高中英語北師大版必修一UNIT 3 Period 8　Writing-An Event Description

Period8Writing—AnEventDescriptionUNIT3CELEBRATIONS細讀文本寫作指導寫作實踐達標檢測細讀

文本ReadthedescriptiononP62andchoosethebestanswer.1.Whatwashismotherdoingwhenhewokeup?A.Shewasnowheretobeseen.B.Shewaspreparingbreakfast.C.Shewashavinglunch.D.Shewaspreparingspeciallunch.Activity1

Readforsomedetails√2.WhatwasthespecialpresentIhadpreparedforGrandpa?A.Somephotosfromthefamilyalbum.B.AvideoofGrandpa’slifestory.C.SomeoldfriendsofGrandpa.D.Aspecialbirthdaylunch.√3.Whatwasthehighlightofthewholeparty?A.ThecomingofGrandpa’sfriends.B.Grandpa’sfavouritemusicfilledintheroom.C.AnoldphotoofGrandpaandhisfriendsinschooluniformswas

shown.D.Grandpawasmovedtotears.√4.HowdidGrandpafeelabouthisbirthdayparty?A.Joyfulandexcited.B.Movedandalittleupset.C.Cheerfulandcalm.D.Surprisedandindifferent.√ReadthedescriptiononP62andputthefollowingintherightorder.①Feelingsabouttheevent.②Preparationsbeforetheevent.③Thebestpartoftheevent.④Introductiontotheevent.Activity2

Readforthestructure.答案④②③①1.Readthepassageagainandfindoutthetimelineoftheevent.Keys：①Earlyinthemorning，Iwokeupexcited.②Afteraquickbreakfast，IcheckedthespecialgiftIhadmadeforGrandpa，avideoofhislifestory...③Justbeforelunchtime，Dadcameinwithsomeguests.④Towardstheendoftheparty，Grandpasaidexcitedly，“ItisawonderfulbirthdaycelebrationandI’vegotthebestgiftIhaveeverreceived.”Activity3

Readforsomegoodsentences.2.Readthepassageagainandfindoutwordsandexpressionsthatshowpeople’semotion.Keys：①Earlyinthemorning，Iwokeupexcited.②Grandpacouldn’tbelievehis

eyesandittookquitealongtimeforthemtocalmdown.③Therewasalotoflaughterintheroom，andquiteafewtearsintheireyes.④Towardstheendoftheparty，Grandpasaidexcitedly...⑤NowIamlookingforwardtomyeightieth，ninetiethandevenonehundredthbirthdaysalready!返回寫作

指導本單元的寫作任務(wù)是描述一個事件。描述事件時一般用第一或第三人稱來敘述。時態(tài)以一般過去時或一般將來時為主。該類文章的寫作一般分三段：首段：點明寫作的目的，并簡要介紹所描述事件的內(nèi)容，通常用過渡句引出下文；主體段：從描述活動的準備工作開始，也可以結(jié)合題目介紹活動背景，然后按時間順序著重描寫事件的精彩部分；尾段：對活動進行總結(jié)，并適當抒發(fā)情感。常用表達1.ItwasafinedayandI...那天天氣很好，我……2.Earlyinthemorning...Afterthat...Then...Andfinally/Intheend...一大早……在那之后……然后……最后……3.WhenIwaswalkinginthestreetwhen...當我走在街上時……4.Intheend/Finally/Eventually/Ultimately，Isucceededindoing...最后，我成功地……5.Tomyrelief，it...令我欣慰的是……6.Fromthisexperience/activity，Ilearnedthat...從這次經(jīng)歷/活動中，我了解到……7.Iwasdeeplymoved/struck/inspired/impressedby...我被……深深地感動了。8.Itisreallyanunforgettableexperience！/Whatanunforgettableexperienceitis!這真是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷！9.Thisisthebest/mostunforgettable...thatIhaveexperienced.這是我經(jīng)歷過的最好的/最難忘的……返回寫作

實踐假如你是李華，上周日是你媽媽的生日，你和爸爸還有弟弟一起為媽媽慶祝了生日。請根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語把這件事描述一下。1.上周日是媽媽的五十歲生日；2.家人都為她準備了生日禮物；3.爸爸下廚做了好吃的飯菜；4.大家一起祝媽媽生日快樂，感謝她為家里所做的一切。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步審題謀篇審題寫作要求是描述為媽媽慶祝生日的事情。寫作時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：1.確定文體：這是一篇記敘文，寫作中應(yīng)注意記敘文的常規(guī)格式；2.主體時態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般過去時為主；3.主體人稱：由于是描寫為媽媽過生日的事情，所以人稱應(yīng)該以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。謀篇第一段：交代背景；第二段：描述慶祝生日的過程；第三段：表達自己的感受。第二步遣詞造句核心詞匯1.度過快樂的一天

________________2.小聲地秘密交談

_______________3.零花錢

_____________4.下班回家

____________________5.因某事而感謝某人

_______________6.吹滅蠟燭

__________________haveamerrydaywhispersecretlypocketmoneycomebackfromworkthanksbforsthblowoutthecandles連詞成句1.我的爸爸、弟弟和我秘密地進行了交談。_____________________________________________________________2.我們討論了怎樣慶祝媽媽的生日。(疑問詞＋不定式)Wediscussed

.3.我們到家時，看到一張桌子已經(jīng)擺好了。(主謂賓賓補)Whenwegothome，

.4.桌子上有很多好吃的食物。(therebe句型)_____________________________________________________________Myfather，brotherandIwhisperedsecretly.howtocelebratemymother’sbirthdaywesawatablelaidThereweremanydeliciousfoodsonthetable.5.我們都對她說：“生日快樂！”_____________________________________________________________6.我們感謝她為家里所做的一切。(what賓語從句)Weallthankedherfor

.Weallsaid“HappyBirthday！”toher.whatshehaddoneforourfamily第三步句式升級1.請把句1和句2用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語合成一句話。Myfather，brotherandIwhisperedsecretly，_____________________

.2.請把句3和句4用with復合結(jié)構(gòu)合成一句話。Whenwegothome，wesawatablelaid

.3.請把句5和句6用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語合成一句話。Weallsaid“HappyBirthday！”toher，________________________

.discussinghowtocelebratemymother’sbirthdaywithmanydeliciousfoodsonitthankingherforwhatshehaddoneforourfamily第四步組句成篇用適當?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。[范文賞讀]WehadamerrydaylastSunday，foritwasmymother’sfiftiethbirthday!Severaldaysbefore，myfather，brotherandIwhisperedsecretly，discussinghowtocelebratemymother’sbirthday.OnSundaymorning，mybrotherandIgotupearlyandwenttobuysomeflowersusingourpocketmoneywhilemyfatherstayedathomedecoratingthehouseandpreparedabigdinner.Whenwegothome，wesawatablelaidwithmanydeliciousfoodsandabeautifulbirthdaycakeonit.Mymotherwassosurprisedwhenshecamebackfromwork！Sheblewoutthecandlesandwasmovedtotears.Weallsaid“HappyBirthday！”toher，thankingherforwhatshehaddoneforourfamily.IlovemyfamilyandIwillrememberthehappydayforever!返回達標檢測上周末，你和同學參加了一次采摘活動，請你為學校的微信公眾號寫一篇本次活動的英文報道，內(nèi)容包括：1.農(nóng)場情況；2.采摘過程；3.個人感受。注意：詞數(shù)80左右。[參考范文]Lastweeke