2025年北京高考英語(yǔ)作文深度解析及寫作備考指導(dǎo)

年高考真題英語(yǔ)作文深度點(diǎn)評(píng)與分析2025年高考英語(yǔ)北京卷書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)以情境任務(wù)為重要依托，以語(yǔ)言能力考查為主要驅(qū)動(dòng)，兼顧考查文化意識(shí)、思維品質(zhì)和學(xué)習(xí)能力等要素，促進(jìn)考生核心素養(yǎng)的發(fā)展。一、落實(shí)立德樹(shù)人，倡導(dǎo)學(xué)科育人書面表達(dá)題目立足中國(guó)、放眼全球，有利于培養(yǎng)具有中國(guó)情懷、國(guó)際視野和跨文化溝通能力的社會(huì)主義建設(shè)者和接班人。此試題以中外交流為框架搭建試題任務(wù)，旨在引導(dǎo)考生增強(qiáng)社會(huì)責(zé)任感和時(shí)代使命感，傳遞中國(guó)聲音，提升中國(guó)影響力，將中國(guó)致力于發(fā)展并踐行的環(huán)保、科技、和平等理念傳遞出去，以增進(jìn)世界文明的交流和互鑒，最終達(dá)到世界各國(guó)文化美美與共的目標(biāo)。二、注重思維品質(zhì)，突出語(yǔ)言能力書面表達(dá)試題具有綜合性和開(kāi)放性，著重考查考生在具體情境中運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)意義的能力和高階思維能力。書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)設(shè)置開(kāi)放的情境，讓不同考生充分發(fā)揮，多角度思考問(wèn)題，展示其思維的廣度和深度，并引導(dǎo)學(xué)生在跨文化學(xué)習(xí)和交流過(guò)程中充分發(fā)揮綜合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力解決實(shí)際問(wèn)題、表達(dá)個(gè)人情感和觀點(diǎn)。學(xué)生可以從自己關(guān)注的國(guó)際體育賽事，新能源發(fā)展，綠色低碳等話題展開(kāi)，書寫傳播中國(guó)聲音，講好中國(guó)故事。三、貼近學(xué)生生活，倡導(dǎo)以用促學(xué)書面表達(dá)題目緊密聯(lián)系考生的生活實(shí)際，使其在真實(shí)語(yǔ)境中使用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行交流。書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)體現(xiàn)交際的真實(shí)性，基于真實(shí)語(yǔ)言使用情境的測(cè)試任務(wù)能更好地引導(dǎo)教學(xué)關(guān)注語(yǔ)言的應(yīng)用，學(xué)用結(jié)合，以用促學(xué)，促進(jìn)學(xué)生綜合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力的發(fā)展。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。聯(lián)合國(guó)正面向全球青少年開(kāi)展倡議征集活動(dòng)。你的外國(guó)好友Jim打算參加，為此發(fā)來(lái)郵件，就倡議內(nèi)容詢問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括:1.提出的建議;2.建議的理由。提示詞:倡議proposal注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2025年北京卷書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)我們根據(jù)題目中“就倡議內(nèi)容詢問(wèn)你的建議”和提綱的要點(diǎn)“提建議+建議理由”，可以看出，北京卷作文本質(zhì)上是在考察建議信。命題難度適中，但具有較高區(qū)分度。題型分析與得分要點(diǎn)建議信屬于高考英語(yǔ)寫作常見(jiàn)題型，結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)言模板相對(duì)成熟，學(xué)生普遍熟悉。然而，本題的得分關(guān)鍵不在于“套模板”，而在于能否寫出有內(nèi)容、有深度、有國(guó)際視野的“血肉”——即關(guān)注全球議題，并提出具有邏輯性與現(xiàn)實(shí)意義的建議。倡議內(nèi)容只要是積極的，符合國(guó)際需要的都可以。給到的理由圍繞這個(gè)倡議落地之后的好處展開(kāi)，給出2-3條建議讓文章內(nèi)容更豐富一些。寫作邏輯本題的寫作邏輯可以拆分為兩大部分：提出建議+闡明建議內(nèi)容用一句簡(jiǎn)明的表達(dá)直接切入建議主題，接著可適當(dāng)拓展該建議的具體措施或做法，使建議“可行而可信”。說(shuō)明理由+展示思維深度指出該倡議的現(xiàn)實(shí)意義、社會(huì)價(jià)值或時(shí)代背景，若能結(jié)合青少年的角色、全球趨勢(shì)等角度，邏輯更具說(shuō)服力。四、倡議落腳點(diǎn)可從多個(gè)全球議題入手，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生展現(xiàn)全球責(zé)任感和未來(lái)公民意識(shí)。推薦的寫作落點(diǎn)包括但不限于：Climatechange&environmentalprotection（氣候變化與環(huán)保）Greentransportation(綠色出行）Greenenergy&sustainabledevelopment（綠色能源與可持續(xù)發(fā)展）cybersafety（網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全）AIeducation（人工智能教育）Combatingfoodwaste(反對(duì)浪費(fèi)食物)Preservingculturalheritage(文化遺產(chǎn)保護(hù))每一落腳點(diǎn)都可以細(xì)化出具體的內(nèi)容。注意：題目文體是建議倡議內(nèi)容，不要直接寫成倡議書。2025年北京卷書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)本質(zhì)上是在考察建議信。建議信的功能句考生們平常應(yīng)該都很熟悉，這個(gè)題目寫起來(lái)會(huì)比較得心應(yīng)手。寫作思路使用建議信模板+確定倡議的話題，提出建議的具體倡議內(nèi)容。第一步：審題1.體裁：書信，需遵循書信格式，包括稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾和署名。2.主題：圍繞給外國(guó)好友Jim關(guān)于聯(lián)合國(guó)面向全球青少年開(kāi)展的倡議征集活動(dòng)內(nèi)容提出建議及說(shuō)明理由展開(kāi)。第二步：寫作提綱1.開(kāi)頭：禮貌稱呼Jim，表明收到他的郵件，并告知會(huì)給出建議。2.正文：?提出建議：可以從環(huán)保、文化交流、公益活動(dòng)等常見(jiàn)且適合青少年的方向提出倡議內(nèi)容建議，例如發(fā)起環(huán)?；顒?dòng)倡議、促進(jìn)不同文化青少年交流倡議等。?說(shuō)明理由：針對(duì)提出的建議說(shuō)明理由，如環(huán)保對(duì)地球的重要性、文化交流能增進(jìn)相互理解等。結(jié)尾：表達(dá)希望建議對(duì)他有幫助，并期待他的倡議第三步：選詞組句可能用到的詞語(yǔ)及中文解釋：1.proposal：倡議，提議2.environmentalprotection：環(huán)境保護(hù)3.culturalexchange：文化交流4.publicwelfareactivities：公益活動(dòng)5.makeadifference：有影響，起作用6.enhanceunderstanding：增進(jìn)理解建議信通常是寫給家人或朋友，對(duì)于對(duì)方在生活、工作、求學(xué)等過(guò)程中遇到的實(shí)際問(wèn)題或困惑提供看法、指導(dǎo)或給予對(duì)方所需要的建議，或?qū)τ趯?duì)方不明智的舉動(dòng)進(jìn)行勸勉、告誡或展開(kāi)討論。建議信的寫作目的是提出建議或忠告，不是投訴信。觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】

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sth.seriously 重視；認(rèn)真對(duì)待【萬(wàn)能句式】第一部分：說(shuō)明寫信的目的套語(yǔ)：1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遺憾聽(tīng)說(shuō)你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面有困難。這樣的問(wèn)題是很正常的?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會(huì)有一些幫助。2.IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.

Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已經(jīng)收到了你的來(lái)信。信上說(shuō)你打算下個(gè)月來(lái)參觀中國(guó)十天?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh對(duì)你是有幫助的。3.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients（顧客）.我給你寫信是想說(shuō)明一下我對(duì)于進(jìn)一步改善我們旅館的一些想法，以吸引更多顧客。4.

YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)詢問(wèn)我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高興收到你的來(lái)信，信上詢問(wèn)我關(guān)于如何適應(yīng)新的學(xué)校生活。下面是我的一些建議。6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高興收到你的電子郵件?，F(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在高中學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，我寫信給你一些建議。第二部分：介紹詳情、說(shuō)明原因套語(yǔ)：(1)它將于下午兩點(diǎn)鐘開(kāi)始，四點(diǎn)鐘結(jié)束，在此期間將會(huì)有十五位準(zhǔn)備充分的參賽者發(fā)表演講。Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.(2)我們將會(huì)在上午八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，九點(diǎn)到達(dá)那里。Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.(3)下午，我們會(huì)一起……Duringtheafternoon,we’ll...together.(4)記得帶上水和午餐。Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.(5)順便說(shuō)一下，你可以乘坐322路公交車，它會(huì)直接把你帶到俱樂(lè)部。Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322anditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.(6)我知道你的母語(yǔ)是英語(yǔ)，還是一名英語(yǔ)老師。我代表我們學(xué)校真誠(chéng)地邀請(qǐng)你來(lái)比賽現(xiàn)場(chǎng)。IknowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinviteyoutobepartofthecontest.(7)既然你如此渴望提高英語(yǔ)，這會(huì)是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。SinceyouaresoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.(8)我保證你在那里會(huì)過(guò)得很愉快。I’msurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.第三部分：提出建議套語(yǔ)：我建議……I’dliketosuggestthat…MayIsuggestthat…?Inmyopinion…Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadvise…IfIwereyou,Iwould…第四部分：希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù)套語(yǔ)：1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway(有志者事竟成).我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有用。記?。河兄菊呤戮钩?。2.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:

Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”(一個(gè)決心要成功的人從來(lái)不說(shuō)“不可能”).我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有用。記?。阂粋€(gè)決心要成功的人從來(lái)不說(shuō)“不可能”。3.Bestwishes!（給你）最美好的祝愿！4.

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Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.無(wú)論如何，我希望這些建議對(duì)你有所幫助。我會(huì)非常高興看到情況改善。5.

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Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work！我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。無(wú)論你決定做什么，祝你學(xué)習(xí)/工作好運(yùn)。6.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbesomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真誠(chéng)的希望我的建議對(duì)你有一些幫助。如果有更多我可以幫忙的，請(qǐng)告訴我?！緦懽髂０濉磕０澧貲ear________,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto________________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:________________(建議的內(nèi)容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________________(祝愿).YoursSincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出對(duì)方需要建議的主題).Hereareafewsuggestion(引出作者的建議).First,Itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根據(jù)要求用不同的句式提出建議，如下)Asto__________,Isuggest_____________(需要具體到某一方面).Inaddition,_________(其他的建議).I’msure______________(預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行為的信心和決心).Ihope____________(表達(dá)愿望)。一、【2024年高考英語(yǔ)北京卷原題】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的外國(guó)好友Jim準(zhǔn)備給其校報(bào)的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中國(guó)成立75周年，他打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)建議投稿內(nèi)容；(2)就以上建議簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua一、【2024年高考英語(yǔ)作文北京卷原題】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的外國(guó)好友Jim準(zhǔn)備給其校報(bào)的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中國(guó)成立75周年，他打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)建議投稿內(nèi)容；(2)就以上建議簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHu二、從近三年的高考作文題分析命題趨勢(shì)年份體裁話題主題語(yǔ)境內(nèi)容2025建議信學(xué)校生活從給出的兩個(gè)欄目做出選擇并說(shuō)明理由2024告知信學(xué)校生活介紹美術(shù)課的個(gè)人作品和感想2023建議信學(xué)校生活給外教提建議北京高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)通常為情景作文，通過(guò)設(shè)置貼近學(xué)生生活、社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)或跨文化交流的真實(shí)情境，要求學(xué)生根據(jù)題目要求進(jìn)行寫作。以下是基于近五年高考真題的命題趨勢(shì)總結(jié)：一、題型特點(diǎn)1.應(yīng)用文寫作為主：近五年書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)主要考查應(yīng)用文寫作，包括書信、倡議書、活動(dòng)策劃書等多種形式。如2024年要求學(xué)生給外國(guó)好友Jim回郵件，就新中國(guó)成立75周年中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就提供建議；2023年是策劃“綠色北京”主題社團(tuán)活動(dòng)的郵件；2022年為邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)好友Jim做線上英語(yǔ)寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流的郵件；2021年則是因故不能赴約的道歉郵件并提出建議。這些題型均要求學(xué)生熟悉不同應(yīng)用文體的格式和規(guī)范，準(zhǔn)確傳達(dá)寫作目的。2.融入跨文化交流：多次涉及中外學(xué)生交流的場(chǎng)景，學(xué)生需用英語(yǔ)與外國(guó)友人溝通交流，如給外國(guó)好友Jim提建議、策劃活動(dòng)、邀請(qǐng)其分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)等。此類題目旨在考查學(xué)生在跨文化背景下的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力和交際禮儀，需注意中西方文化差異，恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)和想法。3.貼近時(shí)代與生活：選題緊扣時(shí)代脈搏和社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)，緊密聯(lián)系學(xué)生實(shí)際生活。如2024年新中國(guó)成立75周年的中國(guó)發(fā)展成就、2023年的“綠色北京”主題活動(dòng)、2020年因疫情導(dǎo)致的線上學(xué)習(xí)及教師推薦等。這體現(xiàn)了高考對(duì)時(shí)代性的關(guān)注，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)對(duì)社會(huì)、生活現(xiàn)象的認(rèn)知與思考，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的家國(guó)情懷和社會(huì)責(zé)任感。二、寫作話題1.校園生活與成長(zhǎng)：涉及校園活動(dòng)策劃、學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享、校園建設(shè)等方面，如英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)社招募、演講比賽、成人儀式等話題。這類話題旨在考查學(xué)生對(duì)校園生活的觀察與思考，以及在校園集體生活中的溝通與表達(dá)能力，促進(jìn)學(xué)生關(guān)注自身成長(zhǎng)發(fā)展和校園文化建設(shè)。2.社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)與文化傳承：聚焦社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，如環(huán)保、科技、文化傳承等，融入如“綠水青山就是金山銀山”理念、傳統(tǒng)文化推廣、科技創(chuàng)新等元素。這引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注社會(huì)發(fā)展動(dòng)態(tài)，思考個(gè)人與社會(huì)、國(guó)家、世界的關(guān)系，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的社會(huì)責(zé)任感、文化自信和國(guó)際視野，增強(qiáng)運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)對(duì)社會(huì)問(wèn)題和文化現(xiàn)象見(jiàn)解的能力。3.個(gè)人興趣與愛(ài)好：圍繞個(gè)人特長(zhǎng)、愛(ài)好等展開(kāi)，如體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、藝術(shù)才藝、閱讀寫作等領(lǐng)域，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生分享個(gè)人興趣故事，表達(dá)對(duì)興趣愛(ài)好的熱愛(ài)與堅(jiān)持。此類話題有助于激發(fā)學(xué)生的寫作動(dòng)力，展現(xiàn)獨(dú)特的個(gè)性魅力和情感體驗(yàn)，同時(shí)考查學(xué)生圍繞個(gè)人興趣進(jìn)行深入思考和有條理表達(dá)的能力。高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文寫作是考查學(xué)生綜合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力的重要部分，尤其是全國(guó)卷1的命題趨勢(shì)，越來(lái)越注重對(duì)學(xué)生核心素養(yǎng)的考查。以下是針對(duì)歷年高考英語(yǔ)全國(guó)卷1應(yīng)用文寫作的備考建議，從作文話題選材和不同體裁的高效訓(xùn)練兩個(gè)方面展開(kāi)。一）應(yīng)用文寫作的話題選材根據(jù)近幾年北京高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)可知其話題選材具有以下特點(diǎn)：1.個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)與校園生活：個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷：聚焦學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)、生活中的成長(zhǎng)故事，如挑戰(zhàn)困難、培養(yǎng)習(xí)慣等。如2021年要求學(xué)生寫郵件給外國(guó)好友Jim表達(dá)因故不能赴約的歉意并提出建議，涉及個(gè)人計(jì)劃安排與應(yīng)對(duì)變化。校園活動(dòng)參與：圍繞校園內(nèi)的各類活動(dòng)展開(kāi)，像運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、藝術(shù)節(jié)、社團(tuán)活動(dòng)等。例如2020年英語(yǔ)戲劇俱樂(lè)部外籍指導(dǎo)教師因疫情滯留英國(guó)，要求學(xué)生寫郵件推薦新教師，體現(xiàn)了學(xué)生對(duì)校園社團(tuán)活動(dòng)的參與和維護(hù)。2.社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)與時(shí)代精神：社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)關(guān)注：貼近當(dāng)下社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)。如2024年新中國(guó)成立75周年，要求學(xué)生給外國(guó)好友Jim提供建議介紹中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就，涵蓋經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)、科技進(jìn)步、環(huán)保成就等熱點(diǎn)領(lǐng)域。時(shí)代精神彰顯：體現(xiàn)積極向上的時(shí)代精神，如環(huán)保意識(shí)、科技創(chuàng)新等。如2023年要求學(xué)生給Jim寫郵件建議其策劃“綠色北京”主題活動(dòng)，突出了環(huán)保這一時(shí)代主題。3.跨文化交流與國(guó)際視野：中外文化交流：涉及中外學(xué)生之間的交流互動(dòng)，如邀請(qǐng)外國(guó)學(xué)生參加活動(dòng)、分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)等。如2022年要求學(xué)生邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)好友Jim做線上英語(yǔ)寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流，促進(jìn)了中外學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享。國(guó)際視野拓展：引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注國(guó)際事務(wù)，培養(yǎng)國(guó)際視野。如2024年要求學(xué)生給外國(guó)好友Jim提供建議介紹中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就，學(xué)生需要用英語(yǔ)向世界展示中國(guó)形象，這體現(xiàn)了用英語(yǔ)作為橋梁溝通中國(guó)與世界的意圖。二)不同體裁的高效訓(xùn)練1.邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)信多為宴會(huì)，比賽，展覽等活動(dòng)的邀請(qǐng)信件，要求敘事清楚明白。其主要包含三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：1.表明意圖，即邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加活動(dòng)以及邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方的原因；2.介紹活動(dòng)的相關(guān)具體內(nèi)容；3.期待對(duì)方接受邀請(qǐng)1. 開(kāi)篇表明寫信目的及原因Asastudentwhoadmiresyou,Iamwritingthislettertoinviteyoutogoto…on….Hearingthatmyschoolisscheduledtoholda…,I’mwritingtosincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinthisevent.Knowingthatyouhaveafancyfor/youarekeenon…,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutocometo…(活動(dòng)),(which…/whosethemeis…)(如有需要，后面可用定語(yǔ)從句對(duì)活動(dòng)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明)Onbehalfof…,I‘mwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeatour…I’mmorethandelightedtowritetosincerelyinviteyouto……2. 說(shuō)明活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)以及內(nèi)容等信息This…willtakeplace/willbeheld/started+時(shí)間+地點(diǎn),(whichwilllastabout…)The…willcelebrate+活動(dòng)+地點(diǎn)+日期(anditisexpectedtolastfrom…to…)…willfallonJanuary8th,andthatdayisnextWednesdaywhenyoucancometo…Duringthevisit,wewilllearnabundantinformationabout…We’llbehavinga…afterwhichweareto…What’smore,wewillhaveachancetoappreciate…,whichisaverygoodchanceto…(獲得的好處或能學(xué)習(xí)到的內(nèi)容).Thisactivityisgreatlyimportant/ofgreatimportance,throughwhichyoucanknowmoreabout…(與活動(dòng)相關(guān)的內(nèi)容)Variousactivitiesareavailableinaddingflavortothe…Everythingwilloverflowwithhappinessthen.Ibelieveitwillbeanenjoyableexperienceforyoutolearn…AndIbetyouwillbeimpressedby…itwouldbeagreatpleasureformetokeepyoucompany.…3. 最后表達(dá)期待Iwillbegratefulifyoutakemyinvitationseriously.Iknowyou’reinterestedin…,sowhynotjoinusandhaveagoodtime?Istronglyhopeyoucanhaveatryandthe…willneverdisappointyou.(Isincerelyhopeyoucansparesometimeand)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.(Thankyouinadvanceandwishyouallthebest.)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.Ihopeyouwillacceptmyinvitationifitisconvenientforyou.Shouldyougo(如果你去的話),Iwillbookaticketforyouinadvance/Iwillpickyouupat…Willyoubeavailableduringthattime?Pleasecontactmeat…atyourearliestconvenience.…2.申請(qǐng)信申請(qǐng)信用于向單位或組織提出請(qǐng)求或申請(qǐng)。申請(qǐng)信語(yǔ)氣要誠(chéng)摯友好，其寫作步驟為：1.介紹自己，簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明信息來(lái)源并提出申請(qǐng)；2.突出自己的特點(diǎn)，具體說(shuō)明勝任的理由；3.請(qǐng)求給予機(jī)會(huì)，期望盡快回復(fù)。首段介紹及提出申請(qǐng)Hearingyouarelookingforvolunteersforthecoming…,Ican’twaittowritetoapplytobeavolunteer.I’mmorethanhappytolearnfrom…(信息來(lái)源)that…AndI’manxiousforthechance.I’mgladtoseeyouradvertisementontheinternet.Willingtobe…,I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.Knowingfrom…thatyouarerecruiting…,I’mwritingtoapplyfortheveryposition.Iamwritingtoapplytojoininyour…,astheideaisappealingtome.…說(shuō)明自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)或能勝任的理由IamsureIcanbeaqualifiedmember.Equippedwith…,Ihaveenoughconfidenceinapplyingfortheposition.IbelieveIamequaltothejob.NotonlycanI…,butIalsohaveamplefaithinmycompetencein…,(whichmaybeasatisfyingadvantageoverothers.)Iamfamiliarwithcomputeroperationandofficesoftware,whichcanhelpmedo/enablemetodotheofficeworkverywell.IhavebeenlearningEnglishfor10years,andIspeakfluentEnglish/IcanspeakEnglishwithgreatfluency/myoralEnglishisgoodenoughtocommunicatewithforeignersfluently.Ihaveagoodknowledgeof…Apartfromthat,Iamanexpertat…Foronething,Idowellin…Foranother,Itookpartinmany…inwhichIperformedwellandgainedrichexperience.Myinterestandskillin…contributestomyapplicationforavolunteer.Havingbeenlearningfor…,Ihaveagoodcommandof…Ihaveparticipatedinseveralsimilaractivities,whichequippedmewithrelevantexperience/skills.Therefore,Ithink/anconvincedI’mqualifiedtoserveinthe……請(qǐng)求給予機(jī)會(huì)Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeapreciousopportunitytoaninterview./myapplicationcouldmeetwithyourapproval.Iwouldbeverygrateful/obligedifyoucouldsendmemoreinformationaboutthepostavailable.Wouldyoupleasesendmethenecessaryapplicationformsandanyfurtherdetailsabout…?Isincerelyhopethatmyapplicationcouldbeconsidered.Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunity.ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Ifyourequiremoreinformation,pleasefeelfreetocontactme.IfIamaccepted,Iwillactasabridgebetween…andsparenoeffortsto…WiththeexperienceI’veaccumulated,Iamconfidenttoliveuptoyourexpectations.…3.求助信求助信是當(dāng)個(gè)人遇到一些自己無(wú)法解決的問(wèn)題或困難時(shí)向別人請(qǐng)求幫助的一種書信，內(nèi)容通常包括：1.表明寫信目的，請(qǐng)求幫助；2.清晰陳述請(qǐng)求幫助的內(nèi)容；3.希望得到幫助，并向收信人表示感謝。簡(jiǎn)單自我介紹；表明寫信目的I’mwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor/givemeahand.SorrytobotheryoubutIreallygetsometrouble/problemsrecently.Facedwith/facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.AsI’vegainedanopportunityto…/Havingacquiredapreciouschanceto…,I’mwritingtoaskforyourassistance/seekforyouradvice.Ihopeyouwillnotmindmewritingtoaskifyouareavailabletooffermesomeguidance,as……陳述請(qǐng)求幫助的內(nèi)容Ifacethechoicebetween…and…I’mfacingthreeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith,…What’smore/worse/Worsestill,…Whattroublesmemostis…Eversincelastmonth,mymotherhasn’tallowedmeto…Inheropinion,…However,Idon’tagreewithher.…Last…,Ihaveanargumentwithmybestfriendandwehaven’ttalkedtoeachothersincethen.Recently,I…(最近在做的事兒).Findingit…(事情的特點(diǎn)，可好可壞；如果是好的特點(diǎn)，可以在句中加入however),Iamhavingproblemswith…,(whichmakesmefeelanxious.)…(陳述情況).So,I’mwonderingwhetheryoucould…(提出具體需要的幫助)Ihopeyoucouldsparemesometimeto…Andsomeguidanceon…isbadlyneededaswell.Thisbeingmyfirsttimeto…IamsoexcitedandnervousthatIcan’ttakeallthingsintoaccount.Thus,ifyouwouldgivemesomesuggestionson…,Iwouldappreciateitdeeply.Facedwiththissituation,whatshouldIdo?…希望得到幫助Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxious/longing/desperateforyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceon…?Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.Nowordsarestrongenoughtoconveymyappreciationifyoucouldoffermeahand.ThanksforyourkindconsiderationandIamlookingforwardtoreceivingyourearliestreply.Thanksforyourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,donothesitatetocontactme.Iamlookingforwardtoafavorablereply.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpmesolvemyproblem.Yourearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.Iwillbemorethanhappyifyoucancometomyaid.Yourtimelyhelpwillbehighlyappreciated.…4.建議信建議信是寫信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出建議和忠告的一種應(yīng)用文形式，有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。建議信要交代清楚寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由(提出的理由要合情合理，用語(yǔ)禮貌)。建議信要寫的簡(jiǎn)明扼要，目的明確，具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。首段：表明寫作意圖：(簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己)陳述事由I’mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceon…I’msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtrouble…Suchproblemsarequiteno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道歉并請(qǐng)求對(duì)方原諒的信件。步驟如下：1.表明寫信意圖，對(duì)某事表示歉意；2.說(shuō)明道歉的具體原因；3.提供補(bǔ)救措施，請(qǐng)求收信人原諒表明寫作意圖IamwritingthislettertoapologizeforthemistakeImadein…Iexpressmyregretatbeingunableto…IamindeedverysorryforwhatIdid/said,butpleasebelieveIhadnointentionto…Muchtomyregret/IamterriblysorrythatIamunableto…I’mwritingthislettertomakeanapologytoyoubecauseIcan’tgoto…asplanned.I’mdeeplysorrybutIhavetoletyouknowthat…I’mexpressingmydeepestapologyformycarelessness.Iwritingtoaskyoutoexcusemefornotbeingabletokeepourappointment.Idoknowthatthisisveryimpoliteandmusthavecausedyoumuchtrouble.IfeelextremelysorrythatIhavetobeabsentfrom…,whichIoncepromisedforspecialreasons.…說(shuō)明具體原因無(wú)法參加某活動(dòng)或不能赴約等=1\*GB3①臨時(shí)有事不能參加(通知考試/家人回國(guó)需要接機(jī)/…)(強(qiáng)調(diào)事件對(duì)自己的重要性)=1\*romani.ItismainlybecauseatthattimeIwillbefullyoccupiedby…,whichisquiteoutofmyexpectation,andthatconflictswith…=2\*romanii.Iamforcedtoadjustmyscheduleandcan’tmakepresenceon…=3\*romaniii.ThismorningmyEnglishteachertoldmethatIwaschosentorepresentourschooltotakepartinthe…Asyouknow,Ilike…verymuch,andthereforeItreasurethischancealot./itisofcrucialsignificancetome=4\*romaniv.MyuncleisreturninghomefromFrance,andIhavetopickhimupattheairportat…tomorrowafternoon(時(shí)間可根據(jù)要求調(diào)整)=2\*GB3②自己生病(比較嚴(yán)重，醫(yī)生囑咐要休息幾天)(強(qiáng)調(diào)具體癥狀及醫(yī)生囑咐)=3\*GB3③家人生病(一位家人生病，其余家人忙于工作或出差不在家等)(強(qiáng)調(diào)自己別無(wú)選擇)=1\*romani.Butnow,muchtomyregretthatImaynotbeabletokeepmypromisebecausemysisterwasinjuredinacaraccident.=2\*romanii.Imustlookafterherinthehospitalforseveraldaysgiventhatallmyfamilyarenowbusydealingwiththeaccidentwhichhappenedsuddenly.=4\*GB3④其他人生病(自己送病人去醫(yī)院，用于過(guò)去的事件)(自己需要代替病人完成某事，用于未發(fā)生事件)=1\*romani.Butthepersonwhowasoriginallyappointedtoitisnowseriouslyillinhospital.=2\*romanii.Ihavebeenaskedtotakehis/herplacetoattendthe…=3\*romaniii.Idoreckonthatatpresentanyexplanationispaleandfutile.However,onmywaytomeetyou,anoldladysuddenlyfaintedduetoheartattackonthebus.=4\*romaniv.Isentherintoanearbyhospitalandstayedthereuntilhersoncame,whichspoiledourappointment.打壞物品或弄丟東西=1\*GB3①因?yàn)橄胍謇?仔細(xì)觀看等原因不小心摔壞Eg.Ioccasionallyfoundthefaceofthe…wasdirtywhensweepingthefloor,soItookitdownandcleanitwithapieceofsoftcloth.Unexpectedly,whenIputitbackwhereitwas,itfelloffanddroppedontotheground.=2\*GB3②由于著急忘在別處，且無(wú)法找回Eg.IlikeitsomuchthatItookitwhereverIwent.Unfortunately,theotherdayduringthetripto…IwasinsuchahurrytogetoffthetrainthatIforgottoputitbackinmybag.=3\*GB3③小心放置，但被偷，且無(wú)法找回Eg.Iputitinmyschoolbagafterwemetyesterday.Butitissadthatitwasstolenonmywayhome.Itriedtogetitbackbutfailed.HowangryandguiltyIfelt!其他Owingto…,I’munabletosparetimeto…asscheduled.ThereasonwhyIcan’tkeepmypromiseisthat…Whattroublesmeisthat…whichledtomyabsence.It’sapitythat…Asaresult,Ihavenochoicebutto……提供補(bǔ)救措施，尋求原諒Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersometimenextweek?IsitpossiblethatImakeupthelossby…?Ifso,Iwill…Maybewecanfixanothertimeto…aslongasyouareavailable.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfrommybottomofmyheart.Willyoubeavailableon…oryoucantellmewhenitisconvenientforyou.IpromisethatIwilltightenmybeltthesedaystogetyouacompletelynewonebytheendofthismonth.IamreallysorryforallthetroubleandinconvenienceIhavecaused.…6.感謝信感謝信是指在日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，當(dāng)接受饋贈(zèng)，邀請(qǐng)，照顧，慰問(wèn)，祝賀后，給對(duì)方道謝的信件。感謝信應(yīng)寫的真誠(chéng)，具體，及時(shí)。內(nèi)容通常包括：1.表明寫信原因；2.給出感謝的原因和細(xì)節(jié)；3.再次致謝。表明寫信原因I’mwritingtoextend/express/conveymysincere/heartfeltgratitudefor…(感謝的原因)I’mwritingtotellyouthat…Thankstoyour…,I…I’mwritingthislettertothankyoufor…I’dliketotakethisopportunityt