讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)技能微提升導(dǎo)學(xué)案高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)

課型：讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)提升課課時(shí)：一課時(shí)時(shí)常：40min學(xué)生：高三寫(xiě)作提升微技能Topic:showknidnesstoyourclassmatesStepΙ:Preview[積累常誦]“痛苦”【n】sadness/sorrowful悲傷；depression沮喪；抑郁frustration挫??；loneliness孤獨(dú)【adj】sad/sorrowful悲傷的；frustrated挫敗的；lonely孤獨(dú)的；upset心煩意亂的；depressed抑郁的；沮喪的【adv】sadly悲傷地“哭泣【n]tear眼淚【v】cry哭泣；sob啜泣；weep流淚【a】dv.]bitterly傷心地“安慰”【n】patience耐心；warmth溫暖【v】fort安慰；hug擁抱【adj】warm溫暖的；forting令人安慰的【adv】patiently耐心地；gently溫柔地常見(jiàn)詞塊staypositive保持樂(lè)觀(guān)；silverlining不幸中的一線(xiàn)希望；beleftalone被留下單獨(dú)一人；belostinsadness沉浸在痛苦中staypositive保持樂(lè)觀(guān)；silverlining不幸中的一線(xiàn)希望；beleftalone被留下單獨(dú)一人；belostinsadness沉浸在痛苦中StepⅡ:Selflearning[小試牛刀]【教室里的】每個(gè)人都【興奮地】在聊天，而簡(jiǎn)（Jane）【獨(dú)自】坐在角落里。___________________________________________________________我能感覺(jué)到//她沉浸在【巨大的】悲傷中，//這讓我心碎。___________________________________________________________我【帶著溫暖的笑】，走近并坐在了簡(jiǎn)的旁邊。___________________________________________________________我剛開(kāi)口說(shuō)話(huà)，簡(jiǎn)就抬起頭來(lái)，眼淚順著臉頰流了下來(lái)。___________________________________________________________我【輕輕地】拍了拍她的背，【耐心地】安慰她。___________________________________________________________她告訴我//她因?yàn)槟w色而被人嘲笑，我鼓勵(lì)她保持樂(lè)觀(guān)。___________________________________________________________每一片烏云都有銀邊（黑暗中總有一線(xiàn)光明）。（暗喻）___________________________________________________________StepⅢ:Grouplearning/StepⅢ:Furtherlearning[句式升級(jí)]1.【教室里的】每個(gè)人都【興奮地】在聊天，而簡(jiǎn)（Jane）【獨(dú)自】坐在角落里。（while引導(dǎo)并列句，意為“而”；形容詞作狀語(yǔ)）___________________________________________________________2.我能感覺(jué)到//她沉浸在【巨大的】悲傷中，//這讓我心碎。（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）___________________________________________________________3.我【帶著溫暖的笑】，走近并坐在了簡(jiǎn)的旁邊。（動(dòng)詞－ing短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）___________________________________________________________4.我剛開(kāi)口說(shuō)話(huà)，簡(jiǎn)就抬起頭來(lái)，眼淚順著臉頰流了下來(lái)。（nosooner...than引起的部分倒裝；with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）__________________________________________________________5.我【輕輕地】拍了拍她的背，【耐心地】安慰她。（動(dòng)詞－ing短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）___________________________________________________________6.她告訴我//她因?yàn)槟w色而被人嘲笑，我鼓勵(lì)她保持樂(lè)觀(guān)。（tellsbaboutsth）___________________________________________________________7.每一片烏云都有銀邊（黑暗中總有一線(xiàn)光明）。（暗喻）___________________________________________________________StepIV:Evaluation1.Whilearrivingatthedoor,greatconcernandhorroroverwhelmedme.（用nosooner...than句型改寫(xiě)）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Icouldn’tcontainmyselfandburstintotears.（用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)改寫(xiě)）___________________________________________________________Momshedtears(流淚)aswell.Shetouchedmyhairandwipedmytearsgently.（用動(dòng)詞ing短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)合并句子）—————————————————————————————StepIV:Homework將Grouplearning部分合并成小短文并背誦，注意使用銜接詞匯。答案：1.教室里的每個(gè)人都興奮地在聊天，而簡(jiǎn)（Jane）獨(dú)自坐在角落里。（while引導(dǎo)并列句，意為“而”；形容詞作狀語(yǔ)）EveryoneintheclassroomwaschattingwithgreatexcitementwhileJanewassittinginthecorner，alone.2.我能感覺(jué)到她沉浸在巨大的悲傷中，這讓我心碎。（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）Icouldsenseshewaslostinenormoussadness，whichbrokemyheart.3.我?guī)е鴾嘏男?，走近并坐在了?jiǎn)的旁邊。（動(dòng)詞－ing短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）Wearingawarmsmile，IapproachedandsatbesideJane.

4.我剛開(kāi)口說(shuō)話(huà)，簡(jiǎn)就抬起頭來(lái)，眼淚順著臉頰流了下來(lái)。（nosooner...than引起的部分倒裝；with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）NosoonerhadIbegunspeakingthanJanelookedup，withtearsrunningdownherface.

5.我輕輕地拍了拍她的背，耐心地安慰她。（動(dòng)詞－ing短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）Ipattedhergentlyonherback，fortingherpatiently.6.她告訴我她因?yàn)槟w色而被人嘲笑，我鼓勵(lì)她保持樂(lè)觀(guān)。（tellsbaboutsth/tellsbthat...）ShetoldmeaboutherbeinglaughedatbecauseofherskincolourandIencouragedhertostaypositive.

7.每一片烏云都有銀邊（黑暗中總有一線(xiàn)光明）。（暗喻）Everycloudhasasilverlining.EvaluationNoonerhadIarrivedatthe