高中英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)寫作指導(dǎo).ppt

時(shí)間分配,基礎(chǔ)寫作的命題特點(diǎn)： 考生按所給的內(nèi)容及要求，用5個(gè)規(guī)范的英語(yǔ)句子描述所 給信息的全部?jī)?nèi)容，并組成連貫的短文。 簡(jiǎn)而言之，考查考生整理信息和組詞造句成文的能力。,對(duì)于書面表達(dá)的要求：,1.Cover all the language points and given information. 覆蓋所有的語(yǔ)言要點(diǎn),Avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling 應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性,3.coherent, tight 上下文的連貫性 即有效地使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。,4.use the words properly 語(yǔ)言的得體性,5. Write your article clearly.,6. Mind the number of your sentences.,月考 基礎(chǔ)寫作 評(píng)講總結(jié),Studying Goals,Learn to combine sentences and write complex sentences in writing: I.巧妙運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)，寫出規(guī)范的簡(jiǎn)單句： 1)借助名詞短語(yǔ)做同位語(yǔ) 2)借助介詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ) 3)借助介詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ) 4)借助非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ) II. 巧用連接詞，寫出規(guī)范的并列句 III. 用好從句(定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句、狀語(yǔ)從句）和引導(dǎo)詞寫出規(guī)范的復(fù)合句：,Combine the two sentences into one 1. My history teacher is a beautiful woman. 2. She has two big eyes and long hair. 名詞短語(yǔ)做同位語(yǔ) My history teacher , a beautiful woman , has two big eyes and long hair. with介詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ) My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair. 定語(yǔ)從句 My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair.,Revision & Leading-in,Combine the two sentences into one 1.Australia is located in the smallest continentOceania. 2.Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. 名詞性短語(yǔ)做同位語(yǔ) Australia, the sixth largest country in the world, is located in the smallest continent. 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ) Located in the smallest continentOceania, Australia is the sixth largest country in the world.,Combine the two sentences into one 1.Australia is made up of 6 states . 2.Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities in the six states. 定語(yǔ)從句 Australia is made up of 6 states, in which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities.,Combine the two sentences into one 1.Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers. 2.Australia has a population of 20 million. Australia covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of about 20 million. and引導(dǎo)的并列句 Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers and it has a population of 20 million.,Combine the two sentences into one 1.Australia is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife. 2.The tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery . 狀語(yǔ)從句 Because Australia is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife, the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery.,寫作要求 1.使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。 2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。,寫作內(nèi)容：,Lets make preparations.,.,Useful words and expressions:,以為背景 草原 主要角色 羊族 樂觀 童趣 啟智 迄今 推出 獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng) 相關(guān)的,be set in/on grasslands main/leading character goat family optimistic/hold a positive attitude toward life funny inspiring up to now put forward award relevant,Lets translate the simple sentences!,., .,Translate the following sentences:,這個(gè)動(dòng)畫片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群為背景。 故事童趣但不幼稚，啟智卻不枯燥。 喜羊羊是主要角色之一。 喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。 喜羊羊聰明伶俐，樂觀勇敢。 貪婪的灰太狼總是帶著一頂帶補(bǔ)丁的黃帽子。 無論怎樣，它總是抓不住羊。 由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司獲得很多獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)，并推出了玩偶，圖書，游戲等相關(guān)產(chǎn)品。,這個(gè)動(dòng)畫片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群為背景。 1.This cartoon series is set on the grasslands where the goats and wolves live. 故事童趣但不幼稚，啟智卻不枯燥。 2.The stories are funny but not childish, inspiring but not boring.,喜羊羊是主要角色之一。 One of the main characters is Pleasant Goat. 喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。 Pleasant Goat is a little hero in the goat family. 喜羊羊聰明伶俐，樂觀勇敢。 Pleasant Goat is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life. 合并句子（同位語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)從句） 3.One of the main characters is Pleasant Goat , a little hero in the goat family, who is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life.,貪婪的灰太狼總是帶著一頂帶補(bǔ)丁的黃帽子。（with介詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)） The greedy Big Big Wolf always wears a yellow hat with patches. 無論怎樣，它總是抓不住羊。 （狀語(yǔ)從句） No matter how hard he tries ,he can never catch any goats. 合并句子（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做定語(yǔ)） 4.The greedy Big Big Wolf ,always wearing a yellow hat with patches, can never catch any goats, no matter how hard he tries.,由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司獲得很多獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)，并推出了玩偶，圖書，游戲等相關(guān)產(chǎn)品。 （狀語(yǔ)從句） 5.Because it has made a great success, up till now the cartoon company has won a lot of awards and put forward relevant products like toys, books and computer games. 介詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)(because of) Because of the great success of Pleasant Goat and Big Big wolf, up till now the cartoon company has won a lot of awards and put forward relevant products like toys, books and computer games.,This cartoon series is set on the grasslands where the goats and wolves live. The stories are funny but not childish, inspiring but not boring. One of the main characters is Pleasant Goat , a little hero in the goat family, who is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life. By contrast, the greedy Big Big Wolf ，always wearing a yellow hat with patches, can never catch any goats, no matter how hard he tries. Because of the great success of Pleasant Goat and Big Big wolf, up till now the cartoon company has won a lot of awards and put forward relevant products like toys, books and computer games.,Appreciation,Appreciate some compositions of your classmates, and try to find out some complex sentences. .巧妙運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)，寫出規(guī)范的簡(jiǎn)單句： 1)借助名詞短語(yǔ)做同位語(yǔ) 2)借助介詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ) 3)借助介詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ) 4)借助非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ) II. 巧用連接詞，寫出規(guī)范的并列句 III. 用好從句(定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句、狀語(yǔ)從句）和引導(dǎo)詞，寫出規(guī)范的復(fù)合句：,Homework 用5個(gè)規(guī)范的句子寫一則日記，內(nèi)容如下：,我又一次考試不及格，回家遭到父親的責(zé)罵。他說我過度沉溺于電腦游戲.我心情很沮喪，不知道該干什么，獨(dú)自一人在外邊漫無目的地閑逛。突然抬起頭，看見樹上有一個(gè)鳥巢，鳥媽媽正在給小鳥喂食。只有在這時(shí)候我才意識(shí)到，父親所做的一切都是為了我好。我知道我以后我該怎么做了。,我又一次考試不及格。 回家 遭到父親的責(zé)罵（scold）。 他說我沉溺于(be addicted to)電腦游戲。 我心情很沮喪。 (depressed) 不知道該干什么。 獨(dú)自一人在外邊漫無目的地閑逛(wander)。 突然抬起頭，看見樹上有一個(gè)鳥巢(nest)。 鳥媽媽正在給小鳥喂食。 只有在這時(shí)候我才意識(shí)到，父親所做的一切都是為了我好。 我知道我以后我該怎么做了。,1.I failed in the exam again. 2.I came back home. 3.My father scolded me . 4.because I was addicted to playing computer games. 5.I was depressed. 6.I didnt know what to do. 7. I wandered out aimlessly. 8.I looked up and saw a nest in th