Unit 5 Period 5 Writing上課用

1、Period 7 WritingHow to write about a How to write about a great persongreat personLet me think Let me think about it!about it!Enjoy the sample Read the sample first, then tell me how to write an artical about a great person? 1891.9.25出生于浙江紹興. 1898到南京求學(xué). 1902赴日本留學(xué). 1904開始學(xué)醫(yī) 1909回到祖國(guó),到杭州任教. 19181936是很

2、重要的時(shí)期.他的絕大部分作品寫于這一時(shí)期. 1936.10.19在上海逝世. 被譽(yù)為偉大的文學(xué)家,思想家和革命家.Lu Xuns Story Lu Xun, born in Shaoxing,Zhejiang province, was a well-known Chinese writer. He was not only a great thinker(思想家思想家), b u t a l s o a m a i n founder of modern Chinese literature(文學(xué)).l the basic facts of the persons life.l his ef

3、fect( 影響影響)on the world or other people At his youth(青年時(shí)期), Lu Xun studied surgery (醫(yī)學(xué)) in Japan, in order to save the patients from dying. Later, he turned to literature to cure the minds of the people. He was a patriot (愛國(guó)者愛國(guó)者)who devoted all his life to saving our country . He tried his best to o

4、pen the eyes and minds of the whole country. Many of his works criticized the bad effects of Confucius thoughts. l special or interesting experienceslgood qualities lmain contribution He wrote many famous novels and essays, many of which has been made into films, like The True story of Ah Q. Madmans

5、 Diary, which is written by Lu Xun, i s s e e n a s t h e f i r s t masterpiece (杰作杰作) of modern Chinese literature. As an important literature prize in China, the Lu Xun Literary Prize(魯迅文學(xué)獎(jiǎng)魯迅文學(xué)獎(jiǎng)) is named after(以以.的名字命的名字命名名) him. examples from his life achievenments All in all, he made g re a t s

6、 u c c e s s i n literature and also m a d e g r e a t c o n t r i b u t i o n t o fighting against the bad feudal (封建的封建的) thoughts in China. Lu Xun will always be remembered as a great writer by the people forever. effects in a short sentence ( 影響影響)All in all, he made great success in literature

7、and fighting with the feudal thoughts.Lu Xun will always be remembered as a great writer by the people forever. effects in a short sentence ( 影響影響)Structure of such lettersPart 1: A small paragraphPart 2: Part 3: Body paragraphs Closing paragraphYour opiniondescribe in details A small paragraphBrief

8、 introductionBody paragraphs: special or experiences & good qualitiesHard work & achievements Closing paragraphYour opinion lFind out the basic facts of the persons life.l What kind of effect( 影響影響)did he or she have on the world or other people? lWhat makes this person special or interestin

9、g? l What are the the persons good qualities? l What examples from his life can illustrate (證證明明) those qualities? 第一步第一步 認(rèn)真審題認(rèn)真審題(analyze the requirements） 第二步第二步 謀篇布局謀篇布局(draw up an outline) 第三步第三步 聯(lián)句成篇聯(lián)句成篇(organize the sentences) 第四步第四步 錦上添花錦上添花(get the article polished up) 第五步第五步 查漏補(bǔ)缺查漏補(bǔ)缺 (check

10、 the mistakes)審主題審主題 審體裁審體裁 審人稱審人稱 審時(shí)態(tài)審時(shí)態(tài)a summary of Nelson Mandelas lifea biography(傳記傳記) the thirdthe past tense按時(shí)間順序列按時(shí)間順序列出提綱出提綱 on one hand, on the other handbut, however, while, though, otherwisebecause, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of) so long as, if, unlessthough, as, even if/though,

11、whether, who (what, when, where) everwhats more, besides, whats worsein a word, altogether, all in all, in generalBe sure that you didnt make any spelling, logical and grammatical mistakes.July 18, 1918 near Transkei (South Africa) Entry university but did not complete degree Formed ANC Youth League

12、 Set up law office to help poor black people in Johannesburg attacked anti-black law Government by and for white people set up in south Africa Encouraged violence against anti-black laws Led ANC to blow up government buildings Won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993for his great and lifelong work to help

13、the black people get the same rights as white people. 南非前總統(tǒng)曼德拉 納爾遜羅利赫拉赫拉曼德拉( Nelson Rolihlahla Mandela ）1918年7月18日出生于南非，當(dāng)過(guò)律師。曼德拉自幼性格剛強(qiáng)，崇敬民族英雄,他成功地組織并領(lǐng)導(dǎo)了“蔑視不公正法令運(yùn)動(dòng)”，贏得了全體黑人的尊敬。 1962年8月，曼德拉被捕入獄，當(dāng)時(shí)他年僅43歲，南非政府判處他5年監(jiān)禁。1964年6月，他又被改判為無(wú)期徒刑，從此開始了漫長(zhǎng)的鐵窗生涯，在獄中長(zhǎng)達(dá)27個(gè)春秋，他備受迫害和折磨，但始終堅(jiān)貞不屈。1990年2月11日，南非當(dāng)局在國(guó)內(nèi)外輿論壓力下，被迫

14、宣布無(wú)條件釋放曼德拉。1993年10月，諾貝爾和平委員會(huì)授予他諾貝爾和平獎(jiǎng)，以表彰他為廢除南非種族歧視政策所作出的貢獻(xiàn)。1994年4月，非國(guó)大在南非首次不分種族的大選中獲勝。同年5月，曼德拉成為南非第一位黑人總統(tǒng)。1997年12月，曼德拉辭去非國(guó)大主席一職，并表示不再參加1999年6月的總統(tǒng)競(jìng)選。1999年6月正式去職。Para 1: Personal InformationPara 2: Hard work and achievementPara 3: good qualitiesPara 4: Your opinion【常用表達(dá)】 1. 描述偉人個(gè)人信息： .was born in a .family in China in . . grew up in a small countryside near. . be interested in . . began to . when he / she . 2. 描寫偉人經(jīng)歷、事跡或成就： , encourage(鼓勵(lì)、支持) sb. to do sth., , make up ones mind to