九年級(jí)英語作文名師輔導(dǎo)資料

1、九年級(jí)英語作文名師輔導(dǎo)資料一、例題精析書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）題目：假設(shè)你叫王平，你了解到Happy Teens是一個(gè)專門通過開展豐富多彩的活動(dòng)來解決青少年問題的組織。請(qǐng)用英語給Happy Teens的主席Mr. Holmes 寫一封電子郵件，介紹同學(xué)李強(qiáng)加入他們的組織。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 要點(diǎn)：1. 李強(qiáng)是九年級(jí)二班的尖子生。2. 正直、樂于助人，已幫助兩名貧困兒童重返學(xué)校。3. 有時(shí)因父母要求太嚴(yán)格而感到悶悶不樂。4. 幾天前來向我征求建議。5. 你鼓勵(lì)他加入Happy Teens，這樣就可以開心起來。 要求： 1.語句通順，意思連貫。2.包含以上所有要點(diǎn)。3.詞數(shù)80左右

2、。Dear Mr. Holmes,I have a friend named Li Qiang._ I hope you will accept him to be a member of the club. Yours, Wang Ping【題目分析】（一）審題可得1. 文體：寫信的應(yīng)用文2. 時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，還有現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。3. 要點(diǎn)把握：1) 李強(qiáng)是九年級(jí)二班的尖子生。2) 正直、樂于助人，已幫助兩名貧困兒童重返學(xué)校。3) 有時(shí)因父母要求太嚴(yán)格而感到悶悶不樂。4) 幾天前來向我征求建議。5) 你鼓勵(lì)他加入Happy Teens，這樣就可以開心起來。6) 我了解到Happ

3、y Teens是一個(gè)專門通過開展豐富多彩的活動(dòng)來解決青少年問題的組織。7) 我想介紹同學(xué)李強(qiáng)加入你們的組織。 （二）要點(diǎn)組織1) 李強(qiáng)是九年級(jí)二班的尖子生。He is a top student of Class Two Grade Nine. 2) 正直、樂于助人，已幫助兩名貧困兒童重返學(xué)校。He is an honest boy and he always helps others. / He is honest and helpful.He has helped two poor children to returned to school to study. 3) 有時(shí)因父母要求太嚴(yán)格

4、而感到悶悶不樂。Sometimes he is in a bad mood because his parents are too strict with him.4) 幾天前來向我征求建議。He came to ask me for advice a few days ago.5) 你鼓勵(lì)他加入Happy Teens，這樣就可以開心起來。I encouraged him to join the Happy Teens. He can be happy again.6) 我了解到Happy Teens是一個(gè)專門通過開展豐富多彩的活動(dòng)來解決青少年問題的組織。I learnt that Happy

5、 Teens is a special organization to solve the youth problems through all kinds of activities.I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization which solves the youth problems through all kinds of activities.7) 我想介紹同學(xué)李強(qiáng)加入你們的組織。 I want to introduce him to join our organization.（三）分析題目，寫好開頭和結(jié)尾，恰當(dāng)增加連接

6、句子和連接詞，使文章一氣呵成。Dear Mr. Holmes, I have a friend named Li Qiang. He is a top student of Class Two Grade Nine. And all of us love him very much. Why? Because he is an honest boy and he always helps others. As we all know, he has helped two poor children to returned to school to study. However, sometim

7、es he is in a bad mood because his parents are too strict with him. We all are unhappy. And he is very worried. So, he came to ask me for advice a few days ago. These days, I learnt that Happy Teens is a special organization which solves the youth problems through all kinds of activities. So I encou

8、raged him to join the Happy Teens. As result, I introduce him to join the organization in order that he can be happy again. I hope you will accept him to be a member of the club. Yours, Wang Ping二、中考考點(diǎn)要求1. 根據(jù)中文提示，寫一篇70-100字左右的英文表達(dá)。(盡量不要超過150個(gè)單詞)2. 內(nèi)容完整，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順、連貫、單詞拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確，書寫工整。三、作文七注意（一）從整體著眼,提

9、綱挈領(lǐng)扣題意1.審清文體 2. 選準(zhǔn)人稱 3. 用好時(shí)態(tài) 4. 突出要點(diǎn)（二）避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。（三）多用簡(jiǎn)單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句,感嘆句.適當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句。另外,要根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容需要少量套用一些英語格言警句,諺語等以加強(qiáng)文章的感染力.（四）注意語法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。1）語態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的用法。4）注意冠詞用法。例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。5）注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)

10、符號(hào)和大小寫。e.g：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant, etc.（五）謀篇布局寫好篇章結(jié)構(gòu)【抓兩頭促中間】（六）檢查修改文章: 認(rèn)真檢查，改正錯(cuò)誤。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的 連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手：1）格式是否有錯(cuò)。2）拼寫有無錯(cuò)誤。3）語言是否用錯(cuò)。4）是否遺漏要點(diǎn)5)時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。6)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和大小寫錯(cuò)誤。7）人稱是否用錯(cuò)。（七）寫好草稿（如果時(shí)間允許的話）, 然后再抄到卷面上。書面表達(dá)要特別注意書寫工整，卷面

11、整潔。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)。四、謀篇布局寫好篇章結(jié)構(gòu)【抓兩頭促中間】（一）作文萬能結(jié)構(gòu)示意圖Middle 正文Ending 結(jié)尾concluding sentence 結(jié)論句-對(duì)全文的總結(jié)和概括?！窘Y(jié)尾畫龍點(diǎn)睛，首尾呼應(yīng)】supporting sentences 支持句-用例子、實(shí)事或數(shù)據(jù)圍繞主題開展敘述、討論?！咀⒁馐褂眠B接詞】topic sentence 主題句-說出文中的要點(diǎn)、核心問題【寫好開頭，好的開始是成功的一半】Beginning開頭（二）開頭、結(jié)尾和正文三大板塊的訓(xùn)練【寫好開頭，好的開始是成功的一半】Good beginning is half done.

12、1. 仔細(xì)審題，提煉和歸納主題句2. 開頭萬能句型：1) .plays an important part in the.2) As we all know, . becomes more and more.3) As everybody knows, .is one of the most.in . 4) Many people say that. But I dont think so.5) I will never forget the .3.造主題句訓(xùn)練Make a topic sentence.1）SmokingAs we all know, smoking is a bad hab

13、it.Many students say smoking is fun, but I dont think so. As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health. 2）The Spring FestivalI will never forget the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival plays an important part in our life. Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival.

14、But I dont think so. 3）Learning EnglishAs we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.Many people say its difficult to learn English. But I dont think so. 4）To be a volunteer for the 16th Asian Games As we all know, the 16th Asian Games is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for

15、it.A volunteer plays an important part in the 16th Asian Games. 5）A School TripI will never forget the school trip last week.【寫好結(jié)尾畫龍點(diǎn)睛，首尾呼應(yīng)】1. 與開頭呼應(yīng)，再次重申自己的觀點(diǎn), 注意避免重復(fù)句式。2. 結(jié)尾經(jīng)典詞組、句型： At last/ Finally . 最后 In a word, . 總而言之 In short, . 簡(jiǎn)言之 We hope that··· 我們希望 Lets try our best to . I

16、believe if we can., . will be . What a .! / How.!3.根據(jù)主題概括訓(xùn)練Make a concluding sentence1）Keeping healthyLets try our best to keep healthy. In short, its important to have good habits and keep healthy.2）Helping othersI believe if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful.3）To be a g

17、reen consumer(綠色消費(fèi)者)Lets try our best to be a green consumer. In one word, its necessary for us to protect the environment.4）Beijing How beautiful Beijing is! Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?開頭、結(jié)尾的實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練書面表達(dá)在日常生活中你主動(dòng)幫助你的父母做家務(wù)活嗎？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示用英語寫一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平時(shí)所做家務(wù)以及你對(duì)家務(wù)的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 掃地 3. 幫助媽媽做

18、飯 4.洗衣服 5. 為花澆水 6. 飯后洗碗要求：語句通暢，語法正確。不得逐句翻譯。滿分作文 （25分）As we all know, its important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch. After supper, I always wash dishes. I think

19、 it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. I always wash clothes for my family. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即總括又闡明看法） 【正文：語言簡(jiǎn)潔，層次分明】1.長(zhǎng)句短句交叉使用最好。2.基礎(chǔ)一

20、般的同學(xué)要盡量使用簡(jiǎn)單句，文章算不上完美，但很實(shí)用，基礎(chǔ)好的同學(xué)要恰當(dāng)寫些從句提高檔次。3.把握要點(diǎn)，層次清晰。4.注意句子與句子、段與段之間過渡自然，行文連貫，注意適當(dāng)使用連詞，例如：and ,so ,or, but, become正文：巧用連接詞，賦予語言靈氣需要熟記的連接詞有：1、按事情發(fā)展的先后或時(shí)間順序 1）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the

21、same time, not.until, before, after, when , while, during2、表示并列not only. but also, both. and, either .or, neither.nor，on (the) one handon the other hand3、表示舉例或補(bǔ)充 1）for example 2）besides / whats more/ whats worse4、表示轉(zhuǎn)折 however, but，although, instead of5、表示原因 thanks to, because of，because6、表示結(jié)果 as res

22、ult (of) , so ，so.that, such.that, 7、表目的 in order to, so that8、表比較 the same as, than, of all .正文巧用連接詞和從句的實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練Example:生活中充滿了愛，有父母的愛，有兄弟姐妹的愛，有朋友的愛，有老師的愛.請(qǐng)以“Love”為話題，簡(jiǎn)要描述一件發(fā)生在你身邊的事。要求：1、語言規(guī)范，書寫工整。2、80個(gè)詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）3、文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名和地名 Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love me

23、ans giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding.基礎(chǔ)一般的同學(xué)的寫法：Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding. One day, I played football with my classmates on the playground. I fell down and hurt

24、 my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “ We are good friends, we should help each other.” I was deeply moved. I couldnt say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others.基礎(chǔ)好的同學(xué)的寫法：范

25、文Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding. There is a lot of love around us. One day, when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took

26、me to the hospital at once. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “As we are good friends, we should help each other.” I was too moved to say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others.正文：巧用連接詞，賦予語言靈氣（上文句子對(duì)比）Which sentence is better

27、?1. I played football on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs. ( good)When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs. (better)句式富于變化Which sentence is better?1.We are good friends. We should help each other. （good）We are good friends and we should help each other.

28、 （better） As we are good friends , we should help each other.（best）句式富于變化1.I was deeply moved and I couldnt say a word. (good ) I was too moved to say a word. (better)五、作文步驟1. 審題分析題目：找出作文的文體、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和文章的要點(diǎn)。2. 根據(jù)要點(diǎn)的意思用英語進(jìn)行最貼切的表達(dá)。注意每一個(gè)句子的主語盡量多樣化，也就是說句子類型要多樣化（能力的范圍內(nèi)盡量簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句交替使用），但文章的人稱、時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)基本保持一致。另外，如果你有些

29、要點(diǎn)不會(huì)直接表達(dá)，則注意轉(zhuǎn)變成你會(huì)表達(dá)的英文去表達(dá)，但不要改變文章原本的意思更不能因?yàn)椴粫?huì)表達(dá)就放棄表達(dá)或者用錯(cuò)誤的表達(dá)。3. 多運(yùn)用過渡詞，連句成文，使全篇結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。每個(gè)點(diǎn)都要寫全，并要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,并按要點(diǎn)來分段，注意段落的結(jié)構(gòu)，段落不可亂分，要有過渡。4. 寫好開頭和結(jié)尾。5. 復(fù)查糾錯(cuò)。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手：1）格式是否有錯(cuò)。2）拼寫有無錯(cuò)誤。3）語言是否用錯(cuò)。4）是否遺漏要點(diǎn)。5) 時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。6) 標(biāo)點(diǎn)和大小寫錯(cuò)誤。7）人稱是否用錯(cuò)。6. 注意書寫，卷面做到無任何一處涂改。要求：打好草稿，并在草稿上改正。附：卷子的卷面很重要，要求有時(shí)間，都要草稿，特別是看圖寫句子。六、附

30、：8個(gè)話題作文1.關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)英語的話題: “How to learn English well?” 2.衛(wèi)生健康飲食: 3. “初三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉”。 4.環(huán)境問題 5.關(guān)于“人口問題 POPULATION ”6.關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn),談?wù)勀愕目捶?.介紹自己的興趣業(yè)余愛好。8.春節(jié)習(xí)俗與計(jì)劃,如何過2010年的春節(jié)。一. 環(huán)保 1. Its our duty to protect our environment。 2. It is very impor

31、tant to take care of our environment 3. We should not throw litter onto the ground 4. We should not spit in a public place/  cut down the trees 5. We shoul

32、d plant more flowers and trees。 6. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin 7. If everyone makes contributions to protecting the environment, the wor

33、ld will become much more beautiful.二、 旅游 1. Last Sunday(Saturday,) ,it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,) 2. I got up very early (late). After breakfast I went to with my

34、60;friends by bike, bus， 3. We enjoyed ourselves. 4. We forgot the time. We didnt come back until 5 oclock。 5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy. 6. I t

35、hought I would never forget this trip. 7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。 8. We visited a lot of places of interest. 9. We had&#

36、160;a good time there. 10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap. 三、 比賽 1. Last Sunday, Class One had a football match with Class Two.

37、2. All of us went to watch it. 3. The match was very exciting. 4. In fact, I have never seen such an exciting match before。 5. The score was 5-3. Our team&

38、#160;scored three goals in the last fifteen minutes. 6. Class One won this match. Class Two lost. 7. Class One played well. They deserved to win。 8. Their PE teacher was&

39、#160;very pleased with their performance. 四、 健康 1. It is very important to keep healthy. 2. How can we keep healthy? 3. We cant go to sleep too late. We cant get

40、0;up too late。 4. We should eat the food healthily. 5. We should do more exercise. 6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。 7. I didnt feel&

41、#160;like eating anything.8. I decided to see the doctor. 9. In the doctors office, the doctor looks over me carefully. 10. He said :"Nothing serious." And he told&#

42、160;me to take a rest and drink more water. 11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful. 12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three t

43、imes a day. 13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.五、 學(xué)科 1. My favorite 

44、subject is English。 2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English.3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world. 4

45、. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China. English becomes more and more useful.5. So English is very important and I like Eng

46、lish very much。 6. We have a lot of fun in the English class.7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class. 8. I hope I can go abroad on

47、e day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。 9. I like English and try my best to learn it. 六、 節(jié)日 1. In China the most important holiday is the Sp

48、ring Festival. 2. It comes in January or February. 3. On the Spring Festival Eve people have a big dinner. They have a lot of nice food to eat. 4. During the

49、60;Spring Festival people have a lot of interesting things to do. 5. People visit their relatives and friends.。 6. They greet each other with a hug and say, "Happy New Year“. 7. As China is a big country, people in different places celebrate  this holiday