2017-2018學(xué)年人教課標(biāo)高一英語(yǔ)必修4輔導(dǎo)Unit4BodylanguageGUIDEDWRITING

如何寫慰問信【寫作任務(wù)】假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Amy是一名網(wǎng)球運(yùn)動(dòng)員，最近她因訓(xùn)練時(shí)右腿骨折導(dǎo)致停訓(xùn)數(shù)月而悶悶不樂。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封慰問信，要點(diǎn)包括：1.

同情遭遇；2.

給予安慰；3.

表達(dá)祝愿。注意：

1.

詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.

可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAmy,

Yours,

LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】一、審題定調(diào)本篇習(xí)作要求寫一封慰問信，它是一種應(yīng)用文體，用于向收信人表示關(guān)懷和問候。寫慰問性信函時(shí)要注意態(tài)度誠(chéng)懇、真切，語(yǔ)氣誠(chéng)摯。寫慰問信時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱主要用第一人稱或第二人稱。二、謀篇布局慰問信的格式和普通信件一樣，通常包括以下幾個(gè)部分：信頭、稱呼、正文、結(jié)束語(yǔ)和簽名。其中信頭部分為寫信人地址和寫信日期，常省略。因本寫作任務(wù)稱呼、結(jié)束語(yǔ)和簽名已給出，所以我們只需寫出正文部分。慰問信的正文通常分為三部分：第一部分：引入話題（同情對(duì)方遭遇，表明寫信目的）；第二部分：表示慰問（向?qū)Ψ降奶幘潮硎纠斫?、關(guān)心，并給予鼓勵(lì)或者提供幫助等）；第三部分：總結(jié)全文（表達(dá)美好祝愿）。三、組織語(yǔ)言1.

第一部分：引入話題（同情對(duì)方遭遇，表明寫信目的）。普通表達(dá)高級(jí)表達(dá)★Iheardthat...andIfeelreallysorryforthat.★Iamshocked/awfullysorrytohear/learnthat...★Ifeelgreatpityforyou.★Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsad/sorryIwastohearthat...★Itwasagreatshockforme/brokemyhearttohearthat...★I’mwritingtoexpressmydeepestsympathyforyou.2.

第二部分：表示慰問（向?qū)Ψ降奶幘潮硎纠斫狻㈥P(guān)心，并給予鼓勵(lì)或者提供幫助等）。普通表達(dá)高級(jí)表達(dá)★Iunderstandhowyoufeelnow.★Youmustbeverysad/upset/disappointed...★L(fēng)ifeisn’tthatbad.★If/Aslongasyou...,you’llgetbettersoon.★WearebestfriendssoIwill...★PleaseletmeknowifthereisanythingIcando.★It’safactthatattitudedecideseverything.Soyoushouldnevergiveupwhateverhappens.★Thesituationisn’tasbadasyouthink.★Remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.★Aslongasyou...,you’resuretorecover/beassoundasabellagainbeforelong.★IfIcanbeofanyhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.3.

第三部分：總結(jié)全文（表達(dá)美好祝愿）。普通表達(dá)高級(jí)表達(dá)★Ihopeyou’llgetbettersoon.★Ihopethattimewilltakeawayyoursorrow.★Ihopeyou’llrecoverassoonaspossibleandcarryonasnormal.★Cheerup!I’mfirmlyconvincedthatyouwillgetoveritand...soon.★Ihopeyou’llmakeafullrecoverysoon.

【范文展示】普通范文DearAmy,I’msorrytohearthatyouhurtyourrightlegduringyourtrainingandhadtoquittennisforafewmonths.Ifeelgreatpityforyou.Youmustbeverysadnow.However,inmyopinion,lifeisn’tthatbad.Aslongasyoulistentothedoctoranddoashe/shetellsyou,you’llgetbettersoon.Duringthisperiod,youcandootherthingsyoulike,suchasplayinginstrumentsordrawing,whichwillhelpyourelax.Finally,pleaseletmeknowifyouneedanyhelp.Ihopeyouwillgetwellsoonandbeabletocontinuewithyourtennispractice.

Yours,

LiHua高級(jí)范文DearAmy,Ican’ttellyouhowsorryIfelttohearyou’vehurtyourrightlegduringyourtrainingandmustquittennisforafewmonths.I’mwritingtoexpressmydeepestsympathyforyou.Iunderstandyourfeelings.However,thesituationisn’tasbadasyouthink.Aslongasyoufollowthedoctor’sadviceclosely,you’llrecoversoon.Meanwhile,youcanpursueyourhobbieslikeplayinginstrumentsordrawing,whichwillputyourselfinamorerelaxedmood.Finally,ifIcanbeofanyhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.Ihopeyou’llrecoverassoonaspossibleandcarryonasnormal.

Yours,

LiHua同學(xué)們，學(xué)習(xí)兩篇范文后，你是否掌握了慰問信的一些常用表達(dá)了呢？是否掌握了一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或高級(jí)詞匯呢？希望大家認(rèn)真研讀范文，平時(shí)注意積累高級(jí)詞匯，嘗試使用從句等高級(jí)句型，以使自己寫作能力更加出色?！緦?shí)戰(zhàn)演練】假定你是李華。你的美國(guó)筆友Ella因即將跟隨父母到另外一個(gè)國(guó)家生活和學(xué)習(xí)，她情緒非常低落。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封電子郵件，表示安慰。注意：

1.

詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2.

可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearElla,I’msorrytohearthatyou’reupsetthesedaysbecause

Yours,

LiHua答案DearElla,I’msorrytohearthatyou’reupsetthesedaysbecauseyou’llhavetomovetoanewcountry.Truly,it’shardtoleaveaplacewhereyou’velivedformanyyearsandtosaygoodbyetoyourfriends.Iunderstandthatyou’llhavetofaceawholenewenvironmentwhereyoubarelyknowanyone.However,thingswon’tbeasbadasyouthink.Youcanstillkeepin