基礎(chǔ)課時(shí)分層-Unit3-Grammar-＆-Writing-語(yǔ)言能力提升

4/4基礎(chǔ)課時(shí)分層-Unit3Grammar＆Writing語(yǔ)言能力提升一、書(shū)面表達(dá)1.目前，外出旅行的人越來(lái)越多，因此旅行成了一個(gè)熱門(mén)話題，某英語(yǔ)報(bào)的"旅行大家談"欄目正在征文，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文談?wù)勅藗兿矚g旅行的原因。2.假如你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友peter給你發(fā)了一封e-mail，告訴你他將于國(guó)慶節(jié)期間到你所在的城市北京來(lái)旅游，請(qǐng)你給他回一封e-mail歡迎他來(lái)北京,并表示愿意提供幫助，同時(shí)提醒他一些注意事項(xiàng)。注意：(1)文章必須包括題目提示的全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；(3)100詞左右。DearPeter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua二、短文改錯(cuò)1.DearToni,Iheardthatyou’vejustmovedhere.Asoneofourtraditionalfestivalandtheonethatreceivesgreatpopularity,todaywastheDragonBoatFestival.Fallonthe5thdayofthelunarmonthofMayeveryyear,itissetinpraiseonanancientChinesepoetQuYuan.Herpoemsaresupposedinspirepeople’sloveoftheircountry.Zongzi,boilingricewrappedbybambooleaves,isthefamouslyfoodthatyoucan'tmissduringthefestival.Sinceyouarebusywithyourworkallthedaylong,Ihavespeciallycookedsomeforyou.Unlessitisconvenient,I’llgiveittoyoutonight.I’llbeveryhappyifyoulikeit.Yours,LiHua2.WhenIwasachild,Ispentmorethantenyearslearntheviolin.Therefore,Icouldn’tunderstand"realmusic".AfterIgraduatedhighschool,afriendofminesuggestedthatwestartedtolearntheguitarbecauseweboththoughtitwascool.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhichwewenttobuyguitarsintheguitarstore.ThereIsawaguitarplayerplayingaguitar,whichIreallyenjoyedit.Hebecamemyfirstguitarteacher.Ittookmesuchalongtimetochoosingaguitaramongseveralwonderfulmodel.NowtheguitaristhemostimportantlypartofmylifeandIpracticeiteveryday.

參考答案：一、書(shū)面表達(dá)1.【范文賞讀】AsfarasI’mconcerned,anincreasingnumberofpeoplearegoingtravelingforatleasttworeasons.Manypeopletravelforpleasureandrelaxation.Afterworkinghardforalongtime,peoplemayfin^itgreatfuntravelingtoenjoythebeautifulsceneryofnatureindifferentplaces.Atthesametime,apleasanttripcanreallyhelpthemrelax.Asaresult,theywillbereadytoworkharderafterwards.Inaddition,travelingisanexcellentwayoflearning.Whiletraveling,peoplemaylearnsomethingaboutdifferentculturesaswellasthegeographyoftheirdestinationsthroughcommunicatingwithlocalsandcarefulobservation.Withtheaboveadvantages,it’snowonderthattravelingisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.【思路導(dǎo)航】(1)這是一篇說(shuō)明文，沒(méi)有給出詳細(xì)的說(shuō)明，需要學(xué)生根據(jù)自己的知識(shí)來(lái)組織材料。隨著人們生活水平的提高，喜歡旅行的人越來(lái)越多。旅行的確是一種較為健康的休閑和學(xué)習(xí)的方式，并且對(duì)旅行者和社會(huì)都有很大的好處。本文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。(2)在語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用方面，描述某種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象時(shí)，要盡量使用信息含量較大的復(fù)合句，同時(shí)結(jié)合其他句型和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，從而使句子結(jié)構(gòu)多樣。(3)在文章結(jié)構(gòu)方面，社會(huì)現(xiàn)象類(lèi)文章一般常見(jiàn)的結(jié)構(gòu)為：首先描述這一現(xiàn)象，然后對(duì)其原因進(jìn)行分析，接著說(shuō)明其利弊，最后提出建議或方法。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意使用連接詞從而使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加連貫。2.DearPeter,Howareyouthesedays?Iwashappytoreceiveyoure-mail,sayingyou’regoingtocometoBeijingduringthecomingNationalDay.I’monholidaythen.Therefore,I'dliketobeyourguideandshowyouaroundsomeofthemostpopularplacesofinterestifyoulike.Bytheway,myfamilyinviteyouincelebratethisimportantChinesefestivalatmyhome.Thenyoucanlearnsomethingmoreaboutourculture.Asyouknow,unlikeinyourhometown,itcanbealittlecoldtheninBeijing.Soyou’dbettertakemoreclotheswithyoutopreventyoufromcatchingacold.I’mexpectingyourcomingandcanhardlywaittoseeyou.I’msurewe’llhaveagoodtime.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【思路導(dǎo)航】1.本文要求給朋友回一封e-mail屬于應(yīng)用文體中的書(shū)信類(lèi)。在當(dāng)今的社會(huì)里，e-mail是一種常用的通訊和交流方式，通過(guò)寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練，幫助學(xué)生掌握e-mail的寫(xiě)作技巧是非常重要的。根據(jù)這封e-mail的提示內(nèi)容可知，本文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。2.在語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用方面，為了滿足書(shū)信類(lèi)文體簡(jiǎn)潔明了的特征，應(yīng)該注意非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的使用。同時(shí)要充分關(guān)注禮貌用語(yǔ)的使用。3.在文章結(jié)構(gòu)方面，首先要說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的，接下來(lái)進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)描述，最后表明自己的愿望或向?qū)Ψ奖硎咀Ｔ?、感謝等.二、短文改錯(cuò)1.(1)festival改為festivals(2)was改為is(3)Fall改為Falling(4)on改為of(5)Her改為His(6)supposed后加to(7)boiling改為boiled(8)famously改為famous(9)去掉第二個(gè)the(10)Unless改為If