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讀后續(xù)寫匯報人：目錄壹讀原文找三主兩線貳讀首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展叁列大綱

12句構(gòu)情節(jié)肆做升級

擴句子格調(diào)伍看成果

仿優(yōu)秀行文讀原文找三主兩線章節(jié)副標(biāo)題壹ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.lhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf,ltoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.Themomentlgotofftheplane,lranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenlmetGunter.ltoldhimwherelwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.lthoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,solexplainedagainmoreslowlybuthestilllookedconfused.Whenlwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.真題原文01Finally,withjusttwominutestospare,werolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus,Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit.”hesaid.JustthenlrealizedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.lflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.Afeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeaslsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.ljumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.

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找三主兩線主題語境人與社會-和諧人際關(guān)系&人與自我-優(yōu)秀品行主要人物Gunter--awarm-heartedtaxidriver&I主題思想

人與人之間相互信任，互相幫助明線（故事線）Duetoabigstorm,myflighttoViennahadbeendelayed,InordertocatchthelastbustoPrague,IjumpedintoataxiinahurryandmetthedriverGunter,whowaswarm-heartdandgavemeabighand.暗線（情感線）I-worried(theflighthadbeendelayed)-flustered(gotoff...ranlikecrazy...jumpedinthefirstcar)-apologetic(hashadzerocash)-helplessness(thebusqueuethinningout)-？Gunter-confused(had’theardofthebusstation)-obliging(rangupafriend)-？01n.特點

（adj./v./短語）角色1Gunterawarm-heartedtaxidriver

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背景事件IjumpedintoataxiinahurryandmetthedriverGunter,whowaswarm-heartdandgavemeabighand.微情節(jié)

動作(v.)/情緒(adj.)

l

toldhimwherelwasgoing,buthelookedconfused.(p2)Whenl

wasabouttogiveup,Gunterrangupafriendforhelpandsentmetothedestinationsuccessfully.(p2-3)l

realizedthatIhadzerocashinmywalletandafeelingofhelplessnesswashedoverme.(p4)GunterpointedtowardsacashmachineandImadeamadrunforthemachine,butfailedtotakecashout.(p5)讀首句定情節(jié)發(fā)展章節(jié)副標(biāo)題貳Paragraph1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews._______________________________________________________Paragraph2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,lcalledGunteraspromised._______________________________________________________IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.1,Thebadnewsandmyfeeling:2,Ihadtoleaveandtriedtoexplain:3.Leavethephonenumberandmadeapromise:4、Gunter'sresponseandmyfeeling:

5、Caughtthebusandleave:

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定情節(jié)發(fā)展02ThemachinewasoutoforderandIfeltfullofapologies

IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I'lbelatefortheconference."MayIhaveyourphonenumber?IwillcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmyword.Hewrotedownhisphonenumberandgaveittome.Afeelingofgratitudewashedoverme.Ijumpedontothebusjustbeforeitsdeparture.

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定情節(jié)發(fā)展Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,lcalledGunteraspromised.

021.Agreeontimeandplace:2.Ourreactionsandconversations:3.Theending:4.Lesson:Wemetatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.IgavehimabighugthemomentIsawhim.Itoldhimthatthankstohisgenerosityandtimelyhelp.IpaidhimthefeeandIalsogavehiman

extra$10tip,Gunterrefused.warm-hearted,kindness列大綱12句構(gòu)情節(jié)章節(jié)副標(biāo)題叁

列大綱

兩段12句法

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2）3）4）5）6）7）

8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句話中，有哪幾句是固定內(nèi)容？

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,lcalledGunteraspromised.

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列大綱：兩段12句法1）固定

2）3）4）5）6）固定

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）固定

結(jié)局/升華主旨續(xù)寫首段首句續(xù)寫二段首句承接首段首句IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,lcalledGunteraspromised.

03IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,lcalledGunteraspromised.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）

2）3）4）5）6）

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）

Kindnessmakesabigdifference.Whatwasthebadnews?GunterknewIwouldcall.Ileftwithoutpaying.Gunteragreed.Ifeltmoved.Iwrotehisnumberdown.Ipromisedtopayhimback.Weappointedtomeet.Iofferedanextra$10tip.Gunterrefusedthetip.Iappreciateit.03做升級擴句子格調(diào)章節(jié)副標(biāo)題肆

出其不意用新招

招招升級

例句翻譯：（1）“Sorry,Ican’ttakecashout.”Isaidembarrassedly,withmyfaceburning.（2）Hearingmywords,Gunterrepliedwiththefamiliarsmileonhisface.招式1：

非謂語動詞常用句式：

①Doing...,.....

②with+n+doing/done/todo

③...,doing...

04”對不起，銀行的取款機壞了，我拿不出來現(xiàn)金?！拔覍擂蔚亟忉尩?，臉上火辣辣的。聽到我的話，Gunter帶著熟悉的笑容回應(yīng)我。

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招式2：無靈主語

①aflood/waveof+（情緒類）n.seized/welledup/cameoversb.②

無靈主語（表示時間、地點的名詞）+有靈動詞（see/witness）

04當(dāng)我聽到他的話，一種感激之情油然而生。例句翻譯：AfeelingofgratitudewashedovermeasIheardhiswords.

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招式3：使用動作鏈

動作A+動作B，and動作C

將籠統(tǒng)的大動作拆解成具體的小動作，畫面感十足

04我堅定的和他握手，然后跳下車，瘋狂的向公共汽車跑去，在公共汽車從出發(fā)前跳了上去。例句翻譯：Givinghimafirmhandshake,Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthebus,andjumpedontoitjustbeforeitsdeparture.（2）ItwasatthattimethatIrealizedthatasmallkindnessactioncouldmakesuchabigdifference!

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招式4：使用結(jié)構(gòu)句式

（1）倒裝句so...that...（2）強調(diào)句式：Itwas...that..

04例句翻譯：（1）SosurprisedandmovedwasIthatIcouldn’tsayawordout我如此驚訝和感動，以至于一句話也說不出來。(2)ItwasatthattimethatIrealizedthatsmallkindnessmakesadifference知道那是我才意識到小小善舉影響深遠(yuǎn)?？闯晒聝?yōu)秀行文章節(jié)副標(biāo)題伍看成文

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IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.“Sorry,Ican’ttakecashout.”Isaidembarrassedly,withmyfaceburning.Hearingmywords,Gunterrepliedwiththefamiliarsmileonhisface,“That’sOK,justgoahead,youcanpaymeatyourconvenience.”SosurprisedandmovedwasIthatIcouldn’tsayawordout.Asthebusqueuebecameshorter,Gunterpointedtowarditandsaidtome,“Itisyourturn.”Realizingitwastimetoleave,Itookoutmynotebook,askedGunter’s