使用定語從句和同位語提升寫作

1、.Improve Writing with Attributive Clause and Appositive 使用定語從句和同位語提升寫作使用定語從句和同位語提升寫作2018.10.14.Recall Recall 用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)系詞填空用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)系詞填空1 I borrowed the book Sherlock Holmes from the library last week, _ my classmates recommended to me.2 A company _ profits(利潤) from home markets are declining may seek opport

2、unities abroad.3 Well reach the sales targets in a month _ we set at the beginning of the year.4 Among the many dangers _ sailors have to face, probably the greatest of all is fog.whichwhose(Which/that)(Which/that).RecallRecall5 Many countries are now setting up national parks _ animals and plants c

3、an be protected.6 We have launched another manmade satellite, _is announced in todays newspaper.7 Finally he reached a lonely island _ was completely cut off from the outside world.8 That evening, _ I will tell you more about later, I ended up working very late.whichWhich/thatwhichwhere.RecallRecall

4、用定語從句合并下列簡(jiǎn)單句用定語從句合并下列簡(jiǎn)單句Mr. Smith is a teacher. He is very strict. 2. The girl is called Mary. I saw her yesterday. 3. This is the factory. I visited it last year. 4. The house is Toms. Its door faces south. Mr.Smith is a teacher who is very strict.The girl whom I saw yesterday is called Mary. This

5、is the factory which / that I visited last year. The house whose door faces south is Toms .Writing practiceWriting practice根據(jù)提示，完成下面的小作文。根據(jù)提示，完成下面的小作文。1珍妮珍妮(Jenny)，是一個(gè)著名的小說家，是一個(gè)著名的小說家(novelist)，上周出，上周出版了一部新的小說。版了一部新的小說。(publish)2它描繪了一次不同尋常的冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷。它描繪了一次不同尋常的冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷。(extraordinary adventure)3主人公主人公(hero)騎

6、駱駝來到一個(gè)廢棄的城堡。騎駱駝來到一個(gè)廢棄的城堡。(camel，desert)4在城堡里他遇到了一位美人在城堡里他遇到了一位美人(beauty)。5他們相愛了并一起出發(fā)去探索神秘的沙漠。他們相愛了并一起出發(fā)去探索神秘的沙漠。(explore).One possible edition:Jenny is a famous novelist，and she published a new novel last week. It describes an extraordinary adventure. The hero rode a camel to a deserted castle，and h

7、e met a beauty there. They fell in love with each other and they together set off to explore the mysterious desert.One advanced edition:Jenny，who is a famous novelist，published a new novel last week，which describes an extraordinary adventure.The hero rode a camel to a deserted castle，where he met a

8、beauty.They fell in love with each other and they together set off to explore the mysterious desert.Appositive同位語.Appositive同位語表示與前面的名詞處于同一關(guān)系，在語法上是“名詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu)，在意義上，后一個(gè)名詞解釋前一個(gè)名詞。例如，在句子“我們的語文老師，陳陳老師老師，教書非常出色”中，劃線部分就是同位語。英文“Mr. Chen, our teacher of Chinese, teaches us excellently”，劃線部分就是同位語。.Appositive1

9、China, which is a country with a long history of 5000 years, is now developing very fast. （定語從句）改為：改為：China, a country with a long history of 5000 years, is now developing very fast.Appositive 2 Finally, Su Dongpo, who was a great poet, arrived in Huizhou, which was then a city famous for its beauti

10、ful lakes.改為：改為：Finally, Su Dongpo, a great poet, arrived in Huizhou, then a city famous for its beautiful lakes. .Appositive3 Egypt, which is a country with a long history of 5000 years, attracts many tourists from all over the world. （定語從句）改為：改為：Egypt, a country with a long history of 5000 years,

11、attracts many tourists from all over the world.Practice1.I am looking to visiting Beijing. It is a city with many famous places of interest.2.I am looking forward to visiting Beijing. It is the capital of china. 3.He paid a visit to Mr. Bush. He was president of the United States of America. 4.Mr. Bush saw a pair of little pandas in the zoo. They were a kind of animal only alive in China. .One advanced edition:Jenny，who is a famous novelist，published a new novel last week，which describes an extraordinary adventure.The he