2024屆高三英語二輪專題復習：關于水中或雨中脫困脫險的讀后續(xù)寫練習寫作素材

關于水中或雨中脫困脫險的讀后續(xù)寫練習寫作Passage1風雨中助人

Iwentuptotheroofforabreakafterstudyingforanhourandwatchedthe50orsopeopleswimminginthenaturalrockpoolbelowourhouse.Itwasasunnyday--ablue,cloudlessskyoveracalmsea.Butthen,asIlookedinthedistance,Idiscoveredthreeorfourbigwavesheadingtowardstheshore.I'dseenthesemini-tsunamis(海嘯)manytimesbefore.Theywereheadingatspeedinthedirectionofthepool.Mostpeopleknewhowtolookoutforthem,butfromthescreamsthatstartedcomingfromthebeach,Icouldtellsomeonewasintrouble.Withoutthinking,Irandownintothestreet,holdingmybodyboard(俯伏沖浪板)onthewayandshoutedatastrangertogoinsidemyhouseandcallthecoastguard.MyneighborMoiseshadheardthescreamingaswellandwasalsooutsidewithhisbodyboard,sotogetherwerushedtothestepsthatleddowntothesea.Oncewegotcloser,wediscoveredthewaveshadpulledaboyandagirlfromthepoolandintotheopensea.Iknewthatthenearestboatwouldtakeatleast30minutestoreachus.Waitingforhelpwasn'tachoice.Iwasn'tusedtothissortofemergency--I’dneverbeentrainedasalifeguard-butIdidn'tthinktwiceabouttryingtosavethem.IsupposedinawayIwantedtoimpresseveryone:at19,adeallikethatcanseemlikeagoodopportunitytoshowoff.MoisesandIdivedintothewaterandittookus10minutestogettothem.Whenwefinallyreachedthem,theywerealmostlifelesswithonlytheirheadscominginandoutofthewater.Wecouldtelltheywerestillalivefromtheirsmallbreathsbutitwascleartheywouldn'thavebeenabletostaytheremuchlonger.Iheldtheboyandpulledhimovermyboard.Moisesmovedthegirlontohisboard.Wediscussedpushingthembacktotheshore,butweweretoofarout.注意：1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好；Paragraph1:Wehadtowait.Paragraph2:Thatnight,wordcamefromthehospitalthatthetwopeoplewereingoodcondition.

Wehadtowait.Weeagerlyhopingforthearrivalofthesavingboat.Thewildwindblewandthefreezingseawaterclappedourbodiescontinuously.30minutesseemedmuchlongeraswejusthelplesslyfloatedontheboundlesssea.Afteralongtime,alightspotappearedinthedistance!Wewavedourhandsandyelledoutforhelp.Theboatfinallyreachedusandtookallofusbacktotheshore.Thetwochildrenwereimmediatelysenttothenearesthospital.Thatnight,wordcamefromthehospitalthatthetwopeoplewereingoodcondition.Picturingwhatthemerryscenewouldbe,relieflayinmyheartandhappinessetchedonmyface.Thenextmorning,allthepeopleImetsmiledtomeandcouldnotstoppraisingme.Itseemedlikeagoodopportunitytoshowmyselfoff,butIdidn’tmeanto.Infact,IwasashamedIhadthoughtaboutit.Itoccurredtomethathelpingotherswaspricelessandeveryoneshouldbealifeguard.Passage2

被困瀑布下閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應為150左右。Davidknewthewaterfallwascoming.Itwasn'thisfirstvisittotheriverincentralCalifornia.Hefiguredhewouldhopoutofhisraftintotheshallowwater,rappeldowntherocks(沿巖壁下降)oneithersideofthefall,andcontinueonhisway,ashehadonaprevioustrip.Butthisyearwasdifferent.Heavysnowandspringrainshadturnedtheusuallymanageablefallsintosomethingfierce.Andthisyear,insteadofhisfriends,David'scompanionswerehisgirlfriend,Sara,andhisl3-year-oldson,Hunter.Asthethreeofthemapproachedthefallslateintheafternoonofthethirddayoftheircampingtrip,Davidcouldtellfromtheincreasingroarofwaterinthenarrowingvalleythattheywereinserioustrouble.Therewasnowaythey’dbeabletorappeldowntherocksasplanned.Theycouldwade(蹚水)totheshore,butwouldanyonefindthemthere?Theyhadnophoneservice,andtheyhadn'tseenasinglepersoninthepastthreedays.AndDavidknewthey'dbesharingthegroundtherewithsnakesandmountainlions.Ashewonderedwhattodo,Davidhitonabitofluckheheardvoicescomingfromtheothersideofthefall.Heyelled,butthesoundoftherushingwaterdrownedhimout.Wehadtodogetthesepeopleamessage,Davidthought.Hecaughtabranchandpulledouthispocketknifetocarve“Help"init.Thenhetiedaropetoitsothepeoplewouldknowitwasn'tjustanybranch.Hetriedflyingitoverthefalls,butitfloatedawayinthewrongdirection.ThenhespottedhisgreenwaterbottleDavidgrabbeditandcarved“Help!”onitSaraalsoremindedhimthathehadapenandpaper,whichshe'dbroughttoplaygameswith,inhisbackpack.Davidknewitwasjustanattempt.Buthewrotedown“6-15-19wearestuckhereatthewaterfall.Gethelpplease“andpushedthenoteintothebottle.Paragraph1:Thistime,histhrowoverthewaterfallwasperfect.Paragraph2:Thenextmorning.theyheardahelicopterhovering(盤旋)abovethem.

Paragraph1:“Allright,that’sallwecando,”DavidtoldSara.Thentheywentbacktothebeachwherethey’dhadlunch.Theymadeafireandlaidoutatarp.Astheeveningworeon,theyplacedaheadlampwithaflashinglightonaledge.Byabout10:30p.m.，theydecidedtheyprobablyweren’t

goingtogetrescuedthatnight,sotheypulledouttheirsleepingbags.Beforesleeping，

Davidaddedmorewoodtothefiretokeepthemountainlionsaway.

Then,justaftermidnight,Davidsuddenlywokeupbecausehedreamedthattheyheardahelicopterhoveringabovethemandtheyheardthemagicwords:“ThisisSearchandRescue.Youhavebeenfound.“Unfortunately,lookingaround,hecouldseenothingbutendlessdarkness.Hethenfellintosleepagain.Paragraph2:David’sdreambecametrue!Thehelicoptercircledasthepilotlookedforagoodplacetoland.Finallythehelicopterlandedsafelyanditwasamomentofpurehappinessasthethreechattedwiththeofficerswhohadrescuedthem.WhentheofficersdroppedthembackattheFinchCampground,thefamilylearnedmoreaboutthelongshoteventsthathadsavedthem:Somehikershadseenthewaterbottleinthewater.Whentheypickeditup,theynoticedthewritingonit—“Help!”.Thentheyrealizedtherewasanoteinside.Aftertheyreadit,theyhightailedittothecampground,turnedthebottlein.Davidisplanningonhavingabigbarbecuetomeetthehikers—andthankthem.“Iimagineit’sgoingtobeoneofthegreatestmomentsofmylife.”hesays.

【詳解】前文主要講述了David一家去野營，大雪和春雨把通?？梢钥刂频钠俨甲兂闪怂鳑坝康钠俨?，使得他們一家困在了山上，他們聽到瀑布另一側有人的聲音，下決心要把信息傳遞給這些人，最后他們在所攜帶的綠色水壺上刻下了“幫助”兩個字，并用所帶的紙筆寫下了“6-15-19我們被困在瀑布了。請尋求幫助”，然后將紙條塞入瓶子。根據給的第一段開頭Thistime,histhrowoverthewaterfallwasperfect.（這次，他完美地將水壺扔過了瀑布。），可知本段是續(xù)寫水壺被扔過瀑布之后，David他們等待救援的過程。第二段是以Thenextmorning.theyheardahelicopterhovering(盤旋)abovethem.（第二天早上。

他們聽到一架直升機盤旋在他們上方。）開頭，由此可知他們最后獲救了，所以這段重點寫他們是如何被救以及被救之后的事情?！军c睛】續(xù)寫范文語言地道，句型多變。比如Thentheygobacktothebeachwherethey’dhadlunch.中使用了where引導的定語從句；hedreamedthattheyheardahelicopterhoveringabovethemandtheyheardthemagicwords使用了that引導的賓語從句；Thehelicoptercircledasthepilotlookedforagoodplacetoland.使用了as引導的狀語從句。Passage3

水中救人

Brady

wasarecentlyretiredsearchand

rescue

dog.HewasnothappyandmissedhisownerAlbecauseAlhadgoneoutonarescuemissionwithouthim.Al’snephewStevetookBradyalongwhenheandhisfriendZachwentonaovernighthike.ButsuddenlySteveandZachsmelledsomethingburningandtheyrealizedthatlightninghadsetthewoodson

fire.Wind-blownflamehadleapedfromthetopofonetreetoanother.Thelongdrysummerhadturnedtheforestintoatinderbox(火絨箱)andthethunderstormwasn’thelpingmuch.Ithadmorewindandlightningthanrain.Zach

pulled

Steve’sarm.“Let’sgo!Wecanmakeitbackto

theriver

wecrossedtoday.”StevepulledBrady’sleash（皮帶）

andtheirheadsdownagainstthestrongfire-wind,theyhurrieddownthepaththeyhadfollowedearlier.Theairwas

fullofsmoke，andpinebranchesbrokefromburningtreeswithacrispsound.Stevekepthiseyesontheroute.Alltheyhadtodowastomakeitdowntotheriver…

Brady

barkedasharpwarning.Aheadofthemlayadensecurtainofsmokeacrossthepath.They’dnevermakeitthroughthat.Theywouldhavetofindanother

escaperoute.Thedogwaspullingathisleashtryingtodrawthemawayfromthesmoke.ThiswaswhatBradywas

trained

todo,andyetStevewasuneasy.Itseemedtohimtheyweremovingawayfromtheriver.

Bradyliftedhisheadandsmelledthesmokywind.Suddenly,thedogranawayanddisappeared.Theboysyelledandshoutedforhim，buthedidn’tcomeback.

Theyhadnochoicebuttoleavehimbehind.Heartsick,SteveandZachwentupaslope（斜坡）.Hecouldn’tblameBradyforpanickingandescaping.Hehimselfwantedtoruneventhoughhedidn’thaveacluewhichway.Theyhadn’tgonefarwhentherewasafamiliarbark,andBradycamerunningtowardhim.Paragraph1：“Where’veyoubeen?”Stevecried._______________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2：

Bradyledthembackdowntheslopeandintothetrees._______________________________________________________________________參考范文：Paragraph1:“Where’veyoubeen?”Stevecried.

Brady

stoppeddirectlyinfrontofhimandstartedpushinghimbacktoward

theslope

they’djustclimbed.WhenStevestilldidn’tgetit,Bradygrabbedtheboy’sjeansand

pulled

harder.Themessagewasclear,butStevehesitated.OfcourseherememberedwhathisunclehadsaidaboutBradysavinghislife,butthathadbeenalongtimeago.Washestillsharpenoughtogetthemthroughthis?Bradypulledagain,urgently.“OK,bigguy,”Stevedecided.Paragraph2:Bradyledthembackdowntheslopeandintothetrees.

Severaltimesthebigdogstoppedtogethis

escaperoute.Oftenhechangeddirection.Howlongthey’dwalkedStevehadnoidea.HejustheldontoBrady’sleashwithonehandandkeptputtingonefootinfrontoftheother.Hewasalmostnumbwhenheheardthewonderfulsoundofrushingwater.

Theriver!Withayelltheboysranunsteadilyforwarduntiltheyjumpedincool,runningwater.“Brady,youdidit!”

Passage4

落水被救

“IfmumfindsoutthatI'mgoingtothebeach,I'llbeinbigtrouble.”Isaidtomyselfsoftlyinalowvoice.

I

wentdownstairsslowlyandtriedtowalkcasuallyintothekitchen.AsIwaswalkingtowardsthebackdoor,mumaskedwithoutlookingupfromher“dish-washing”,“Whereareyougoing?”Iansweredbackwithouthesitation,“Iamgoingtothegardentoplay.”AfterIgotoutofthekitchen,Ibreathedasignofrelief.Myplanhadworkedoutfinesofar.Iclimbedthefenceandjumpedontothemuddyfieldnexttomy

house

andstartedrunningtowardsthebusstopattopspeed.

AfterhalfanhourIwasatthebeachscanningthecrowdformyfriends,JimmyandBobby.Twoyoungmenwereracinginthecanoes(獨木舟).

Afterawhile,Isawthemnearacoconuttree.I

ran

towardsthemandgotintomyswimmingtrunk(游泳褲).Foraboutanhour,weplayedvolleyballhappily.

Suddenly,Bobbyhitthe

ball

toohardandtheball

fell

intothesea.JustasBobbywasgoingtopickuptheball,thetidecameinandcarriedtheballfurtherandfurtherawayfromtheshore.IwantedtoshowoffmyswimmingskillssoIdeclaredto

help

gettheballforthem.

I

dived

intothewaterandstartedswimmingatasteadypace.Afterswimmingforabouttenminutes,IbecametiredbutwhenIsawthattheballwasonlyafewfeetawayfromme,Iputin

anextraburstofspeed.However,justasIwasgoingtogettheball,averystrongcurrentswepttheballfurtherawayfromme.

Atthatmoment,astringofweed(海草)tangled(纏繞)upwithmyfeetandIcouldnot

swim

properly.

I

struggledtokeepafloatbutitwasnouse.“IfIhadlistenedtomy

parents,thiswouldneverhavehappened,“I

thoughtsilently.Paragraph1Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotpulledunderwater.______________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.______________________________________________________________________________參考范文：Paragraph1Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotputtedunderwater.ItoldmyselfIshouldnevergiveup.ThenIpulledtheweedagainwithgreatefforts.Theweedfinallybroke.Iswambacktothesurfacetotakeadeepbreath.Isawtwoyoungmenincanoes,racingeachother.Iwasexhaustedandshoutedforhelp.Thetwomensawmeandracedtowardsme.Bythetimetheyreachedme,Ihadbeenalreadyunconscious.Paragraph2WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.ItwasnotuntiladoctorcameintotheroomthatIrealizedthatIwasinahospital.JimmyandBobbytoldmethetwoyoungmenbroughtmetotheshoreandsentmetothehospital.Afterafewminutes,myparentswithhalfangryandhalfworriedfaceswalkedin.MyparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretlybutwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured.Iwillneverforgetthatterrifyingexperience.NeitherwillIeverwanttoshowoffagain.

Passage5漂流瓶救人

RescueinaBottle

CurtisWhitsonhadrafteddowntheArroyoSeco,ariverincentralCalifornia,severaltimesbefore.

Thisyear,Curtis

Whitson

knewthewater-fallwascoming.Hefiguredhewouldgetoutofhisraftintotheshallowwater,getdowntherocksalongropesoneithersideofthe

falls,andcontinueonhisway,ashehadonaprevioustrip.Butthisyearwasdifferent.Heavysnowandspringrainshadturnedtheusuallymanageablefallsintosomething

fierce.Andthisyear,insteadofhisfriends,Whitson’scompanionswerehisgirlfriend,KrystalRamirez,andhis13-year-oldson,Hunter.Asthethreeofthemapproachedthefallslateintheafternoonofthethirddayoftheircampingtrip,Whitsoncouldtellfromtheincreasingroarofwaterinthenarrowingcanyon(峽谷)thattheywereinserioustrouble.Therewasnowaythey’dbeabletogetdowntherocksasplanned.

“Thewaterwas

just

roaringthroughtherewithtremendousforce,”recallsWhitson,45.

Theyhadnosmartphoneservice,andtheyhadn’tseenasinglepersoninthepastthreedays.AndWhitsonknewthatthey’dbesharingthegroundtherewithrattlesnakesandmountain

lions.

Ashewasthinkingwhattodo,Whitsonhitonabitofluck---heheardvoicescomingfromtheothersideofthefalls.He

yelled,butthesoundoftherushingwater

drowned

himout.

“Wehavetogetthesepeoplea

message,”Whitsonthought.

Hegrabbedastickandpulledouthispocketknifetocarve“Help”init.Thenhetiedaropetoitsothepeoplewouldknowitwasn’tjustanystick.Hetriedthrowingitoverthefalls,butitfloatedawayinthewrongdirection.

“We’vegottodosomething!”Whitsonyelledtohisson.“Havewegotanythingelse?”

Thenhespottedhiswater

bottle.Whitsongrabbeditandcarved“Help!”onit.Ramirezalsoremindedhimthathehadapenandpaperinhisbackpack.

Whitsonknewitwasaslim

hope.Buthewrote“6-1519:00wearestuckhere@thewaterfall.Gethelpplease”andpushedthenoteintothebottle.Thistime,histhrowoverthewaterfallwasperfect.“Allright,that’sallwecando,”WhitsontoldHunter.注意：1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭語已為你寫好；3.

續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Ittook30minutestogetbackupstreamtothebeachwherethey’dhad

lunch.

Paragraph2:

Thenextmorning,thehelicopterreturned.

參考范文：Ittook30minutestogetbackupstreamtothebeachwherethey’dhadlunch.

Thenightfalling,

theyputupatentandwolfeddownasimplifieddinner.

Suddenlyalow,buzzingsoundappearing,

Whistonraisedhisheadglancedaroundandspottedahelicopterinthedistance.

Bloodrushingtohisfaceandheartpalpitatingfiercely,

heleapttohisfeetandyelledatthetopofhisvoice.However,thesoundofthehelicopterdrownedhimoutthehelicopterhoveredforawhileandfadedinthesuffocatingdarkness.

A

tideofexhaustionanddespairwashedoverhim.SensingthedesperategleaminHunter'seyes,Whistonbentovertogivehimatightembrace,comfortingthattheywouldbesafe.Thenextmorningthehelicopterreturned.Atthesightoftheblackdotonthehorizon,Whistonmadeasmokyfire.

Theheavysmokecurlingupwardslowlyintothesky,

heclaspedhishandstightly,

prayinginthedepthofhisheartthatitwouldwork.

Theblackdotgrewlargerandlargeragainsttheorangesky,sowastheirhopeofbeingrescued.Afterwhatseemedlikecenturies,thehelicopterfinallycametoahaltoverthemandloweredarescuer.

Bubblingwithoverwhelmingecstasy,

Huntercouldn'thelpbouncingupsanddowns.

Theyeventuallymadeittoescapefromthenightmare.

Duringtheirpleasantchat,theylearneditwasexactlythemessageinthebottlethatsavedthem.

Passage6

水中逃生Theraincamedownsteadyandhard.JasonStoriehearditbutwasnotworriedashepreparedforadayofcavingwithfivefriendsinaremotespot80milesnorthwestofhishomeinDuncan,onCanada’sVancouverIsland.Itwas6a.m.onDecember5,2015.Asanewcomertothesport,Jasonhadgonecavingonlyfourtimes.Thiswouldbehistoughestoutingyet:acavecalledCascade.Itwasdangerousenoughthattheentrancewasblockedbyalockedmetaldoortokeepthecasualcaversout.Aboutamilelongand338feetdeep,Cascadewasfulloftumsandbarelypassabletightsqueezes.Jasonwasnewamongthegroup,withtheleastexperienceand,at43,olderbyadecadeormore.ItwashisfriendAndrewMunoz,33,whointroducedhimtothesport.UnlikeJason,Andrewwasanexpertcaver-aformercavingguide,actually.Theyhikedabitbeforecomingtothedoor,whichsatintheground—you’dmissitifyouweren’tlookingforit.Itwas10a.m.Withtheirwaylightedbyheadlamps,theywalkeddownanarrowpassagestuddedwithsharprocks.Thesilencewasbrokenbyadrip-drip-dripfromabove.Soonthedripturnedintoalightbutsteadyflow,andtheywerewadinginwateruptotheirankles,thentotheirshins.Twohourslater,theyapproachedoneofthefeaturesthatmadethecaveunique:anarrowpassagenotbigenoughtostandupinthatledintoashort,tightdownhill.Thishadaname:Bastard’sCrawl.Fourstreamsmethere,andindeed,thewaterwasflowingmorequickly.Thesoundofthewaterhadturnedintoaroar.WhentheyfinallynearedthetopoftheCrawl,therewerebarelyfourinchesofairleftbetweenthewaterandtheceiling.notenoughforthemtokeeptheirheadsuptobreathe.Theycametoterrifyingrealizationthattheywereindanger！注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；3.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1：Thewaterkeptrising,andtherewasnohopeofrescue.Paragraph2：Slowlybutsteadily,thegroupmadetheirwayforward.參考范文：Thewaterkeptrising,andtherewasnohopeofrescue.Thehourspassed.JasonandAndrewdidn’tdaretomoveforfearofslipping.Theydozedoffandthenjerkedthemselvesawake.Everyonceinawhile,oneofthemturnedonhisheadlamptocheckthewaterlevel.Anhourlater,thewaterlevelwentdownenoughthattheycouldtryanescape.Stifffromkeepinginonepositionfor12hours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.Jasonscreamedinpain,buthewasdeterminednottoletitstophim.Slowlybutsteadily,thegroupmadetheirwayforward.Still,eachtimeJasonmovedaleg,hecriedout.Overthenext90minutes,theymadetheirwaytowardtheentrance,attimesinchest-highwater.Now,inapassagethatwashighenoughforthemtowalkupright,Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance.“Lights!Iseelights!”Jasonshoutedout.Forthefirsttimesinceenteringthecave,over20hoursearlier,Jason’semotionsgotthebestofhimandtearstrickleddownhischeeks.Passage7水中遇險“It’snotlookingtoogood,darling.Ithinkyou’dbetterpackafewthingsandgotoyourmother’splace.Andyou’dbettertakeRosieandMontywithyou.”Puttingdownthephone,

Sara

sighed.Tomorrowwasherhusband

Tony’sbirthday.Shehadplannedtocookhimanicemealandthensurprisehimwiththenewmountainbikeshe’dboughtforhim.Ifshewenttohermother’shouse,Tonywouldn’tgethispresentfordays.However,hermother’shousewasthebestplacetoberightnow.Beingonhigherland,itwouldbesafefromthefloods.IthadbeenrainingheavilyforalmosttwoweeksandtherivernearSaraandTony’shousewasrisinghigherandhigherallthetime.Tonyandothersfromthevillagehadspentthelasttwodaysputtingsandbagsalongthesideoftherivertostopitoverflowing.Nowtheyfearedthattheirhardworkhadbeenuselessandsoonthewholevalleywouldbeflooded.Saradressedbaby

James

inwarmclothesandcollectedthethingsshewouldneedforhimoverthenextfewdays.Sheputtheleadonthedog,

Rosie.Justasshewasreachingforthecarkeys,Saraheardasoundlikethenoisebathwatermakeswhenyoupullouttheplug.Shelookedatthebackdoor.Waterwasflowinginunderneath.Turningaroundshesawdirtybrownwaterfountainingoutofthedrainandfillingthesink.QuicklysheputJamesintoherbackpackandpulleditontoherback.CallingtoRosie,shepickedupthecatbasketandrantothefrontofthehouseandoutintothefrontgarden.Thewaterwasalreadyuptoherknees.Rosiewasswimmingbesideher.Knowingthewaterwouldsoonbemuchdeeper,Sararantothecarandopenedthedoors.ShethrewthecatbasketontotheroofofthecarandpushedRosieupbesideit.Usingthecarseatasastepsheclimbedfirstontothefrontofthecarandthenontotheroof.James,safelyattachedtoherback,madenosoundatall.Sarastareddownatthewaterwhichwasrushingpastthecar.Itwasalreadyhalfwayupthedoors,andstillrising.

注意:

1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右:

2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1Withthewaterstillpouring,Sarabegantofeelcold.

______________________________________

Paragraph2Suddenly,Rosiebegantobark,andsomenoisecamefromfaraway.

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OnepossibleversionWiththewaterstillpouring,Sarabegantofeelcold.

Andfearslowlycreepsuponher.Shelookedaround,nervousandhopeless,tryingtofindsomeplacewhereshecouldshelter.Finally,shesawaspotwhichwashigher.Inordertokeepwarm,sheheldJamestightly,withRosiesittingbesideher.Therewasnoonearoundanditseemedthatthewholevillagehadbecomealargelake.Saracoulddonothingbutwaitforhelp.

Suddenly,Rosiebegantobark,andsomenoisecamefromfaraway.Sarastoodupquicklyandlookedthroughthedirectionofthenoise.Therewaslightandaboatwascoming.Feelingwildwithjoy,Sarashoutedtowardsthem.ItturnedouttobeTonyandothersfromthevillage.TheytoldSarathattheywerealsotrappeduntilsoldierscametohelp.SaralookedatTonywithrelief.Shesaidwithasmile,“I’msorryyourbirthdaypresentisnowunderthewater.ButIguessthiswillbethemostunforgettablebirthdayforyou.”Passage8

水中救娃Lungsnearlybursting,Istruggledtoliftmyheadoutofthewater.Inchbyinch,mytiredbodyreachedfortheendofthepool.Theextentofmyswimmingcareerwaspurelyrecreational,whilethecompetitiveswimmersnearbythoughtnothingoftheseeminglysimpletaskofa500-meterswimtest.PushingmyselftofinishwhatIhadstarted,Icouldonlythink:whynottaketheeasywayout?Earlierthatweek,Ihadturnedinmyfirstjobapplicationatalocalpool.Overqualified,Iwashiredonthespot.However,thetaskswereboring:helpingconfusedvisitorsandmeasuringtheheightofchildrenbeforetheywentdowntheslide,thosesortsofthings.Iwascapableofmore.Soaswimtestwasrequired,establishingthemerefactthatIwasnotcompletelyhelplessin

apool.Midwaythrough,themanageradministeringthetestremarked,“Thislooksreallyeasyforyou.Whyaren’tyouapplyingtobecomeaguard?”“Thethoughthadn'tcrossedmymind.”“Well,lifeguardingdemandsmoreresponsibility,strengthandrespect.Thusthepositionpays$2moreperhour.Yourswimmingskillsarestrongenough.Allyouneedtodoiscompleteacertificationclass.”InsideIwasunsureofmyself,buthiswordsinspiredme-Youneverknowwhatyouarecapableofuntilyouforceyourselftodoit.SoonIpassedtheswimtest.Allleftwastopracticeandlearnfirstaid,CPR(心肺復蘇），andproceduresfordifferentlandandwater-basedemergencies.Workstartedsoon.Awell-intentionedyetanxiousfeelinginmesoonpassed.Days,weeks,andmonthswentbywithoutincident;emergencieswererare.TheskillsandtrainingIhadsocarefullystudiedandacquiredseemedunnecessary.Todayappearedtobeanotheruneventfulday.However,shortlyaftertheotherguardssignaledtothechildrentoexitthepool,Inoticedoneboywasstillinthemiddlewhiletheothershadclimbedup.注意:1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右:2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself.

____________________________Paragraph2Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.

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Onepossibleversion“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself.

Sureenough,withacloserlook,Ifoundtheboywavinghishands

desperately.Iquicklydivedintothewater,swimmingtowardstheboyatfullspeed.BythetimeIreachedhim,hehadsunktothebottomofthepool,hisheadhangingdown,whichfilledmyheartwithfrightandconcern.Ipickedtheboyupandheadedtothepoolside,keepinghisheadabovethewater.Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.

Icouldtellhehadnoheartbeatandwasn’tbreathing.Everysecondcounted!Withouthesitation,Ididfirstaid,givinghim

mouth-to-mouth

breathinganddoingCPRastrained.Otherguardswatchinganxiously,Icarriedon,sweating.Suddenly,astreamofwaterburstoutofhismouthandtheboycoughedintensely.Seeingtheboyregainconsciousness,thosearoundbrokeintocheers.Exhausted,Isighedwithrelief.IthoughthadIacceptedthateasyposition,Iwouldhavebeennothingbutabystander.I’mhappyIdidn’ttaketheeasywayout.

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水中救妻閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。ItwasarainyNovembermorning.OvercomewithangerIknewifIdidn’tleavethehousesoonIwouldlosemytemperwithmyhusband,Joe.Asraincamedowninsheets,Joeofferedtotakemetowork.Istruggledintomyjacket,seizedmybagandteachingplansandignoredhim.Heinsistedandreachedforhisboots.Ilookedatthepiles