adv. 幾乎不，簡直不；剛剛，僅僅 His legs were so weak that he could hardly stand. 他的腿虛弱得簡直無法站立。Hardly had Lucy arrived when it began to snow.露西剛到，天就下起雨來。6. 第六句中，wanted后面要接帶to的不定式作賓語，所以應在wanted后面要加上，下面寫上to?！局R拓展】常接動詞不定式作賓語的動詞和動詞短語有：want, wish, hope, offer, decide, help, long, arrange, learn, ask, refuse, promise, pretend, expect, dare, afford, plan, manage, agree, prepare, determine 等。7. 第七句中，turn out 不用于被動語態(tài)，所以應用 把was劃掉。【知識拓展】沒有被動語態(tài)的動詞短語歸納英語中有些動詞短語沒有被動語態(tài)，常見的有belong to, take place, break out, lose heart, lose ones heart 等。8. 第七句中that 不能用來引導非限制性定語從句，應改為which,所以應在that下面劃一橫線，在橫線下面寫上which。9. 最后一句中，embarrassing的意思是“令人尷尬的”，用在這兒意思不通，應改為embarrassed“尷尬的”，所以要在embarrassing下面劃一橫線，下面寫上embarrassed ?！局R拓展】-ing形式的形容詞和-ed形式的形容詞的用法區(qū)別二者都可以作定語和表語，但意義不同，-ing形式的形容詞一般表示“令人的”，而-ed形式的形容詞一般表示“感到的”。1. Im interested in the interesting book.我對那本有趣的書很感興趣。2. we are all tired of his tiring class. 我們都厭倦他的令人感到疲倦的課堂。3. His puzzled look suggested that he didnt understand what I said. 他迷惑的表情表明他沒有理解我說的話。10. 該句中連詞for 表原因，用在這兒不當，應改為but/yet/while/and表轉折，對比，所以要在for下面劃一橫線，下面寫上but/yet/while/and，其中的任何一個均可。 Passage 7 (2010浙江卷)After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. Excuse me, she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug (擁抱) you? The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didnt think she looked like Grandma. Neither did me, said Mother cheer