雅思大作文四段式.ppt

Howtoachieveband7 IELTSWriting Leon 四段式概述 IntroductionBodyParagraph1 BP1 BodyParagraph2 BP2 Conclusion 四段式構思Plan BrainStrom Organise Prons Cons 1 2 3 1 2 3 4 四段式構思Plan BrainStrom Organise 根據(jù)之前優(yōu)缺點的分析 哪種有思路寫哪種 確定文章結(jié)構 四段式如何寫Introduction Introduction簡單明了兩句話轉(zhuǎn)述題目句 中心思想句第一句簡單的轉(zhuǎn)述題目第二句用although或者while句型來提出自己的觀點 四段式如何寫Introduction 舉個例子Thesedays anincreasingnumberofyoungsterschoosetoworkorstudyoverseas Althoughthismightbefrowneduponbysomeforcertainreasons Itendtocontendthatyoungpeoplearelikelytobenefitfromoverseasexperience Technologicalprogresshastakenplacethroughoutthecourseofhumanhistory Whileearlytechnologiescertainlychangedthelivesofnormalpeople Ibelievethatrecentbreakthroughshavehadanevengreaterimpact 四段式如何寫B(tài)P Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 中心句觀點一 論述一觀點二 論述二觀點三 論述三總結(jié)句 四段式如何寫B(tài)P Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 舉個例子Topic Thedisadvantagesoflivinginacity 先想出幾個可寫觀點盡量簡單 具體會有助于寫作用簡單的思路去說服自己 不要用中文的思維去反駁質(zhì)疑自己的觀點想不出多的就把大的細分 四段式如何寫B(tài)P Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 生活成本高 社會問題多 生活質(zhì)量差 四段式如何寫B(tài)P Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 Cityliveshaveseveraldrawbacks Firstly thecostoflivinginacityisusuallyhigherthaninasmalltownorvillage Forexample inhabitsofcitiesoftenhavetopayhigherpricesforhousing transport andevenfood Secondly urbanarestendtosufferfromsocialproblemssuchashighcrimeandpovertyratesincomparsionwithruralareas Finally theairqualityincitiesisoftenpoor duetopollutionfromtraffic andstreetsandpublictransportsystemareusuallyovercrowded Asaresult citylifecanbeunhealtyandstressful 93words Band9 中心句觀點一 論述一觀點二 論述二觀點三 論述三總結(jié)句 四段式如何寫B(tài)P 反面論述段只論述只論述 不反駁 基本和正面的FSF結(jié)構段寫法差不多 四段式如何寫B(tài)P 反駁段論述 反駁委婉語氣論述反面觀點 然后再反駁Thosepeoplewhothink mightarguewiththat Nevertheless asfarasIamconcerned Therefore 四段式如何寫B(tài)P 反駁段舉個例子Somepeoplethinksportgamescanbringpeacetooursociety yetsomebelievethatitmaycausetensionbetweennations我的觀點是體育可以帶來和平 在第一段FSF論述后 第二段如下 進行反面論述 Ontheotherhand therearemanyconflictsrelatedtosportgames andthismightbewhysomepeoplethinksportswouldcausetensionbetweennations Forexample somefansmighthavearrgessiveactionsaftertheteamthattheyfavourlost Nevertheless inmyopinion themajorreasonofwhycertainsportfanstendtohaveoffensiveactionsisthattheylackgoodmannersthemselves andthegamesarejustbeinganexcusefortheirbadbehaviours Therefore sportsarenottoblameforsuchconflicts anditwouldinfactimproverelationshipbetweennationsiftheplayersandfansofbothsidesrepecteachother 自己寫的 語言不太地道 可能有語病 但是7分段沒問題 四段式如何寫B(tài)P Causesandsolutions段 遇見原因 方法的文 用類似于FSF段落的寫法 只要ideas豐富 很容易組織起來的 四段式如何寫Conclusion Conclusion短小精簡重述觀點不引入新的東西只用Inconclusion 開頭 不需要用別的 Tosumup等等 四段式如何寫Conclusion 舉個例子Inconclusion Idonotbelievethatanyfinancialconcessionsshouldbemadeforpeoplewhochooseprivateeducation Inconclusion whilesalariescertainlyaffectpeople schoiceofprofession Idonotbelievethatmoneyoutweighsallothermotivators Inconclusion theissueofsmokingischallengingandcomplex butitisbynomeansinsurmountable ThemeasuresmentionedabovewouldbeeffectivetipreventmorepeoplefromsmokingInconclusion ibelievethatthegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestostrictlyregulatetheviolentcontentsinmovies 四段式如何整體布局 第一種 IntroductionBP1 FSF正面論述 BP2 反駁式反駁反面 Conclusion 四段式如何整體布局 第一種 舉個例子 Peoplehavedifferentattitudestowardschanges Althoughsomeindividualsprefertodoonejobintheirlives Itendtobelievethatitwouldbebetterifweareusedtochanges Tobeginwith changescaninfacthavebeneficialoutcomes Firstly theexperienceofengagingindifferentoccupationswouldbeanadvantageforcareers Thisisbecauseemployersusuallyvaluethosewithawiderangeofworkingskills Secondly adaptingtoanewworkingenvironmentalsomeansmeetingnewcolleaguesandfriends andthisislikelytoenlargeone ssocialcircle Therefore Ithinkpeople especiallyyoungsters canbenefitfromchangesbygainingvariouslivingandworkingexperience Ontheotherhand thosewhoavoidchangesintheirlivesalsohaveunderstandablereasons Oneconcernmightbethatpeoplewouldhavetolearnnewprofessionalskillstoadapttothenewposition whichseemstobecounterproductive Additionally someindividualsdonotwanttochangejobssimplybecausetheyaresatisfiedwiththecurrentones However asfarasIamconcerned weshouldlearnhowtoadapttochangesanywaybecausethewholeworldischangingrapidlyitself Asaresult lessandlessoccupationscanberegardedaslife longtoday Forexample manypostmenmightlosetheirjobs eveniftheyhavebeendoingitwell becauseoftheubiquityofEmails Inconclusion peopleshouldgetusedtochanges Thisisnotonlybecausechangescanoftenbepositive buttheyaresometimesinevitable 自己寫的 估計7分 四段式如何整體布局 第二種 IntroductionBP1 FSF正面論述 BP2 FSF論述反方觀點 Conclusion正論和反論的順序可變 四段式如何整體布局 第二種 舉個例子 Somepeoplethinkthatinthemodernworldwearemoredependentoneachother whileothersthinkthatpeoplehavebecomemoreindependent Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherwearemoreorlessdependentonothersnowadays Inmyview modernlifeforcesustobemoreindependentthanpeoplewereinthepast Therearetwomainreasonswhyitcouldbearguedthatwearemoredependentoneachothernow Firstly lifeismorecomplexanddifficult especiallybecausethecostoflivinghasincreasedsodramatically Forexample youngadultstendtorelyontheirparentsforhelpwhenbuyingahouse Propertypricesarehigherthanever andwithouthelpitwouldbeimpossibleformanypeopletopayadepositandamortgage Secondly peopleseemtobemoreambitiousnowadays andtheywantabetterqualityoflifefortheirfamilies Thismeansthatbothparentsusuallyneedtoworkfull time andtheydependonsupportfromgrandparentsandbabysittersforchildcare However Iwouldagreewiththosewhobelievethatpeoplearemoreindependentthesedays Inmostcountries familiesarebecomingsmallerandmoredispersed whichmeansthatpeoplecannotcountonrelativesasmuchastheyusedto Wealsohavemorefreedomtotravelandlivefarawayfromourhometowns Forexample manystudentschoosetostudyabroadinsteadofgoingtotheirlocaluniversity andthisexperiencemakesthemmoreindependentastheylearntolivealone Anotherfactorinthisgrowingindependenceistechnology whichallowsustoworkaloneandfromanypartoftheworld Inconclusion whiletherearesomereasonstobelievethatpeoplenowdependoneachothermore myownviewisthatwearemoreindependentthanever 四段式如何整體布局 第三種 IntroductionBP1 從一個角度用FSF正面論述 BP2 從另一個角度FSF正面論述 Conclusion 四段式如何整體布局 第三種 舉個例子 band9tourismItissometimesarguedthattouristsfromoverseasshouldbechargedmorethanlocalresidentstovisitimportantsitesandmonuments Icompletelydisagreewiththisidea Theargumentinfavourofhigherpricesforforeigntouristswouldbethatculturalandhistoricalattractionsoftendependonstatesubsidiestokeepthemgoing whichmeansthatresidentpopulationalreadypaysforthesesitesthroughthetaxsystem However Ibelievethistobeaveryshortsightedview Foreigntouristscontributetotheeconomyofthehostcountrywiththemoneytheyspendonawiderangeofgoodsandservices includingfood souvenirs accommodationandtravel Thegovernmentsandresidentsofeverycountryshouldbehappytosubsidiseimportanttouri