2024-2025學(xué)年高中英語Module2HighlightsofMySeniorYear寫作園地-事物簡介：理想的高中外研版選修7

PAGEPAGE2Module2HighlightsofMySeniorYear寫作園地-事物簡介：志向的中學(xué)[感悟范文]某報社正在舉辦征文活動，請你以《我志向的中學(xué)生活》為題寫一篇短文，以便投稿。短文內(nèi)容必需包括：1．你的個人信息：姓名(李萍)、年齡、所在年級和班級、你最喜愛的科目、學(xué)校類型、你認(rèn)為假期多長最為合理。2．你最喜愛參與什么樣的課外活動小組以及緣由。3．你志向的學(xué)校中最重要的是什么。為什么？留意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；2．參考詞匯：intellectual智力的。[范文]MyIdealMynameisLiPing.I'mseventeenandI'minClassOne，GradeTwoofseniorhighschool.Ilikemaths,physics,chemistryandEnglishbest.①Ipreferalargeschooltoasmallone.②AsfarasI'mconcerned,thevacationshouldbeaboutamonth.Ilikecompetitivesports,soIthinkmyidealhighschoolshouldhavesuchafter-schoolclubsasBasketballClub,DebatingClub,RunningClub③andsoon.InthiswayIcannotonlybuildmybodybutalsomakemanyfriends.Inmyview,aschoolshould③putimportanceonboththedevelopmentofsocialskillsandthedevelopmentofintellectualskillsaseverystudentwillmakealivingbythemselvesinthefuture.[技法探討]本文為半開放作文，要求學(xué)生針對題目要求提出自己的觀點。每一段圍繞一個中心，切忌一段話寫究竟。對于此類作文，同學(xué)們要在用詞精確的基礎(chǔ)上，言之有物，條理清楚，能自圓其說。寫此類作文時，通常運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時。常用句式1.Myidealseniorhighschoolislikethis.2.Itshouldbeanindividualschool.3.Wehavealotoffreetimetotakepartinout-of-classactivities.4.Wecanborrowbooksfromthelibrary.5.Thereshouldbemanyassociations.6.Teachersandstudentsgetalongwellwitheachother.黃金表達(dá)1．要點信息①與……相比更喜愛……prefer...to...②就……而言asfarassb./sth.isconcerned③等等andsoon④在我看來inmyview/opinion⑤把重點放在……上putimportanceon...2．一句多譯就我而言，假期應(yīng)當(dāng)是大約一個月。①Ithinkweshouldhaveavacationofaboutamonth.②Ithinkthereshouldbeavacationaboutamonth.③Inmyopinion,thevacationshouldbeaboutamonth.④AsfarasIamconcerned,thevacationshouldbeaboutamonth.亮點分析：本文亮點頗多，能根據(jù)半開放性作文的要求提出觀點，并論證觀點，實為一篇佳作。①正確運(yùn)用困難的結(jié)構(gòu)prefer...to...，notonly...butalso...②精確運(yùn)用了本模塊中所學(xué)的短語asfarasI'mconcerned，達(dá)到了學(xué)以致用的目的。③andsoon,putimportanceon短語的運(yùn)用體現(xiàn)了作者較高的寫作水平和語言運(yùn)用實力。[類文演練]學(xué)校最近組織了一次中美學(xué)生溝通活動，你參與其中的“高校校內(nèi)生活”探討。聽完Mike的發(fā)言之后，你準(zhǔn)備寫一份發(fā)言稿，題目是“PreparingMyselfforCollegeLife”，內(nèi)容要點包括：1．以約30個詞概括Mike的發(fā)言要點；2．然后以約120個詞談?wù)勀阒鞠虻母咝Ｉ睿瑑?nèi)容包括：(1)對中學(xué)生活的感受；(2)志向的高校生活；(3)中學(xué)生活和高校生活的差別，以及你準(zhǔn)備如何適應(yīng)。[聯(lián)想詞匯]1.適應(yīng)，調(diào)整________________答案：adjustto2.過著勞碌的生活________________答案：liveabusylife3.首先，最重要的是________________答案：aboveall4.習(xí)慣于________________答案：getusedto5.主動參與________________答案：takeanactivepartin[連詞成句]1.________Idreamedwastheexcitinglifeinthecollegecampus.我所幻想的是高校校內(nèi)里令人興奮的生活。答案：What2.ButImustrealizethatthelifeinthehighschoolisdifferentfrom________inthecollege.但是我必需要意識到中學(xué)的生活與高校的生活是不同的。答案：that3.Imustgetusedto________thingsofmyown.我必需習(xí)慣自己處理事情。答案：handling[連句成章]_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnePossibleVersion：PreparingMyselfforCollegeLifeFromwhatMikesaidIknowthatthoughMikedidn'tadjusttohislifeinthecollegeatfirst,hehasovercomethevariousdifficultiesandgottoenjoythelifeinthecollege.InhighschoolIlivedabusylifealltheday.Ispentmostoftimestudying.ThenwhatIdreamedwastheexcitinglifeinthecollegecampus—moregoodfacilities,helpfulinstructors,andaboveall,morefreetimetodowhatIreallylike.ButImustrealizethatthelifeinthehighschoolisdifferentfromthatinthecollege.Inanewplace,everythingisstrangetome.Imustlearntostudy，learntoliveonmyownandlearntodealwiththeproblemsImeetwithinthecourseofgrowing.Imustgetusedtohandlin