高中英語作文技巧

學生：老師，我請假。老師：why?學生：我暈課，尤其是寫作課，上作文課我就頭疼。2021/5/91Badsample卷面不整潔;涂改較多;語言錯誤多;層次不清;得10分samplesofstudentwork2021/5/92progresswell∧widenedare詞匯有錯誤;卷面有涂改;得19分.samplesofstudentworkroadsMyhometownisbecomingmoreandmore2021/5/93詞匯,句型,語法多樣化

1.覆蓋了所有的要點

2.應用高級的語法結構和詞匯

3.有效地使用句子間的連接成分，使結構緊湊

4.書面干凈整潔要點全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？2021/5/94

技巧2.使用較高級的詞匯4.使用恰當的連接詞詞匯是衡量英語水平的一個重要標志。生動活潑，語言簡潔能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。增強書面表達效果的技巧3.使用較豐富的句式1.漂亮的書寫形象面子工程的作用2021/5/95漂亮的書寫是寫作得分的亮點影響給分的因素之一：作文的卷面2021/5/96Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?2021/5/97影響給分的因素之二：

文中所采用的語言材料人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝A.詞匯的選擇靈活新穎，出奇制勝；2021/5/981.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(幸虧…)2.Ithinkyou’dbetteraskwhatyoudon’tunderstand.

3.Luxunisnotonlyawriter,butalsoathinker.

Thankstothegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.I.怎樣使用較高級的詞匯AsfarasI’mconcerned,

you’dbetteraskwhatyoudon’tunderstand.Thereisnodoubtthat

Luxunisnotonlyawriter,butalsoathinker.感情細膩，表現恰當2021/5/99B.句型結構運用靈活多變,增加文章的魅力2021/5/910Inordertomyparents,Ishouldmakefulluseofeveryminutetostudywhatmyteachertaught.2)

我很樂意和你分享我是怎樣學英語的I’mgladtosharewithyouhowIlearnEnglish.I’mgladtosharewithyoutheway_______IlearnEnglish*語法，句法高分tipsinwhich

定語從句Inordertomakemyparentshappy

賓語從句2021/5/911E.恰當使用特殊句式，增強語句表現力ＩＴ句，強調句，倒裝句型，省略句，感嘆句等將下列句子轉換：1.Ididn’trealizethemistakeuntilIgrowup.(強調句）2.Wecanmakegreatachievementsonlybyworkinghard.（倒裝句）3.Lastbutnotleast,enjoyingsomeEnglishwebsitesishelpfultous.(it)Itwas

notuntilIgrowup

thatIrealizedthemistake．OnlybyworkinghardcanwemakegreatachievementsLastbutnotleast,itishelpfultoenjoysomeEnglishwebsites.2021/5/912影響給分的因素之三：行文的流暢

上下貫通、一氣呵成正確而巧妙地使用好連接詞2021/5/913and,also,besides,morever,what'smorefurthermore,inaddition…1.表遞進２.表轉折３.表因果４.表目的５.表總結but,however,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,inspiteof,despite…because,since,therefore,so,thus,

asaresult/consequence,onaccountof...inorderthat,sothat,forthepurposeof...inbrief,inshort,inaword,inconclusion,onthewhole...AsfarasI’mconcerned,2021/5/9142021/5/915Ifyouaretheteacher

假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Peter來信詢問你的英語學習情況并希望你簡單介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)，請你根據下列要點寫回信。要點:

1.我學英語已經六年了，在老師和同學們的幫助下取得了一些進步；2.但是總覺得英語難學，尤其是英語中的一些習慣用法；3.今后一定要努力學習這門有用的外語，爭取能用流利的英語和你寫信；4.我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生很大的變化，蓋起了許多高樓，拓寬了道路，變得越來越漂亮和現代化；5.如果有時間可以到中國來，我會帶領你參觀我的家鄉(xiāng)。2021/5/916最近在武安市高三年級學生中就市政府“拆違”展開了一場討論，請你就下表提供的信息給市長寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。約70％的學生認為：1．應該拆除違法搭建；

2．違法建筑占用綠化帶并常堵塞交通；

3．大多數違法建筑陳舊過時，既破壞城市的美，又存在安全隱患。約30％的學生認為：1．不宜全部拆除；

2．許多違法建筑系下崗職工所建，以便經營一些小生意以養(yǎng)家糊口；

3．拆違會使一部分人失去謀生手段。WritingHomework2021/5/917注意：1．詞數：100左右(不包括已給出部分)；2．文章應包括題中所給的主要信息。可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭與結尾已為你寫好。參考詞匯：綠化帶：greenbelt安全隱患：hiddendangerDearMayor,I'mastudentofSeniorThree.I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherthecitygovernmentshoulddemolishillegalbuildings.Opinionsbetweenusaredivided.______________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes2021/5/918theillegalbuildingstakenupblockedthetrafficoutofdatebreaksthebeautyofthecityexistssomehiddendangersBrainstormingSupport:Notsupport:outofjobrunsomesmallbusinessMakealiving/supportone’sfamilypulldownthesebuildings2021/5/919影響書面表達得分的因素：“大錯誤”包括時態(tài)錯誤、句子結構錯誤、中式英語等，如：Myhometownhadbigchange,buildmanyhouses,……Myhometownhasgreatchanges.

◆語言表達出現“大錯誤”及“小錯誤”

→Greatchangeshadtakenplaceinmyhometownthere.Forexample,manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.2021/5/9203.IfyougettoChinathathavetime,mewithyoulookmyhometown.

4.Iwillwelcometoyou.

◆“小錯誤”主要是反應在個別單詞拼寫錯誤、冠詞介詞使用不準確等方面,如：

Undermyteacherandclassmatesallhelptome,…….

→Ihopeyou’llgetachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.→WelcometoChina.→Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,……2021/5/921◆沒有使用高級詞匯和復雜句1.Iwillvisitmyhometownwithyou.2.Ifyouhavetime,Iwilltakeyoutotravelaroundmyhometown.→Iwillshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.2021/5/922◆書寫是否工整清晰也會影響答卷得分。卷面不整潔，涂改多；大小寫;標點符號;書寫不清，得分會很低！2021/5/923◆審題不認真，要點有所遺漏1.徹底理解題意，看準答題要求（包括字數要求）。2.把內容要點在稿紙上列成提綱。3.連詞成句，連句成文。4.成文后認真檢查，確信無一遺漏。注意：2021/5/924★完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，覆蓋所有內容要點。

★應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。

★

語法結構和詞匯方面有些錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。

★有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。

書面表達評分最高標準（第五檔21---25分）2021/5/925Onepossibleversion:

June8,2008

DearPeter,

I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.

ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadesomeprogressinEnglish.HoweverIstillfindEnglishhardtolearn,suchassomedifficultidiomswhichmademeconfused.Nomatterhowharditis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.2021/5/926NotlongagoIreturnedtomyhometownandfoundgreatchangeshadtakenplacethere.Manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.Myhometownisgettingmodernandmoreandmorebeautiful.IhopeifyouhaveachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownwhenyouareonleave.

Bestwishes,

LiHua2021/5/927MySuggestions:1.beautifulwordsandexpressions2.propersentencestructures3.connectionsbetweensentences4.propercomplexsentences5.writingmodels2021/5/928Sixstepsforwriting(寫作六步驟）

1.

Cross-question(審題)※

Mainidea※Style※

Verbtense※Person2.Seizethemajorpoints/keywords(抓要點)3.Arrangement(布局)！4.Sentencesconnection(連句)Words/phrasesSentences6.

Errorcorrecting(查錯改錯)5.Expressyouropinion

(發(fā)表觀點）Conjunctions/conjunctiveadverbssentencespassage2021/5/929DearSmithLiHuaYours22

Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.You’reright.Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplaceinourschool.Ononesideoftheroadisanewteachingbuilding;

Ontheotherside,where

theplaygroundusedtobe,

standsanothernewbuilding-ourlibrary.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandroundtheschool.Ihopethatyouwillbeabletoreturnandseethechangesforyourselfsomeday.Bestwishes,2021/5/930

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語已為你寫好。

June8,2008

DearPeter,

I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.………….2021/5/931字數不夠或未能傳達讀者任何信息，不得分。

samplesofstudentwork2021/5/932readandwritefindithard

fluentEnglishtowriteGreatchanges

roads

hadtakenplaceinmyhometownbuildingswidenedItwillbewonderfulwhen

youcometoChinaifyouarefreeshowyouaroundIwillbegladto語言不地道;中文式思維;語言錯誤較多，得分13分samplesofstudentwork2021/5/933learnoftheteachersandmyprogressreadandwriteithardtolearnhardwork.writelettersinfluentEnglishfoundhadbecomeWelcometoChinaifyouhavetimeshowyouaround語言素質較好;基本功不差;語句仍有毛??；得15分.samplesofstudentwork2021/5/934PracticeFindsomesimilarwordsorphrasesofthefollowingsgood2.think3.cleverperfect

excellentoutstandingpleasantwonderfulfavorablemagnificent

inone'sopinion/viewholdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…

wisebrightsmartintelligentcute2021/5/935III.常用的連接詞1.

表示遞進;在同一話題上補充內容

另外，還有：2.表示轉折關系

但是，然而，相反：

what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition

but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;

onthecontrary.2021/5/9363.表示因果關系

因為，因此，所以:4.表示條件關系

如果，只要:

除非:

否則:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;if;oncondition(that);aslongasunless

orelse2021/5/937

5.表示時間關系當…的時候

:

when;while

在…之后:

after

在…之前:

before

直到:

until

直到…才…:

not……until……

一…就…:

assoonas

后來，然后:

later;

afterwards

不久:

soon

近來:

lately;

recently

自從…:since

從那時起:

fromthenon2021/5/9386.表示特定的順序關系

首先:firstly

最主要的:

aboveall

其次:

secondly

然后:

then;next

最后:

finally;intheend7.換一種方法表述

換句話說:

inotherwords;thatistosay;

2021/5/9398.進行舉例說明

例如，比如:9.用于陳述事實

forinstance;forexample;like;suchasthatistosay,namely,actually,andsoon,believeitornot,

totellyouthetruth,forthisreason實際上:

infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你說實話:

totellyouthetruth2021/5/94010.

對一個話題進行總結

總而言之，總的來說:

onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,finally,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,asyouknow,intheend,其它常用到的副詞

therefore;otherwise;finally;

furthermore;thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;2021/5/94112.

表示結果：

thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,unfortunately

13.表示強調：

aboveall,indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afterall,withoutanydelay,atleast,atmost,mostimportant,undoubtedly2021/5/9426.表示特定的順序關系

首先:firstly

最主要的:

aboveall

其次:

secondly

然后:

then;next

最后:

finally;intheend7.換一種方法表述

換句話說:

inotherwords;thatistosay;

2021/5/943II.豐富的句式：(常用到的句型結構）利用不同的句型來表達同一個意思，能增加文章的文采。

HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!

Itwasthisyoungboywho

helpedtheoldgranny.

Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.

Theyreadwhilewalkingor

ridingonabus.

1.感嘆句2.強調句3.倒裝句4.省略句2021/5/944

Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.

Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.

That’swhatIshoulddo.

Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

5、with短語6、定語從句7、各種名詞性從句8、各種狀語從句2021/5/945

聯合國教科文組織某考察團正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請根據下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個村的情況：1)大?。航?00戶人家，約500口人。2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F已舊貌換新顏。3)教育：原來的學校很小，現已經過改建。新建的教學樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學齡兒童在此免費就讀。注意：1）要點齊全，前后連貫。

2）詞數：100-120之間。PracticeLadiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.2021/5/946Ladiesandgentlemen,