豐富句子表達(dá)的技巧

豐富句子表達(dá)的技巧1、長短結(jié)合〖例1〗中午我們曬著太陽吃野餐。休息一會兒后,我們唱歌的唱歌,跳舞的跳舞,還有講故事、下棋,大家玩得很開心?！疽话憔涫健緼tnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine.Thenwehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.【優(yōu)秀句式】Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine.Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingstoriesandplayingchess.2、避免重復(fù),適當(dāng)替換Like=love=enjoy=prefer=befondof=becarefor=appreciate等同義詞使用。優(yōu)秀的/好/棒:eXcellent=eminent=top=outstanding;wonderful/amazing/remarkable/fantastic/fabulous/gorgeous〖例2〗我喜歡讀書,而我的弟弟喜歡看電視?！疽话憔涫健縄likereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.【優(yōu)秀句式】Ienjoyreadingwhilemybrotherpreferswatchingtelevision3、短語優(yōu)先love=fallinlovewith;fill=befilledwith=beawashwith=beinundatewith=besaturatedwithdecide=makeupone'smind【一般句式】Hehasdecidedtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup.【優(yōu)秀句式】Hehasmadeuphismindtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup【一般句式】Hedoesn'tlikemusic.【優(yōu)秀句式】Hedoesn'tcaremuchformusic.【一般句式】Hetoldmethatthequestionwasnowbeingdiscussed.【優(yōu)秀句式】Hetoldmethatthequestionwasnowunderdiscussion.4、恰當(dāng)使用某些固定表達(dá)方式和習(xí)慣用法。【一般句式】Thefilmwasveryinteresting.Boththeteachersandthestudentslikedit.【優(yōu)秀句式】Thefilmwassointerestingthatboththeteachersandthestudentslikedit.【一般句式】Hewasverytired.Hecouldnotwalkanyfarther.【優(yōu)秀句式】Hewastootiredtowalkanyfarther.【一般句式】Yoursonisold.Hecanlookafterhimselfnow.【優(yōu)秀句式】YoUrsonisoldenoughtolookafterhimselfnow.5、適當(dāng)運用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)?！疽话憔涫健縒henheheardthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.【優(yōu)秀句式】Hearingthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.【一般句式】ASIdidn'tknowheraddress,Iwasn'tabletogetintouchwithher.【優(yōu)秀句式】Notknowingheraddress,Iwasn'tabletogetintouchwithher.【一般句式】Ashewasbornintoapeasantfamily,hehadonlytwoyearsofschooling.1【優(yōu)秀句式】Bornintoapeasantfamily,hehadonlytwoyearsofschooling.6、綜合運用多種句式或句型表達(dá)。(1)強(qiáng)調(diào)句【一般句式】No.20Buswouldtakethemtotheirdestinationconveniently.【優(yōu)秀句式】ItwasNo.20Busthatwouldtakethemtotheirdestinationconveniently.(2)主從復(fù)合句【一般句式】Wehadtohaveadiscussiontofigureoutapossiblesolution.【優(yōu)秀句式】Whatwehadtodowastohaveadiscussion,tryingtofigureoutapossiblesolution.(3)分詞短語、由With或WithOUt引導(dǎo)的短語【一般句式】MarywasgoodatitwhileTomalmostcouldn'tstandwithoutmyhelp,whichleftussomefunnymemories.【優(yōu)秀句式】MarywasgoodatitwhileTomalmostcouldn'tstandwithoutmyhelp,leavingussomefunnymemories.(4)倒裝句【一般句式】Iwenttobedat11:30.【優(yōu)秀句式】Notuntil11:30didIgotobed.(5)省略句【一般句式】Whileyouarecrossingthestreet,youshouldbecareful.【優(yōu)秀句式】Whilecrossingthestreet,youshouldbecareful.7、改變句子的開頭方式?！疽话憔涫健縄guidedthemtowalkaroundtheoldareastoletthemexperienceBeijing’straditionalculture.【優(yōu)秀句式】InordertoletthemexperienceBeijing'straditionalculture,Iguidedthemtowalkaroundtheoldareas.【一般句式】Myfathercouldn'thelppraisingmewhenheheardwhatIhaddone.【優(yōu)秀句式】HearingwhatIhaddone,myfathercouldn'thelppraisingme.【一般句式】TherestandvariousstoresofChinesefeaturesalongthestreet.【優(yōu)秀句式】AlongthestreetstandvariousstoresofChinesefeatures.Atthetopofthehilltherestandsanoldtemple.8、通過分句和合句,增強(qiáng)句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。【一般句式】Ourheadmasterlistenedtoourproposalattentively.Hepraisedusforourloveforschoolandpromisedtothinkovertheproblem.【優(yōu)秀句式】Ourheadmasterwholistenedtoourproposalattentively,praisedusforourloveforschoolandpromisedtothinkovertheproblem.Listeningattentively,hepraisedusforourlovefo