讀后續(xù)寫-超越名次的勝利：從體育困境到自我突破的成長之路 講義-2025屆甘肅省白銀市靖遠(yuǎn)縣第二中學(xué)高三下學(xué)期二模英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinelementaryschool,Iwasn’tverygoodatsports.Iwasalwaysthelasttobepickedforteams,andIneverwonarace.Ithoughtbeingslowandweakmademeafailure.Butoneday,myP.E.teacher,MrHarris,saidsomethingthatchangedmymind.Hehadbeenwatchingmestruggleduringarunningdrill,andaftertheclass,hecameovertotalktome.“Youmaynotbethefastest,”hesaid,“butyouhavesomethingevenmoreimportant.Youdon’tgiveup.”Ididn’treallyunderstandwhathemeantatthetime.Howcouldnotquittingbebetterthanwinning?Inmymind,ifyouweren’tfirst,thenyoulost.ButMrHarriskeptencouragingme.Hetoldmethatwinningwasn’teverythingandthatsometimestryinghardandnotgivingupwasevenmorevaluable.Atfirst,Ididn’tbelievehim,butthenhesuggestedIstartpracticingalittleeverydayafterschool.“Don’tfocusonbecomingthefastest,”hesaid.“Justfocusonimproving,evenifit’salittlebiteachday.”Idecidedtogiveitatry,althoughIwasn’tsureitwouldmakeadifference.Ibeganrunningaroundthetrackafterschool,onelap,thentwo,slowlyincreasingmyendurance.Overthenextfewweeks,Inoticedsmallchanges.Icouldrunlongerwithoutgettingtired,andIwasimproving,evenifIwasn’twinningyet.Astheschool’sannualracedayapproached,IwonderedifIshouldsignup.Istillwasn’tfastenoughtowin,butMrHarrisencouragedmeoncemore.“Theraceisn’taboutbeingfirst,”heremindedme.“It’saboutshowingwhatyoucandowhenyoudon’tgiveup.That’srealsuccess.”注意：(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；(2)請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewdayslater,Isignedupfortherace._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertherace,IwenttoseeMrHarris._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________續(xù)寫分析第一段“Afewdayslater,Isignedupfortherace.”續(xù)寫分析：此段應(yīng)圍繞“我”報名參賽后的經(jīng)歷展開。比賽當(dāng)天，可描寫“我”緊張又期待的心情，通過對賽場氛圍的刻畫，如觀眾的歡呼聲、其他選手的自信姿態(tài)，凸顯“我”的不安。發(fā)令槍響后，起初“我”可能處于落后位置，但在跑步過程中，不斷回憶起哈里斯老師的鼓勵，憑借著不放棄的信念，一步一步堅持向前，超越一個又一個對手，盡管最終不一定獲得第一名，但完成比賽就是勝利，以此展現(xiàn)“我”對老師教導(dǎo)的踐行和自我突破。第二段“Aftertherace,IwenttoseeMrHarris.”續(xù)寫分析：這一段聚焦于賽后“我”與哈里斯老師的交流。“我”見到老師時，內(nèi)心充滿感激，可能激動地向老師講述比賽過程中自己的心理活動和堅持的過程。老師會對“我”的表現(xiàn)給予肯定和贊揚，強調(diào)“我”真正理解了成功的含義，不僅僅是贏得比賽，更是永不言棄的精神。在對話中，“我”也會深刻領(lǐng)悟到老師話語的真諦，明白這種精神將對自己未來的學(xué)習(xí)和生活產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)影響，進(jìn)一步升華主題。故事線自我突破線：“我”從對體育缺乏自信、認(rèn)為自己是失敗者，在哈里斯老師的鼓勵下，堅持訓(xùn)練并報名參賽。比賽中，克服內(nèi)心恐懼和外界壓力，實現(xiàn)自我突破，完成比賽，證明自己的價值。師生情誼線：哈里斯老師敏銳察覺到“我”的困境，用鼓勵的話語和切實的建議給予“我”力量。在“我”參賽前后，老師始終陪伴和支持，賽后的交流更深化了這份師生之間的信任與情誼。成功定義線：通過老師的引導(dǎo)和自己的親身經(jīng)歷，“我”對成功的認(rèn)知發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變，從單純追求比賽名次，到明白永不言棄、盡力而為才是真正的成功，這一理念的轉(zhuǎn)變貫穿整個故事。信念傳承線：比賽中“我”憑借老師傳遞的“不放棄”信念堅持下來，賽后“我”也將帶著這份信念面對未來的挑戰(zhàn)，暗示這種積極的信念將在“我”的生活中不斷傳承和延續(xù)。短語befilledwithnervousness（充滿緊張）、feelasenseofexcitement（感到興奮）、overcomefear（克服恐懼）、bedeterminedtodosth.（決心做某事）、befilledwithgratitude（充滿感激）比賽相關(guān)：signupfortherace（報名參加比賽）、thestartinggungoesoff（發(fā)令槍響）、keepupthepace（保持速度）、fallbehind（落后）、catchupwith（趕上）encouragesb.todosth.（鼓勵某人做某事）、nevergiveup（永不放棄）、keeppracticing（堅持練習(xí)）、makeprogress（取得進(jìn)步）、showone’sdetermination（展現(xiàn)某人的決心）crossthefinishline（沖過終點線）、realizethetruemeaningofsuccess（領(lǐng)悟成功的真正含義）、haveaprofoundimpacton（對……產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)影響）、passonthebelief（傳遞信念）、learnavaluablelesson（學(xué)到寶貴的一課）主旨升華句成功的光芒，往往閃耀在永不言棄的堅持里，超越名次的束縛，綻放出屬于自己的獨特光彩。

Theradianceofsuccessoftenshinesintheunwaveringperseverance,transcendingtheconstraintsofrankingsandbloomingwithitsownuniquebrilliance.人生賽道上，真正的勝利不是超越他人，而是戰(zhàn)勝內(nèi)心的怯懦，以堅定的信念跑完屬于自己的征程。

Onthetrackoflife,thetruevictoryisnotaboutsurpassingothersbutaboutconqueringtheinnerfearandcompletingone'sownjourneywithasteadfastbelief.老師的鼓勵如同一盞明燈，照亮前行的道路，而永不言棄的精神則是指引方向的羅盤，帶領(lǐng)我們駛向成功的彼岸。

Ateacher'sencouragementislikeabrightlampthatilluminatesthepathahead,whilethespiritofnevergivingupisthecompassthatguidesustotheothersideofsuccess.每一次堅持的腳步，都是對自我的超越；每一份不放棄的信念，都在書寫屬于自己的輝煌篇章。

Everystepofperseveranceisaself-transcendence;everybeliefofnevergivingupiswritingone'sowngloriouschapter.比賽的終點不是結(jié)局，而是新的起點，帶著永不言棄的精神，我們將在人生的舞臺上創(chuàng)造更多奇跡。

Thefinishlineofaraceisnottheendbutanewbeginning.Withthespiritofnevergivingup,wewillcreatemoremiraclesonthestageoflife.寫作示范寫作示范一Afewdayslater,Isignedupfortherace.Asthedayoftheracearrived,myheartwasfilledwithnervousness.Standingatthestartingline,Ilookedaroundattheotherconfident-lookingrunnersandfeltaknotinmystomach.Whenthestartinggunwentoff,Iwasimmediatelyleftbehind.ButIrememberedMrHarris’swordsanddecidednottogiveup.Ikeptmypace,slowlybutsteadily.AsIran,Isawsomerunnerswhohadstartedfastbegintoslowdown.Ikeptpushingforward,andonebyone,Istartedtocatchupwiththem.Finally,Icrossedthefinishline,exhaustedbutwithahugesenseofpride.Ididn'twinfirstplace,butIhaddonemybest.

Aftertherace,IwenttoseeMrHarris.Hiseyeslitupwhenhesawme.“Youdidit!”heexclaimed.ItoldhimhowIhadthoughtofhiswordsduringtheraceandhowtheyhadgivenmethestrengthtokeepgoing.MrHarrissmiledandsaid,“You'veshownthattruesuccessisn'taboutbeingthefastest.It’saboutnevergivingup,andyou'vedoneexactlythat.Thisspiritwillserveyouwellineverythingyoudo.”Inodded,finallyunderstandingtherealmeaningofsuccess.Fromthatdayon,Icarriedthisvaluablelessonwithmeinallaspectsofmylife.寫作示范二Afewdayslater,Isignedupfortherace.Ontheraceday,thestadiumwasfilledwithcheeringspectators.AsIstoodamongtheothercompetitors,myhandswereshakingwithanxiety.Whenthestartingsignalsounded,thecrowdroared,andeveryonerushedforward.Ifellbehindrightaway,butIdidn'tpanic.Ifocusedonmybreathingandkeptrunning.Mylegsfeltheavy,andmylungsburned,butIrefusedtostop.IthoughtaboutallthedaysIhadspentpracticingafterschool,andthatgavemethedeterminationtokeepgoing.AsInearedthefinishline,Icouldhearmyclassmatescheeringforme.Withafinalburstofenergy,Icrossedtheline,collapsingtotheground,butwithahugesmileonmyface.

Aftertherace,IwenttoseeMrHarris.Hegavemeabighugandsaid,“I'msoproudofyou!”IsharedwithhimhowscaredIhadbeenatthestartbuthowhisencouragementhadhelpedmestaystrong.MrHarrissaid,“You'veproventhatyou'reawinner,notbecauseofwhereyouplaced,butbecauseofyourcourageandperseverance.Thisexperiencewillteachyouthatinlife,it’snotaboutalwayscomingoutontop,butaboutnevergivingupinthefaceofchallenges.”Ilistenedintently,knowingthatthesewordswouldstaywithmeforever.寫作示范三Afewdayslater,Isignedupfortherace.ThemomentIsteppedontothetrack,awaveofexcitementmixedwithfearwashedoverme.Theotherrunnersseemedsofastandconfident,butIremindedmyselfofMrHarris’swords.Whentheracestarted,Iwasatthebackofthepack.However,Ididn'tletthatdiscourageme.Ifocusedonmyownrhythm,runningsteadily.AsIpassedthehalfwaymark,somerunnersstartedtotireandslowdown.Ikeptmypaceandbegantoovertakeafewofthem.Thelastlapwasthetoughest,butIcouldhearMrHarrisshoutingwordsofencouragementfromthesidelines.Withallmymight,Isprintedtowardsthefinishlineandcrossedit,feelingasenseofachievementlikeneverbefore.

Aftertherace,IwenttoseeMrHarris.Hewasbeamingwithpride.“Youshowedeveryonewhatyou'remadeof!”hesaid.ItoldhimhowcloseIhadcometogivingupseveraltimes,buthisbeliefinmehadkeptmegoing.MrHarrisreplied,“Successismeasuredbytheeffortyouputinandthedeterminationyoushow,notbythepositionyoufinishin.You'velearnedalessontodaythatwillstaywithyouforalifetime-thepowerofperseverance.”Ismiled,gratefulforhisguidanceandthenewfoundconfidenceIhadgained.寫作示范四Afewdayslater,Isignedupfortherace.Onthatimportantday,theatmospherewaselectric.AsItookmyplaceatthestartingline,mymindwasfilledwithamixofemotions.Whenthestartingguncracked,IstartedrunningasfastasIcould,butsoon,Iwasleftinthedustbythefasterrunners.Ifeltamomentofdespair,butthenIrememberedMrHarris’swords.Itoldmyselftokeepgoing,nomatterwhat.Iranandran,mylegsachingandmybreathragged.AsIroundedthefinalbend,Isawthefinishlineinthedistance.Withafinalpush,Icrossedit,completelyexhaustedbutwithaheartfullofjoy.

Aftertherace,IwenttoseeMrHarris.Hehuggedmetightlyandsaid,“You'reachampioninmyeyes!”IsharedwithhimhowIhadalmostgivenupseveraltimesbuthowhisencouragementhadbeenmydrivingforce.MrHarrissaid,“You'veshownthatthemostimportantthinginlifeisn'taboutbeingthebest,butaboutbeingyourbestandnevergivingup.Thisspiritwilltakeyoufarinlife.”Inodded,understandingthatthisracehadbeenmorethanjustaphysicalchallenge-ithadbeenajourneyofself-disco