專題34 英語作文之看圖作文類（解析版）

1、1. 書面表達。 雷鋒同志說過：“我要把有限的生命，投入到無限的為人民服務之中去?！闭堃浴癊veryone Needs Help”為題，寫一篇作文。Did yDid you get any help from others?Did you give any help to people when they needed?Tell your story or his(her) story.要求：詞數(shù)：80個左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)； 書寫工整，拼寫、語法正確，內(nèi)容層次分明。 全文中不要提及真實的校名和人名。 Everyone Needs Help In our daily life,

2、【答案】One possible version:Everyone Needs Help In our daily life, we will meet different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. I got much help from my parents, my friends, my teachers, my classmates and so on, even some strangers. For exa

3、mple, my parents often help me wash clothes, my teachers often give me help in learning. At the same time, I also help others. I help my parents put away our clothes, I lend something to my classmates. Its happy to help others. We should help each other. I tell you a story. One day I saw a little gi

4、rl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily. Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over

5、 and over. I think the little girl was, though very young, a very warm-hearted person.【亮點說明】這篇短文層次分明，行文流暢。不僅注意避免句式重復而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如no matter at home, in school, or at some other places.，F(xiàn)or example，At the same time，Then，but she was too short to help him to stand，over and over.等，使文章的表達更豐富，更

6、有邏輯性，更富有條理?？键c：圖表作文。2. 書面表達。最近你們班就“低碳”生活方式進行了討論，你認為的“低碳”生活方式是什么。請你用英語一篇文章，說說你的“低碳”生活。Save Energy: Save Energy: water/light/paperGive up bad habbits: WGive up bad habbits: Waste water/throw litter aboutstudy hard,r,Three Rs:Recycle/reuse/reduceMy LMy Low Carbon Life注意：1.根據(jù)提示適當發(fā)揮； 2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名；3

7、.詞數(shù)80左右 (開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)) ?！敬鸢浮?My Low Carbon LifeWe can do a lot in our daily life to live a low carbon life. In my daily life, I always turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, I often sort the rubbish, hoping tha

8、t we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, I usually use handkerchiefs instead of tissues in order to prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when I go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to

9、a cleaner world.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹你的低碳生活。從圖表中可以看出，主要介紹如何做到低碳生活，主要從三個方面，三個R，節(jié)約能能源，放棄壞習慣。在寫作中注意句式的變化，及連詞的應用?！玖咙c說明】這篇短文不僅注意避免句式重復而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如In my daily life,，Besides，hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal.，In addition, More importantly, whic

10、h contributes to a cleaner world等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。考點：圖表作文。3. 根據(jù)圖片及中文大意，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的短文。假設你和美國朋友Tom經(jīng)常在微信群里交流，這次，他就“健康生活方式”的問題和你進行探討，問了你三個問題：你每日三餐都按時吃嗎？經(jīng)常做運動嗎？今后有什么健康生活方面的計劃嗎？請你寫出一段文字來回答他的問題。Do you often have for your meals on time?Do you like to go out for sports or other activities?Do yo

11、u often have for your meals on time?Do you like to go out for sports or other activities?What do you want to do to make yourself more healthy?【答案】I have a healthy lifestyle. I have my three meals on time. I think it is good for my health.I do exercise every morning. And sometimes I go swimming or ta

12、ke part in other activities. We know that the more exercise we do ,the healthier we will be. To keep in good health,I will do the following things:First, we should eat plenty of fruits and meat or vegetables. We shouldnt eat too many snack foods. Second, we should drink plenty of water. Third, I thi

13、nk more meat and fish, less exercise are bad for health. Good rest, less meat and fish, more vegetables and enough exercise are good for health. Fourth,we should get up and go to bed early.We shouldnt stay up so late. In my oinpoin ,we should we must have healthy living habits【亮點說明】這篇短文根據(jù)提示從三個方面進行了描

14、述，使文章的表達條理清晰，有邏輯性。合理的連詞使文章更緊湊?？键c：看圖作文。4.假如你叫溫濤，你的美國筆友Andy 參加了漢語培訓班學習漢語。他最近寫信向你詢問如何學習外語。請根據(jù)下列提示和你自己學習英語的體會給Andy 寫一封回信。 MMake more conversationsListen carefully in classYour suggestion1Your suggestion2How to learn a foreign language well?注意：(1)回信需要包括全部要點；(2)文章開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；(3)詞數(shù)80左右。Dear Andy,Im ve

15、ry glad that you are learning Chinese. I know it isnt easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. _Best wishes! Yours, Wen Tao【答案】Dear Linda， Im very glad that you are learning Chinese. I know it isnt easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. F

16、irstly, its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so thatyou can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance/ take every opportunity to practise speaking Chinese, both in and out of class. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to lis

17、ten and read more in Chinese. Whats more, youd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day. Above all, I think you should be confident in yourself and dont give up whenever you meet with difficulty. Im sure youll succeed with/through your hard work. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 【解析】試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹自己學習英語的體會。根據(jù)提示主要寫課上如何做，多交流，然后根據(jù)自己的體會再寫兩條建議。【亮點說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完