跟著課本學(xué)寫作仿寫課文最快樂

跟著課文學(xué)寫作,仿寫課文最快樂課本上的課文是數(shù)名專家學(xué)者、甚至幾代人苦心孤詣、努力奉獻的結(jié)果，因而與其背誦網(wǎng)絡(luò)各種作文范文，不如精讀課文、背誦課文，以人教版2019必修一課本為例，我讓學(xué)生把課文全篇背誦或背誦部分句子，通過句子一是形成語感，二是形成自己的語料庫，通過仿寫、替換詞等，提高寫作水平，三是加深對語法、句式等理解，背誦課文好處多多，現(xiàn)在將課本中的經(jīng)典句子及根據(jù)課文進行的仿寫展示給大家。WeleUnit導(dǎo)語：Athousandmilejourneybeginswiththefirststep.—Laozi千里之行，始于足下—老子仿寫：Asuccessbeginswithagoodbeginning在這一單元，因為課文句型比較簡單，所以我原創(chuàng)了一道作文題，要求學(xué)生將所學(xué)（特別是readingandthinking和readingforwriting句型）應(yīng)用于寫作中：假如你是李華，剛來高中學(xué)習(xí)，請你以“Mynewlifeinseniorhighschool”為題寫一篇文章。要求：1、簡單介紹自己（可包括年齡、性格、最喜歡的學(xué)科、學(xué)習(xí)類型、愛好、未來夢想和計劃等）2、敘述自己初來高中的感受和體會（老師、同學(xué)、課程難易、對學(xué)校印象、三年的打算等）3、詞數(shù)80詞左右MynewlifeinseniorhighschoolI’mLiHua,aGrade10studentinNo.1seniorhighschoolofChengdecounty.I’manpositivepersonwhostudieshardandseekshelpifnecessary,soyouwillneverseemewithoutasmilingface（雙重否定=肯定）.Inaddition,I’mcrazyabouttravelling,throughwhichIcanlearnaboutvariousculturesandmakemorefriends.（定從）IthasbeenaweeksinceIcamehere.IwasalittleawkwardandfrightenedatfirstbutIadaptto(適應(yīng))myschoollifesoon.Ifinditdifficulttokeepupwithothersinmathsclass,makingmeupsetandfrustrated.（非謂語）However,teachersandclassmatesarefriendlyandhelpful,whichmakesmeconcentrateonmystudy.（定語從句）IbelieveIwillmakenewfriendsandthereisalottoexploreatseniorhigh.ThereisnodoubtthatIwillbemoreconfidentandbewellpreparedformyuniversity.（名詞性從句）*黃色部分為仿寫課文句型、紅色字體為從句，藍色字體為固定句式或搭配Unit1TheFreshmanChallenge導(dǎo)語：1、Goodhabitsformedatyouthmakeallthedifference.—Aristotle青少年時養(yǎng)成的好習(xí)慣讓人終身受益—亞里士多德仿寫：GoodbooksreadatyouthmakeallthedifferenceListeningandspeaking2、Theearlybirdcatchestheworm早起的鳥兒有蟲吃；捷足先登3、Alwaysprepareforarainyday.未雨綢繆*arainyday不如意的日子；窮困的日子save/keepmoneyforarainyday未雨綢繆；有備無患仿寫：Feelingproud，shehadsavedsomemoneyforarainyday4、Actionsspeaklouderthanwords行勝于言。(A勝于B)仿寫：①Practicespeakslouderthantheory.②Advantagesspeakslouderthandisadvantages.③Agoodfamespeakslouderthan5、AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍,聰明孩子也變傻仿寫：AllstudyandnothinkmakesyouadullboyEarlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.6、Distancetestsahorse'sstrength.Timerevealsaperson'scharacter.路遙知馬力，日久見人心。（名+動+名）ReadingandthinkingGoingfromjuniorhighschooltoseniorhighschoolisareallybigchallenge從初中到高中真的一個巨大的挑戰(zhàn)仿寫：BeingfromastudenttoateacherisareallybigchallengeGoingfromschooltopanyisareallybigchallenge.2、MyadviserremendedthatIshouldsignupforadvancedliteraturebecauseIlikeEnglishandI'mgoodatit.我的指導(dǎo)老師建議我報名參加高級文學(xué)，因為我喜歡英語還很擅長。本句為虛擬語氣，remendthatsb(should)do句式適用于建議信仿寫：Iremendthatyou(should)turntoyourexperiencedteachersforhelp.=Whatisstronglyremended/suggestedisthatyou(should)turntoyourexperiencedteachersforhelp.Iremendthatyoufindyourwayinstyle.（2017全國1七選五）3I'mabitworriedaboutkeepingupwiththeotherstudentsinmyadvancedcourse,andit'llbequitedifficulttogetusedtoallthehomework我有點擔(dān)心在我的高級課程上跟不上其他同學(xué)，而且習(xí)慣所有的功課相當(dāng)難*I'mabitworriedaboutandandit'llbequitedifficulttodo句型適用于求助信，比如2020全國3卷，求外教幫忙知道你和同學(xué)改編的短?。?011全國1暑假課程遇困難，向?qū)W校輔導(dǎo)中心求助都可以用到這樣的句式We’reabitworriedaboutkeepingupwiththeotherstudentsinmyadvancedcourse,andit'llbequitedifficulttogetusedtoallthehomework.Readingforwriting高一月考試題：李華和外國朋友David因為一件小事爭吵導(dǎo)致關(guān)系破裂，他感到非常后悔，不想失去這個朋友。你作為李華的朋友，給他寫一封建議信。內(nèi)容包括：①給予安慰；②尋求建議DearLiHua，I’msorrytoknowthatyourbestfriendandyoubrokeupbecauseofasmallthing,whichyoudeeplyregret.（定語從句）（賓語從句）Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareupsetandwanttomakeitup.Iremendthatyoutakethefirststepactively.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofouragetohavedisagreements.Butdon’tletthemdestroyyourrelationship.SoIthinkyoushouldbethefirsttoreachoutthehandoffriendshipandbreaktheice.Iamsurehewillbemorethangladtoacceptyoufromthebottomofhisheart.（賓語從句）Allthebest.YoursLiHua黃色字體為仿寫課文句子，藍色字體為固定詞組Spendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.仿寫：Spendingmoretimeonreadingisbeneficialandmakeitveryhelpfultobroadenyourknowledge.（圖片為我給學(xué)生布置的作業(yè)，要求學(xué)生根據(jù)2單元單詞，自己創(chuàng)設(shè)語境進行freewriting，這種寫作方式既能幫助學(xué)生學(xué)以致用，還能幫助學(xué)生對所學(xué)知識進行復(fù)習(xí)鞏固。）Unit2Travel，intheyoungersort，isapartofeducation；intheelder，apartofexperience—FrancisBacon旅行，對年輕人來說，是教育的一部分；對年長者而言，則是一種經(jīng)歷—弗朗西斯·培根此句仿寫可以把travel替換為reading,voluntarywork等詞ATravellerwithoutobservationisabirdwithoutwings.MoslihEddinSaadi不會觀察的旅行者,猶如沒有翅膀的鳥（強調(diào)觀察對旅行者的重要性）仿寫：Amanwithoutdreamsisabirdwithoutwings.（強調(diào)夢想對人的重要性）Amanwithoutaimisasailorwithoutpass,（強調(diào)目標(biāo)對人的重要性）Iseemypath,butIdon'tknowwhereitleads.NotknowingwhereI'mgoingiswhatinspiresmetotravelitRosaliadeCastro我看到我腳下的路，但我不知道它通向哪里。就因為不知道我要去哪里，才激勵我去旅行仿寫：Notknowingwhattodo,Iwanderedacrossthestreetsaimlessly.Youcanthenspendthreedaysexploringtherainforestwithalocalguideandenjoyingtheplantsandanimals(thatare)uniquetotherainforest.然后你可以在當(dāng)?shù)貙?dǎo)游的陪同下，花三天的時間深入雨林進行探索，欣賞雨林特有的動植物。仿寫：Wespentyearsexploringwaystoworkouttheproblemswithexpertsofferingguidanceuniquetoourresearch.UNIT31Allsportsforallpeople—PierredeCoubertin人人都有運動的權(quán)利和自由—皮埃爾·德·顧拜旦仿寫：Allloveforallpeople2Asaplayer,LangPingbroughthonourandglorytohercountry.Asacoach,sheledtheChinawomen'svolleyballteamtomedalsatworldchampionshipsandtheOlympics.Asaperson,LangPingislovedbyfansathomeandabroad.作為一名運動員，郎平為她的祖國贏得了諸多榮譽。作為一名教練，她帶領(lǐng)中國女子排球隊在世界錦標(biāo)賽和奧運會賽場上屢獲殊榮。作為個人，郎平深受國內(nèi)外球迷的喜愛。仿寫：Asaplayer,LionelMessibrought

honour

and

glory

tohiscountry.Asacaptain,heledhisteammatesto

FIFAWorldCuptrophy.Asaperson,LionelMessiislovedbyfansathomeandabroad.3Losingtwoimportantplayerswasabigchallenge,butLangPingdidnotloseheart.損失兩大主力隊員，是個巨大的挑戰(zhàn)，但是郎平?jīng)]有氣餒。（動名詞）仿寫：Makingbreakfastwasabigchallenge，buttheydidn’tloseheart（2021新高考1—為媽媽做早餐）4WhenMichaelJordan'sfeetlefttheground,timeseemedtostandstill.當(dāng)邁克爾

?喬丹雙腳離地的那一瞬間，時間似乎

都凝固了（這句話體現(xiàn)喬丹球技精湛，stand為系動詞，sit、lie、go、run等動詞也可做系動詞）仿寫：WhenLionelMessikickedtheball,timeseemedtostandstill.Whenhedeliveredaspeech,timeseemedtostandstill.5Theplayerwhobecameknownas“AirJordan”changedbasketballwithhis

graceful

movesandjumps.這位被稱為“飛人喬丹”的球員用他那優(yōu)雅的動作和跳躍改變了籃球運動。仿寫：Theteacherwhobecametitledas“RoleModeloftheTimes”changedmanygirls’destinieswithherselflessdevotionandcontinuousefforts.6Jordan’sskillswereimpressive,butthementalstrengththatheshowedmadehimunique.

喬丹的球技令人贊嘆，然而他所展示的精神力量使他成為一名獨一無二的球星。仿寫：Steelleggirl’sachievementswereimpressive,butthepositiveattitudethatshehadmadeherunique.（鋼腿女孩，在溫床地震中喪失右腿，一直自強不息，今年以四川省人大代表亮相大眾）7TheBoysandGirlsClubwhichhestartedinChicagohasbeenhelpingyoungpeoplesince1996他在芝加哥創(chuàng)建的“男孩女孩俱樂部”，從1996年至今一直在幫助年輕人。仿寫：Theprojectwhichwelaunchedinourschoolhasbeenhelpingneedystudentssince2000.Unit41LivetoTell：RaisingAwareness，ReducingMortality—UnitedNationsInternationalStrategyforDisasterReduction用生命呼吁：增強減災(zāi)意識，減少人員傷亡—聯(lián)合國國際減災(zāi)戰(zhàn)略（單元導(dǎo)語部分，結(jié)構(gòu)對稱）2擬人修辭的運用①THENIGHTTHEEARTHDIDN’TSLEEP地球的不眠之夜②Slowly,thecitybeganto

breathe

again.慢慢地，城市又開始有了生機仿寫：ThisSundaysawthethrillingandimpressivepetitionheldbyourschoolwiththeintentionofimprovingourreadingability.=ThisSundaymadeaperfectdaytoholdathrillingandimpressivepetitionwiththeintentionofimprovingourreadingability.3Miceranoutofthefieldslookingforplacestohide,andfishjumpedoutofthewater.(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語)老鼠跑到田外，尋找藏身之所；魚兒也跳出水面。仿寫：Hestoodstill,wonderingwhetherhewasrightornot.4Everywheresurvivorslooked,therewasnothingbutruins.幸存者目及之處無一不是廢墟，萬物盡毀。仿寫：everywherewelooked，therewasnothingbutbooks5Themostpowerfulearthquakeinthepast40yearscausedatsunamithatcrashedintocoastlinesacrossAsiayesterday,killingmorethan6,500peopleinIndonesia,India,Thailand,Malaysia,andatleastfourothercountries.昨日，40年來最為強烈的地震引發(fā)海嘯，重創(chuàng)亞洲沿海地帶，造成印度尼西亞、印度、泰國、馬來西亞和至少其他四個國家的6,500多人死亡。仿寫：TheterribleearthquakecrashedintotheAsia,killingmorethan6,500peopleUnit51Onelanguagesetsyouinacorridorforlife.Twolanguagesopeneverydooralongtheway—FrankSmith（單元導(dǎo)語）一種語言限定了你的發(fā)展方向，兩種語言就在沿途為你打開大門