專題09 未來與規(guī)劃-備戰(zhàn)2022年上海中考英語書面表達(dá)滿分攻略（解析版）

（一）（2021年崇明區(qū)二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Inthreeyears’time”（以“三年以后”為題寫一遍不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)定符合不占格。）你是否想象過，三年以后你的生活或者周圍的世界會發(fā)生產(chǎn)怎樣的變化？你對三年以后的自己周圍的世界有怎樣的期待？你能為此做些什么？（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何校名、人名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Inthreeyears’timeThereisnodenyingthattheworldischangingfast.Idobelievethatmylifewillbedifferentinthreeyears'time.Ononehand,itwillbemoreconvenient,wecanstudyathome.Whetherwegotoschoolorstayathomedependsonourchoices.Certainly,unlikethelastspecialyear,wehadtostudyonlinebecauseofthevirus.Ontheotherhand,theenvironmentmaybecomeworseespeciallywhitepollution.Sadly,Thenumberofpeoplewholiketothroweverywhereisstillrising.Ihopetheworldwillbemorebeautiful.Toachievethis,Ineedtolearnmoreknowledgeabouthowtoprotecttheenvironment.Callonmorepeopletotakepartinfightingagainstpollution.Onlybyworkingtogetherwillourfuturebebetterin3years.（二）（2019年崇明區(qū)一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic＂Mydreamwillcometrue“（以“我的未來不是夢”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）你對自己的未來一定有美好的夢想：但夢想的實現(xiàn)取決于勤奮、努力等諸多因素。請結(jié)合你自己的夢想，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾问姑缐舫烧?。Thefollowingwordsorphrasesareonlyforreference．（以下詞或短語僅供參考）Mydreamistobe/dowiththehelpetruetakepartinhardworkingrealize（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】MydreamwillcometrueThereisnodoubtthateverypersonhasadream.Somepeoplemaywanttobeasuperstarandothersarewillingtoberichmen.Butmydreamistobeateacherjustlikemymom.Asweallknow,nobodycangainsuccesswithoutcontinuoushardworking.Inordertomakemydreamcometrue,IrealizethatIshouldtakepartinvariouskindsofactivitieswhichareorganizedbymyteacherssothatIcanimprovemyselftosomeextentandmakemyselfaperfectperson.What’smore,IknowthatifIwanttobeateacher,Imustbeapersonwhohasagoodcommandofknowledge.Withthehelpofmymom,Iknowthatnopainsnogains.WheneverandwhereverImeetdifficulties,mymomwillgivemeconfidenceandcourage.Inbrief,inordertorealizemydream,IwillsparenoefforttostudyhardandwhenIhavetroubleandlearnfrommyclassmatesaswellasmyteachers.IfirmlybelievethatIcanmakeit.（三）三年將盡，未來已來，我們?nèi)绾纬蔀楦玫淖约?？請以“ToBeaBetterMan”為題，寫一篇英文短文，從學(xué)習(xí)方法、生活習(xí)慣、交友溝通等方面進(jìn)行描述。寫作要求：1.參考所給提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，語句通順；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、學(xué)校名等個人真實信息；4.短文詞數(shù)在80至120詞之間。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ToBeaBetterManEveryonewantstobebetter.Inordertoimprovemyself,Ihavemadesomeplans.Firstofall,Iwillstudyharder.Iamgoingtolistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandfinishthehouseworkontime.WhenImeetdifficulties,Iwilltrymybesttosolvethem.Second,Iplantopayattentiontomyhealth.Iwilleatmo