倒裝句在寫作中的應(yīng)用公開課一等獎省優(yōu)質(zhì)課大賽獲獎?wù)n件

Inversionsentences

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writing特殊句式與寫作(一）RevisionCompletethesentencesusinginversedpatterns:1.Hehadneverthoughtthathewouldhavetwinchildrenatonego(同時一下）。2.Asahuman,onecanhardlydowithoutafriend.NeverhadhethoughtthathewouldhavetwinchildrenatonegoAsahuman,hardlycanonedo

withoutafriend.RevisionCompletethesentencesusinginversedpatterns:3.Thescenewassothrillingthattheaudiencegavethunderousapplause..Sothrillingwasthescenethattheaudience...4.Aboyrushedoutwithaballinhishand.

Outrushedaboywithaballinhishand.MybosomfriendLilysitsonmyleft.

OnmyleftsitsmybosomfriendLily.Revision.6.____________________（我將永遠不會忘）theday____youcried.7.Notonly_________（工人們對他心存感激),butalsothebossthoughthighlyofhim,8.只有經(jīng)過不懈努力，你才能達成你目標9.Ifyouhadcomeyesterday,youwouldhaveseenhimNeverwillIforget

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weretheworkersgratefultohim8.Onlythroughyourconstanteffortscanyouachieveyourgoal.Hadyoucomeyesterday

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inversionpatterns

indifferentsituationsThosestudentsareenjoyingaperformanceandinfrontofthemaresittingtwoboysplayingtheguitar.La…la…la…Thosestudentsareenjoyingaperformance,infrontofwhomaresittingtwoboysplayingtheguitar.Inthemiddleoftheplayground

standsaflagpole.表位置/方式/時間等介詞短語+全倒句

vividandattractive突顯使得句子更生動吸引人So+adi/adv+半倒裝句that（陳說句）

---人物品質(zhì)/情感描述--讀寫任務(wù)之感悟段Afterreadingthestory,Iwastouched.Ishowmygreatestadmirationforhim.Afterreadingthestory,sotouchedamIthatIcan’tbutshowmygreatestadmirationforhim`。NOsoonerhadwegotthetopofthemountainthanwebegantocollectrubbish.

NOsoonerhad+Sb+done+than從句

Hardly+had+Sb+done+when

從句

一……就……notuntil從句+半倒裝句

直到……才……慣用來表述時間先后關(guān)系直到一個拾荒阿婆途經(jīng)，小悅悅才被馬上送往醫(yī)院NotuntilanoldgrannycollectingrubbishpassedbywasYueyuesenttothehospital.第一節(jié)基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）上周一你們班圍繞“追星族”現(xiàn)象進行了一次討論會，同學(xué)們就“追星”現(xiàn)象、原因等展開了討論1.年輕人作為追星族主體花太量時間、精力，甚至金錢搜集明星資料參加他們演唱會。2.許多年輕人深感壓力.、缺乏信任感，“追星"可給他們帶來一定安全感。LookbackMakingupthemajorpursersaboutcelebrities,notonlydoyoungpeoplespendplentyoftimeandenergyincollectinginformationaboutcelebrities,butalsotheypayalargeamountofmoneyfortheirconcerts.Notonly+半倒裝句+butalso+陳說句

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注意:

倒主句不倒從句。可替換句型;ApartfromdoingA,wecanalsodoB.【讀寫任務(wù)寫作內(nèi)容】

假設(shè)你們班要舉行一次關(guān)于“健康生活”演講,請你以“健康生活習(xí)慣讓我們遠離病毒”為主題寫一篇演講稿。內(nèi)容關(guān)鍵點包含:1.以約30個詞概括上文關(guān)鍵點.2.以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓π纬山】瞪盍?xí)慣看法，內(nèi)容包含:(1)病毒危害及形成健康生活習(xí)慣必要性;(2)要保持健康，還有哪些可行辦法;(3)提倡大家培養(yǎng)正確生活習(xí)慣。LookbackOnlybycultivatingcorrectandgoodhabitscanwelivehealthilyandhappily

Only+狀語（介詞/副詞/when,if從句)+半倒句—Tohighlightorechoyourviewpointmentionedabove,thereforemakingyoursentencespowerful（強調(diào)或者回應(yīng)主題）HadGaoxiaosongstoppedadrunkdriving，hewouldn’thadbeenputintoprison.IfGaoxiaosonghadstoppedadrunkdriving，hewouldn’thadbe