Unit 6 Rain or Shine.（話題寫作指導(dǎo)）（教師版）

Unit6RainorShine.(話題寫作指導(dǎo)）【話題分析】本單元的話題為“天氣”，要求能圍繞這一話題寫一篇有關(guān)天氣情況、人們正在進(jìn)行的活動和人們感受的短文。在寫作過程中，首先要能準(zhǔn)確使用描述天氣的形容詞及句型，并要能正確使用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時描述人們正在進(jìn)行的活動。常用句型：How'stheweatherin...?What'stheweatherlikein...?It's...Theweatherin...is......am/is/aredoingsth.Now...arehavingagoodtime.【寫作實例】“一輪皎潔月當(dāng)空，佳節(jié)團(tuán)圓歡笑多”。假如你是李華，Jane是你的筆友。今天是中秋節(jié)，請寫一封信告訴Jane你如何度過中秋節(jié)，并根據(jù)以下提示完成本文。內(nèi)容包括：1.天氣情況；2.中秋節(jié)所做的事情；3.你的感受。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點撥】【教材典句】1、Climbingishard...(SB,1b)2、I’msunbathingatthemoment!(SA,2a)3、...manypeopleherearestillinhighspirits.(SB,1b)4、IstheweathermakingGrandpaSad?(SA,1c)【經(jīng)典范文】DearJane,TodayisourtraditionalMid-AutumnFestival.Gettingtogetherwithourfamilyisreallyexciting!It'sacoolautumnnight.Themoonisshininginthesky.Weareeatingabigdinnernow.Mygrand-parentsarelookingatthemoon.Myparentsaretalkingwitheachother.Myyoungerbrotheriseatingmooncakesatthemoment.Heisinhighspirits!WhenitisMid-AutumnFestival,everyoneisenjoyingtheirwonderfultime!TheMid-AutumnFestivalmakeseveryonehappy.Yours,LiHua【亮點點評】①用動名詞(短語)作主語概述中秋節(jié)的特點。②用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時結(jié)構(gòu)bedoing和時間狀語atthemoment描述中秋節(jié)活動。③用beinhighspirits描述“我”的弟弟的情緒狀態(tài)。④"makesbadj."描述中秋節(jié)給大家的感受?！就綑z測】1．假如你是魏華，你正在加拿大的姑媽家度假。請根據(jù)下表信息，給你上海的同學(xué)李濤寫一封信，不少于60詞。WhereWeatherActivitiesFeelingsCanadacold;snowingvisitmyaunt;ski;makeasnowmanrelaxed;haveagoodtimeDearLiTao,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WeiHua2．假設(shè)今天是周日，現(xiàn)在是下午五點，外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢？請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇不少于60詞的英語短文來描述你們的活動。提示：1.Whatareyourfamilydoing?2.Whatdoyouthinkofrainydays?要求：1.語句通順，符合邏輯；2.包含提示中的所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。TodayisSunday.It’sfiveo’clockintheafternoonnow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假設(shè)你是李華。上周Anna給你寫了一封信。Anna在信中介紹了她的家鄉(xiāng)并希望收到你的回信。請根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容提示，給網(wǎng)友Anna寫一封e-mail，向她介紹廣州冬天的情況以及你和家人過春節(jié)的活動和感受，并邀請她來廣州。天氣不冷，從不下雪，有時會下雨活動爬白云山，逛花市，喝早茶感受請自行補(bǔ)充要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：不少于60詞（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)）；2.文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，并可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.條理清楚，語句還順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。DearAnna,Iwashappytohearfromyoulastweek.Winteriscoming.Inwinter,Guangzhouisabeautifulcity._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua4．請從下面兩幅圖中選擇一幅圖進(jìn)行描寫。要求：1.認(rèn)真觀察圖畫，把觀察到的內(nèi)容寫成一段通順的話。2.可以給圖中人物起名字，展開合理的想象。3.作文內(nèi)容邏輯合理，語篇完整，關(guān)聯(lián)性強(qiáng)，才可以得滿分。4.不少于五句話，注意規(guī)范書寫。

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圖2__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．現(xiàn)在是晚上八點鐘，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正給你的朋友寫一張明信片，介紹下今天的天氣，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。要求：語法規(guī)范，語句連貫，60個詞左右。DearJim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMei【真題鏈接】（21-22七年級下·河北唐山·期末）下面是公園一角人們的活動場景。請你根據(jù)提示和圖畫內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文描述你的好友Jane和人們的活動。提示：(1)How’stheweathertoday?

(2)Whatarepeopledoing?(3)WhatdoesJanelooklike?(4)WhatisJanedoing?要求:（1）短文須包含所有提示內(nèi)容。（2）短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。（3）詞數(shù)不少于60詞。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）ItisSundaytoday._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（20-21七年級下·黑龍江哈爾濱·期末）假如你是來自澳大利亞的Alice，暑假期間你正在哈爾濱旅游，請向你的媽媽介紹一下你在哈爾濱的情況，并向她介紹你的新朋友。寫作要點：1.現(xiàn)在哈爾濱是夏天。2.介紹今天的一些情況：(1)今天天氣晴朗但有風(fēng)；(2)你正在公園里踢足球；(3)一個女孩正在拍江邊的照片、一些男孩正在江里游泳。3.介紹你的新朋友王瑩（外貌、衣著、愛好等）。寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容完整、合理；語句正確；行文連貫；2.字跡工整、書寫規(guī)范；3.60詞以上；4.不得使用真實姓名、地點和班級、學(xué)校名。DearMom,Howareyou?IaminHarbinnow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!

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Alice3．（20-21七年級下·河北石家莊·期中）假設(shè)你正在和你爸爸媽媽，妹妹在三亞度假，你在朋友圈曬的旅行照片被你的美國朋友Jim看到。他對你去的地方很感興趣，發(fā)微信讓你給他簡單介紹一下，要求包括以下內(nèi)容：天氣晴朗，有風(fēng)時間暑假(summervacation)地點Sanya活動畫畫，唱歌，游泳，做游戲等觀點……（你認(rèn)為你的旅游怎么樣?）要求：1．條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點正確；2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右。3．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（21-22七年級下·河北邯鄲·期末）在夏季，你的家鄉(xiāng)天氣怎么樣？人們在這樣的天氣里都在做什么？請寫一篇介紹你們家鄉(xiāng)天氣的短文。注意事項：(1)80詞左右。(2)意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范。(3)請勿在文中使用真實的姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（23-24七年級下·山東煙臺·期末）假如你是李華，你和你的美國朋友Helen正在網(wǎng)上聊天，她想知道你的家人正在做什么，請你根據(jù)表格中的提示寫一段話向她介紹相關(guān)情況。要求：1.內(nèi)容須包含表格內(nèi)所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.60詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.不得出現(xiàn)真實校名、班名及姓名。4.有卷面分。爺爺在公園散步奶奶在客廳澆花爸爸在客廳讀報紙媽媽在廚房洗碗妹妹在臥室做作業(yè)提示詞組：watertheflowersHi,Helen,goodevening.Now,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（22-23七年級下·山東煙臺·期末）請根據(jù)表格中的信息，進(jìn)行場景描述，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于50，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。時間周日下午地點公園天氣晴朗，有點熱人物王華一家場景爸爸與哥哥在樹下下棋；王華和弟弟在踢球；媽媽在拍照。心情快樂__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________