5年高考3年模擬A版浙江省2024年高考英語(yǔ)總復(fù)習(xí)專題十七概要寫(xiě)作教師用書(shū)含解析

專題十七概要寫(xiě)作

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【考情探究】

考情分析

考點(diǎn)考查內(nèi)容考查方式

2024.112024.62024.112024.62024.10

1.對(duì)原文主旨及要點(diǎn)

的理解和呈現(xiàn)狀

供應(yīng)一篇35°詞以內(nèi)的^清曾

況⑵概括要點(diǎn)時(shí)語(yǔ)

短文，要求考生基于該整空去

皿，法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用的

要寫(xiě)作jf-.r-.,f,?？匆幌?。假如時(shí)

精確性;3.概要文章

間和金錢不允許,

上下文的連貫性;4.的內(nèi)容概要就在網(wǎng)上獲得信息

對(duì)各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立

性狀況

分析解讀概要寫(xiě)作是綜合性的寫(xiě)作考查。要求考生首先對(duì)原文有精確的理解、對(duì)原文的

結(jié)構(gòu)和要點(diǎn)有精確的把握，然后再用高級(jí)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)及合適的連接詞寫(xiě)出包含全部要點(diǎn)的短

文。所以，考生要想做好本題，就必需留意以下幾點(diǎn)：（1）精確理解文章。（2）把握文章的各個(gè)

要點(diǎn)。（3）運(yùn)用精確的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)、豐富的詞匯和合適的連接詞。（4）運(yùn)用自己的語(yǔ)言表述，不

要照抄原文中的句子。

【真題典例】

體裁：說(shuō)明文

2018浙江11月語(yǔ)篇解讀：在申請(qǐng)大學(xué)之前.最好親H去目標(biāo)大學(xué)參觀一下如果時(shí)間和金錢不允許.

就在網(wǎng)上獲取信息

閱讀下面短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。概要寫(xiě)作的文章一般都是

說(shuō)明文或爭(zhēng)論文。文章結(jié)

It*sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheir

構(gòu)比較清晰，段落之間的

websitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyou

邏輯關(guān)系也很緊密。

thesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus（校

內(nèi)）likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsand

athleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazy

oncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,andit文章第一段開(kāi)宗明義,宏

canalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouarcapplyingtohappentobemore出觀點(diǎn):在你申請(qǐng)高校之

thanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionabout前,要去親自看看目標(biāo)高

thenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomake校。

sureyouaremakingtherightone.

There*snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,

其次段特殊指出肯定要去

alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,and

看看旁邊的高校。

obviously,ifyou1iveacrossthecountrythatwon*tbeasmuchofa

possibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!

Ifcanpusvisitsaren'tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,atthevery第三段的內(nèi)容是，假如,爾

leaslyoushouldfindsomeIimebetweenapplyingandgellingyouc在申請(qǐng)之前沒(méi)々去過(guò)；，生

acceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou'd1iketoattend.Itcansave申請(qǐng)之后,或得到offer之

youalotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon'tlike前，肯定要去看看,免得符

aboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn5tknowunlessyouactually來(lái)懊悔。

visit.

Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonline

第四段的主要內(nèi)容是假如

collegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.It'sachancetochatonlinewith

無(wú)法親自去參觀的話，可

admissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors（顧問(wèn)），andit

以登錄網(wǎng)站了解相關(guān)的信

won'tcostyouapenny!Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairat

息。并供應(yīng)了網(wǎng)站的信息。

collegeweeklive.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan*ttake

theplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthat

alongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninfoi'meddecision

aboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou'dliketoattend.

參考范文

范文鑒賞

Itisawisechoiceforyoutopayapersonalvisittothecollegeyouareapplying

to,especiallytheonesthatareclosetoyou.（要點(diǎn)1）Inordertoavoidbeing

regretful,youshouldatleastvisitthecollegeyoudecidedtoattend.（要點(diǎn)2）If

al1theaboveisnotaffordable,itwillbehelpfultosearchtheonlinecollege

fairsatCollegeWeekLivewhereyoucangetthenecessaryinformation（要點(diǎn)3）.

1.范文精確地把握了各個(gè)段落的要點(diǎn)。

2.各個(gè)要點(diǎn)之間的連接和邏輯都很順暢,相互關(guān)系親密。

3.句子之間用了比較好的連接方式。如第一句的especially;其次句的Inorderto,第三句

的Ifo

4.文章運(yùn)用了比較高級(jí)的詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)。如，Itisawisechoice;youareapplyingto;that

areclosetoyou;avoidbeingregretful;notaffordab1e;vhereyoucangetthe

necessaryinformation。

【三年模擬】

模擬題組

Writing1（2024浙江五校）

閱讀下而短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeop1etorush.Itappears

thatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopleto

taketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthings

done.

Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingvorkinahurryisthe

possibilityofdoingwronginarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactionin

ahurry,theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesaying

goes,Hastemakeswaste."Wcshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionand

doourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.

Slowingdownthepaceof1ifehelpspeopleenjoytheir1ifebetter.Forexample,

takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.

However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnew

friends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongthe

way.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingour

lives.

Finally,slower1ifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconcitionsforus.Asisknown

toall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethink

iftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandtiatannoysthem.Butbeing

inahurrycanhurlpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,

peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdisease*,tendtobehappierandlive

muchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,evenifthefornerfinishjobsmoreslowly

thanthelatter.

Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeour

societymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan,tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,

whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,

takeyourtimeandliveycurlifeataslowerpace.

答案

【寫(xiě)作提示】

本文是一篇爭(zhēng)論文。文章論述了降低生活節(jié)奏的各種好處,文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，觀點(diǎn)明確。

同時(shí)在第一段提出了主旨，其次至第四段進(jìn)行了論述，最終一段賜予了總結(jié)。

【參考范文】

Despitebeingaccustonedtothefastpaceinmodernsociety,peopleare

recommendedtoleadaslowerlife.（要點(diǎn)1）Slowingdownlowersthepossibilityof

committingerrorsmadebyhurrydecisions.（耍點(diǎn)2）Itcanalsoprovideuswithmore

opportunitiestoenjoylife.（要點(diǎn)3）Besides,aslowerlifeissupposedtobring

betterhealthconditionphysicallyandmentally.4）Therefore,as1owlifeis

stronglysuggested.（要點(diǎn)5）

Writing2（2024浙江寧波返校考）

閱讀下面短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Haveyouheardanoldsaying“Thegrasslooksgreenerontheothersideofthe

fence"?ltmeansotherplacesoftenlookbetter,moreinterestingthantheplace

whereyoulive.**Let'sgotoKFCfordinnerandthenwatchsomeJapanesecartoons!”

Weallknowit:moreandmoreChinesekidsloveAmericanandJapanesefoodandmovies.

SomvpeoplewuitythatyuuugChinesetilebu^inniiiEtofeelthatway.Theysueyuung

Chineseignoring（忽視）Chinesecultureand,instead,buyingJapanesecartoonbooks,

watchingKoreansoapoperasandevencelebratingwesternholidays.

Foreignbooksandsoapoperasaregood,butChinesewritersandactorsarejust

asgood.Asforholidays,Christmasisnice,butitcanneverhavethemeaningfor

ChinesethatSpringFestivalhas,andtheWesthasnothingtocomparewiththe

Mid-AutumnFestival.Chinahaslotsofcoolthingsinitsculture:cal1igraphy,

BeijingOpera,quickmealsonthestreets,andevenJayChou!Andlet*snotforget

thepartofChinesecultureIlikebest:itsfriendliness.Notallcountriesarcas

warmasChina.

It'sgoodtoenjoyotherculturesand1earnfromthem,buttheycanneverreplace

yourownculture.It'sgoodtolookontheothersideofthefence,butmakesure

youtakeagoodlonglook.Youwillfindthatthegrassisn'talwaysgreener.

Althoughsomepeoplebecomeworriedaboutthat,Idon*tthinktheyshould.Wi11

wegetmorepowerfulwithoutlearningfromothercountries?Wi11Chinesepeoplelive

morehappilywithoutAmericanfastfood?Besides,it'sfuntolearnaboutdifferent

cultures.Chinesekidscan1earnaboutotherculturesandhavefun,buttheyalso

needto1earnmoreabouttheirownculture.BeproudofChinesecultureandofbeing

Chinese!

答案

【寫(xiě)作提示】

本文是爭(zhēng)論文。文章論述了“本地的花不香”這種盲目崇洋媚外的現(xiàn)象。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，

概括時(shí)依據(jù)自然段的中心思想組織要點(diǎn)。

【參考范文】

ManyyoungChinesepreferforeignitems,consideringthemtobebetter.（要點(diǎn)

1）Nevertheless,Chinesecultureisequallygood,colorfulandovenmoremeaningful,

suchasitsfestivals,calligraphyandfriendliness.2）Foreigncultures,which

arenotalwaysgood,canneverreplaceyourownculture.（要點(diǎn)3）Inaword,Chinese

kidsneedtolearnmoreandtakeprideinChineseculturewhileenjoyingother

cultures.（要點(diǎn)4）

Writing3（2024浙江杭州模擬）

閱讀下面短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

“IthinkI,mnothingmorethanadeadfish,"Idon'twanttodo

anything.'Tmsobeatandsosad.”…Theyounggenerationinourcountryused

toenjoytheir“happyculture“butnowtheyhavebecome“beatandsad“slowly

andsecretly.Somepeopleevencalledit“thebeatcultureM.The"beat"youths

don'twanttodoanything.Theyhavenopurpose,nodesireandtheyaretotally

depressedandtheyonlywanttoliveanaimlesslife,^he“GeYouslouch（葛優(yōu)

癱）“andthesong“IfecilikehavingbeendrainedMaretheexamples.

Manymediaconcernthemselvesaboutthisphenomenonandtrytopersuadethe

youthsintoembracingpositiveandhealthyfeelingsandencouragethemtoworkhard

togetridofdecadence.Thisisreallyakindgesture.However,weden'thaveto

worrytoomuchaboutthis“beatculture."Infact,it'snotanegativething.

"Beat"nevermeansdespair,butawayofself-mockery（自嘲）andpressurerelief.

Ingeneral,theyouthsinChinaarenot"bcal”.Accordingtoarecent

internationalresearch,theyouthsinChinaholdpositiveattitudetowardsthe

future.29%oftheChineseintervieweesbelievetheywillliveandworkinpeace

inChinabecause“aslongasyouworkhard,youcanhaveyourownday”.Around

93%oftheChineseintervieweesbelievethefutureispromisingbecauseofmedicine

industry,renewableenergysourcesandcomputer.ComparedwithChineseyoungsters,

youthsindevelopedcountriesarcmorepessimistic.

Ofcoursetherearesomesocialreasonsfortheappearingof“theBeatCulture”.

Asurbanizationdevelopsrapidly,youthslivinginbigcitiesarefacingnew

challengesthattheirforefathershaveneverencounteredbefore.Lonelinessand

feelingsofinsignificanceandpowerlessnessareeasytogetaholdoftheyoung

people.Withoutpropercare,theycouldthreatentheyouthsJmentalityandcause

manysocialproblems.Theseproblemsprobablyneedourattentionmore.

答案

【寫(xiě)作提示】

本文是爭(zhēng)論文。對(duì)中國(guó)現(xiàn)在年輕人中所謂的“頹廢的文化”進(jìn)行r客觀的論述和評(píng)價(jià)。

【參考范文】

Thereisaslowtendencythat“thebeatcultureMispopu1arwiththeyouths

inChina.（要點(diǎn)DActually,°thebeatcultureMisanapproachtorelaxingtheyouths

themselves,soiIdoesn'tneedworrying.（要點(diǎn)2）Thcfactisthatmajorityofthe

youthsinChinaarepositive,comparedwiththoseindevelopedcountries.（要點(diǎn)

3）However,itssocialcausesstillneedtobeconcernedbecauseitcanalsocontribute

tomoresocialproblems.（要點(diǎn)4）

Writing4（2024浙江七彩陽(yáng)光聯(lián)盟10月）

閱讀下面短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Ifyou'reanythinglikeus,itseemsthatyourstonachstartstogrumble（隆

隆響）assoonasMcDonaldJsgoldenarchescomeintoview.Thereasonbehindthat

isn'tthemouthwateringtasteoftheirdeliciousfries-thisishowtheygetthem

totastesogoodbytheway-it'sactuallypsychological,andithastodowith

thecolorsoftheirlogo.

Thecolorsredandyellowwerechosenforaspecificreason,anditwasn,t

becausetheylookednicewithRonaldMcDonald*sclown-likeface.Itactuallyhas

todowithscience.Thecolorredisstimulatingandisassociatedwithbeingactive.

Italsoincreasesheartrate,whichhelpstojumpstartyourappetite.Thecolor

yellowisassociatedwithhappinessandisthemostvisiblecolorindaylight,so

that*swhyaMcDonald,ssignissoeasytospotonacrowdedroad.

Thebrainprocessescolorbeforeitprocesseswordsorshapes,sothat,swhy

thefast-foodchainchosethesetwocolorsfortheirlogoandbrand.Redandyellow

makesyouhungry,encouragingyoutowanttobuytheproducttheysell,whilealso

makingyoufeelhappy.

McDonaldfshasstartedtousethiscolorphilosophytoinfluenceandchange

thewaypeoplecurrentlythinkabouttheirbrandaswell.Manyfranchises（授權(quán)經(jīng)

銷商）inEuropehavestartedtoincorporatemoreofthecolorgreenintotheir

storefrontsandinteriordesignbecauseit,sassociatedwithnatureandbeing

environmentallyfriendly,somethingMcDonaldJshasbeencriticizedfornotbeing

inthepast.Thecompanyhasbeenworkingtobecomegreenerbyusingenvironmentally

friendlyrefrigerationandconvertingusedoilintobiodiesel（生物柴油）fuel.

答案

【寫(xiě)作提示】

本文是說(shuō)明文。文章介紹了色調(diào)和人的食欲之間的關(guān)系。文章共四段，每段主題都明白，

寫(xiě)概要時(shí)依據(jù)自然段概括要點(diǎn)即可。

【參考范文】

Thereasonwhypeoplecan,tresistthetemptationofMcDonald*sis

psychologicallyconnectedwithcolorsofthelogo.（要點(diǎn)l）Yellowandredwerechosen

tohelpincreasepeople*sappetiteandmakethestoresigneasytospot.（要點(diǎn)

2）Anotherreasonisthatthehumanbrainprocessescolorbeforewordsorshapes.（要

點(diǎn)3）NowadaysMcDonald,slakesadvantageofthecolorphilosophytobecomemore

environmentallyfriendlybyincorporatingmoregreencolorintotheirstore

design.（要點(diǎn)4）

Writing5（2024浙江紹興11月聯(lián)考）

閱讀下面短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Asisknown,ifweareunitednoonecandefeatus.Butifweconstantlyhave

conflictsormisunderstandings,wemayattractoutsiderstotakeadvantageof

ourselves,whichmayultimatelyresultinourfailure.Unityisthesourceof

strengthandpeoplewhoareunitedhavethecapabilitytotackleanykindofsituation

astheyshareeachother*sburdensandhardships.

Inoldendays,manlivedalone.Hetravelledandhurtedallbyhimself,which

sometimesgaveopportunitiestofierceanimaltoattackandki11him.Thenhe

realizedthatifhejoinedhandswithotherhunters,hewou1dbeabletofaceseveral

commondangersandchallenges.Thisishow,villagesgotformed,whichlatergot

developedintothetownsandcities.

Inthesportsground,beitcricket,football,baseball,basketballoranykind

ofsport,aunitedteamandanappropriatestrategymaycontributetothesuccess

oftheteam;butifthereisaconflictorunhealthyconpetitionorunnecessary

misunderstandingamongtheteammembers,theymayinvitetheopponentstotake

advantageoftheirshortcomingsandwinthegame.Likewise,ifthemembersofafamily

staytogetherandsupporteachotherineveryphaseoflife,nooutsiderscanharm

thefamily.

Therewasonceanoldmanwholivedinavillagewithhisthreesons.Thesons

alwaysfoughtwitheachotherandwouldnotpayanyattentiontotheirfather.The

manfellsickandassumedthathewoulddiesoon;hewasveryworriedaboutthefact

thatoncehedied,peoplewouldtakeadvantageofhissons,conflicts.Hecalled

allhissonsandaskedthemtobreakabundleofsticks,onebyone.Noneofthem

coulddoit.liethenuntiedthebundleandgaveeachsticktoeachoneofthemasking

themtobreak,whichtheycouldveryconvenientlyaccomplish.Hethentoldhissons

thattheyshouldstaylikethebundleofstickssothatnoonecanbreakthem;but

iftheykeeponfighting,theywillbebrokenbytheoutsiderseasily.

答案

【寫(xiě)作提示】

本文是一篇爭(zhēng)論文。文章論述了合作就能勝利的觀點(diǎn)。

【參考范文】

Itiswel1knownthatunitedwestandanddividedwefall.（要點(diǎn)1）Inancient

times,huntersmadejointeffortstocopewithdangersandchallenges,thusforming

villagesandlaterdevelopingintotownsandcities.（要點(diǎn)2）Surely,unityhasagreat

significanceinpeople*sliveswhetherinthesportsgroundorinafamily.（要

點(diǎn)3）Thedyingman,sstoryofsticksalsoshowstheimportanceofunity.（要點(diǎn)4）

Writing6（2024浙江寧波十校一模）

閱讀下面短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Atypicalliontamer（馴獸師）inpeopleJsmindisanentertainerholdinga

whip（鞭子）andachair.Thewhipgetsalloftheattention,butit'smostlyfor

show.Inreality,it'sthechairthatdoestheimportantwork.Whena1iontamerholds

achairinfrontofthelion'sface,theliontriestofocusonallfourlegsof

thechairatthesametime.Withitsfocusdivided,thelionbecomesconfusedand

isunsureaboutwhattodonext.Whenfacedwithsomanyoptions,thelionchooses

tofreezeandwaitinsteadofattackingthemanholdingthechair.

Howoftendoyoufindyourselfinthesamepositionasthelion?Howoftendo

youhavesomethingyouwanttoachieve?g.loseweight,startabusiness,travel

more）-onlytoendupconfusedbyal1oftheoptionsinfrontofyouandnevermake

progress?

Thisupsetsmotonoendbecausewhilealltheexpertsarcbusydebatingabout

whichoptionisthebest,thepeoplewhowanttoimprovetheirlivesareleftconfused

byal1oftheconflictinginformation.Theendresultisthatwefeellikewecan't

focusorthatwe'refocusedonthewrongthings,andsowetakelessaction,make

lessprogress,andstaythesamewhenwecouldbeimproving.

Itdoesn*thavetobethatway.Anytimeyoufindtheworldwavingachairin

yourface,rememberthis:Allyouneedtodoistofocusononething.Youjustneed

togetstarted.Startingbeforeyoufeelreadyisoneofthehabitsofsuccessful

people.Ifyouhavesomewhereyouwanttogo,somethingyouwanttoaccomplish,

someoneyouwanttobecome...takeimmediateaction.Ifyou'reclearaboutwhereyou

wanttogo,therestoftheworldwilleitherhelpyougetthereorgetoutofthe

way.

答案

【寫(xiě)作提示】

1.本文是一篇爭(zhēng)論文，假如有太多的目標(biāo),我們就會(huì)迷茫,反而不知所措。因此,正確的做

法是集中留意力于我們真正的目標(biāo)。

2.文章四段，每段?個(gè)要點(diǎn)。這是概要寫(xiě)作的?般原則。

3.文章第一段比較難懂?？隙ㄒ屑?xì)閱讀。

【參考范文】

Whatreallymattersinaliontamingisthechair,whichconfusesthelionby

thefourlegs.（要點(diǎn)1）Sodopeopleinthefaceoftoomanyoptions.（要點(diǎn)2）Weare

alwayspreventedfrommakingprogressbecausewecan,tmakesoundchoicesbefore

theconflictinginformation.（要點(diǎn)3）Soifyouwanttobesuccessful,focusonone

thingandgetstartedquickly.（要點(diǎn)4）

Writing7（2024浙江紹興考前適應(yīng)性聯(lián)考）

閱讀下面短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

China'sbike-sharinghasexplodedfromnothingaboutayearagointoatransport

phenomenoninmajorcities.JustbyscanningtheQRccd。（二維碼）thatappearsbehind

theseat,onecanunlockasharedbicycle.Oncetheservicehasfinished,theuser

blocksthebikeandthetotalischargedtohismobileaccount.Theprocesslasts

lessthan30secondsandcostsnomorethanonepenny.Bytheway,therearestill

nofixedplacestofindorleaveabike,althoughareassuchasuniversitycampus,

andmetroorbusstationarepreferred.

Manyyoungpeoplebelievesharedbicycleshavemanyadvantages.Theyarenot

expensivetorent,theydonothavetobeprotectedfromthieves,andthereisno

needtoiupuiitlieni.Youjustliavelucliaugethemfoianutlieione.Theyaiualsu

environment-friend1yandlowertheuseofcars,whichalsohelpstorelievetraffic.

Infact,itisconsideredanawesomecombinationoftechnologyandtradition.

Thereisnodoubtaboutthebenefitsbutthedisadvantagescannotbeignored.

Manyproblemsrelatedtosharedbicycleshaveemerged.Itisnotonlyduetobad

behaviorfromsomeuserswhoalwayswanttoseizethebicycles,butalsobecause

ofthemessthathasbeencreatedsinceonecan1eavethebicycleanywhere,which

isagainstpublicurbanordermanagement.Therearesomanypoorlyparkedbikesthat

sometimestheyendupblockingstreets.

InXiLuoyuan,Beijing,the“CivilizedUseofBicycles”campaignhasbeen

launched.Inadditiontohaving40officiallypermittedstops,therearealsoclear

signalstoleaduserstothesestops.Ateamofsupervisorskeeporderinthearea.

Thisisthefirstareathatispartofanofficialsystemtomanagebicycles.The

purposeofthiscampaignistosolvethemessthatthepopularityofsharedbicycles

iscausinginBeijing,bothwiththeparticipationofcompaniesandtheusers.If

thepilotplanworksoutwellinXiLuoyuan,itwillbeextendedtoallofthecities

inChina.

答案

【寫(xiě)作提示】

本文是一篇爭(zhēng)論文。文章論述了共享自行車的優(yōu)劣,并供應(yīng)了北京解決共享自行車的措

施，希望能供應(yīng)一些有益的閱歷。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，以自然段為基珈概括要點(diǎn)。

【參考范文】

China'ssharedbicyclesaregainingpopularitywiththepublicasacheapand

convenienttransportoption.（要點(diǎn)1）Theadvantagesofitalsoincludeproviding

peoplewithanenvironmentfriendlylifebyrelievingtrafficandreducing

pollution.（要點(diǎn)2）However,thebadbehaviorofsomeusersandthemesstheycause

alsoleadtosomeproblems.（要點(diǎn)3）Beijinghaslaunchedacampaigntoregulate

bike-parking,whichwi11hopefullysetagoodexamplefortherestofChina.（要

點(diǎn)4）

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