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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Sometimesthingsdon’tgoasplanned,butthatdoesn’tmeantheycan’tstillbewonderfulintheirownway.MyparentsandIhadspentforeverresearchingsummercampsonline.Finally,wepickedoutonewhereIcoulddesigngames,animate(制作動(dòng)畫)characters,andlearnothercoolcoding(編程)stuff.Mymomsaid,“Iliketheideaofyouexercisingthatcleverbrainofyours.ButIalsowantyoutogetplentyoffreshair.”“Camperscanchoosetohikeorswimeveryafternoon!”Isaid,asIclickedontheregistrationform.Mydadfilledouttheform,andweekslater,myparentsdroppedmeoffforwhatIthoughtwouldbeaweekofnonstopcomputer-codingfun.Iarrivedatthecheck-intableatthesametimeasacamperofmyagenamedHalley,whowaswearinganadorablesunhat.Halleygreeted,“Weareinthesamegroup-number7.”Ledbyanadvisor,wefollowedthegreenarrowstothecampsite.Isurprisedlyfoundthatitwassocoolandwoodsyalongthepath.IexchangedideaswithHalleyaboutwhatmightcomeoutofthecamp.Halleyexcitedlymentionedthelittleanimalshelovedtoobserveandsomethingaboutnightskywatching.“Yougavemethebestidea,”Isaid.“I’llbasemycharactersontheanimalsyoumentioned!”Halleylaughed.“Imightbemissingsomethinghere.Whoarethesemysteriouscharacters?”“Youknow,thecharacterswe’llbedesigningandanimatingoncomputersthisweek!”Isaid.“Uh,sorry.Stilllost,”saidHalley.“WhywouldwebedoingcomputerstuffatNatureCamp?”ItwasthenthatIrealisedsomeerrorsmusthavebeenmade.Imusthaveaccidentallyclickedonthewrongonlineform!WeimmediatelyracedbacktothewelcometabletoseeifIcouldswitchovertoTechCamp,butofcourseitwascompletelyfull.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。Iforcedasmileasweheadedforourcampsite.____________________________________________________________________________________________“OK,I’llhaveatry,”IlookedatHalleythankfully.____________________________________________________________________________________________意外的自然夏令營續(xù)寫續(xù)寫分析(兩段)?第一段:此段開篇“Iforcedasmileasweheadedforourcampsite.”生動(dòng)展現(xiàn)出“我”因誤報(bào)夏令營而產(chǎn)生的失落,卻又努力調(diào)整情緒的狀態(tài)?!癐wasabitdisappointedatfirst,butHalley'senthusiasmwascontagious.”明確指出“我”情緒轉(zhuǎn)變的原因,即Halley的熱情感染了“我”。隨后“Alongtheway,wespottedafamilyofsquirrelsplayinginthetrees.Halleypointedthemout,andIcouldn'thelpbutbedrawninbytheircuteness.”通過描述路上偶遇松鼠的場景,進(jìn)一步體現(xiàn)“我”開始被自然吸引,心態(tài)逐漸轉(zhuǎn)變?!癢henwereachedthecampsite,thefreshsmellofpinefilledtheair.Istartedtothinkthatmaybethisnaturecampwasn'tsobadafterall.”到達(dá)營地后,松樹的清新氣味以及“我”的內(nèi)心想法,表明“我”已開始接受并重新審視這次自然夏令營,為下文積極參與活動(dòng)做鋪墊。?第二段:“‘OK,I'llhaveatry,’IlookedatHalleythankfully.Shehadconvincedmetojoinherintheafternoonhike.”表明在Halley的勸說下,“我”決定嘗試下午的徒步活動(dòng)?!癆swewalkeddeeperintotheforest,Imarvelledatthetalltreesandthecolorfulwildflowers.Halleypatientlyshowedmehowtoidentifydifferentplantsandevenpointedoutahiddenbird'snest.”詳細(xì)描述徒步過程中“我”對(duì)森林景色的驚嘆以及Halley對(duì)“我”的幫助,展現(xiàn)出“我”深入體驗(yàn)自然的過程。“Bytheendofthehike,Iwassweatingbutfilledwithexcitement.Thatnight,welayonthegrass,lookingatthestarrysky.Irealizedthatalthoughthiswasn'tthecampIplanned,itwasturningouttobeanamazingexperienceinitsownright.”結(jié)尾部分,徒步結(jié)束后的興奮以及夜晚觀星時(shí)的感悟,突出了“我”徹底改變對(duì)自然夏令營的看法,深刻體會(huì)到意外經(jīng)歷的獨(dú)特魅力,升華主題。?故事線?“我”和父母精心挑選了一個(gè)能進(jìn)行編程相關(guān)活動(dòng)的夏令營,父親完成報(bào)名。數(shù)周后,“我”前往營地,在報(bào)到時(shí)遇到同齡營員Halley,一同前往營地。?途中“我”和Halley交流,發(fā)現(xiàn)Halley對(duì)觀察小動(dòng)物和夜空感興趣,而“我”提及設(shè)計(jì)和制作動(dòng)畫角色時(shí),Halley卻一臉茫然,“我”這才意識(shí)到誤點(diǎn)了錯(cuò)誤的報(bào)名表格,報(bào)成了自然夏令營,想轉(zhuǎn)去科技夏令營但已報(bào)滿。?“我”雖失望但仍前往自然夏令營營地,Halley的熱情感染了“我”,路上看到松鼠,到達(dá)營地聞到松樹氣味,“我”開始覺得自然夏令營也許不錯(cuò)。?Halley說服“我”參加下午的徒步,徒步中“我”驚嘆于森林景色,Halley教“我”識(shí)別植物、指出鳥巢,徒步結(jié)束“我”很興奮。當(dāng)晚,“我”和Halley躺在草地上觀星,“我”意識(shí)到這次意外的自然夏令營也是一段美妙經(jīng)歷。?短語?forceasmile強(qiáng)顏歡笑?bedisappointed感到失望?becontagious有感染力?afamilyof一群、一家?bedrawninby被……吸引?befilledwith充滿?convincesb.todosth.說服某人做某事?marvelat對(duì)……驚嘆?identifydifferentplants識(shí)別不同植物?pointout指出?turnout結(jié)果是?主旨升華句?Thisheartwarmingnarrativeoftheunexpectednaturecampnotonlyshowcasesthepowerofapositiveattitudeinturningdisappointmentsintodelightfulsurprisesbutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatlife'sunplanneddetoursoftenleadtothemostbeautifulandenrichingexperiences.?這個(gè)關(guān)于意外自然夏令營的溫馨故事,不僅展示了積極態(tài)度將失望轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)轶@喜的力量,還深刻地提醒我們,生活中那些意外的彎路往往會(huì)帶來最美好、最豐富的經(jīng)歷。?Throughtheprotagonist'sjourneyfromdisappointmenttodiscoveryinthenaturecamp,weareshownthetransformativenatureofanopen-mindandthebeautyofembracingtheunexpected.Theirstoryteachesusthatinthefaceofunexpectedsituations,weshouldbebraveenoughtoexploreandfindjoyinthenewexperiences.?通過主角在自然夏令營中從失望到發(fā)現(xiàn)美好的歷程,我們看到了開放心態(tài)的變革力量以及擁抱意外的美好。他們的故事告訴我們,在面對(duì)意外情況時(shí),我們應(yīng)該勇敢地去探索,在新體驗(yàn)中尋找快樂。?Thestoryofthenaturecampisnotmerelyataleofamistakenregistration;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytoadapt,toappreciatethebeautyofnature,andtofindmeaninginunexpectedcircumstances.?自然夏令營的故事不僅僅是一個(gè)報(bào)名失誤的故事,它是對(duì)人類精神適應(yīng)能力、欣賞自然之美以及在意外情況下尋找意義的深刻探索。?Inaworldwhereweoftenplanandstrivefortheperfectexperience,theprotagonist'sexperienceintheunplannednaturecampstandsasabeaconofhope,illuminatingthepathtowardsamoreflexibleandappreciativeapproachtolife.Itremindsusthattruehappinessliesnotinthepursuitofpre-determinedplansbutintheabilitytoembracetheunexpectedwithopenarms.?在一個(gè)我們常常規(guī)劃并追求完美體驗(yàn)的世界里,主角在意外自然夏令營中的經(jīng)歷如同一盞希望之燈,照亮了一條更靈活、更懂得欣賞生活的道路。它提醒我們,真正的幸福不在于追求既定的計(jì)劃,而在于能夠張開雙臂擁抱意外。?Fromtheinitialdisappointmentofawrong-clickregistrationtothefinalrealizationofthecharmofthenaturecamp,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofgrowth,thepowerofpositiveinfluence,andtheunwaveringbeliefthateveryunexpectedencounterisanopportunityforself-discoveryandtheexpansionofourhorizons.?從最初因誤點(diǎn)報(bào)名而失望,到最終認(rèn)識(shí)到自然夏令營的魅力,這個(gè)故事體現(xiàn)了成長的本質(zhì)、積極影響的力量,以及堅(jiān)定的信念,即每一次意外相遇都是自我發(fā)現(xiàn)和拓展視野的機(jī)會(huì)。?寫作示范?示范一?Iforcedasmileasweheadedforourcampsite.Inside,Iwasstillabitdown,butHalley'sconstantchatteraboutthewondersofnaturegraduallyliftedmyspirits.“Look,there'salittlerabbithoppingaround,”sheexclaimed.Ifollowedhergazeandsawthefluffycreature.Itstwitchingnosewassocute.Atthecampsite,wesetupourtentstogether.Thesoundofchirpingbirdsfilledtheair.Ithought,maybethiswon'tbesobad.?“OK,I'llhaveatry,”IlookedatHalleythankfully.Shepersuadedmetojointhenature-scavengerhunt.Aswerushedthroughtheforest,Ifoundmyselfenjoyingthethrillofsearching.Halleyknewsomuch.Shetoldmeabouttheusesofdifferentleaves.Wefoundararemushroom,andIwasamazed.Afterthehunt,wesatbyasmallstream,ourfeetinthecoolwater.IrealizedthatthisnaturecampwasteachingmethingsInevercouldhavelearnedinfrontofacomputer.?示范二?Iforcedasmileasweheadedforourcampsite.Thedisappointmentwasstillthere,butHalley'shigh-energywasrubbingoffonme.Ontheway,wecameacrossagroupofbutterfliesflutteringaroundapatchofflowers.Halley'seyessparkledasshedescribedtheirlifecycle.Whenwegottothecampsite,Itookadeepbreathofthefreshair.Itwasinvigorating.Istartedtothinkthiscouldbeanadventure.?“OK,I'llhaveatry,”IlookedatHalleythankfully.Sheconvincedmetoparticipateinthestargazingactivity.Asthenightfell,welayonalargeblanket.HalleypointedoutconstellationsIhadnevernoticedbefore.Shesharedancientstoriesrelatedtothestars.Iwasmesmerized.Bytheendofthenight,Iwasfilledwithanewfoundappreciationfornature.Thisunplannednaturecampwasturningouttobeatrulymagicalexperience.?參考答案Iforcedasmileasweheadedforourcampsite.AsIsteppedforward,IjustfeltsodisappointedthatIhadtositdown.Seeingthat,Halleysatnexttome.Forthenextfewminutes,regretimme

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