2025年高考英語寫作?？碱}型全面突破專題17 讀后續(xù)寫16大提分句式+對(duì)點(diǎn)精練（解析版）

專題17讀后續(xù)寫16大提分句式+對(duì)點(diǎn)精練句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)”又稱為“with結(jié)構(gòu)”Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxious

withherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightly

withtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie

激動(dòng)而高興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。1.那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開了她的禮物盒。(with+賓語+adj.open)2.女孩心怦怦直跳（beatwildly），打開（unwrap）了她的禮物盒。(with+賓語+分詞)3.

他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水（fulloftears/filledwithtears）4.那個(gè)人躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。（ontheground,tremble）Thegirlunwrappedthegiftbox

withhermouthwideopen.Thegirlunwrappedthegiftbox

withherheartbeatingwildly.Hiswifewasextremelysad,

witheyesfulloftears

/

withtearsrollingdownherface句式2

：并列謂語，細(xì)化動(dòng)作

A,BandCWhentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodie

took

adeepbreath

andwalked

tothestartinglineslowly.當(dāng)播音員說“接下來是女子100米欄”時(shí)，朱迪深吸一口氣，慢慢地走到起跑線上。句式3

：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示動(dòng)作伴隨，原因或結(jié)果Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,

waitingfor

herturn

nervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘子，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。句式4

巧用生動(dòng)的無靈主語：

Astrong/intensesenseof

delight

tookholdof

me

themoment

Iheardthenews.Relieved(=breathingasighofrelief),

Ericthankedthemanandswitchedthefrequencyback,“Mac,helpiscoming!”Buttherewasnoresponse.埃里克松了一口氣，向那個(gè)人表示感謝，并將頻率調(diào)回，“麥克，救命來了！”但沒有回應(yīng)。句式5

：情感形容詞+句子Thrilledandjoyful,

Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie

激動(dòng)而高興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語，表達(dá)情節(jié)Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinallycame!好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！句式7：.“一……就……”的表達(dá)法：assoonas,hardly/scarcely…when…,nosooner…than…,themoment/minute/second/instant,immediately/instantly/directly,on/upon+n.doing。Themomenttheannouncerannounced“Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool”,thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.

當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號(hào)，JodieNymble，為RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻,雷鳴般的歡呼和笑聲充滿了

HiddenPark.句式8：巧用“某人想到”:Atthethoughtofthefactthat

shedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。句式9

：主句，which從句（定語從句）格式：_______主句________，which第二句話；例句：瑪麗打開門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl，whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair.結(jié)構(gòu)2：格式：_______主句________，whichenable/forced/allowedsbtodo；_______主句________，whichmade/forced/allowedsb

感情詞例句：就在這時(shí)，我們聽到了UnclePaul遠(yuǎn)處傳來的微弱聲音，這重新點(diǎn)燃了我們回家的希望。Justatthemoment,weheardthefaintvoiceinthedistancefromUnclePaul,

whichallowedusto

lightthehopereturninghome.句式10

：描寫氣氛或者氛圍的句子。（情感詞+fill+地點(diǎn)）Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累：(表達(dá)情感的形容詞+動(dòng)作具體描寫)，用so…thatJodiewas

so

excitedandrefreshed

that

sheyelledout“Myluckyspikes”.朱迪非常興奮，神清氣爽，她大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘”。1.興奮：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我動(dòng)得跳了起來2.開心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高興得上跑下跳3.感動(dòng)：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感動(dòng)得一句話也說不出來4.悲傷：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands.我難受得用手捂住了臉。5.(生氣)IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我氣得一句話也說不出。6.（害怕）

Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.我害怕得手心汗，心怦怦直跳。7.（羞愧）IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感覺自己的臉在燃燒。升級(jí)：倒裝

SoshockedwasI

thatIwasfrozentothespotthemomentIheardthenews.(當(dāng)我聽到消息時(shí)候，我太震驚了以至于呆在原地)句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子（1）Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,

waitingfor

herturn

nervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘子，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。（2）Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathandwalkedtothestartingline

slowly.當(dāng)播音員說“接下來是女子100米欄”時(shí)，朱迪深吸一口氣，慢慢地走到起跑線上。（3）Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammates

tightly

withtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie.激動(dòng)而高興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)NotuntilthendidJodierealizethat

luckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。呼應(yīng)主題常用句式直到...才.…(1)倒裝句:notuntil+時(shí)間狀語didsbrealizethat+主題從句(2)強(qiáng)調(diào)句:itwasonlythenthatsbrealizedthat+主穎從句還記得某人的話，某人的話還在腦海中One’swordsechoed/rangoutinone'searsthat+主題Myteacher’sencouragingwordsstillechoed/lingered/rangoutinmyears,bringingmeaglimmer/ray/beamofhope.Itwasmymotherwhotaughtustoholdapositiveattitudetolife.是我的媽媽一直教導(dǎo)我們要對(duì)困難保持樂觀的態(tài)度。Itwaslovethatmakestheworldgoaround.正是愛讓/使這個(gè)世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)起來Shesaidthatitwasmycompanyandencouragementthatnotonlymadeherhappybutalsoimprovedherconfidence.(她說正是我的陪伴和鼓勵(lì)不僅使我快樂而且提高了我的信心）句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,

tearswellingupinhereyes.

句式15：名詞性從句主語從句結(jié)構(gòu)1：Itis+adjforsbthat…結(jié)構(gòu)2：whatIcoulddo/say/…istowhat(counts/matters/impressme)mostisthat

…

=itisimportantthat…Whatmakemeanxiousisthat>>>>功能：用于突出某個(gè)動(dòng)作的重要或必須應(yīng)用位置：不限例句1：我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.例句2：我所看到的與我過去所經(jīng)歷的任何事情完全不同。WhatIsawwascompletelyunlikeanythingIhadexperiencedinthepast.句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事1.Withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought2.Couldnot/hardlywaittodosth【例句】1.在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezing/bitterlycoldwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriverwithoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought,reachingformyson.2.我迫不及待地想把這個(gè)好消息告訴媽媽。Icouldhardlywaittoinformmymotherofthisgoodnews.對(duì)點(diǎn)精練一、對(duì)點(diǎn)精練--漢譯英句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開了她的禮物盒。______________________________,thegirlopenedhergiftbox.女孩心怦怦直跳，打開了她的禮物盒。______________________________,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.句式2：并列謂語，細(xì)化動(dòng)作1.他看到包里的外套后，非常驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出來。Seeingthecoatinthebag,he______________________________hismothertocomeout.2.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水。Hiswife,extremelysad,______________________________.句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子他躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。______________________________,hetrembledwithhishands.句式4：巧用生動(dòng)的無靈主語1.一想到即將到來的考試，他就感到無比焦慮。__________________________________________________________himwithimmenseanxiety.2.一股激動(dòng)的情緒在人群中蔓延，因?yàn)闃逢?duì)的主唱宣布了演唱會(huì)的日期。_____________________________amongthecrowdastheleadsingerofthebandannouncedtheconcertdate.一種寧靜的感覺籠罩了整個(gè)圖書館，每個(gè)人都在專心致志地學(xué)習(xí)。__________________________________________________________,witheveryonedeeplyfocusedontheirstudies.句式5：情感形容詞+句子興奮和精神煥發(fā)，朱迪大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘鞋”。_____________________________,Jodieyelledout"Myluckyspikes".句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語，表達(dá)情節(jié)好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！_____________________________,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinallycame!句式7：“一……就……”的表達(dá)法當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號(hào)，JodieNymble，為RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻，雷鳴般的歡呼和笑聲充滿了HiddenPark._____________________________"Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool",thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.句式8：巧用“某人想到”一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。_____________________________didn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.句式9：主句，從句（定語從句）瑪麗打開門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,_____________________________.句式10：描寫氣氛或者氛圍的句子空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。_____________________________.句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累我動(dòng)得跳了起來。_____________________________Igaveajumpintheair.句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘鞋，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,_____________________________.句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。_____________________________thatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)她手里顫抖著拿錢，眼里淚水涌起。Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,_____________________________.句式15：名詞性從句我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。_____________________________wastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezingwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver_____________________________,reachingformyson.答案：句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開了她的禮物盒。Withhermouthwideopen,thegirlopenedhergiftbox.女孩心怦怦直跳，打開了她的禮物盒。Withherheartbeatingwildly,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.句式2：并列謂語，細(xì)化動(dòng)作1.他看到包里的外套后，非常驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出來。Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertocomeout.2.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水。Hiswife,extremelysad,stoodwitheyesfulloftears.句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子他躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。Lyingontheground,hetrembledwithhishands.句式4：巧用生動(dòng)的無靈主語1.一想到即將到來的考試，他就感到無比焦慮。Thethoughtoftheupcomingexamfilledhimwithimmenseanxiety.2.一股激動(dòng)的情緒在人群中蔓延，因?yàn)闃逢?duì)的主唱宣布了演唱會(huì)的日期。Awaveofexcitementspreadamongthecrowdastheleadsingerofthebandannouncedtheconcertdate.3.一種寧靜的感覺籠罩了整個(gè)圖書館，每個(gè)人都在專心致志地學(xué)習(xí)。Asenseoftranquilityenvelopedtheentirelibrary,witheveryonedeeplyfocusedontheirstudies.句式5：情感形容詞+句子興奮和精神煥發(fā)，朱迪大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘鞋”。Thrilledandrefreshed,Jodieyelledout"Myluckyspikes".句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語，表達(dá)情節(jié)好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinallycame!句式7：“一……就……”的表達(dá)法當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號(hào)，JodieNymble，為RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻，雷鳴般的歡呼和笑聲充滿了HiddenPark.答案：Themomenttheannouncerannounced"Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool",thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.句式8：巧用“某人想到”一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.句式9：主句，which從句（定語從句）瑪麗打開門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。答案：Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair.句式10：描寫氣氛或者氛圍的句子空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累我動(dòng)得跳了起來。IwassoexcitedthatIgaveajumpintheair.句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘鞋，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。NotuntilthendidJodierealizethatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)她手里顫抖著拿錢，眼里淚水涌起。Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,tearswellingupinhereyes.句式15：名詞性從句我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezingwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriverwithoutdelay,reachingformyson.二、請(qǐng)使用現(xiàn)在分詞結(jié)構(gòu)改寫下列句子或小段落Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,“I’mcold.”

______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tremblinginablanket,hesaid,“I’mcold.”Isatbackinaneasychairandfellasleep.

______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Sittingbackinaneasychair,

Ifellasleep.WhenIsawnoone

noticingus,IputtheChristmaspresentdownandleft.

______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Seeingnoone

noticingus,IputtheChristmaspresentdownandleft.Whenshearrivedthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,andaskedforZatanna’sdormitoryfromdoortodoor.

______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Arrivingthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,askingforZatanna’sdormitoryfromdoortodoor.

He

looked

at

meandbit

his

lips,

as

if

hewasthinking.

______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】He

looked

at

me,

biting

his

lips,

as

if

thinking.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iheldthatten-dollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.

______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Standingthereforafewmoments,Iheldtheten-dollarbill,wonderingwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.7.

Whenhesawthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthenaskedhismothertocomeout.

______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lookingveryastonisheduponseeingthecoatinthebag,hethenaskedhismothertocomeout.

‘Here,’hesaid.Atthesametimehehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.

______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Saying‘Here,’hehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.

Atallgirlansweredthedoorandshewasfrowning.ShetoldEmilythatZatannawasworkingintheschoolcafé.Whensheheardthis,Emilyforcedafaintsmile,thankedherandleft.

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【答案】Frowning,atallgirlansweredthedoor,tellingEmilythatZatannawasworkingintheschoolcafé.Uponhearingthis,Emilyforcedafaintsmile,thankedher,andleft.Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit.ThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker’shouseassheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSanta’shelpers.

______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit,thendrovemeovertoBobbyDecker’shouse,explainingthatIwasofficiallyoneofSanta’shelpers.三、請(qǐng)使用獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)改寫下列句子1.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears,andsheleft.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tearsbrimminginhereyes,sheleft.2.Theboystoodthereandhisfacewasrigidwithanger.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theboystoodthere,hisfacerigidwithanger.3.IclaspedmyhandsbehindmeandIwastooshockedtosayaword.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Handsclaspedbehindme,Iwastooshockedtosayaword.4.Agirlcameinwithabookinherhand.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Agirlcamein,abookinherhand.5.Themanagersatquietlyintheofficeandhiseyeswereclosed.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Themanagersatquietlyintheoffice,hiseyesclosed.6.Theysatintheroomwiththecurtainsdrawn.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theysatintheroom,thecurtainsdrawn.7.Oliverjumpedupandhisfacewasbrightredwithanger.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Oliverjumpedup,hisfacebrightredwithanger.8.Lindaleapttoherfeetandhereyeswereblazingwithanger.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lindaleapttoherfeet,hereyesblazingwithanger.9.AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome.Hertearswereshininginhereyes.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome,tearsshininginhereyes.10.Hecriedandhisblueeyeswereshiningbehindhisglasses.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hecried,hisblueeyesshiningbehindhisglasses.四、請(qǐng)用過去分詞或形容詞改寫下列句子或小段落

ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iwasconfused.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere,confused.

Theywereveryfrightened.Theyalljumpedback.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theyalljumpedback,veryfrightened.或Veryfrightened,theyalljumpedback.

Intheevening,thechildrenreturnedhome.Theyweretiredandhungry.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Intheevening,thechildrenreturnedhome,tiredandhungry.

Hewasexhausted.Hesatdownatthesideoftheroad.______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Exhausted,hesatdownatthesideoftheroad.

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