地點(diǎn)寫作以及練習(xí).ppt

基礎(chǔ)寫作訓(xùn)練,Basic Writing,寫一篇介紹荔灣鎮(zhèn)（The Town of Liwan）的文章,根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容提要，用五句話介紹有關(guān)加拿大的地理和文化方面的情況：,根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容提要，用五句話介紹有關(guān)加拿大的地理和文化方面的情況：,面積 9,976,000平方公里（世界第二大國(guó)家） 人口 約3000多萬(wàn),Canada , which is the second biggest country in the world, has an area of 9,976,000 square kilometers and a population of about 30 million.,首都 渥太華（世界最美麗的首都之一）,Ottawa ,the capital of the country ,is considered as one of the most beautiful capitals in the world.,地理位置 位于北美大陸的北部，東面瀕臨大西洋，西臨 太平洋，南面與美國(guó)接壤,It covers the northern part of the North American continent and borders the US on the south, with the Atlantic Ocean on the east and the Pacific on the west.,語(yǔ)言 英語(yǔ)和法語(yǔ),English and French are official languages spoken in Canada.,文化 1.深受法國(guó)文化和英國(guó)文化的影響； 2.不同國(guó)家的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣和文化遺產(chǎn)豐富了加拿大文化。,Both French and English cultures deeply influence Canadian culture.Different customs and heritages from different parts of the world enrich Canadian culture., Canada , which is the second biggest country in the world, has an area of 9,976,000 square kilometers and a population of about 30 million.It covers the northern part of the North American continent and borders the US on the south, with the Atlantic Ocean on the east and the Pacific on the west.Ottawa , the capital of the country , is considered as one of the most beautiful capitals in the world.English and French are official languages spoken in Canada and both French and English cultures deeply influence Canadian culture.Different customs and heritages from different parts of the world enrich Canadian culture.,(1). be located in/on Guangdong province is located in the south of China. (2). lie in/on /to +方位名詞 +of +地點(diǎn) Japan lies to the east of China.,1. 表示地點(diǎn)方位的句型,2.描述人口(population)的句型,3.描述面積(area)的句型, has a population of . The population of is , Its area is It covers an area of It has an area of ,4.氣候特征：there is a variety of climate in, so in the east it is warm/ cold/ wet/ windy, while in the west it is 5. 歷史文化名勝：，in which 6. 特產(chǎn)（或其他特殊之處）is famous for/ the special character ofis,寫一篇介紹荔灣鎮(zhèn)（The Town of Liwan）的文章,位置 廣東省東北部的名鎮(zhèn) Located in the northeast of Guangdong Province, the Town of Liwan is one of the famous towns.,面積 2830.54平方公里 人口 630，478 It covers a total area of 2830.54 square kilometers With a population of 630478.,氣候 終年溫暖、潮濕、夏季多雨 It is warm, wet all the year around here with a lot of rainfall in summer.,特產(chǎn) 西瓜、桔子 經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況 旅游業(yè)起重要作用 The town has varieties of fruits, such as water melons and oranges and tourism plays an important role in its economy.,歷史 將近2000年 名勝 建于1200前的普寧寺，溫泉中外聞名，吸引中外游客。,Having a history of nearly 2000years, the Town of Liwan has many places of interests, among which the Puning Temple, which was built 1200years ago, and the Hot Spring attracts a good many tourists from every corner of the world.,基礎(chǔ)寫作 西藏是中國(guó)領(lǐng)土不可分割的一部分，這塊具有神秘和傳奇色彩的土地也引起了世界的關(guān)注。 假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter打算今年暑假來(lái)中國(guó)西藏旅游，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容甩英語(yǔ)向他簡(jiǎn)單地介紹有關(guān)西藏的一些基本情況。,寫作內(nèi)容 歸屬 中華人民共和國(guó) 地理位置 中國(guó)西南方，被譽(yù)為世界屋脊（Roof of the world) 人口 約2,800,000 面積 120多萬(wàn)平方公里 省會(huì) 拉薩(Lhasa)，被譽(yù)為世界上最高的城市 特征 700多年的悠久歷史；風(fēng)景秀麗有很多享譽(yù)海內(nèi)外的名勝古跡，如布達(dá)拉宮。 發(fā)展 1951年5月23日解放以來(lái)，西藏在政治、經(jīng)濟(jì)(economy)、文化等方面都取得了很大的進(jìn)步。,寫作要求 1只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容； 2信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)人句子總數(shù)； 3參考詞匯：領(lǐng)土territory布達(dá)拉宮the Potala Palace經(jīng)濟(jì)(economy)西藏自治區(qū)the Tibet Autonomous Region 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 Dear Peter I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit. Looking forward to your coming to ChinaHave a wonderful journey in Tibet! Yours， LiHua,Tibet, known as the “Roof of the World”, belongs to the Peoples Republic of China and it is located in the southeast of China. It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which is honored as “the highest city” in the world. With a long history of more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. Since the liberation of Tibet on May23, 1951, it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture.,學(xué)校植物園,歷史：20年的歷史， 2008年重建,特色：各種花卉、 樹木、藥用植物,功能： 美化校園 研究植物場(chǎng)所 休閑之地,概況： 校園西南角， 面積1000平方米,其他：觀賞至少 需要1小時(shí),Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 m2. The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008. As you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs. If youre planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour. The garden makes our school more beautiful and its a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.,三. 基礎(chǔ)寫作實(shí)踐,假設(shè)你是香港某旅游公司的職員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示內(nèi)容,使用5個(gè)規(guī)范的句子寫一份演講稿向游客簡(jiǎn)單介紹香港的情況： 1. 香港已于1997年7月1日回歸祖國(guó), 它是世界重要的貿(mào)易(trade)中心和金融(financial)中心。 2.地理位置: 位于我國(guó)南部, 與深圳為鄰,由236個(gè)島嶼組成。 3.人口: 漢朝(the Han Dynasty )以前就有中國(guó)人在香港居住,人口不斷增長(zhǎng)。 4.旅游勝地: 有許多旅游景點(diǎn),如: 海洋公園, 太空館,黃大仙廟等,2.Hong Kong, an.of the world, returned to China on July 1, 1997.,1.Hong Kong, which is an.of the world, returned to China on July 1, 1997.,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to Hong Kong! Hong Kong , an important trade and financial centre of the world, returned to China on July 1, 1997. Lying in the south of China, Hong Kong is made up of 236 islands and neighbors on Shenzhen . The Chinese began to live in Hong Kong before the Han Dynasty and now the population is becoming larger and larger. Hong Kong is a beautiful city with a lot of places of interest, such as the Ocean Park, the Space Museum and Wong Tai Sin Temple. I hope you all enjoy yourselves here!,Steps for writing,1、審題,文字信息,圖畫信息,（確定體裁、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、要點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容),2、以詞及點(diǎn)：用一兩個(gè)單詞或短語(yǔ)寫出 每 句話的要點(diǎn)。,3、聯(lián)詞成句：用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯⑸鲜鲆c(diǎn)的 詞語(yǔ)擴(kuò)展成句子。,4、聯(lián)句成文。,注意：,主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ),邏輯關(guān)系,開頭與結(jié)尾,5、檢查修改，避免失誤。,Home work: 你要向外國(guó)朋友介紹廣東，以下是你介紹的主要內(nèi)容： 【寫作內(nèi)容 】： 1.地理位置：廣東省位于華南,北接湖南江西,南鄰香港,西與廣西相接； 2. 經(jīng)濟(jì)高度發(fā)達(dá),人民安居樂(lè)業(yè)； 3.教育現(xiàn)代化，90%的高中生進(jìn)入大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)； 4.歷史悠久,風(fēng)景秀麗,每年都有大量來(lái)自海內(nèi)外的游客觀光游覽。 【寫作要求】： 1.只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。 2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不算在5個(gè)句子中。 Ladies and gentlemen, I would like to introduce my hometown to you. thank you !,基礎(chǔ)寫作 用5 句話描述荔灣鎮(zhèn) 位置: 廣東省東北部的名鎮(zhèn) 面積: 2830.54平方公里 人口: 630，478 氣候: 終年溫暖、潮濕、夏季多 歷史: 將近2000年 名勝: 建于1200年前的普寧?kù)o寺，溫泉中外聞名，吸引中外游客 特產(chǎn): 西瓜、桔子 經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況: 旅游業(yè)起重要作用,Located in the northeast of Guangdong Province, the Town of Liwan is one of the famous towns. It covers a total area of 2830.54