讀后續(xù)寫+超越自我：200米蛙泳的挑戰(zhàn)+講義 高三月考試卷(二)英語試題

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ohno.CoachCaffertyjustsaidmyname.Forthatevent.Thetwo-hundred-metrebreaststroke(蛙泳)forthecomingmeet!Notthebackstroke(仰泳)Ihadwishedandpracticedforsolong!Beadsofsweatpoppedoutovermyupperlip.Morganpressedherelbowintomyside.tryingtooffermemoralsupport.Butitdidn'thelp.Mystomachsanktomykneeslikeabrickinwater.Morgantriedtoconvincemeitwouldbefine.“MaybeCoachhasmoreconfidenceinyouthanyouthink.”“OrmaybeCoachCaffertyjustwanttogivetherestalaughwhenIsinktothebottomofthepool,”[thoughtdesperately.IwalkedtowardsCoachCaffertyandtoldheraboutmyinabilityandmydesiretoquitthisevent.ShefrownedandaskedifitwaswhatIreallywanted.Ihesitated.Placingherhandonmyshoulder,shestartedsmilingandencouragedmetopushmyselfoutsideofmycomfortzone.Thefirstpracticewasadisaster.Ilostrhythmonmystrokes(劃水動作).Imessedupmyturns.levenhadtostopandcatchmybreathafewtimes.Ifelteveryonewaslaughingatmeandmystomachtwisted.HowcouldImakeitwithinjusttwoweeks?ButonceIdraggedmyselfoutofthewater,exhaustedandfrustrated,CoachCaffertythumbeduptome.sayingIdidreallywellandjustneededmoreconfidenceinmyselfandmoretimetopractice.Onthewaybackhome,Morgancomfortedme,“Dear,justignoreothers.Raceagainstyourself.Countyourownstrokes.Provetoyourselfthatyoucandoit.”Withthesewordssaidtomealmosteveryday,beforeoraftereachpractice,somethinggraduallychanged:bothhowIswamthebreaststrokeandhowIfeltabouttheeventaswellasmyself.Themeetfinallycame.Iarrivedatthepoolhall,stillalittlebitworried.Aseacheventclickedclosertomine,mykneesshook.Ibitmylipandlookedoutovertheotherswimmers.Morganleanedforward.“Justswimyourrace.Remember,youcan!”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thenthetwo-hundred-milestonebreaststrokewasannounced.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Therewasonly50metrestogo.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章講述了作者意外被安排參加200米蛙泳比賽的經(jīng)歷。起初，作者因為不是自己擅長的仰泳而感到焦慮和不安，甚至想要放棄。在教練的鼓勵下，作者決定挑戰(zhàn)自己，走出舒適區(qū)。盡管第一次訓(xùn)練非常糟糕，但教練的鼓勵和好友Morgan的支持讓作者逐漸建立起信心。隨著訓(xùn)練的進(jìn)行，作者不僅蛙泳技術(shù)有所提高，心態(tài)也發(fā)生了積極的變化。比賽當(dāng)天，盡管緊張，作者還是鼓起勇氣，將比賽視為與自己的較量。在最后50米沖刺時，作者全力以赴，最終超越了自我，實現(xiàn)了個人成長和心態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)變。在原文中，有幾處伏筆為續(xù)寫部分的情節(jié)發(fā)展和高潮做了鋪墊：1.伏筆一：作者最初對蛙泳的不自信和對仰泳的偏好。-回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者通過訓(xùn)練和心理調(diào)整，最終在比賽中成功完成了蛙泳，克服了最初的不自信。2.伏筆二：Morgan的鼓勵和支持，她的話語成為作者的心理支柱。-回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者在比賽中回想起Morgan的話，這些話成為她堅持下去的動力。3.伏筆三：教練Cafferty對作者的鼓勵，讓她走出舒適區(qū)。-回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者在比賽中體現(xiàn)了教練的鼓勵，通過挑戰(zhàn)自己，實現(xiàn)了自我超越。4.伏筆四：作者對比賽的恐懼和緊張。-回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者盡管緊張，但最終通過自我激勵和集中注意力，成功完成了比賽。5.伏筆五：作者對比賽結(jié)果的擔(dān)憂。-回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者將比賽視為個人挑戰(zhàn)，而不是僅僅關(guān)注結(jié)果，這種心態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)變是故事的高潮。這些伏筆和回應(yīng)構(gòu)建了故事的緊張感和情感起伏，使得續(xù)寫部分與原文緊密相連，形成了一個完整的故事弧線。續(xù)寫要點段1.心理轉(zhuǎn)變：作者最初對蛙泳的不自信和焦慮。通過教練的鼓勵和Morgan的支持，作者逐漸建立起信心。作者在比賽中將比賽視為與自己的較量，而不是與他人的競爭。段2.比賽表現(xiàn)：作者在比賽中克服了最初的緊張和恐懼。通過集中注意力和保持自己的節(jié)奏，作者在比賽中表現(xiàn)出色。作者在最后50米的沖刺中全力以赴，最終實現(xiàn)了自我超越。參考答案Thenthetwo-hundred-milestonebreaststrokewasannounced.Heartthudding,Itookmyposition.BarelyhadawhistleblownbeforeIplungedintothewaterlikeanarrow,Initially,Icouldn'tfocusonmyself,withglancesshotatothercompetitorsfromtimetotime.Theracersonmybothsidesweresoswiftthattheywentaheadofme.Seizedbytension,Ilabouredtoacceleratebutthedistancebetweenusgotwidened,anyhow.“Brushasideothers.Justswimyourrace,”Morgan'swordslingeredinmyhead.Ipushedmyarmsoutandpulledintowardsmychest,aswellaskickedthelegsoutandpulledback.Gradually,Icouldfeelnothingbutmyownrhythm.BeforeIknewit,Ihadswum150metres.Therewasonly50metrestogo.However,myenergywasgivingout.Myarmswereonfire,mylungswereburstingandmylegswerepillarsoflead.“Provetoyourselfthatyoucandoit,"Morgan'swordsoccupiedmymind.Igrittedmyteethandpushedmyselfforwarduntilthewallcameintosight.IslappeditwithwhatlittlepowerIhadleft,Icameinlast,AsIdraggedmyselfoutofthewater,thereexplodedthunderousclapsandcheers,Morgandashedover,throwingherarmsaroundme.CoachCaffertycastasatisfiedgrinatme.Suddenly,Iwasburningwithasenseoffulfilment.Thetwo-hundred-milestonebreaststroke'sfinishlinewasmynewlife'sstartinglinealwaysraceagainstmyself.下水文1Thenthetwo-hundred-metrebreaststrokewasannounced.Myheartpoundedinmychestlikeadrum.Itookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmmynerves.AsIsteppedontothestartingblock,IheardMorgan'svoiceinmyhead,"Raceagainstyourself."Thestartingsignalechoedthroughthehall,andIdoveintothewater.Myarmsandlegsmovedinsync,rememberingthecountlesshoursofpractice.Ifocusedonmyownrhythm,myownbreath,andthewaterthatpartedbeforeme.Therewasonly50metrestogo.Thefatiguewassettingin,butsowastherealizationthatIwasdoingit.Iwasswimmingthebreaststroke,andIwaskeepingup.ThecheersfromthecrowdbecameadistantbuzzasIzonedinonthewallahead.Witheachstroke,Icouldfeelmyconfidencegrowing.Iwasn'tjustracingagainsttheotherswimmers;Iwasracingagainstmyowndoubtsandfears.AsIapproachedthefinish,Iknewthatnomattertheoutcome,Ihadalreadywonagainsttheoneopponentthattrulymattered–myself.下水文2Thenthetwo-hundred-metrebreaststrokewasannounced.Theairinthepoolareaseemedtothicken,andIcouldfeeltheweightofexpectationpressingdownonme.Butinsteadofsuccumbingtothepressure,Ichanneleditintodetermination.AsIpositionedmyselfatthestartingblock,Ivisualizedtheraceinmymind,eachstrokepreciseandpowerful.Thebuzzofthecrowdfadedaway,replacedbythesteadyrhythmofmyownheartbeatandthesilentmantraofm