七年級下冊 Unit 5作文指導(dǎo)（教師版）

七年級下冊Unit5"HereandNow"寫作課學(xué)案（教師版）一、寫作指導(dǎo)（一）寫作話題主題：描述你或他人正在進(jìn)行的活動（如家庭、學(xué)校、公園等場景）。時態(tài)要求：現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時（am/is/are+V-ing）。常用句型：?Iam.../He/Sheis.../We/Theyare...?Look!...isV-ing...?Rightnow,...areV-ing...（二）寫作素材1.家庭場景?活動：做飯、看電視、打掃、玩游戲等。?例句：It'sSundayevening.Mymotheriscookingdinnerinthekitchen.Myfatheriswatchingthenewsonthesofa.Iamdoingmyhomework,andmylittlesisterisplayingwithhertoys.2.學(xué)校場景?活動：上課、運(yùn)動、午餐時間等。?例句：It's10a.m.WearehavinganEnglishclass.Theteacheriswritingontheblackboard.Somestudentsaretakingnotes,andothersareaskingquestions.3.戶外場景（公園/操場）?活動：散步、運(yùn)動、野餐等。?例句：Thesunisshining.Manypeoplearejogginginthepark.Agroupofchildrenareflyingkites,andtwooldmenareplayingchessunderatree.（三）寫作模板開頭：交代時間、地點(diǎn)、天氣等背景。中間：分句描述不同人物/群體的活動（用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時）。結(jié)尾：總結(jié)感受或場景氛圍。例文：ABusyAfternooninOurSchoolIt's4:30p.m.,andourschoolisfullofenergy!Ontheplayground,somestudentsareplayingfootball.Othersarerunningaroundthetrack.Inthelibrary,afewquietkidsarereadingbooks.Themusicroomisnoisybecausethebandispracticinganewsong.Everyoneisenjoyingtheirtimehere!（四）易錯點(diǎn)：1.漏掉be動詞：?Sheplayingbasketball.?Sheisplayingbasketball.2.動詞未加-ing：?Theyareplaygames.?Theyareplayinggames.3.混淆現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時和一般現(xiàn)在時：?HeusuallyiswatchingTV.（一般現(xiàn)在時表習(xí)慣）?HeiswatchingTVnow.二、綜合訓(xùn)練（一）基礎(chǔ)翻譯練習(xí)（單句）將以下句子翻譯成英語，注意現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時的結(jié)構(gòu)（am/is/are+V-ing）。1.我媽媽正在廚房做飯。→Mymotheriscookinginthekitchen.2.看！那些男孩在操場上踢足球?！鶯ook!Thoseboysareplayingfootballontheplayground.3.現(xiàn)在是晚上7點(diǎn)，我爸爸在看電視?！鶬t’s7p.m.now.MyfatheriswatchingTV.4.不要吵，我的妹妹正在寫作業(yè)。→Don’tmakenoise.Mysisterisdoingherhomework.5.公園里，一些老人在下棋，孩子們在放風(fēng)箏?！鶬nthepark,someoldmenareplayingchess,andthechildrenareflyingkites.（二）進(jìn)階翻譯練習(xí)（復(fù)合句）翻譯時需注意時間狀語、地點(diǎn)狀語和并列動作。1.現(xiàn)在是周末，我和朋友們在商場購物，我的弟弟在家打游戲?！鶬t’stheweekend.MyfriendsandIareshoppingatthemall,andmybrotherisplayinggamesathome.2.教室里，老師正在黑板上寫字，學(xué)生們在記筆記?！鶬ntheclassroom,theteacheriswritingontheblackboard,andthestudentsaretakingnotes.3.天氣很好，許多人在海灘上曬太陽，還有一些人在游泳。→Theweatherisnice.Manypeoplearesunbathingonthebeach,andsomeareswimming.4.午餐時間到了，同學(xué)們在食堂排隊(duì)，有的在聊天，有的在看手機(jī)。→It’slunchtime.Thestudentsareliningupinthecanteen.Somearechatting,andothersarelookingattheirphones.（三）糾錯與解析：以下翻譯有錯誤，請改正并說明原因。1.?Sheislistentomusicnow.?Sheislisteningtomusicnow.→動詞listen必須加-ing（規(guī)則：去e加ing）。2.?Theyareplaybasketballafterschool.?Theyareplayingbasketballafterschool.→現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時需用playing（直接加-ing）。3.?Look!Thebirdsinginthetree.?Look!Thebirdissinginginthetree.→缺少be動詞，且sing需變singing。（四）場景速寫翻譯（小段落）：根據(jù)中文提示，用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時寫一段話（50詞左右）。場景：周末的動物園，游客們正在觀看動物，有的拍照，有的喂食。參考范文：It’sSundaymorning.Manyvisitorsareatthezoo.Somearetakingphotosofthelions,andothersarefeedingthemonkeys.Thechildrenarelaughinghappily.Everyoneishavingagreattime!（五）作文題目（三選一）1.《ABusyMorninginMyHome》（描述家人早晨的活動）2.《WhatAreWeDoingintheClassroom?》（描寫課堂上同學(xué)們正在做的事情）3.《AHappyAfternooninthePark》（描述公園里人們的活動）要求：?使用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時（am/is/are+V-ing）?包含時間、地點(diǎn)、天氣等背景信息?至少5-8個句子，60-80詞左右范文1：《ABusyMorninginMyHome》(描述家人早晨的活動)Itis7:30a.m.onasunnyMondaymorning.Myfamilyisverybusy.Mymotheriscookingbreakfastinthekitchen.Myfatherisreadingthenewspaperanddrinkingcoffee.Mylittlebrotherisbrushinghisteethinthebathroom.IampackingmyschoolbagbecauseIdon’twanttobelate.Everyoneisinahurry,butwearehappy!亮點(diǎn)分析：?時間、天氣背景清晰（7:30a.m.,sunnyMonday）?使用iscooking/isreading/isbrushing/ampacking等現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時?結(jié)尾表達(dá)感受（happy）范文2：《WhatAreWeDoingintheClassroom?》(描寫課堂上同學(xué)們的活動)It’s9:00a.m.,andwearehavinganEnglishclass.Ourteacher,Ms.Li,iswritingnewwordsontheblackboard.Somestudentsaretakingnotescarefully.Twoboysarewhispering,buttheteacherasksthemtostop.Iamlisteningtotheteacherandtryingtounderstandeverything.LearningEnglishisfun!亮點(diǎn)分析：?課堂場景生動（whispering,takingnotes）?使用iswriting/aretaking/arewhispering/amlistening等現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時?結(jié)尾表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)（LearningEnglishisfun!）范文3：《AHappyAfternooninthePark》(描述公園里人們的活動)It’sawarmSundayafternoon,andtheparkisfullofpeople.Somechildrenarerunningandlaughing.Afewoldmenareplayingchessunderabigtree.Ayoungcoupleistakingphotosneartheflowers.MyfriendsandIaresittingonthegrassandeatingicecream.Everyoneisenjoyingthesunshine!亮點(diǎn)分析：?天氣、地點(diǎn)明確（warmSundayafternoon,park）?使用arerunning/arep