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1、文常用萬能功能句（天龍八部-陳曲）六級的題目分類（1）首先六級作文有導(dǎo)讀（關(guān)鍵性詞語均已經(jīng)劃出）：Direction:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteawordsbutnomoreshortessayentitled.Youshouldwriteatleast150than200followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.（2）六級考試題目一般分為兩類：1.現(xiàn)象解釋解決類；2.正反觀點(diǎn)對比類。除了2011年12月出現(xiàn)看似較新的題目外，其余均逃不出這范圍，與專業(yè)四級的題目有些類似。現(xiàn)象解釋解決類2010年06月DueAttitud

2、eShouldBeGiventotheStudyofChinese近年來在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文的現(xiàn)象；出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因和后果；為了改變這種狀況，我認(rèn)為正反觀點(diǎn)對比類2009年12月現(xiàn)在有不少家長送孩子參加各種藝術(shù)班；對這種做法有人表示支持，有人并不贊成；我認(rèn)為Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses?六級的寫作黃金五法則由于六級先按百分制的15分評卷（五檔2581114），又按閱卷時(shí)間不足30秒，閱卷人大體以印象給分。其實(shí)寫作好壞的確看若干句即現(xiàn)端倪。黃金法則包括：題目提綱要點(diǎn)-大致意思寫成英文-各段中心句注：便于閱卷人了解每段的TopicSentence

3、；驚艷-學(xué)會(huì)制造亮點(diǎn)（尤其第一段）注：往往閱卷第一印象甚為重要，即體現(xiàn)考生水平；清晰-學(xué)會(huì)使用標(biāo)志詞(尤其是主體段)注：中間段落結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，助于評卷人了解思想；詞匯原則-四級詞匯六級高端詞匯注：第一偏向書面，第二偏向準(zhǔn)確。用太簡單的的確不容易得高分。你以為你是海明威呀?卷面保持清楚-切忌藏寶圖注：讓閱卷老師看卷費(fèi)力，即便你文筆雋永，恐怕也難見天日。天龍八部說天龍八部，只是賣個(gè)噱頭，目的是告訴給位，開頭不好寫，模板(template)是沒有任何作用的。請一定要學(xué)習(xí)模板句，而不要用所謂的模板段，不信你給我找個(gè)萬能能套所有開頭段的試試？整理下歷年來的所有開頭段：2011.061.現(xiàn)在許多人熱衷于各類證

4、書考試；1.目前高校排名相當(dāng)盛行；2010.061.近年來在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文的現(xiàn)象;1.現(xiàn)在有不少家長送孩子參加各種藝術(shù)班；2009.061.有人認(rèn)為名字很重要；1.大學(xué)生的心理健康十分重要；2008.061.隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展，電子圖書越來越多;1.如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來越多廣泛的使用;2007.061.有人做好事期望得到回報(bào)；1.閱讀經(jīng)典書籍對人的成長至關(guān)重要。我們發(fā)現(xiàn)一般要描述的都是一些社會(huì)的熱點(diǎn)：這里有八個(gè)句型各位可以背一下?？荚噲錾细鶕?jù)題目，將八個(gè)句子任意選擇、隨意組合起來即可！天龍八部之一：描述類經(jīng)典句預(yù)備知識：寫句子的亮點(diǎn)一一要么是詞，要么是句型。句型部分1:閱讀經(jīng)典書籍非常

5、重要。（劃線處可以根據(jù)題目變換）1.Readingclassicsisveryimportant./Itisveryimportanttoreadclassics.2.Itisofvital/greatimportancetoreadclassics.3.Nothingismoreimportantthanreadingclassics.4.Readingclassicsplaysanextremelyimportantrolethroughoutourlives.5.Readingclassicsneverfailstobeimportant.也可以將34句起用：Nothingcanplay

6、amoreimportantrolethanreadingclassics.Important可以替換詞匯：significant（意義深遠(yuǎn)的）essential（關(guān)鍵的）indispensable（不可替代的）pivotal（中樞作用的）等等。句型部分2:在寫作時(shí)表示真理性的描述可以加上個(gè)引導(dǎo)抬頭。如：做了好事要不要求回報(bào)的開頭可以寫成：Itisgenerallyacceptedthatoneshouldneverexpectarewardwhendoingagooddeed.Seeminglyjustifiable,however,itisnotalwaysthecase.這樣的抬頭句替換

7、：Itisgenerallyacceptedthat/ThereisgeneralacceptaneethatTOC o 1-5 h zThereislittledoubtthatItcannotbedeniedthatThereisagrowingrecognitionthatIthasbeenwidelynotedthatItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatAprevailingnotion/trendisthat句型合并成模版句型：Itisgenerallyacceptedthatnothingcanplayamoreindispensablerolethanr

8、eadingclassics.學(xué)會(huì)靈活替換如:readingclassicsplaysanextremelyimportantroleItgoeswithoutsayingthatthroughoutourlives.天龍八部之二：趨勢類經(jīng)典句模版句型（劃線處可以根據(jù)題目變換）：越來越多的父母開始考慮把孩子送到藝術(shù)學(xué)校去。Moreandmore不是不好，可以替換句型使用Anincreasing/agrowing/amountingnumberofparentsbegintoconsidersendingtheirkidstoartclasses.Parentsingrowingnumbersb

9、egintoconsidersendingtheirkidstoartclasses.Itisobviousthatdigitalproductshavebecomeincreasinglypopularandhavebeenextensivelyusedinavarietyofways.如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來越多廣泛的使用。Nowadays,collegeundergraduateshaveincreasinglyrealizedcertificateplaysanextremelyimportantroleinpursuitoftheirfuturecareer.Asaresult,the

10、ygetinvolvedinacertificatemania.2011.06現(xiàn)在許多人熱衷于各類證書考試天龍八部之三：關(guān)注類經(jīng)典句預(yù)備知識：英漢差異1:英語多被動(dòng)，漢語多主動(dòng)。如：我們應(yīng)該重視電子書Weshouldpayattentiontoe-books.（weIpeople用的太多，句子顯得累贅）Youshouldpayattentiontoe-books.（第二人稱最好不要在作文中出現(xiàn)）主語替換成one是一個(gè)選擇，另外用被動(dòng)語態(tài)為佳。Muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforeshouldbepaidto.英漢差異2:漢語多短句，英語多長句中文講意境，所以當(dāng)出現(xiàn)小橋流

11、水人家，中國人都懂這個(gè)場景，但是外國人句式不加動(dòng)詞，這三個(gè)詞語是無意義的。一般可以翻譯成：Murmuringstreamrunsbelowthetinybridge,leadingtoelegantdwellings.英語中的長短句可以連起來：Muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenpaidtothefast-developingITindustry.TheITindustryhasbroughtunprecedentedtransformationtohumanbeingslife.模板句型（劃線處可以根據(jù)題目變換）：Inrecentyears,muchm

12、oreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenpaidtothefast-developingITindustry,whichhasbroughtunprecedentedtransformationtohumanbeingslife.天龍八部之四：重視類經(jīng)典句句型舉例：近年來在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文的現(xiàn)象Withtheonsetofglobalization,wethepost-80sgenerationincreasinglyattachgreatimportaneetoforeignIanguagelearning.Sadly/Unfortunately,weinste

13、adpaylittleattentiontoourmothertongue.重視關(guān)注類句型：attachgreatimportaneetopayattentiontosetstorebylaystresson/upon模版句型：1.With/owingtothedevelopmentof,we,thepost-90sgeneration,shouldattachgreatimportaneeto/payattentionto/setstoreby/laystressupon2.Withtheadventofthe21stcentury,astodayscollegestudents,wesho

14、uldpayspecialattentiontotheissueof天龍八部之五：發(fā)生類經(jīng)典句預(yù)備知識：近幾年來越來越多的父母把孩子送到了藝術(shù)學(xué)校去。Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedanexponentialincreaseinthenumberofparentswhowishtosendtheirkidstoartclasses.模板句型：Time/Placehavewitnesseda/ansharp/dramatic/striking/exponential/considerable/significantincrease/decreaseinthenum

15、berofwho/which.練習(xí)1根據(jù)的調(diào)查，僅僅2009年間，中國就有約大學(xué)生由于心理健康問題而跳樓。AccordingtoarecentsurveyconductedbyChinaDaily,theyear2009haswitnessedapproximatelycollegestudentswhocommittedsuicideowingtotheirmentaiproblem.練習(xí)2:近年來在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文的現(xiàn)象。Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedaconsiderablystrikingphenomenonthatagrowingnumberof

16、students,despitetheirfluencyinEnglish,starttopaylittleattentiontothestudyofChinese,theirmothertongue.這種句型其實(shí)句式舉例。附舉例一種句型：Thedigitalagehasexertedaconspicuousimpactonourlife,whichcanbeexemplifiedbythepopularityofe-shop.天龍八部之六：議論類經(jīng)典句預(yù)備知識：TheImportaneeofStudentsmentalhealth如何提高大學(xué)生心理健康問題（A）引起了社會(huì)廣泛爭議（B）。A：

17、theissueofhowtoimprovethestudentsmentalhealthB:aheateddiscussion/adebate/avarietyofconflictingviews/muchcontroversy模版句型：Ahascaused/ledto/resultedin/triggered/givenrisetoavarietyofconflictingviews.AsregardsA,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongthegeneralpublicinoursociety.ThereismuchcontroversyoverA./a

18、nationaldebatehassprunguponA.如:Asregardstheissueofhowtoimprovethestudentsmentalhealth,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionamongthegeneralpublicinoursociety.天龍八部之七：出現(xiàn)類經(jīng)典句模版句型：隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展，電子圖書越來越多Owningto/WiththedevelopmentofITindustry,e-booksingrowingnumbersbegintoemergeintopeoplesvision.或者：Probablywithoutour

19、consciousness/realization,theITtechnologyseemstogivebirthtoadigitalageintodaysworld.AaOemergeintopeoplessight/visionAaBAgive（s）birth/risetoB練習(xí)：大學(xué)排名（試著使用我們學(xué)過的句型）Ithasbeenwidelynotedthatuniversityplaysafundamentalroleinonescultivationandprovidesaplatformforhighereducation.Recently,however,muchmoreatte

20、ntionthaneverbeforehasbeenpaidtotheuniversityranking,whichhasbecomeincreasinglyprevalentamongeducationalists.Withthewizardryoftheinternet,universitiesallacrosstheglobalhavebeenrankedaccordingtosuchfactorsastheiracademicreputationandfacultystudents.Consequently,thisphenomenonmightgiverisetoavarietyof

21、conflictingviewsamongthegeneralpublicinoursociety.天龍八部之八：結(jié)果類經(jīng)典句預(yù)備知識：2007.06ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?例句：Seeminglysimple,thequestionofwhetheroneshouldexpectarewardafterdoingagooddeedposesaconsiderablechallenge,whichtendstoshowcasepeoplesmoralbelief.模版句型1（對產(chǎn)生）：poseaconsiderablechallenge

22、toPollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistenee.Rapidpopulationgrowthwillexertastrainoneconomiesaroundtheworld.3.Smokingplacesagreatinflueneeonourhealth.模版句型2（表示一種趨勢，一般插入主謂之間）：Onetendstoshoutwhenhegetsexcited.Inwinter,peopleareapttocatchcold.Heislikelytomakemistakeswhentired.Sheispronetolosetemperindiffi

23、cultsituation.Leoisliabletoactaggressively.Thiskindofshoesisinclinedtosliponwetground.最后給各位儲(chǔ)備三種句式：enable/allowmetogainmuchknowledge.(enablesb.todosth.)bringusnumerous/countless/amultitudeofbenefits/drawbacks.(bringsb.)Booksprovidemewiththeaccesstoknowledge.(providesb.withsth.)offersupple可以替換provide，

24、但是要注意搭配。比如：offersb.sth.offersthtosb.如何靈活處理這些句型呢：建議1:先牢牢記得：議論類和發(fā)生類。發(fā)生類就是舉例子，只要能舉例子最好舉，例子一定不是模板。議論類，只要你覺得引起大家的爭議，必可用。建議2:前三大句型，關(guān)注類、描述類、趨勢類，一般必在開頭可以用一句。建議3:后三大句型，重視類、出現(xiàn)類、結(jié)果類，一般必可在后面跟一句。學(xué)完六脈神劍后再寫模板。六脈神劍當(dāng)分述觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，一般多會(huì)說第一、第二、第三。接下來總結(jié)六脈神劍：起承轉(zhuǎn)合獨(dú)評啟部：用于引導(dǎo)第一點(diǎn)首先：1.first,firstly,firstofall;2.tobeginwith,tostartwi

25、th;3.inthefirstplace,firstandforemost一方面：1.ontheonehand(ontheother);2.foronething(foranotherthing).承部：承接前面觀點(diǎn)其次-second,secondly,third,thirdly進(jìn)一步furthermore,whatsmore,moreover此外-besides,inaddition結(jié)果一consequently,asaconsequence/result,thushencetherefore,onthisaccount,inlightofthis轉(zhuǎn)部：轉(zhuǎn)折語義相反技巧1:but改altho

26、ugh/inspiteof/despite女口：Selectingtheirfavoritelecturerdoesbringgreatbenefitstostudentsstudy,butitalsocauseanumberofproblems.Althoughselectingtheirfavoritelecturerdoesbringgreatbenefitstostudentsstudy,italsocausesanumberofproblems.Inspiteof/despiteitsgreatbenefitsforstudentsstudy,selectingtheirfavori

27、telecturerdoescauseanumberofproblems.注：很多老師建議but改成inspiteofthefactthat.那么那些老師有興趣去看看GMAT語法，這種寫法叫wordy或者redundancy（冗長，累贅）。但是如果改成inspiteofthis，那還可以。不過前面需要句話句掉。技巧2：but改yet/while/whereas女口：Manypeoplearguethatthespringfestivalgalashouldnotbecancelled,butothersadoptacompletelydifferentview.Manypeoplearguet

28、hatthespringfestivalgalashouldnotbecancelled,whileothersadoptacompletelydifferentview.此外還可以用：不幸地：sadlyunfortunately相反地：onthecontrary,bycontrast,conversely事實(shí)上：asamatteroffact,infact然而：nevertheless,nonetheless合部：小結(jié)上文中段落的內(nèi)容總結(jié)：inconclusion,allinall,inaword簡而言之：inshort,inbrief,tosumup女口前所述：ashasbeennoted

29、/mentionedabovegiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlinedtakingintoaccountalltheabovefactors（后面主語用I）獨(dú)部：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)標(biāo)志詞personallyspeaking可以用inmyeyes,asforme,asIseeitinmyopinion可以用frommyperspectivefrommypointofview可以用asfarasIamconcerneditseemstomethat可以用fromwhereIstand,mystanceisthat評部：在觀點(diǎn)前可以加一些副詞來評價(jià)Interestingly,surpr

30、isingly,moreimportantly等等Especially,particularlyUndoubtedly,apparently,evidently,obviously,conceivably綜合性模板正反觀點(diǎn)對比型：第一組話：介紹故事的背景（1）ItisgenerallyacceptedthattendstoplayanextremelysignificantTOC o 1-5 h zrolein.（2）Forthepastseveralmonths,muchmoreattentionthaneverbeforehasbeenpaidto,whichgivesriseto.第二組

31、話：引出爭議的焦點(diǎn)Consequently,therehasbeenmuchcontroversyovertheissueof.第三組話：引出正方觀點(diǎn)（1）Obviously,manywillchooseto（動(dòng)賓）/agree/concedethat（句子）/votefor（名詞）,generallyforreasons.替換：Manypeoplewelcomeitwithapplauseandenthusiasm,believingthat.（2）Ontheonehand,（試著使用withthedevelopment重視類句式）.（3）Ontheotherhand,（試著使用place/

32、put/pose結(jié)果類句式）.（4）Mostimportantly,（試著使用enable/allow句式）.注：如果能自己用自己的原因那是最好了，如果想不出來，試試用我的吧！總比你寫不出來好。第四組話：引出反方觀點(diǎn)（1）Nevertheless,otherpeopleadoptacompletelydifferentview,believingthat（試著用failto求反）.替換：However,thosewhostronglyopposethearenotamongtheminority.Theyholdthat.（2）Inaddition,.（試著用givebirthto出現(xiàn)類句式）

33、。第五組話：引出總結(jié)（1）GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined,itcanbeconcludedthatthequestionquitedependsonpersonalchoice.TOC o 1-5 h z（2）FromwhereIstand,.如何亮自己的觀點(diǎn)呢？（犀禾ij）Whenconsideringopinionsofbothsides,Iaminclinedtobeinfavoroftheformer/latteronesince.（中庸）Whenconsideringopinionsofbothsides,Ifindtheyareoftheequal

34、weightsince.（犀禾U）Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantagesintermsof,since（中庸）Theadvantageanddisadvantageareofequalweightintermsof,since（中庸）isjustlikeadouble-edgedsword.However,onepointshouldbekeptinmindthatweshouldtakesensibleuse,alwaysbeingamasterinsteadofslaveofthem.現(xiàn)象解釋解決型：第一組話：（1）Thereisagrowingr

35、ecognitionthatisofvitalimportaneein（2）Consequently,withthedevelopmentof,we,thepost-90sgeneration,shouldattachgreatimportaneeto.Forexample,thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedadramaticincreaseinthenumberofwhich.第二組話：如果是解決問題：Toputanendtotheseriousproblem,inmymind,itcallsfortheeffortsfromallsides.或者：Tothisproblem,inmymind,thereareatleastthreeapproaches.或者：Urgentmeasuresareneededtotackletheabove-me