讀后續(xù)寫牛奶與善意故事講義-貴州省六盤水市六枝特區(qū)紐紳中學(xué)高一下學(xué)期4月月考英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Oneday,apoorboywhowassellinggoodsfromdoortodoortopayhiswaythroughschool,foundhehadonlyonethindimeleft.Hewassohungrythathedecidedtobegforamealatthenexthouse.However,helosthiscouragewhenalovelyyoungwomanopenedthedoor.Insteadofameal,heaskedforadrinkofwater.Shethoughthelookedhungrysoshebroughthimalargeglassofmilk.Awarmsmilelithisface.Hedrankitslowly,andthenasked,“HowmuchdoIoweyou?”“Youdon’towemeanything,”shereplied.“Motherhastaughtusnevertoacceptpayforakindness.”Sotheboyhadnochoicebuttothankherfromthebottomofhisheart.AsHowardKellyleftthathouse,aswellasfeelingstrongerphysically,hesensedareturnofhisfaithinGodwhichhehadnearlyabandoned.Yearslatertheyoungwomanbecamecriticallyill.Thelocaldoctorswereconfused,sotheysenthertothebigcity,wheretheyknewthatthespecialistswouldbeabletodiagnose(診斷)thisraresickness.Dr.HowardKelly,nowfamousinthemedicalmunity,wascalledinasaconsultant(會診醫(yī)師).注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes._____________________________________________________________________________________________Helookedatit,thenwrotesomethingintheblankspace(空白處)andthebillwassenttotheyoungwoman’sroom.____________________________________________________________________________________________牛奶與善意故事的續(xù)寫續(xù)寫分析（兩段）?第一段：“Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.”以極具畫面感的描寫開篇，設(shè)置懸念，引發(fā)讀者好奇?！癕emoriesofthatfatefuldaywhenhe’dreceivedaglassofmilkfromakindheartedwomancamefloodingback.”通過回憶自然銜接前文，將過去與現(xiàn)在勾連，使故事脈絡(luò)清晰?！癏eimmediatelyrecognizedhernameonthepatientlist.Withouthesitation,hetookchargeofhercase.”“immediately”“Withouthesitation”等詞，突出霍華德?凱利報(bào)恩的急切心情和堅(jiān)定決心。“Heexaminedhercarefully,pouredovermedicalrecords,andconsultedwithotherexpertsdayandnight.Determinedtosaveher,hesparednoeffort,usingallhisskillsandknowledgetofightagainsttherareillness.”一系列具體動作描寫，如“examined”“pouredover”“consulted”等，生動展現(xiàn)他為救治女子付出的努力，既體現(xiàn)了專業(yè)素養(yǎng)，也深化了感恩主題。?第二段：“Helookedatit,thenwrotesomethingintheblankspaceandthebillwassenttotheyoungwoman’sroom.”承上啟下，推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。“Withamixofanxietyandcuriosity,shetremblinglyopenedthebill.”對女子打開賬單時(shí)神態(tài)和心理的描寫細(xì)膩入微，“anxiety”“curiosity”“tremblingly”渲染出緊張氛圍?！癐nsteadofnumbers,shefoundthesewords,‘Paidinfullwithaglassofmilk.’”揭曉謎底，與前文女子施恩相呼應(yīng)，形成情感高潮?！癟earswelledupinhereyesassherememberedthepoorboy.Shelaythere,overwhelmedwithgratitude,realizingthatasimpleactofkindnessyearsagohadebacktoblessherinthemostunexpectedway.”女子的反應(yīng)和感悟，點(diǎn)明善有善報(bào)的主旨，引發(fā)讀者共鳴。“Thewarmthofthatglassofmilknowseemedtospreadthrougheverypartofherbody,fillingherwithhopeandstrength.”以溫暖的意象結(jié)尾，升華情感，給人以治愈之感。?故事線?貧窮男孩霍華德?凱利為攢學(xué)費(fèi)挨家挨戶推銷商品，饑餓難耐時(shí)向一位年輕女子討水喝，女子卻給了他一杯牛奶，且不求回報(bào)，男孩心懷感激離開，并重燃對上帝的信仰。?多年后，當(dāng)年的年輕女子身患重病，當(dāng)?shù)蒯t(yī)生無法確診，將她送往大城市，身為知名醫(yī)生的霍華德?凱利被邀請會診。?當(dāng)霍華德?凱利聽到女子居住的城鎮(zhèn)名字，認(rèn)出女子，立刻接手她的病例，日夜努力，運(yùn)用專業(yè)知識和技能全力救治女子。?霍華德?凱利在賬單上寫下“一杯牛奶已付清全部費(fèi)用”，女子看到賬單后，回憶起往事，深受感動，意識到自己當(dāng)年的善舉得到了回報(bào)。?短語?efloodingback涌現(xiàn)?takechargeof負(fù)責(zé)?pourover仔細(xì)研讀?sparenoeffort不遺余力?fightagainst對抗?wellup涌出?beoverwhelmedwith充滿?inthemostunexpectedway以最意想不到的方式?afatefulday命運(yùn)攸關(guān)的一天?payinfull付清?主旨升華句?Thistaleoftheglassofmilkandthereturnedkindnessremindsusthattheseedsofpassionwesowinthelivesofotherscanbloomintobeautifulblessings,ofteninthemostunforeseencircumstances.?這個關(guān)于一杯牛奶和善意回報(bào)的故事提醒我們，我們在他人生命中播下的同情種子，會在最意想不到的情況下綻放成美好的祝福。?Justastheyoungwoman’sselflessactnourishedtheboy’sbodyandspirit,sotoodoeskindnesshavethepowertocreateacycleofgiving,whereasimplegesturecanripplethroughtimeandtransformlives.?正如年輕女子無私的行為滋養(yǎng)了男孩的身心，善意也具有創(chuàng)造給予循環(huán)的力量，一個簡單的舉動可以穿越時(shí)空，改變命運(yùn)。?ThestoryofHowardKellyandthewomanillustratesthattruekindnessisnotaboutimmediaterewards;itisaninvestmentinhumanitythatpaysdividendsinwayswecouldneverimagine.?霍華德?凱利和女子的故事表明，真正的善良不在于即時(shí)回報(bào)，而是對人性的一種投資，它會以我們難以想象的方式帶來回報(bào)。?Throughtheintertwineddestiniesoftheboyandthewoman,welearnthattheuniversehasawayofbalancingthescales,ensuringthatactsofkindnessareneverforgottenandalwaysreturnedinkind.?通過男孩和女子交織的命運(yùn)，我們明白，上天自有衡量的尺度，確保善意之舉永不被遺忘，且總會得到相應(yīng)的回報(bào)。?Theglassofmilk,asymbolofsimplegenerosity,beesapowerfulreminderthateventhesmallestactsofkindnesscanleaveanindeliblemarkontheworldandshapethecourseoflivesinprofoundways.?那杯牛奶，作為簡單慷慨的象征，有力地提醒我們，即使是最微小的善舉，也能在世界上留下不可磨滅的印記，并深刻地塑造人生軌跡。?寫作示范?示范一?Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.Awaveofnostalgiawashedoverhimasherecalledthekindnesshe’dreceivedthere.Hishandstrembledslightlyashescannedthepatientdetails.Instantly,heknewhehadtodoeverythinginhispowertosaveher.Hespenthoursresearchingtheillness,collaboratingwithtopexperts,andpersonallymonitoringhertreatment.Everyday,hepouredhisheartintothecase,drivenbyadeepseateddesiretorepayherkindness.?Helookedatit,thenwrotesomethingintheblankspaceandthebillwassenttotheyoungwoman’sroom.Weakly,shereachedforthebill,bracingherselfforalargeamount.Butasshereadthewords“Paidinfullwithaglassofmilk,”hervisionblurredwithtears.Memoriesofthatpoorboycamerushingback.Shelaythere,speechless,feelinganoverwhelmingsenseofwarmthandwonder.Inthatmoment,sheunderstoodthatkindnesswasagiftthatkeptongiving.?示范二?Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.Thepastrushedbackwithsuchforcethathefeltasifhewerethathungryboyagain.Withoutasecondthought,heclaimedhercase.Hemeticulouslystudiedhercondition,stayinguplateintothenighttodevisethebesttreatmentplan.Hewasdeterminednotjusttosaveherlife,buttoshowherthatherkindnesshadmadeadifference.Hiseveryactionwasasilentodetothatglassofmilksolongago.?Helookedatit,thenwrotesomethingintheblankspaceandthebillwassenttotheyoungwoman’sroom.Withapoundingheart,sheopenedthebill.Thewordsonitstoppedherbreath.“Paidinfullwithaglassofmilk.”Shestaredatthem,stunned,astheweightofthemomenthither.Tearsstreameddownherfaceassherealizedthattheuniversehadabeautifulwayofconnectingpeoplethroughkindness,turningasimpleactintoalifelongbond.參考答案Whenheheardthenameofthetownwheretheyoungwomanlived,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.Herecalledthekindheartedandenthusiasticladywhoofferedhimaglassofmilkyearsago.Hurriedly,hewalkedintotheward