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1、Why is writing so tough?InputOutput第1頁/共73頁高考作文高分卷的特點外在美：第一印象很重要！書寫清楚，字母勻稱，詞、行間距適當，卷面整潔。結(jié)構(gòu)美：有合理的段落層次，多為3段式，條理清晰；每段有每段的主題。第2頁/共73頁詞匯美：詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標志。likebe fond of,be addicted to/ helpdo sb a favor 句式美：運用得當?shù)母呒壘涫浇Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。銜接美：使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞，對寫一篇有“英語味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、條理清晰。第3頁

2、/共73頁 你校英語社團部要組織一次英語賽， 就“是否應(yīng)該縮短中學生在校時間為8小時”這一論題進行辯論，請你作為正方代表，寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點如下：1.保證充足睡眠 2. 提高學習效率 3. 增加自主學習時間 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3. 辯論稿的開頭已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。 As a senior high student, I strongly recommend that 第4頁/共73頁語法篇第5頁/共73頁這第一句寫的第6頁/共73頁 I strongly recommend that This is right we as a senio

3、r high student. 第7頁/共73頁 I strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.第8頁/共73頁你再看這開頭第9頁/共73頁 I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows. 第10頁/共73頁這動詞錯的第11

4、頁/共73頁Short students time in school can have a good effect on study, it can important for students study xiaolu, and increase students own time. 第12頁/共73頁原來改書面表達就是改錯第13頁/共73頁 In my opinion, we must have enough time to study, but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep, either of them are

5、important. Because of we have time to relax, we can study energetic. Reduce study time also can improve the quality of our school life. 第14頁/共73頁這詞匯第15頁/共73頁第16頁/共73頁你再看這詞匯第17頁/共73頁第18頁/共73頁欣賞一下這篇文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)第19頁/共73頁 If equal amount of work have to be accomplished with a declined school time, study effi

6、ciently is expected to be enhanced. Moreover, extra-curricular time will make up more of the students schedule. That is to say, chances are we can make a better use of our time. 第20頁/共73頁卷面篇第21頁/共73頁養(yǎng)眼的第22頁/共73頁第23頁/共73頁第24頁/共73頁第25頁/共73頁第26頁/共73頁第27頁/共73頁第28頁/共73頁第29頁/共73頁當批到下午兩點看到了它們第30頁/共73頁太擠了第3

7、1頁/共73頁太亂了第32頁/共73頁太空了第33頁/共73頁太潦草了第34頁/共73頁太花了第35頁/共73頁太沒譜了第36頁/共73頁老師最恨的作文第37頁/共73頁大鍋，標點呢？段呢？第38頁/共73頁姐，你長發(fā)及腰的字體難掩你每句都錯的事實??！第39頁/共73頁神，你別抄閱讀理解行不？俺們也會看試卷的！第40頁/共73頁老師最喜歡的作文第41頁/共73頁Great minds think alike!第42頁/共73頁一點提示第43頁/共73頁好練的字第44頁/共73頁筆第45頁/共73頁筆第46頁/共73頁過長第47頁/共73頁答題不可越界第48頁/共73頁作文五檔：（ 從教師閱卷印

8、象角度劃分）漂漂亮亮 （2125分）有模有樣 （1620分）馬馬虎虎 （1115分）稀里糊涂 （610分）一塌糊涂 （05分）第49頁/共73頁Three Rules:1.You learn to write by writing.2. There is no good writing; only good rewriting.3. When in dout, refer to Rule No. 1 and 2.第50頁/共73頁Five Steps:Analyze the writing task.Organize it.Draft.Revise.Edit.第51頁/共73頁第52頁/共73

9、頁高考英語寫作中高考英語寫作中怎樣使用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)怎樣使用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)第53頁/共73頁1.1.適當?shù)恼Z態(tài)適當?shù)恼Z態(tài)2.2.使用不定式使用不定式 3.3.使用過去分詞使用過去分詞4.4.使用使用V.+ingV.+ing形式形式 5.5.使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句 6.6.使用定語從句使用定語從句7.7.使用虛擬語氣使用虛擬語氣8.8.使用倒裝句使用倒裝句, ,感嘆句感嘆句 怎樣運用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)：怎樣運用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)：第54頁/共73頁怎樣運用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)：怎樣運用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)：1.1.主動轉(zhuǎn)被動 People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般) that the

10、 conference be put off.that the conference be put off. (高級)The advisor is expected to work 4 hours a week . We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week . It is suggested第55頁/共73頁2. 2. 使用不定式使用不定式3. 3. 使用過去分詞使用過去分詞In order to earn money by myself and broaden my horizonsShe walked out of the room and

11、many students followed her. (一般) , she walked out of the room . . (高級) ，I intend to look for a part-time job as a salesman. （為了獨立賺錢和拓寬視野）Followed by many students第56頁/共73頁4. 4. 使用使用v-ingv-ing形式形式2 2） , , Ill Ill visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.（天氣允許的話）1）Now our s

12、chool has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般)Now our School has three teachersNow our School has three teachers，Weather permittingteaching 48 pupils. 伴隨狀語第57頁/共73頁What is the most important is that5. 5. 使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句2. I can I can help children improve their English.(help children improve th

13、eir English.(最為重要的是) )1.I am sorry. I didnt reply without delay. I am sorry that I didnt reply without delay.第58頁/共73頁6. 6. 使用定語從句使用定語從句1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)The girlThe girl was was highly spoken of.spoken of. (高級)2)maybe I will work as a volunteer fo

14、r a school as a teaching assistant_.(這將豐富我的生活)which is able to enrich my life.which will make my life colorful.whose composition was well writtenenriching my life第59頁/共73頁7. 7. 使用虛擬語氣使用虛擬語氣我相信如果你是我，你也會做出同樣的選擇。 I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice. 第60頁/共73頁8. 8. 使用倒裝句、感嘆句使用倒

15、裝句、感嘆句 earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不僅能獨立賺錢)1. I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. (我多么希望)2. not only but also引起的倒裝How I wish Not only can I第61頁/共73頁高考英語寫作中高考英語寫作中要要學會使用恰當?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞第62頁/共73頁 III.常用的常用的連接詞連接詞1. 表示遞進表示遞進;在同一話題上補充內(nèi)容在同一話題上補充內(nèi)容 另外，還有：wha

16、ts more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.第63頁/共73頁3. 表示因果關(guān)系表示因果關(guān)系 因為，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關(guān)系表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unles

17、s 否則: or else第64頁/共73頁 5. 表示時間關(guān)系表示時間關(guān)系 當 的時候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 直到才: notuntil 一就 : as soon as 后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recently 自從 :since 從那時起: from then on第65頁/共73頁6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先:firstly 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: fin

18、ally; in the end7. 換一種方法表述換一種方法表述 換句話說: in other words; that is to say; 第66頁/共73頁8. 進行舉例說明進行舉例說明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, for this reason 9. 用于陳述事實用于陳述事實 實際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact跟你說實話 : to tell you